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Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:

Allworkandno76．

playmakeJackadullboy?

Whatthismeansisthatifyou77．

studyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.You78．

mustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwise79．

youwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththe80．

personwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhave81．

aconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberthatthework82．

youdoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdo83．

nothavetocompeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbe84．

happierinstudyingsevendaysandsevennightsaweek.85．

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DearTracy，

AlthoughI'm16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreats76._____

measacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.77.______

Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeabout78.______

leavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthis79.______

alltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexampletometo80.______

follow.Butheoftensays：

“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”81.______

Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests，82.______

makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’t83.______

bearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimes84.______

totalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.85.______

Puzzled

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EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashe76._____________

hasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelps77._____________

makethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesday78._____________

morning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewanted79._____________

toseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatch80._____________

thenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthathe

forgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunless81._____________

hesawthesea.Hegotoffatthenextstation,andhadtowait82._____________

alongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrived83._____________

lateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohim84._____________

whyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!

”.85._____________

heshouted.

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Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftfor56.________

meinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computers57.________

aregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcan58.________

bestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappened59.________

intheworldontheinternet.Inthepast,peoplehadtodolotsof60.________

workwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoit61.________

instead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercises62.________

onmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetheright63.________

answers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetoprepare64.________

theexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend.65.________

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In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomein76．

themorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whenthelift77．

gottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-aged78．

manenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’s79．

handbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthe80．

Lift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedfortheground81．

floor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretaker82．

atonceandtheybothfollowedthethieftoarestaurant83．

nearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemall84．

Aboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught.85．

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OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.76.______________

Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwas77.______________

shining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.78.______________

Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackclouds79.______________

werecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.80.______________

Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet.81.______________

Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhich82.______________

tookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIwasshivering83.______________

andIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imust84.______________

havetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobutto85.______________

stayathomeandwaitforadoctor.

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Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecitylastweek.

Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplace76..

inthecountryside.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexample.We77..

supplyprecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityand78..

haveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily’s79..

incomereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronly80..

didtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoafford81..

atripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneeded82..

most,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothat83..

theycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,84..

mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelp85..

themwithoverseastrade.

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Womenareplayingamuchimportantpartinsocietythanbefore76．

Nowwomenareworkingasteachers,scientistsandevenleaders77．

Almostalljobsthatusedtobedonebymenisdoneperfectly78．

wellbywomen.Womenarenolongerlookeddowninsociety79．

Asthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamily80．

hasbeenimprovedaswell.That’shardtofindthewifeisbusywhile81．

thehusbandissittinginanarmchair,watchesTV.Inspiteofall82．

thesechanges,thegreatnumberofmenstillguardtheirrights.83．

Sometimesfewwomenareallowingtoattendimportantmeetings84．

Thisistheproblemweshouldtrytosolveitnow85．

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Hi

Thankyouforyoure-mail!

Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhow76．

weliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereading77．

books,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavouritesportisvolley-78．

ball.Mostofmyfriendsplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybest79．

friendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,but80．

wealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesome-81．

timesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself?

Tellmesomething82．

aboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.Ihadalsoliketo83．

knowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIam84．

veryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon!

85．

Lisa

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HereisaphotowhichI’vekeptformanyyears.Look,the

childinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatitthatIwasverylovely?

Yes.76．

Yousee,Iwasmakingaface.Therewasahatonmyhead77．

whiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.Iaskedmymotherhow78．

oldIwasthem.MothersaidthatIwasthreeyearsoldinthat79．

Time.Canyouseethehouseallmakingofwood?

Thehouse80．

whichwasnewthen,butitisveryoldnow.Iwasborninthis81．

oldhouseandlivedhereforeighteenyears.Ilikelivinghere,82．

becausethereweremanyfriendlyneighbourswegetalongvery83．

goodwitheachother,butit’sagreatpitythatWewillmoveaway84．

soon.Totellatruth,Ireallycan’tbeartopartfromthem.85．

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WhenFatherboughtmeacomputerforabirthdaypresent76.____________

inlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computers77.____________

aregettingmoreusefullynowadays.Muchinformation78.____________

canbestoredinit.Wecanlearnwhathaslatelyhappened79.____________

intheworldontheInternet.Peoplehadtodolotsofwork80.____________

whichwasverydanger.Now,computerscandoitinstead.81.____________

Whenanexamiscome,Idoexercisesonmycomputer.82.____________

Thenitwillcorrectthembuttellmetherightanswers.83.____________

Itisconvenientformetopreparefortheexamthan84.____________

before.Thecomputerhavebecomearealfriendofmine.85.____________

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Goodmorning,everyone.YesterdayIreceivedaletterfrom

aelderlygentleman.Hetoldmetheotherdayhesaw76.__________

thatsomestudentinourschooluniformcrowdedontoa77.__________

buswithoutwaitingtheirturns.Onthebustheyrefuse78.__________

tooffertheirseatsforoldpeople.Whatwasworse,they79.__________

evensaiddirtywordstoeachother.Iamverymuchsorry 80.__________

forthis.Today’syoutharetomorrow’soldpeople.Respect81.__________

theoldandcaringfortheyoungisafinetraditionofour82.__________

Chinese.Everyoneofushavetheresponsibilitytokeepit83.__________

up.Ihopethatyoucanlearnsomethingfromthisincident84.__________

andyouwillhavegoodmannerswhetheryouareinsideor85.__________

outsidetheschool.Thankyou.

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Hello!

I’mHannah,istheformerEditorofKiwibox’sLife&Peoplesection.76．

I’venowmovedandbecametheSeniorEditorofBooks&School.77．

Alittleaboutmeyoumaynotknow:

Iam17-year–oldhighschool78．

juniorfromArizona.I’vebeenonKiwiboxforJanuaryof2004,79．

whichIbecameareporter.OutsideofKiwibox,myhobbiesinclude80．

music,writingandjusthangingoutandtrytogetthroughhighschool.81．

I’mreallyhappilytobeapartoftheBooks&Schoolsection.82．

Ilovetoreadandwrite,sobookreviewsarealwaysalotoffuns.83．

Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorcommentsaboutthissection,I’d84．

lovetoanswerit.Youcanreachmeatgingermulatta.85．

Hannah

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HenryRoycedidnotlikehiscar,thatranbadlyand76．________________

oftenbrokeup.Sohedecidedtomakebettercarhimself,77．_______________

andin1904heproducedhisfirstnewmodel.CharlesRolls,78．________________