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复习讲义短文改错专题
[复习讲义]短文改错专题
NET短文改错的解题基本思路应该是:
一.以句为单位,找行中错误,每行必有一个判断,而判断的依据一定是上下文,最小单位是一个完整的句子。
二.以篇为单位,找句中错误。
许多时候,就某一行或某一句单独而言常常难以判断其是否正确,错误何在,而必须以全篇为一整体才可对该句,进而对该行作出判断。
具体解题过程中,应该注意把握九个一致问题:
一.时态一致短文中谓语动词的时态与上下文,特定语言环境及该句的时间状语是否保持了呼应与一致。
例1.yfavoritesportisfootball.Iasaeberofourfootballtea.全文都是一般现在时,此句中as虽然与上下问不一致,应改为a。
例2.Ireeberedherordsandcaldon.
此处为一描述过去事件的语境,应与前文reebered保持一致,须改为caled。
例3.Today,itisucheasiertobehealthythanitisinthepast.个is与时间状语today保持一致,地第二个is则应改为as,使之与其时间状语inthepast一致。
二.主谓一致谓语动词在人称和数上是否与主语保持一致。
例4.Noypictureandtheprizeishanginginthelibrary.
主语为AandB时,谓语动词一般为复数,应改为are。
例5.Theneboyorgirlinschoolquiclybeeoneoftheclassafterafegaes.主语为AorB时,应由靠近谓语的主语来决定谓语的单复数,bee应改为bees.
例6.Playfootballnotonlyaesusgrouptallandstrong…此处与例4,例5不同,谓语动词aes与上下文保持一致,为正确的用法,而play须改Playing才可与此处其它部分一致。
三.平行一致
notonly…butalso…,either…or…,neither…nor…以及and,but,or等并列连词或词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。
在平行结构中,词性时态等形式须保持前后一致。
例7.Playingfootballnotonlyaes…butalsogiveusasenseoffairplayandteaspirit.依据平行一致原则,此处give应与前文aes保持一致,改为gives.
例8.Itasveryindofthetoeeteattherailaystationanddroveetotheirhoe.此句中的drove应与前文toeet保持平行,故改为drive。
四.数的一致名词的数须与其修饰语保持一致
例9.estudyquiteafesubject,suchasaths,
chinese…quiteafe只修饰复数名词,保持一致,subject应改为subjects.
例10.They…asedelotsofquestion.与lotsof保持一致的只能是复数名词,应改为questions.
五.主饰一致句中的主要词应与其修饰词间保持一致。
除了例9,例10外,还有
例11.…sothatI’llgetgoodarsinallysubject.
all若修饰可数名词时,其后名词应为复数。
subject该为subjects。
例12.Shesaidthatsheandyschoolateallishede
success.all修饰的主语部分应是三者以上,故schoolate应为schoolates.
例13.Unfortunate,therearetooanypeople…
Unfortunate应作状语,修饰整个句子,此时应为副词unfortunately才可保持一致。
例14.I’suree’llhaveaonderfullytietogether.修饰名词,应为aonderfultie.
六.指代一致用于指代的各类代词应在数、格、性上与上下文保持一致。
例15.TheSithsdidhisbesttoaeefeelathoe.
TheSiths为一复数概念,故指代词也应为第三人称复数their.
例16.IliveinBeijing,hereisthecapitalofchina.
此处应为作主语的关系代词hich.
例17.AndIcan’tforgetthefoodyoucooedforI.
此处I应作介词的宾语,故改为e才可保持一致。
七.语态一致句中谓语动词或非谓语动词应与上下文语态保持一致。
例18.Boosaybeeepforfourees.
与其主语Boos相对应,此处应为被动语态,故eep应改为ept。
八.搭配一致句中的固定搭配应保持完整并与上下文一致。
例19.IfeltsonervousasIshooliealeaf.后
跟从句,保持一致须用so…that结构这一固定搭配。
as改为that.
例20.Ilooforardtohearfroyousoon.
looforardto中to是介词,其后应为动名词hearing。
例21.Butitdidn’tatterthatIouldinornot.
与其后ornot保持一致时应用hether。
例22.Ihaveneitherbrothersnorsisters---inanyotherords,Iaanonlychild.
inanyotherords意为“换言之”,应为inotherords。
九.逻辑一致
这是一种隐蔽性较强且年年必考的错误,检查时应通篇考虑,重点在连词、代词,肯定与否定,及相对应的动词如e与go等。
例23.Sheassilingbutnoddingate.
上下文看,应为She---yEnglishteacher微笑且点头鼓励我,but应为and。
例24.Nosoeoneathoereadsinstead.
从上文可知,因为无电视可看,人人都只好读书,soeone改为everyone或everybody.
例25.Andtheyustnotbreatherulestoooftenifeanttointhegae.通读全文,都是用人称,这时突然用到they,显然不一致,应改为e.
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