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TOEFLEssay:

Nowadays,foodhasbecomeeasiertoprepare.Hasthischangeimprovedthewaypeoplelive?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Astimepasses,alotchangeshavetakenpartinourlives.Inthepast,themainconcernforpeoplewasfood,forinstance,hunterAstimehasflown,wehavechangedalsoourprioritiesinlife,andfoodisjustonethingwehavetoconsumeinordertodothethingsthatareourprioritiesnow.Undoubtedly,thischangehaschangedourlivessignificantly,butIwouldnotsaythatthechangeshaveimprovedourlivesorourlivingstandards.

First,foodisnothealthy,anymore.Today,itispossibletokeepfoodfresherforalongerperiodoftime.Yet,wehavetokeepinmindthatitispossibleonlybecausevariouspreservativesandartificialflavoringsareaddedtoit.

Furthermore,cookingusedtobeatypeofart,whichisnowdyingout.Cookingusedtobeameansofeliminatingstressandtension.Unfortunately,thetimewhenpeoplewereabletorelaxcookingfoodisover.

Still,theremightbesomepeoplewhowoulddisagreewithmesayingthatwehavegainedsomemoreminutesofourprecioustime.InthiscaseIwouldliketoaskthemaquestion–doyouthinkitisreallyworthhavingunhealthyfoodinordertogetsomemoretime?

Moreover,thesespareminuteswillbemostprobablywastedsomehow,asyoucannotdoalotofthingsinaboutfifteenminutes.

Toconclude,Iwouldagreethatitiseasierandfastertopreparefoodnowadays.Still,Iwouldaskyoutopayyourattentiontothefactsthateatingunhealthyfoodwillinnowaydoyouafavor.

Score4.0:

Withtheadvancementoftechnologyandscience,manyinstrumentsandequipmentsarebeingintroducedinourdailylife.Oneoftheirbenefitsisprocessingoffoodmaterialfasterandeasily.thishasbroughtsomechangesinthepeoplelife.

Firstly,duetotheadventoffoodpreparingmachineslikemixers,microwave,pressurecookers,makingfooditemshavebecomeeasierandfaster.Thishelpthepeoplewhohavebusyschedulesliketheproffesionalsandresearchscientists.Sopeopledonothavetoschedulemuchtimepreparingthefoodandfoodcanbequicklyserved.Sothechangehasadaptedwiththefastlifeofthepeople.

Also,thepeoplewhodonothavefamiliesandlivelifesingly,particularlythebachelorguys,feeltheseequipmentseasierandmoreconvenient.Generallytheydonothavetheknowledgeofmakingfooddishes,butwiththehelpofthemodernmachinesandtechnologiestheycaneasilypreparefood.Sotheynowprefertoleadlifealoneratherthaninfamiliesandconcentratesmoreintheircareer.

But,themachinesandequipmentshavealsomadepeoplelittlebitlazyduetotheeasinessandfastness.Peopledonotworkhardtomakefood,whichhavethechangedtheconventionalivesandmothers.Still,theeasinesstopreparefoodhavechangedtopeoplelifepositivelyinrespectofdevelopment,accceleration,career,andtimemanagement.

Score5.0

Nowadays,whereverweturnourgaze,wecanseedifferenttypesoffoodthatareeasiertoprepare.Itcannotbedoubtedthatoureatingstylehasencounteredarevolutionarychangeinthelastfewdecades.Itisthechangeinthetypeoffoodthathashadthegreatestinfluence.Forinstance,wecanbuyfrozenfoodinasupermarketandjustprepareitinacoupleofminutes,whereasbeforeitcouldhavetakenusmaybehourstopreparethiskindofmeal.Notonlyhavetherecipesofcertainfoodtypeshavebeenaltered,butalsonewoneshavebeencreated.Examplesincludeyetarenotrestrictedtobeefhamburgers,potatochips,readymade

availableyoghurt,frozenmeatandcolddrinks.Iwouldacceptthatthissocalledimprovementchangedourlives,butibelievetherearesomedrawbacksaswell.

Itistruethatthesekindsoffooddonotinvolvehardworktoprepare,butfoodthatiseasytopreparegenerallyhassomeartificialingredientsmixedinitthatmakesit"easytoprepare."Ifwetaketimetoreadtheingredients,wewoulddefinitelycomeacrossthewordslikepreservativesorartificialflavorings.Manynewlyemergedtypesoffoodhavenottheessenceofa"completemeal"asdefinedbythenutritionists.Toaddtotheproblem,thesefoodtypesareoftenservedalone.Infact,therearemanymedicalreportswarningpeoplefromdependinguponsuchfastmealsintheirfood.Otherreportsindicateahighpotentialofmalnutritionamongthosewhoare"addicted”tothecommonduetofburgersandcolas.

Nothavingtocookhasalsotakenthefunoutofcooking.Cookingisanart,butintoday'sworld,thisisnomoretrue.Peoplearesobusyintheirworkthattheyjustrelyonthesesimplefoods.Theinventionandproductionofthesefoodshavemadepeoplelazynotonlyforcookingbutalsoforawellfamilygettogether.Itwasnotlikeformertimeswhenfamilieswouldsittogetherandeatfreshlybakedfood.Withtheabsenceofregularfamilygettogether,relationshipsarelikelytobeweaker.

Peoplethinkthatfastpreparedfoodtypesdpimproveourstyleoflife.Thisopinioncomesespeciallyfrombustpeople,workingwives,andyoungerpeople.Theybelievethatwehavemanythingsinlifemoreimportantthaneating.Timespentonfoodpreparationisconsideredwastebythem.Wiveswillhavemoretimetocareoftheirfamilies'soulsnotjuststomachs.Familyrelationshipswillgetstronger.Businessmenandwomenwillhavemoretimetoconcentrateontheirarrangements.Ingeneral,peoplewillhaveagreateropportunitytotakecareoftheirmindsandhearts.

Iagreewiththatfoodpreparationshouldtakeitsnecessarytimeandcare.Otherwise,thetimesavedinfoodpreparationcanleadtolongertimesofheadacheorevenofstayinginhospitalssufferingfrommalnutrition.

Score5.0

Nowadays,foodhasbecomeeasiertoprepare.Withthischange,peoplecanhaveabetterdinnerwithfewereffortsandcanhavemoretimeforotheractivities.Thisiswhy,inmypointofview,thechangehasimprovedthewaypeoplelive.

Firstofall,peoplehavesavedtheireffortsfromcooking.Inthepast,peoplehavetoprepareallthematerialforcookingthemselves,whichalwaysoccupiedtoomuchtime.Now,ithaschanged.Peoplecanbuyhalf-donefoodfromsupermarket,whichhassimplifiedthecookingprocess.Whattheyneedtodoistofinishtherestoffoodpreparation.Also,moreandmoreconvenientcookershaveoccurred.Thesecookershavehelpedtosavethecookingtimegreatly.Peopledonothavetowaitforasalongtimeasbeforecooking.Inthiscase,theeasierfoodpreparationhasimprovedthewaypeoplelive.

Anotherreasonthatthischangehasimprovedthewaypeopleliveisthatpeoplecanhavemoretimetoenjoyotheractivities.Sincepeopledonothavetoputasmuchtimeasbefore,theycanplanmoreotheractivities.Forexample,theymaydomoreexercisetobuildtheirbody,ortheycanspendmoretimeontheirhobbies.Inanotherwords,peoplecanspendmoretimeotherbeneficialthings.Therefore,witheasierfoodpreparation,thewaypeoplelivedhasbeenimproved.

Inconclusion,thischangehasimprovedthewaypeoplelivebecauseithasmakeiteasierforpeopletohaveawonderfuldinnerathomeandpeoplecanspendmoretimeontheirinterests.

Peopleattendcollegeoruniversityformanydifferentreasons（forexample,newexperiences,careerpreparation,increasedknowledge）.Whydoyouthinkpeopleattendcollegeoruniversity?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Collegeisaplacethatthestudentscanlearnmoreandnewknowledgeandexperienceinit.Ofcourse,differentpeoplehavedifferentreasontostudyincollege.Forexample,somepeoplewanttobetogoonafurtherstudyaftertheygraduatefromthecollege;somepeoplehopetofindagoodjobaftertheirstudyinginthecollegeandalsosomepeoplewishtoexchangetheirpresentsituationthroughstudyinginthecollege.Inmyopinion,nomatterwhatreasonpeoplestudyinthecollegefor,studyinginthecollegeisjustapreparationfortheirfuture'life.

Firstofall,studentscanlearnnewknowledgeandexperiencesfromthestudyinginthecollege.Therearemanyteachers,professorswithabundantteachingexperiencewhoteachstudentslotsofnewknowledgeandhelpthemtosolvetheproblemsintheirstudy.Withtheirhelp,studentcanlearnalotofusefulbasicandprofessionalknowledgewhichisveryhelpfulfortheirfuture'work.Andstudy.Aftertheyfinishtheirstudyinthecollege,studentsgotoworkinthesocietyandcontributetothedifferentfields.

Secondly,studentscanlearnhowtoarrangetheirowntimereasonably.Beforetheirstudyingincollege,theirlifeoftenarrangedbytheirparentsandtheirstudyoftenarrangedbytheirteachers.

Itisverydifferentforthemtoliveandstudyincollege,becausestudentsstudyingincollegehavetoarrangetheirlifeandstudybythemselves.Theyhaverighttoarrangetheirparttime,suchaswhentogetup,whenisthesport-time,whentofinishtheassignmentetc.Thisisveryimportantexperienceforstudents'workandlifeinthefuture.

Finally,studyinginthecollegemakestudentshavingopportunitytolivewithotherstudentandlearnhowtocooperatewithotherpeople.Usually,peopleoftenhaveuncomfortablefeelingtolivewithastranger,becausetheydonotknoweachotherandperhapstheirhabitandpersonalityaredifferent.Butforthelongrun,itisgoodforthem.Theyhavetocooperatewitheachotherandsolvealotofproblemstheywillfacetogether.Gradually,theycanlearnhowtocareandunderstandotherpeople.Itisapreparationforstudentstogotocooperatewithotherpeopleinthesociety.

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