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雅思小作文总结

雅思小作文总结

一、评分标准

（1）任务完成情况：

趋势描写，数据支持，不要画蛇添足

（2）关联词大量而准确地使用（连贯）

（3）词汇

（4）句子结构

二、写作要求

（1）客观性

不能有想象成分，总结归纳要符合逻辑。

（2）准确性

数据要求精确（不抄错），可以合理目测（大概数值）。

（3）详尽性

4类特征数据一定介绍：

最大值（maximum），最小值（minimum），交叉点（intersection），变化趋势（trend）。

三、作文类型

Linegraph

Piechart

Barchart70%

Table

Flowgraph/processdiagram20%

Others10%

四、解题技巧

A.表格图

1横向比较:

介绍横向各个数据的区别，变化和趋势2纵向比较:

介绍横向各个数据的区别，变化和趋势3无需将每一个数据分别说明，突出强调数据最大值和最小值，对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的

说明：

考察例举数字的能力和方法。

注意怎样通过举一些有代表性的数据来有效地说明问题。

B.线图

1极点说明:

对图表当中最高的，最低的点要单独进行说明

2趋势说明:

对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明，如上升，下降，波动，持平

3交点说明:

对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明

说明：

关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势，学会generalclassification,即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类，使写作层次清晰。

接下来在分类描述每个阶段的specifictrend,同时导入数据作为你分类的依据。

注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据！

C.饼状图

1介绍各扇面及总体的关系2各个扇面之间的比较，同类扇面在不同时间，不同地点的比较3重点突出特点最明显的扇面：

最大的，最小的，互相成倍的

D.柱状图

1.比较:

similarity2.对比:

difference）

3.横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征&分别描写各个柱子的个性特征

4，有年份的可按照线图的写作方法。

E.流程图

1．首先说明：

做什么工作的过程，目的是什么2．准备工作3．按时间/过程先后描述4．结果5．简单总结

说明：

注意流程图里的“因果关系”或每一流程的“承前启后”关系；表达每一流程的主体内容，阐明这种关系；揭示其内在联系或规律；最后，给予简要归纳和总结。

F.实物/器具工作过程

1．实物的名称，功能2．基本结构3．工作过程4．简单总结

G.综合图

1不求甚解，不拘泥于细节2分门别类，分段落详细介绍各个图表3不画蛇添足，主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系

H．地图

1.历史变迁图描述不同年份的场景变化，记住实用方位词。

并注意按照空间顺序描述。

2.选址题描述图中备选地点的地理优缺点。

五、写作方法

混合图：

六、写作模板

开头段句式：

1.Thetable/chart/diagram/graphshows（that）...

2.Thefigures/statisticsshow（that）...

3.Thediagramshows/describes/illustrateshow...

4.Accordingto/As（is）showninthe/Ascanbeseenfromthetable/chart,diagram,graph,figures

5.Itcanbeseen/observedfromthe/wecanseefromthe…

6.Itisclear/apparentfromthetable/chart/diagram/graph/figures（that）...

三种描述趋势的句式

1.Therewas/is/willbe+a/an+形容词+变化名词+inthenumber/percentageof+被描述对象+时间

e.g.Therewasasharpincrease/decreaseinthenumberofTVaudiencesfrom12pmto2pm.

2.Thenumber/percentageof被描述对象+变化动词+副词+数据+时间

e.g.ThenumberofTVaudiencesrosesharplyfrom6amto8am.

3.时间段+witness/see/experience+a/an+形容词+变化名词+inthenumber/percentageof被描述对象

e.g.Theperiodbetween10amand12pmwitnessesamoderategrowthinthenumberofpeopleinthestation,withthenumberreaching280atmidday.

Thenexthoursseeadramaticriseinthenumberagain.

描述最高点、最低点

1.被描述对象+reachitshighestpoint/peak/bottomat+数据+时间

e.g.At4pm,thenumberreachesitsbottomat100.

At8am,itreacheditshighestpointat25%.

2.peakingat/bottomingat+数据

e.g.Afterthat,thenumberincreasedsharplyuntil1998,peakingat20,700.

比较两个对象

Thenumber/percentageof被描述对象1+was/is/willbe+（much/slightly）+larger/higher/lower/smaller+than+thatof被描述对象2.

e.g.Thenumberofbusinesswashigherthanthatforvisitstofriendsandrelatives.

However,fortherestoftheday,thepercentage

三个及以上的对象比较

被描述对象+has/had/willhave+thelargest/highest/lowest/smallest+number/percentageof+项目+in/among范围

e.g.USAhadthehighestqualityoflifeinthefivecountries.

Otherreasonshadthesmallestpercentageinthefourreasons.

连接手段

1.Then/fromthistimeonwards/fromthenon

Therewasarise.Thenthenumberwentdown...

2.After/before

Therewasarise,beforethenumberwentdown.

Afterarise,therewasadecrease,beforethenumberremainedstable.

3.…whichwasfollowedby/whichledto/whichprecededanincrease/decrease

Therewasarise,whichwasfollowedbyadecrease.

4.上一句最后时间词，when...

Therewasariseinthenumberofteachersfrom数据in年份to数据in年份,whenthenumberwentdown.

5.Again（第二次以后的上升/下降）

Therewasarise.Again,thenumberwentdown.

6.However...then...（上升和下降之间）

Therewasarise.However,thenumberthenwentdown.

7、其他关联词：

类比、对比、句子衔接

However/compareto/incontrast//similarly/conversely//while

Similarly/likewise

Asto/intermof/asfor

流程图模板

七、各种图表描述注意事项

WRITINGTASK1：

　　Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

　　ThechartandgraphbelowgiveinformationaboutsalesandsharepricesforCoca-Cola.

　　Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

　　Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

　　范文：

　　ThepiechartshowstheworldwidedistributionofsalesofCoca-Colaintheyear2000andthegraphshowsthechangeinsharepricesbetween1996and2001.

　　Intheyear2000,Coca-Colasoldatotalof17.1billioncasesoftheirfizzydrinkproductworldwide.ThelargestconsumerwasNorthAmerica,where30.4percentofthetotalvolumewaspurchased.ThesecondlargestconsumerwasLatinAmerica.EuropeandAsiapurchased20.5and16.4percentofthetotalvolumerespectively,whileAfricaandtheMiddleEastremainedfairlysmallconsumersat7percentofthetotalvolumeofsales.

　　Since1996,sharepricesforCoca-Colahavefluctuated.Inthatyear,shareswerevaluedatapproximately$35.Between1996and1997,however,pricesrosesignificantlyto$70pershare.Theydippedalittleinmid-1997andthenpeakedat$80pershareinmid-98.Fromthenuntil2000theirvaluefellconsistentlybuttherewasaslightriseinmid-2000.

WRITINGTASK1：

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThechartshowsthedivisionofhouseholdtasksbygenderinGreatBritain.

Writeareportforauniversitylecturedescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Source:

OfficeforNationalStatisticsonbehalfoftheControllerofHerMajesty'sStationeryOffice.

Studythesethreesentencesandthenwritethreesimilarsentencesaboutotherpartsofthechart.

1 Womenspend overtwiceasmuchtime doingkitchentasksasmen.

2 Menspend30minutesadaydoingkitchentasks whereas/while womenspend74minutesaday.

3 Womenare moreactive inthekitchen than men（74minutesadayforwomen asopposedto 30minutesformen）.

SampleReport

ThechartshowstheaveragenumberofminutesperdaymenandwomeninGreatBritainspendonjobsaroundthehouse.

Intotal,menspendjust over two-and-a-halfhoursonhouseholdtaskswhereaswomenspendslightly lessthanfourhours.Womenspendmorethan twice asmuchtimedoingkitchentaskssuchascookingandwashingup as men（74minutesforwomenasopposed to 30minutesformen.Womenarealsomoreactiveincleaningthehouse-ittakes58minutesoftheirdaycompared to/with 13minutesformen-andchildcare,wherewomenputinmorethantwiceas much timeasmen.

Ontheotherhand,menare more activeingardeningandpetcare,wheretheyspendtwiceas long aswomen,andmaintenanceandDIY,onwhichtheyspend15minutesmore than women.Womenaccountforalmostallthetimespentonwashingandironingclothes.Thistakesthem25minutes, while/whereas menspendjust2minutesonthistask.

Overallthefiguresshowthatwomenspendmoretimeonroutinedomesticchoresthanmen, while/whereas mendomorehouseholdmaintenance,gardeningandpetcare.

WRITINGTASK1：

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThemapbelowshowsthedevelopmentofthevillageofRyemouthbetween1995andpresent.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

ThisreportcompareshowthevillageofRyemouthhasdevelopedandchangedsincetheyearof1995.

Asisclearlydescribedinthefirstpicture,Ryemouthwasacoastalcitywhichwasdividedintothreepartsbytworoads.Inthesouthernpart,therewasafishingportonthesea,withafishmarketlocatedinthenorthandacoffeeshopinthenorth-east.Ablockofshopswassituatedontheoppositesideofthemarket…

Inthesecondpicture,thevillagechangedalot.Thefishingporthasbeenremovedandthefishmarketisreplacedbyapartments.Severalrestaurantsalsooccupytheplaceoftheshopsontheroadside.Moreover,aparkinglotisnewlybuiltontheeastofthehotel.Inaddition,

Overall,basedonthebriefdescriptionabove,itisclearthatthegenerallayoutofthevillagedoesnotchangealot,whilesomenewly-builtfacilitiesandhousinghasornamentedthesmallvillage.

WRITINGTASK1：

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

Thediagrambelowshowstheprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustry.

Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger.

Thenthelumpsofclayareplacedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpieThosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andamaximumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime.Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200℃-1300℃.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber.

Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhavebecomehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteorstorage.