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短文改错大量练习

长安一中2013-----2014学年度第二学期期末考试

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线（），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

OneSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavinganenvironmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.Theypickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitmightdiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookittohome.Theymadeanestforitbutfeditwithriceandwater.Undertheirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdsgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemflythebirdbacktonature,theyfeltabitpitybutverydelighting.

Ithinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthepublictoshowrespecttonature.Onlybychangingthewaywetreattheenvironmentcanwegetalonggoodwithit.

短文改错：

（15分）

76.waswere77.catchcaught78.outup

79.删去to80.butand81.birdsbird

82.them∧fly:

to83.delightingdelighted

84.himthem85.goodwell

TodayI’dliketotellyouanythingaboutridingabikeinLondon.IfyouvisitLondon,you’llseemany

buses,carsorbikes.It’sverycheapandquicktousebike.Ifyoutakeabus,Ioftenhavetowaitfor

anhourorso.Besides,thebusesmoveveryslowly.Theundergroundisquicklybutexpensiveand

oftencrowded.Iusedtotraveltoworkbybus.Iwasoftenlate,andtiring.Thenafriendsuggestedwe

wenttoworkbybike.Ifollowedhim.Althoughwewentslowly,butwealwaysarrivedontime.

Takingabustakes50minutes,whilerideabikeonlyhalfanhour.NowIloveridingtoworkandI

feelmorebetter.

六：

短文改错：

（每小题1分，满分10分）

81.anything改为something82.or改为and83.bike改为bikes或者在bike前加a84.I改为you85.quickly改为quick86.tiring改为tired87.went改为go88.去掉but89.ride改为riding90.more改为much或者去掉more

Iwentshoppingwithmywife.Wehavealotofthingstobuythem.Wedrovetothecenterofthecityandstoppedourcarinthefrontoftheshop.Anhourlate,wecamebacktothecar.Butitwasstrangethatwecouldn’topenthedoor.Soweaskedpolicemanforhelp.Hewasgladtohelpus.Afewminutelater,hegotthedooropen.Justthenamancameupandshoutedangrily.“Howareyoudoingwithmycar?

”Weweresurprisingandwenttoseethenumberofthecar.Whatyouthinkwedidthen?

Wehadtospeaksorrytothemanagainandagain.

第一行：

have→had去掉them

第二行：

去掉in后的thelate→later

第三行：

policeman前加a

第四行：

minute→minutes

第五行：

How→Whatsurprising→surprised

第六行：

you前加dospeak→say

Friendshipisveryimportance.Everyoneneedsfriendship.Inallyourliveswecan’tlivewithoutfriendshipjustaswecan’tlivewithoutairandwater.Friendshipmakesusgettingonwellwithoneanothertogoaheadunderdifferentkindofdifficultiesinfrontofus.Butrealfriendshipwasnoteasytocomeby.Truefriendshipmustbesincereandbebasedonunderstandingeachotherbutnotonbenefitsofeachother.Agoodoffriendcanalwaysbeagoodteachertous.Byhisadviceswearepersuadingtogotherightway.However,themorefriendswehave,betterwecanimproveourselves.

Inmyvillagealotofchildrenhaveleftschoolformanydifferentreason.Somefamiliesaresopoortosendtheirchildrentoschool,sotheirkidshavetoearnmoneytosupporttheirfamilies.Therearealsomanyparentsdonotthinkituselesstosendtheirchildrentoschool.Theyprefertohavetheirchildrendosomethingelseratherthantoletthemgotoschool.Ifeelworriedthis.Ithinkeverychildrenshouldhavetheopportunitytoreceiveeducation.Anditisnecessaryofustocareaboutthechildren,becauseonedaytheywillplayimportantpartintheconstructionofourcountry.Sowaysmustbefoundtopreventchildrenfromleaveofftheirstudies.

5.去掉than后的to6.worried后加上about

7.children改为child8.of改为for

9.play后加an10.leave改为leaving

OntheChildren'sDaylastyear,ourcityheldaninterestedactivity.Inthe

activitychildrenandtheirparentsactastherichandthepoor.Inthedinner,therich

couldhavedeliciousfood,butthepoorcouldonlyhavebreadswithporridge.Parentsall

hopedtohavethedinnerforthepoorwiththechildren.Theyhopedthatourchildren

couldtaughtalessonfromthedinner.Nowmanypeopleontheearthdon'thaveenough

foodandclothes.Everydayonlyonehalftheworldcanenjoyenoughfood.Theactivity

washeldmakethefamiliesunderstandthedifferencesbetweenthepoorandtherichand

alsomaketheparentsknowthattoomuchmateriallifewon"talwaysdogoodforthechildren.

OntheChildren’sDaylastyear,ourcityheldaninterestedactivity.Inthe

theinteresting

activitychildrenandtheirparentsactastherichandthepoor.Inthedinner,therich

acted

couldhavedeliciousfood,butthepoorcouldonlyhavebreadswithporridge.Parentsall

bread

hopedtohavethedinnerforthepoorwiththechildren.Theyhopedthatourchildren

their

could∧taughtalessonfromthedinner.Nowmanypeopleontheearthdon’thaveenough

be

foodandclothes.Everydayonlyonehalf∧theworldcanenjoyenoughfood.Theactivity

orof

washeld∧makethefamiliesunderstandthedifferencesbetweenthepoorandtherichand

to

alsomaketheparentsknowthattoomuchmateriallifewon'talwaysdogoodforthechildren.

for改为to或把do改为be

DearTom,

Howiseverythinggoingrecently?

ThathasbeenalongtimesincewemeetinChinalasttime.Havingpassedthefinallyexams,Iambusyplanningatwo-weekstriptotheUSduringthiswinterholiday.DoyouhaveanysuggestionsaboutthechoiceofAmericacities?

Iprefertobigandmoderncities.IguessI'dbetterbookahotel.Whatisthepriceforsingleboylikemyself?

IsiteasytofindChinesefood?

WhatisthetrafficlikeafterItravelbetweencitiesintheUS?

Hopetohearingfromyou.Thankyou!

Bestregards

LiHua

Ioftengotoaweekendschool.Sodidmanyofmyclassmates.Thisseemspopularamongstudents.Goodweekendschoolshaveexcellentteacherswhichhelpusimproveourstudies.Besides,wegettoknowstudentsfromanotherschoolsandlearnabouttheircampusoflife.

Soeverycoinhastwosides.Ourschoolworkisalreadyaheavyburden.Extralessonoftentakeuptoomuchofourtime.Inaddition,paylotsofattentiontotheextralessonswillaffecttheirschoolsubjects.WemayalsofindourselvesverytiredonMondaystoconcentrateonthelessonsinourownschool.Weshouldthinkseriouslyaboutthisissueandmakebestofourtime.

Ioftengotoaweekendschool.Sodidmanyofmyclassmates.This

do

seemspopularamongstudents.Goodweekendschoolshaveexcellent

teacherswhichhelpusimproveourstudies.Besides,wegettoknow

who/that

studentsfromanotherschoolsandlearnabouttheircampusoflife.

other

Soeverycoinhastwosides.Ourschoolworkisalreadyaheavy

But

burden.Extralessonoftentakeuptoomuchofourtime.Inaddition,

lessons

paylotsofattentiontotheextralessonswillaffecttheirschoolsubjects.

payingour

WemayalsofindourselvesverytiredonMondaystoconcentrateonthe

too

lessonsinourownschool..Weshouldthinkseriouslyaboutthisissue

andmake∧bestoftime.

Jackhadaseriousaccidentandisnowinhospital.

Yesterdayafternoon,Jackwascrossingthestreetwhileacarwascomingtowardshimatgreat

speed.WhenthedriversawJack.Butitwastoolateforhimtostopthecar.Jackwasknockeddown,layontheground.Thedriverdialed120,andsoonanambulancecameandtakesJacktohospitalimmediatelyAfteraboutthreehours'operation,Jackwasoutfromdanger.ButwhenIwenttoseeherthismorning,hewaslyinginbed,hiseyeclosed

Ihopehegetgoodagainassooneraspossible

Jackhadaseriousaccidentandisnowinhospital.

Yesterdayafternoon,Jackwascrossingthestreetwhileacarwascomingtowardshimat∧

                                       when                          a

greatspeed.WhenthedriversawJack,butitwastoolateforhimtostopthecar.Jackwas

knockeddown,layontheground.Thedriverdialed120,andsoonanambulancecameandtakes

             lying                                                       took

Jacktohospitalimmediately.Afteraboutthreehours’operation,Jackwasoutfromdanger.But

of

whenIwenttoseeherthismorning,hewaslyinginbed,hiseyeclosed.

               him                             eyes

Ihopehewillgetgoodagainassooneraspossible.

                  well      soon

DearLucy,

Iamveryexcitedtolearnthatyou’recomingtoXi’anfortravel.Bothmyparentmissyoualot.Soisourfriend,Ruby.AprilisbesttimeoftheyeartovisitXi’an.Thereisonlyafewrainandtheweatherisneithertoohotortoocold.TherearesomanyplacesIwantedtotakeyoutoafterIfinishmyworklikeavolunteerinthelocalcharity.Whenyoucome,youcanstaywithourselves.MyhouseisaboutthreekilometersfarawayfromXi’anMoslemStreetwhereisfulloflocalfoods.

Bestregards,

Janet

DearLucy,

Iamveryexcitedtolearnthatyou’recomingtoXi’anfortravel.Bothmyparentmissyoualot.

parents

Soisourfriend,Ruby.Aprilis∧besttimeoftheyeartovisitXi’an.Thereisonlyafewrainand

doesthelittle

theweatherisneithertoohotortoocold.TherearesomanyplacesIwantedtotakeyoutoafterI

norwant

finishmyworklikeavolunteerinthelocalcharity.Whenyoucome,youcanstaywithourselves.

asus

MyhouseisaboutthreekilometersfarawayfromXi’anMoslemStreetwhereisfulloflocal

which

foods.

Bestregards,

Janet

Iamangryaboutthebehaviorofdishone