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雅思作文高分模板

雅思作文高分模板

雅思小作文高分模版

小作文结构

开头段1-2句转述原题

主体段11+X句每个主体段第一句话概括本段，X句介绍数字…

主体段N

结尾段1-2句第一句介绍总数total（如果没有就不写），第二句作结论

开头段

时态：

一般现在时

替换词

proportion/percentageinformation/datanumber/figures

family/householdmales/menfemales/women

influence/affect（v.）effect（n.）categories/kinds/typesdemand/need

subway/undergroundrailwaystore/shopuniversity/college

show/describe/illustrate/demonstrate/summarize/indicate

国家的替换（如美国，英国等）

主体段

时态：

由题目的时间决定

1.数据按顺序介绍，不要跳跃

2.4类关键数据：

maximum最大值，minimum最小值，trend变化趋势，intersection交叉点（线图）

3.

第一句，由图可见：

Ascanbeseenfromthetablethat…

Itcanbeseenfromthetablethat…

Wecanseefromthetablethat…

Accordingtothexxchart,…

Itisinterestingtonotethat…

Noticeably,（Interestingly）

第二句，具体来说：

Tobemorespecific,…=morespecifically

Tobemoreexact,…=moreexactly

替换词

上升

increased/anincreaserose/arise

急剧上升

rocketed（boomed）arocket（aboom）

下降

dropped/adropdecreased/adecreasereduced/areduction

急剧下降

slumpedaslump

持平

stabilizedremained/maintained/stayedstable/constant/steady

波动

fluctuatedafluctuation

最高点

peakedatreachedthehighestpointat（ashighas）

最低点

reachedthebottomat

速度快/慢

rapidrapidly/slowslowly

幅度大/小

significantsignificantly/gradualgradually/steadysteadily/slightslightly

大约：

about/around/approximately/justover/justunder

到达某个数量

reached/stoodat/arrivedat

预期值（将来时间必须用这个写）

Aisexpected/predicted/estimated/projectedtoreach…

分别respectively

占比accountedfor/madeup/representedthepercentageof/wasresponsiblefor/provided

一些例句：

Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,thenumberof…fluctuatedduringtheperiodof….

Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,therewasaslightriseinthenumberof***from***to***

Theperiodbetween***and***experiencedaslightriseof…,withthenumberreaching***.

Itcanbeseenfromthechartthat***accountedforthegreatestproportionof***

Asforothercategories,…

Afterthat,anoppositetrendoccurred.

Thehighest…wasA,followedby…

结尾段

Therefore,itcanbeclearlyseenfromthetablethat…

流程图

Theprocessdiagramillustratesin***stageshow…

由图可见

Inthefirststage（picture,period）,…/Initially,

Inthenextstep,…

Afterthat（Next/Then）,…

Finally,…（thewholecyclestartsoveragain.）

追加描述

atthisstage/atthispoint/asthediagramshows

Therefore,theprocessdiagramclearlyshowsthat…

雅思大作文高分模版–

（1）

立场类文章

开头段

1.Astheworldcontinuestoincreaseincomplexity,**（点题目的范围，比如education,crime,environmental

preservation等）hastriggeredawidepublicconcernanddiscussion.

2.Whenitcomestowhether…（这句从句一定要写对，就是点题）,peopleholdconflictingopinions.

3.Personally,Istronglythinkthat…

第二段（你反正确那一方的有道理的部分。

一般1-2个观点）

双边结合：

Ontheonehand,thereisnodoubtthatsth.hascertainadvantages（disadvantages）.

只选择一边立场：

One’sfirstinclinationmightbetoarguethatsth.hascertainadvantages（disadvantages）.

第一个观点Tobeginwith,….第二个观点Moreover,….

论据部分可能的连接词：

asaresult/tobemorespecific/inotherwords/forinstance

第三段（你支持的那一方的观点，一般2-3个观点）

双边结合：

Ontheotherhand,weshouldnotignorethedisadvantagesitmaybringalong.

只选择一边立场：

Aquicklookatthefollowingfacts,however,mayshowusadifferentpicture.

连接词注意不要重复即可，如ontopofthat/besides/apartfrom

结尾段（此类文章结尾必须要写）（仅以抽烟好不好为例）

只选择一边立场：

Overall,despitetheadvantagessmokingmaybring,Ithinkithasmoredisadvantagesintermsofindividualhealthandotheraspects.Therefore,peopleshouldnotbeencouragedtotakeupsmoking.

如果为双边结合的，结尾可用notonly,butalso连接

如果支持那方有新观点，也能够放在结尾段。

雅思大作文高分模版–

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解决问题类文章

开头段

Astheworldcontinuestoincreaseincomplexity,**（点题）hastriggeredawidepublicconcernanddiscussion.

Newsolutionstothisproblemarebeingproposed,trialedandimplementedwitheverincreasingspeed.

Thisessayaimstoanalyzethereasonsforandpotentialinfluences（effects）broughtbythisproblemandtriestogivesomepossiblesolutions.一定要看清楚题目问了哪几个问题，cause,effect,solution不一定都问的。

第二段

Thecausesoftheproblemfacingtheworldarediverse.

第三段

Obviously,thesituationhashadvariousinfluences（consequences）onoursociety,（bothpositiveandnegativeones）.如果没有好的影响，逗号后面就写mostlynegativeones.

第四段

Consideringthesecauses,actionsshouldbetakeninseveralfields.

（Theroleofgovernmentsinenvironmentalmanagementisdifficultbutinescapable.）这句话很好，但不适用所有的题目。

结尾段（能够不写）以下两种写法根据题目任选一种

1.Inconclusion,Ithinktherearemanyreasonswhy…,andcorrespondingmeasuresshouldbetaken.Onlybyconcertedeffortsofgovernmentsandindividuals,canthisdemandingchallengebeaddressed.

2.Progressisbeingmade.Theproblem,though,remainsthesame.Willthechangecomequicklyenough?

雅思大作文经典模板

开头段:

1.Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover......Manypeoplelike......,whileothersareinclinedto......

2.Thereisadebate/controversytodayasto/over/concerningtheissue/problemof......

3.Thosewhocriticize/oppose/arguethat......Theybelievethat......Butpeoplewhoadvocate/favor/arefor......,ontheotherhand,........

4.Somepeoplesaythat......,otherpeoplesuggestthat......ButIcanhardlysharethispointofviewforseveralreasons.

5.AsfarasIamconcerned/Personally,Iaminfavoroftheopinionthat......中间段:

6.Undeniably,.......isgoodinmanyaspects.However,ithasitsdisadvantages,too.Foronething,it.......Foranother,it.......

7.Thereisnodenyingthat......

8.Itisgenerallyacceptedthat......

9.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat......

10.Nevertheless,peopleseldomreachanabsoluteconsensusonsuchacontroversialissue.

11.Although......hasagreatadvantageof......,itcannotcompetewith......in.......

12.However,viewsonthisissuevaryfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplebelievethat......

结尾段:

13.Inbrief/Toconclude/Inconclusion,.......

14.Asforme,Iamfirmlyconvincedthat......

15.Takingintoaccountbothsidesofargument,Ithink......

16.Thus,basedontheabovediscussionandanalysis,wecanseethat......

17.Formypart,Icompletelyagreewiththelatterviewthat......