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四级专项训练作文
CET-4Writing(I)
1.有人认为大学应提倡同学间竞争;
2.也有人认为学生应在大学里学会合作;
3.你的看法。
ToCompete,ortoCooperate
1.现在许多家长“望子成龙”心切;
2.指岀其错误所在;
3.家长对于子女应采取什么样的态度。
AreFamiliesDemandingTooMuchfromTheirChildren?
1.竞争是当今社会的普遍现彖;
2.竞争的好处
3.竞争是同时不要忘记合作。
OnCompetition
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanannouncementtowelcomestudentstojoinaclub.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:
1•本社团的主要活动内容
2.参加本社团的好处
3.如何加入本社团
WelcometoOurClub
1.你最好的朋友是个什么样子的人?
2.你们如何成为好朋友的?
MyBestFriend
1.有人认为大学应提倡同学间竞争;
2.也有人认为学生应在大学里学会合作;
3.你的看法。
ToCompete,ortoCooperate
Someuniversitystudentsconsidercompetitiontobethemostimportantthingwhilestudying・Theycompeteforscholarshipsandanyotheropportunitiestodemonstratetheirabilities.Theybelievethatthroughcompetition,theycanlearnbelle匚
Otherstudentsconsidercooperationtobethemostimportantthingforapersontodo.Theyfocusonteamspirit,believingthatteamworknotonlygivesthemachaneetodemonstratetheirabilities,butalsoteachesthemtopromotefriendshipandcooperationwhilstworking.
However,inmyopinion,bothcompetitionandcooperationareequallyimportant.Weshouldcooperatewithothers,whileontheotherhandweshouldneverforgetcompetition.
1.现在许多家长“望子成龙”心切;
2.指出其错误所在;
3.家长对于子女应采取什么样的态度。
AreFamiliesDemandingTooMuchfromTheirChildren?
Mostfamiliesdemandtoomuchfromtheirchildren.Becausenearlyallparentslovetheirchildrenandtrytogivethemtheirbestlove?
Buttheproblemis,mostofthetime,theirlovemaybepainfulfortheirchildren.
Usually,parentswillsayHIhopemychildwillbecomeamusicianorascientistorsomethingelse".Thenimaginewhatwillhappen.Nooneisbomtoplaythepiano.Nooneisbornascientist.Buttheparentsignoretheinterestsoftheirchildren,whocouldnotdowellbecausetheyhavetochoosewhattheyhatetodo.Givethemtheirownskyandspace,childrenhavetothethemselves.Everychildisdifferent.Everychildhashis/herownpositionintheworld・1(istheparents'sresponsibilitytogivethemthebestadvice・
Eachchildisbornunique・Donotforcethem.Parentsshouldlovethemwiththeirheartandtrytounderstandthem,notjustdemand・
1.竞争是当今社会的普遍现象;
2.竞争的好处
3.竞争是同时不要忘记合作。
OnCompetition
Inthemodemageyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere・Theathletes,forexample,fightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholarshipsatschool.Theunemployedstruggleforopportunitiesavailableinthejobmarket.Andinthebusinessworldthemeatfiercecompetitionistakingplaceeverydayaseachenterprisetriestogetabiggersliceofthemarket.
Hardascompetitionis,ithascertainadvantages・Firstly,itprovidescitizens,whateversocialstatustheyhave,withopportunitiestoachievetheirgoals.Everyonewithhisowneffortsisequalonthewaytosuccess.Secondly,peopleusuallyfeelstimulatedbythechallengesfromrivals.
Undercompetitiononeturnsouttobemoreactiveandefficient.Furthermore,competitiongivesimpetustothefastdevelopmentofthemodernworld,inwhicheachpersonshowsgreaterinitiativeatwork・
However,weshouldneverneglecttheimportanceofcooperation.Foronething,competitioncanstrengthenourfriendshipandcontactswithothers.Wecannotisolateourselvesfromtherestofthesociety.Foranother,cooperationwithotherpeoplewillmakeuswise匚Asthefamoussayinggoes,threeheadsarebetterthanone.Therefore,wecanbenefitalotfromcooperationwithothers.
1.本社团的主要活动内容
2.参加本社团的好处
3.如何加入本社团
WelcometoOurClub
Welcometoourclub!
OurHEasy-to-LearnuEnglishclubaimsathelpingcollegestudentstostudyEnglishineasierways・Theremaybevarietiesofcolorfulactivitiesalmosteveryweekinourclub,suchasEnglishTalkShow,EnglishCorner,Englishlectures,EnglishSongsCompetition,etc.
Ifyouareacceptedbyourclub,youwillfindyouhavemadeawisechoice・Tobeginwith,youmaypracticeandimproveyourEnglishinouractivitiesinarelaxedandcomfortableway.Inaddition,youmaymakenewfriendsintheactivities,whichwillinevitablymakeyourcollegelifemoreenjoyableandmeaningful.Lastbutnottheleast,youmayparticipateinalltheactivitiesatamuchlowerpriceorevenfreeofcharge.
Ifyoufeelinterestedinourclub,pleasedon'thesitatetojoinus.Youjustneedtofillintheformandwemaycontactyouassoonaspossible・Ourtelephonenumberis7788666,andifyouhaveanyproblem,pleasecallsus.Thanksforyourattentionandwearelookingforwardtoyourjoining!
1.你最好的朋友是个什么样子的人?
2.你们如何成为好朋友的?
MyBestFriend
Imademanyfriendsatuniversity,butthefriendIwouldliketotellyouaboutiscalledWangPing.ImetWangPingabouttwoyearsagoattheuniversitythatweattendedtogether,andwesoonbecamefriends.Ourfriendshiphaslastedtothisday.
WangPingisalwaysfriendly.Shecaresaboutherfamilyandfriendsandisalwayswillingtohelpothers.IbelievethatWangPinghashadapositiveinfluenceonmylifesincewehavemet.Forexample,IhadmuchtroublewithmyEnglishinmyfreshmanyea匚WangPinghelpedmewhenevershesawmefrowningovermyEnglishexercisebook.ShetoldmemanybasictechniquestoimproveEnglishandlentmemanygoodbooks・Bytheendofthesecondsemester,myEnglishhadimprovedalot.
SonowyouknowwhyIregardWangPingasmybestfriendandwillcherishourfriendshipforever.
CET-4Writing(II)
i.目前,在大学校园里,学生花钱雇人洗衣、做清洁现象越来越普遍。
请谈谈你对此事的看法。
StudentsHireHousekeepers
AsaManSows,SoHeShallReap
1.我为什么选择读大学;
2.现在读大学是否值得;
3.结论
1•收入悬殊是当前社会的一种现象;
2.人们对之褒贬不一;
3.我的看法。
1.现代社会里充满了竞争与压力。
2.然而,有时压力并非坏事。
当然,过多的压力有害于我们的健康
1.目前,在大学校园里,学生花钱雇人洗衣、做清洁现象越来越普遍。
请谈谈你对此事的看法。
StudentsHireHousekeepers
Inthelastfewyears,ithasbeenmoreandmorecommonthatstudentshirehousekeeperstodoallthegruntworkinsomecolleges・Thehousekeeperschargeaccordingly,takingthehardshipoftheworkintoconsideration.Forinstance,clotheswashingis0.5Yuanpetpiece,floorsweeping0.5Yuanperhour,andsheetwashingoneYuanperpiece..
The"employers"haveallkindsofexcusesforthis.Somesaythattheyarebusystudying,sothe5havenotimeleftforthecleaningthings.Othersclaimthattheyareonlychildintheirfamilies;therefore,theydon'tknowhowtodohousework,evensimpletaskssuchaswashingclothes・
Iamashamedofthemandtheirdeeds.Weuniversitystudentsaresupposedtobethemosttalentedandcapablepeopleamongtheyouth・Butifthestudentsdependontheirparentsathomeandrelyonthesehousekeepersintheuniversity,howcantheyhavethebasicabilitytobeself-reliantaftergraduation?
Howcansuchstudentssurviveintoday'scompetitiveworld?
Howcanweexpectthemtomakeacontributiontothecountry?
JustasanoldChineseproverbgoes:
HIfonedoesn'tcleanaroom,howcanhecleantheworld?
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[范文1点评][审题]本文为议论文。
属“说明原因型”模式。
根据所给标题和情景,可以确定本文是围绕“大学生雇人做家务”的话题展开。
[写作提示]第一段先综述现象。
第二段介绍学生雇人的“借口”或表面原因。
第三段提出作者的个人看法,指明这些表面借口背后的深层原因:
依赖思想过重,最后可引用谚语结束全文。
AsaManSows,SoHeShallReap
(1)"Asamansows,soheshallreapHisuniversallyaccepted一theresultofpeople'sendeavorisusuallydecidedbyhowmucheffortstheyhavepaid・
(2)Thelesswepay,thelesswecouldbenefit.
(3)Onlythroughthetiringeffortscouldweachievemoreinstudyandcareeraswell.
(4)Thesayingistrueofanypursuitmanseeks.
(5)Astudent'sachievementsaretothegreatestextentattributedtotheeffortspaidinstudy.
(6)However,idlenesscouldonlyresultinfailureandfrustration.
(7)Scientistscouldonlyberewardedaftercountlesssleeplessnightsdoingnumerousexperiments・
(8)Thoseathleteswhosparenoeffortsinpracticewouldhavemorechancesforchampionshipregardlessofallthesweatandinjuries.
(9)Inaword,successandsacrificealwaysgohandinhand.
(10)Weshouldrememberthisfirmlyasamotto,foritinvolvesaplainyetphilosophicalmoral.
[范文1点评]写作指南:
这是典型的四级谚语型作文,要求考生先阐释谚语的内涵,再通过举例论证谚语的正确性。
根据题目要求,文章的结构安排如下:
第一段开头段:
引言部分引出谚语,第二句阐释谚语含义;
第二段主体部分:
举出两到三个实例,例子要具体,可从身边熟悉的例子,如学习的例子,到意义更大的如科学家和体育健儿的例子;
第三段结尾段:
总结全文。
[解析]
(1)用破折号引出对谚语的解释。
(2)(3)用“the+比较级,the+比较级”和“Only+状语+倒装句”两个亮点句型进一步阐释谚语的内涵。
(5)(7)(8)举了学生、科学家和运动员的具体例子。
(6)However引出的是典型的反面论证。
(8)用Those...who引出要分析的对象,使句子结构紧凑;
(9)(10)在结尾段重申主题,即谚语的内涵,并提出建议。
1.我为什么选择读大学;
2.现在读大学是否值得;
3.结论。
[参考范文1JWhyhaveIChosentoCollege?
AquestionIhaveputtomyselfmanytimes1thepasttwoacademicyears.Buttheanswerisalwaysthesame:
collegeeducationissomethingItrulywanttodoinmylifeanditisworthwhile.
Therearemanyreasonsformychoosingtoattendcollege.ThemainoneisthatIenjoylearningandgainingknowledge,Irememberthatasmyhighschooleducationwasdrawingtoaclose,mydesireforcontinuingtolearnfeltincreasinglystrong,andthedecisionwasnaturallymadewhenIrealizedIwouldnothecontenttosimplyendmyeducationalcareerwithhighschoolandentertheworkingworldsosoon.IdecidedtoentercollegenotonlybecauseitisaplacewhereIcancontinuetoseekscientifictruths,butalsoitisaplacewhereIcanbeexposedtovariousnew,originalideas.Ithelpstoexpandmyhorizonsandmakemeawell-roundedperson.OfcourseImustadmitthatIchosetoattendcollegealsobecauseIfeltitwasapracticalandnecessarystepItooktoensureasecurefutureformyself.Forintoday'sworld,acollegeeducationhasbecomealmostessentialifonewishestocompeteinthejobmarketandtofindaworthwhileposition.
Forthesereasons,Inevermindspendingbeautifulnightsonpaperwork;Ineverconsidermysel