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上海高考英语作文分文体写作方法
学科老师辅导讲义
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英语学科教师：
授课主题
作文写作思路
教学目标
不同文体作文的写作技巧
授课日期及时段
教学内容
课前回顾：
1．上节课作业批改；错题讲解
2．上节课知识点回顾
3．高频词汇默写
知识梳理
知识点1：
作文
1、思维导图形式呈现整体框架
2、重难点
高级词汇及短语的恰当应用：
表达内容的清晰与条例性；
句型的丰富性与多样性；
3、不同体裁考点解读（注意相关模板句子、连接词和高级句型、词汇）
ExerciseOne议论类
现在高中学生申请出国的现象非常普遍。
人们对此看法不一。
请谈谈你对此事的看法。
参考范文：
Nowadays,itisverycommonforhighschoolstudentstoapplytoforeignuniversitiesforadmission.Thephenomenonhasarousedheateddiscussionamongstudentsandopinionsonitvaryfromindividualtoindividual.Somepeopleareinfavorofthepractice,sayingithelpsbroadentheirhorizons,whileothersarestronglyopposedtoit.Theyarguethatitispurelyawasteofmoney.Asforme,therearebothmeritsanddemeritslyinginthedebatableproblem.
Ononehand,theexpenseoflearningabroadisbeyondwhatanaveragefamilycanafford.Manyparentswillprobablybeoverburdenedcoveralltheexpense.Worsestill,manystudentscannotdisciplinethemselveswithouttheirparentsaround.Chancesarethatfacedwithtemptations,theymaypickupsomebadhabitsandreturneventuallyfruitless.
Ontheotherhand,wecannotdenythefactthatlearningabroadhelpstocultivatechildren’sspiritofindependenceandenablesthemtobemoresociable.Inaddition,beingexposedtoatotallydifference,environmentwilldefinitelyenrichtheirexperience,whichhasafar-reachingeffectontheirfuturedevelopment.
Asasayinggoes,eachcoinhastwosides.Therefore,thereisnoneedtobelostintheargument.Whatweshouldbearinmindisthatwhereverwelearn,weshouldmakefulluseofalltheresourcesavailableandbecomearesponsiblelearner.
ExerciseTwo图片类
下面的一幅漫画描写了当前社会的教育状况，请结合自己的感受谈谈你对这种状况的看法。
你的作文必须包括：
●漫画所反映的社会教育状况。
●你对这种现状的观点和看法。
参考范文：
Inthepicture,aboywhoisboundbyalotofafter-schoollessonslooksveryupset.Thisimageindicatesacommonphenomenoninafunnywaythatstudentstodayareforcedtotaketoomanylessonsafterschool.
AsfarasIamconcerned,takingoneortwolessonsafterschoolisacceptableandwillimproveourability.Butovertakingextralessonsreallydoesnogoodtostudents.
Firstofall,afterstudyinghardonweekdays,moststudentsarequiteexhaustedandneedabreakatweekends.However,manyofthemarerobbedofthechancetorelaxthemselves.Long-termworkingmaycausethemtohavedifficultyconcentratingontheirstudiesandmayevenaffecttheirdailylife.
Ontheotherhand,arethosestudentsinterestedintheafter-schoollessonsorjustforcedbytheirparents?
Iftheyarenotwillingtolearn,theywon’ttrytheirbesttoobtaintheknowledgeandskills.It’sawasteoftime,andmoney.
Lastbutnotleast,sometutorialcentersarenotasqualifiedasexpected.Theyjustcareaboutmakingmoneybutpaylittleattentiontoteaching.I’mafraidthatstudentswhoenrollinthecourseswon’tlearnwhattheywanttolearn.
Tosumup,takinglessonsafterschoolisawaytohelpstudentsstudybetter,butitshouldn’tbeaburden.Whatreallyworksisnotthoselessonsbutyourownefforts.（235words）
ExerciseThree图表类
Directions:
WriteanEnglishcompositioninI20-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructions.
下列图表中数据反映的是某高中学校对全体学生英语学习动机的调查结果，请就此调查结果写一篇作文。
内容包括：
1．描述图表
2．根据图表得出的结论
3．谈谈你的看法
参考范文：
Aswecanseeinthechart,therearevarietiesofreasonswhystudentsstudyEnglish.65%ofstudents’aimistopasstheexams.Aquarterofthemarewillingtomeettheirparents’andsociety’sdemands.Only8%ofthemstudyEnglishbasedontheirinterests.
Accordingtothechart,wemayeasilydrawaconclusionthatmostofthestudentsareforcedtolearnEnglishbydifferentkindsofpressure.Englishistreatedasatooltoaccordwiththecondition.IbelievethatsuchpeoplehavebeensufferingfromstudyingEnglishforalongtime.
Nowadays,Englishisthemostwidely-usedlanguageallovertheworld.ThereisnodoubtthatstudentslearnEnglishfortheexamsandtheirparents’requirementatschool.ButsuchpassivityoflearningEnglishisnotdefinitelygoodfortheirperformanceinthefuture,regardlessoftheircareersorpersonallife.HavingagoodcommandofEnglishdoesnotonlyhelpyoupassexamsormakeotherssatisfiedwithyou,butalsogiveyouachancetounderstandacultureandenablesyoutocommunicatewithforeignerswithoutanydifficulties.
Frommyperspective,nothingcanbecomparedwiththehappinessoflearningEnglish.
ExerciseFour应用类
某高中校方在全校征求学生建议。
李佳给校长写了封信，建议学校培养学生学习能力，以提高他们在这个信息爆炸的世界上的竞争力。
同时建议学校组建学生俱乐部，学生得以展露才华，培养兴趣，获得更多的生存能力。
参考范文
DearHeadmaster,
Iammostpleasedtolearnthatourschoolisseekingstudents'suggestionsonhowtomakeourschoollifebetter.Iamwritingthislettertosharewithyoumysuggestions.
Firstofall.ourschoolshouldlaymoreemphasisoncultivatingstudents'learningmethods.Asthesayinggoes,teachersshouldnotonlypassonknowledgetostudentsbutalsoteachthemhowtostudy.Inaworldofinformationexplosion,ifstudentscanheequippedwithindependentlearningskills,nodoubttheycanhaveanadvantageinthisincreasinglycompetitiveworld.
Inaddition,students'afterschoollifecanneverbeoverlooked.Ourschoolshouldsetupmoreclubswherestudentscandisplaytheirtalentsandacquiresomesurvivalskillssuchashowtogetalongwithothersandhowtobeateamplayer.Allowingformoreleisuretimemeansthatstudentscandevotemoretimepursuingtheirinterestsandhobbies,whichmaywellturnouttobeawelcomesupplementtotheirbeautifullifelater.
ThankyouforspendingyourprecioustimereadingmyletterandIhopemysuggestionscanbeofsomehelp.
Bestwishes,LiJia
一、段落比较
Ithink，foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentsthoughwearebusy.Oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemlivehappily.Wecanbuildaharmonioussocietyonlywhenallofuscarefortheaged.
AsfarasIamconcerned,foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentshoweverbusyweare.What'smore,oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemliveahappylife.Onlywhenallofuscarefortheagedcanwebuildaharmonioussociety.
二、高级词汇要强调“高级、复杂”
四项基本原则：
1.词组优先原则2.地道原则3.避免重复原则4.后高长原则
1.词组优先原则：
1.Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.
Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.
2.Moreandmorestudentshaverealizedtheimportanceofsavingwater.
Anincreasingnumberofstudentshavebeenconsciousoftheimportanceofsavingwater.
2.地道原则：
1.Throughtravelling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.
Throughtravelling,Igained/obtainedalotofknowledge.
2.LiNa'sreachingfinalsatFrenchOpenmakesourbloodboil.
LiNa'sreachingfinalsatFrenchOpenmakesusexcited.
3．避免重复原则：
喜欢：
carefor....befondof....becrazyabout....bemadabout....bekeenon.....beaddictedto.....behookedon....haveapassionfor....haveagreatenthusiasmfor
很：
very....terribly....pretty....most....greatly...highly....quite...extremely...perfectly…
认为：
Ithink...frommypointofview...asIseeit...asfarasI'mconcerned...
4.后高长原则-后学到、较高级、较长词汇
原词替换词
harddiligently
breakviolate/disobey
payattentiontoattachimportanceto
happydelighted/enjoyable
moreandmoreanincreasingnumberof
三、强化语法、修辞
四个“不如”：
1.肯定不如双否好2.陈述不如倒装妙3.主动不如被动巧4.从句不如分词傲
1.肯定不如双否好
修辞的使用在书面表达中算是很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。
双重否定也是种修辞。
1.Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.
Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.
2.Hecamehereat5p.m.yesterday.
Hedidnotcomehereuntil5p.m.yesterday.
2.陈述不如倒装妙
倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。
我们只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。
1.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.
WeakasIam,I'llmaketheeffort.
2.HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.
NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.
3.主动不如被动巧
英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，具体体现在英语常用被动语态，汉语常用主动语态。
使用被动语态符合英语的习惯。
Peoplebelievethatheisanhonestboy.
Itisbelievedthatheisanhonestboy.
4.从句不如分词傲
几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，像时间状语从句，原因状语从句，条件状语从句等。
口诀：
一去，二看，三改
一去：
去连词；二看：
看主语；三改：
改分词
Becausethemonitorisill,we'dbetterputthemeetingoff.
Themonitorbeingill,we'dbetterputthemeetingoff.
英语写作中常用过渡词
1.第一，首先，最重要：
first,firstly,firstandforemost,tobegin/startwith,mostimportantly,
最后，终于：
last, lastly, eventually, at length,last but not the least, finally
2.递进：
aswellas,then,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,additionally,besides,what'smore,notonly...butalso,meanwhile
3.举例:
for example for instance,namely, suchas,like
4.转折、对比:
in contrast, on the other hand, on the contrary, despite this, in spite of, otherwise, nevertheless, although, but, however , instead
5.原因：
because,becauseof,owingto,onaccountof,thanksto,dueto,...for,since,as
6.己见：
personally,inmyopinion,asfarasl'mconcerned,astome,frommyperspective
7.结果:
as a result, for this reason, accordingly, consequently, eventually, therefore, hence, thus, then
8.总结：
as I have said, as can be seen, as shown above, as noted, as stated, in conclusion, on the whole,in summary,inbrief,in a word, all in all, tosumup,overall
高考作文经典句型范例
1.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.
依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。
2.Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.
最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。
3.NoinventionhasreceivedmorepraiseandabusethanInternet.
没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
4.Peopleseemtofailtotakeintoaccountthefactthateducationdoesnotendwithgraduation.
人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
5.Anincreasingnumb
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