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TOEFL作文

TOEFL作文

　　为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了TOEFL真题,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。

　　TOEFL真题1

　　INDEPENDENTWRITING新托福独立写作解析:

　　话题类别：

儿童教育类

　　Whatisthemostimportantdoyouthinktosharewithayoungchild（age5-10）?

　　1.Beingwellorganized

　　2.Beinghonest

　　3.Beinghelpfultoothers

　　题目翻译：

　　分享给5到10岁的孩子以下三个价值观，哪一个是最重要?

　　1.乐于助人

　　2.诚实

　　3.组织有序

　　新托福写作考试点评：

　　本次托福独立写作是儿童教育类，新题，但也是传统的儿童教育类，意思是你认为要跟小孩分享的事情最重要的是哪一个，第一是要让他们生活有条理，第二是要诚实，第三是要乐于助人，典型的三选一题型，还是用上课时候讲过的*结构和方法去写作即可，可以两段支持段加一段反证段，也可以一段支持段加两段反证段，灵活使用即可。

这里选择第一个。

　　首先，beingorganized是他们今后独立生活的必备能力。

其实现在很多孩子的小时候的生活都是父母在安排，孩子只要被动的接受并且执行，其实没有自己的想法，而这则会使他们对父母产生过度的依赖，会对他们独立生活会产生消极影响，导致自己无法自理生活，而如果从小就学习如何能够井井有条的安排自己的生活的话，他们以后就可以自己很独立很好的生活。

　　其次，beingorganized能减轻他们以后生活和学习的压力。

其实，现在很多学生都有拖延症，就是因为不会安排自己的时间，导致拖到最后自己压力很大，这甚至到high-leveleducation还会发生，所以beingorganized是一种管理生活和学习的能力，能够考虑好每件事情要做的时间点，知道在正确时间做正确的事情，这样的话不仅可以按时完成自己的学习或者工作任务，还可以让自己的生活压力减缓很多。

　　另外，beinghonest虽然也很重要，但其实在今后的生活中，一个人是很难保持百分之百诚实的，因为有一些场合是需要说谎的，比如说有些善意的谎言，而且在某些情况下，诚实反而会冒犯到他人，比如直接指出他人的缺陷或者短处，所以说孩子应该要在自己的生活和社交过程中去体会如何在不冒犯他人的情况下去保持诚实，这是在他们小时候可能无法理解的事情，这是需要时间去磨练和积累的。

当然，beinghelpful也是一个很重要的品质，但同样地，帮助他人也要看情况，不能一味的帮助他们，这样的话有时候使得他人对自己产生过度的依赖，反而对他们的能力产生负面效果。

而这些也是孩子在小时候难以学习的道理。

　　词汇：

　　1.traditionalvirtue传统道德

　　2.absolutetruth完全的事实

　　3.Confrontation对抗

　　4.Blotch弄脏

　　5.dilemma困境、窘境

　　6.inthelongrun长期

　　7.betrayal背叛

　　8.overwhelm胜过

　　9.derivefrom从...获得

　　新托福独立写作范文一:

　　Thetraditionalvirtueofhonestyinallsituationsisincreasinglydoubtedbymanyintoday’sworld.Manybelievethatbeinghonestisnotalwaysthebestpolicywhendealingwithpeopleandshallnotbesharedwithchildren.Bethatasitmay,thisessaywillexploretheimportanceofbeinghonestinrelationshipsbetweenpeople.

　　Undeniably,Sharingvaluesofbeinghonestexposeschildrentothecruelworld.Weallunderstandthatoftenthetruthisoffendingandmaynotbeaverynicethingtobothhearorsay.Even,manywouldagreethatifacompanyistotelltheabsolutetruthaboutit’sproducts,noonewouldbeinterestedinevenhavingalookattheproducts.Thesamelogicalsoappliestohumanrelationships.ifyourfriendhadwornanewlypurchaseddressonherbirthdayandenergeticallyaskedyouifitwasaworthybuy,wouldyoufreelyexpressyouropinionthatyouhadneverseenadressastheoneshe’scurrentlywearing?

andspoilherbirthday?

unarguably,hiding（entirelyorparticularly）thetruthinsomesituationscanbequitehandyindeed.confrontationsanddisputescanseeminglybeavoided.

　　However,thereisalwaystheriskfactorofthetruthemergingsoonerorlaterwhentellinganuntruth.thebasictrustinanyrelationshipsfriends,parentsandchildrenwillbeblotched,andwouldhaveanimpactonthefuturerelationshipbetweenbothparties.thestoryofthe“theboywhocriedwolf”fullyillustratestheconsequencesoftellinglies.noonewillbelieveyouwhenyou’retellingthetruth.Therefore,afterpresentingthevalueofhonestytochildren,theywillavoidfallinginthedilemma.

　　Inaddition,another“badfactor”oftellinguntruthsisthatyouhaveabsolutelynocontroloverwhenthetruthwillemerge.untruthsbreedpaininbothparties:

tearswhenthetruthisuncoveredafteraperiodoftime;inthelongrun,itseemsthathidingthetruthisnotbeneficialtoeitherparty.Incontrast,deliveringthevalueofbeinghonesttochildren,childrenwillhavenoworriesoffearingthetruthtobeexposed.Therefore,thelifewillbeeasierthanthosechoosingtocoverupthesecrets.

　　Everyonehatesbetrayal.evenifitisthetrendtooccasionallyhidethetruthinrelationships,itisstronglyrecommendedthatnottofollowthattrendastheriskandtheconsequencesofthetruthunfoldedoverwhelmstheminimaladvantagesonecanderivefromnottellingthetruth.Afterall,itisunderstoodthatrelationshipsarefoundedon“trust”whichgoeshandinhandwith“truth”.Indeedhonestyisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Asaresult,thisvalueshouldbesharedgreatly.（wordcount:

472）

　　新托福独立写作范文二:

　　Asthefirstteacherofachild,parentsplayapivotalroleinchildren’sgrowth,whichisnotjustrestrictedtophysicalwell-beingbutincludespersonality-buildingandpsychologicalhealth.Especiallyforyoungchildrenaged5to10,parentsarelikerolemodelsthatchildrenadmireandtrytoimitate.So,therearemanygoodtraitsthatparentsaresupposedtohelpchildrendevelop,suchasbeinghonest,beinghelpfulandbeingorganized.Inmymind,thefirstlessonchildrenatthisageshouldlearnishonesty.

　　Tobeginwith,honestyisthevaluablecharacterforachildtobeacceptedbyothers.Tomaintainfriendlyrelationship,peopleneedmutualtrust.Itisvitalthatachildishonesttoparents,playmates,teachersandanyonetheymeet.Atyoungage,theymaybesimplyblamedfortellinglies,butwhentheygrowup,whatdishonestycoststhemisthelossoftrust,andgraduallytheymaybeisolated.Inaword,parentsshouldtimelypointoutchildren’sliesandappropriatelyhelpthemcorrectthemistake.Forinstance,thereasonwhyachildrefusestoadmithebreaksthevaseishefearsparents’punishment.But,ifhefindshisliescanhelphimavoidpunishmentandthusgetsusedtolying,thelosswillfinallybecomeunbearableandirreversibleinfutureworkorstudy.

　　Secondly,childrenshouldalsolearntobehonesttothemselves.Inevitably,peoplewillencountersomesituationsorconsequencesthattheyareunwillingtoconfront.Atthismoment,someonemaychoosetodeceivethemselvesandescapefromreality.Throughconstantlylyingtothemselves,theymayfinallyforgetthetruthandacceptliestheymakeupasfacts.Forexample,whenachilddoesnotwanttoadmithelosesagameatschool,hemaymakeupsomeexcusestocheathimself,suchasunfairreferee,andrefusestoadmitthecompetitoractuallyisstronger.Consequently,oncehefindssanctuaryinlies,thedishonestytoinnerheartstopshimfromtraininghardertowinthegamebutencouragescomplaintsandself-abandonment.Parentsatthistimehavethedutytomotivatechildrentobreakliesandbehonesttothemselvesbravely.

　　Admittedly,beingcooperativeandorganizedisalsosignificantcharacteristicthatchildrenoughttopossesssinceyoung.Tokeepeverythinginorderistheprerequisiteforonetomaintainhighefficiencyinworkorstudy.Inaddition,kind-heartedpeopleareusuallypopularamongpeopleandcaneasilyexpandsocialcircle.Forexample,parentscanencouragechildrentokeeptheirroomtidyandorganized,andorganizechildrenintheneighborhoodtojoinincommunityservices.However,forallthevaluabletraitsthatchildrenshouldshare,whatcomesfirstmustbehonesty.Anorganizedandhelpfulliercanneverbecalledarespectfulperson.

　　Insummary,goodparentingisofgreatsignificanceinchildren’sgrowth.Itisparents’responsibilitytoequipchildrenwithgoodpersonalitiesatformativeyears.Amongallthedesirabletraitschildrenshouldcultivate,honestyisalwaysthemostvaluableone.

　　TOEFL真题2

　　x0916托福独立写作题目：

　　电脑，手机，电脑游戏：

　　有趣，帮助孩子放松

　　但是缺点明显，孩子缺乏锻炼，缺乏与人沟通

　　简单玩具：

　　益智，激发想象力，例如乐高

　　和朋友一起玩：

　　锻炼沟通能力，拓展社交圈

　　Nowadays,childrenrelytoomuchonthetechnology,likecomputers,smartphone,videogamesforfunandentertainment;playingsimpletoysorplayingoutsidewithfriendswouldbebetterforthechildren’sdevelopment.

　　范文：

　　Undoubtedly,childrentoday,asthemosttech-savviestgenerationinhistory,canhardlyliveadaywithoutcomputersandsmartphoneswhichplayanimportantroleintheirstudyandentertainment.However,asthetimechildrenspendwithdigitalsdevicesskyrockets,bothparentsandeducatorsstarttoworryabouttheperilsofnewtechnologyandadvocatethatitismoremeaningfulforchildrentoplaywithsimpletoysandmeetfriends.

　　Admittedly,childrenacquiremuchjoyfromcomputersandsmartphones.Thewelldesignedcomputergamesneverfailtofascinatetheirplayerswithvividfigures,attractiverewards,andcheerfulmusic.Itisevenmorejoyfulwhenclassmatesareplayingtogetheronline.Inaddition,almosteverychildwhohasasmartphonewillinstallchattingsoftware.Astheyalsohavethestrongdesiretobeconnected,theykeeptalkingwitheachotherevenafterschoolonthephone.Ifthereisanythingthattheyarereluctanttocommunicatewithparentsorbrothersandsistersathome,itismorefuntochatwithclassmates.

　　However,asthereareself-evidentdisadvantagesofplayingcomputersorsmartphones,suchaslackofexercises,pooreyesightandisolationfromrealworld,parentsandeducatorsadvocatereplacement:

simpletoysandmeetingfriends.Tobeginwith,therearemanytoysthatnotonlybringasmuchjoyascomputersandsmartphonesdo,butalsohelpchildrenprovokethinkingandactivateimagination.Comparedwithcomputergameswhichrequirefewthoughtsbutsimpleexercisesoffingers,thosetoysencouragechildrentomakemoreeffortsinthegameandrewardsthemwithstrongersenseofachievement.OneofthebestexamplesmustbeLego,atoywelcomedbymanyfamiliesglobally.Withnumeroussmallpiecesofdifferentcolorspiledup,childrenareabletobuildanythingintheirmind,likeanarchitecture,ananimalandacartooncharacter.

　　Secondly,communicationandinteractionwithfriendsisabsolutelymoreimportantinchildren’sdevelopment.Whileentertainingwithcomputersorsmartphones,childrenareusuallyabsorbedintheirowninnerworldandpaylittleattentiontoothers.Theunwillingnessoftalkingtootherswillgraduallymakechildrenisolatedandweakentheircommunicationability.Thisisexactreasonwhyitisvitalforparentstomotivatechildrentoplayoutdoors