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四六级作文资料学生用
四六级作文模板
一-社会现象解释型
Step1SampleStudy
1.最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍
2.为什么大学生要打工
3.大学生打工的意义
WhyCollegeStudentsTakeaPart-TimeJob
Inrecentyears,thereisincreasingpopularityforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about25percentofChinesecollegestudentsnowholdapart-timeortemporaryjob,andthisfigurerisesto72percentduringsummervacation.Collegestudentsareseenwaitingontables,promotinginstores,advertisinginstreets,teachinginfamiliesanddoing(排比结构)whateverworktheycanfind.
齐读第一段----找出闪光词汇,精彩句型(黑体为闪光词汇,therebe句型,被动句,排比结构为精彩句型,长短句结合,简单句,并列句相结合),使用了什么方法来展开段落?
列举数据和举例法
Whydotheywantoddjobs零工whichrequirelittleskillandknowledge?
(第一句起承上启下的作用)Tworeasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.Theprimaryreason,Ithink,ismoney.Theyareunderthepressureofsoaringinflation物价飞涨.Forexample,books,movies,clothesandbusfareshaveallgoneupinprice.Thereisscarcelyayoungboyorgirlwhodoesnotwanttoearnalittlemoneytohelpburdentheincreasinglyhighercollegecosts.Somestudentscansaveenoughtogotravellingorbuythingstheyhavelongdesired.Inthisway,theyhopetobeeconomicallyindependentandavoidtheindignityofhavingtoaskformoneyagainandagain.Besidesdoingpart-timejobsequipsthemwithsomeexperiencetoprepareforthefuturework..(正面)Studentsgrowingupfromnurseryschooltocollegeonlyknowaboutbooksandhavetroubledealingwithrealities.(反面)Workingonapart-timebasiscanprovidethemwitharareopportunitytoknowtheoutsideworldandpreparethemforafuturecareer.Asaresult,takingpart-timejobsisbecomingmoreandmorecommonincollegestudents.
齐读第二段----找出闪光词汇,精彩句型(黑体为闪光词汇),该段落结构完整,连贯(过渡句,主题句,展开句,结论句,找出使段落连贯的过渡词---tworeasons,theprimaryreason,besides,asaresult),论证非常充分(主题句得到了充分的展开,采用说理举例等方法)
Doingapart-timejobmeansmorethanmoneyandexperience.Besides,itwillbroadentheirhorizonandexertaprofoundinfluenceontheirpersonalityandlife.
审题:
三段:
第一段开篇段介绍这种社会现象,可用列举数据和举例法展开段落。
第二段正文段,是本文的主要段落。
阐述原因.
第三段是结论段,简要概括一下大学生打工的意义。
对整篇文章进行总结。
Step2总结模版---社会现象解释型
Inrecentyears,产生了某种社会现象。
Ithasbeenbroughttopublicattention。
Accordingtoarecentsurvey,用数据说明这种现象。
举例说明这种现象。
Why为什么会产生某种现象----用问题来承上启下。
(Three)reasonscanaccountforit..Firstly/tobeginwith,-----------------------.进一步阐述第一个原因(1-2句话)。
Secondly/moreover,-------------------------------.Inaddition/Besides,---------------------------.Asaresult,上述原因导致的结果。
(即换种方式重复一下某种现象的产生)。
第三段有时概括这种现象会产生什么好处,也有时要你发表对现象的看法。
.支持看法的理由。
最后用一句话总结。
Astome/AsfarasIamconcerned,你对现象的看法.你的理由。
Toconclude/Inaword/Ingenral,用一句话总结
Step3句型操练
(一)关于利弊、优缺点的句型:
(Somesentencepatternscommonly-usedincontrolledwriting:
)
1.S+have(orhas)alotofadvantagesover…(与…相比有许多优点)
ComparedwithB,Ahas(orhave)manyadvantages.译:
与电视相比,互联网有很多优点
2.beofgreatbenefittosb./sth.(对…有益)译:
你的计算机知识对你将来的工作十分有利。
3.…benefitsb./sth.(对…有好处)译:
这家新医院对整个社区有利。
互联网在很多方面对我们都有好处。
Benefitfromsth.(由于…而受益)译:
我们将从技术发明中受益。
4.…do(alotof)goodtosb.(对…有许多好处)译:
早晨锻炼对你很有好处。
…begoodforsb./sth.(对…有益)译:
蔬菜和水果有利人的健康。
…dodamagetosth.(对…造成损坏)译:
这次地震对城市建筑损坏严重。
5.…beas(notso)goodas…,他做的没有他说的好
6.Doingsth.isbeneficialto…早睡早起有益于身体健康
7Although…hassomanyadvantages,weshouldnotignoretheproblemsitbringsus.(creditcard)
8.Justasacoinhastwosides,everythinghasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.
(二)说明原因的句型:
1.Therearetworeasonsfor….(人们居住条件变化原因有两个,一个是改革开放政策,二个是社会经济的发展)
2.Wehavetwogoodreasonsfor…(我们有很多原因来反对在公众场所抽烟)
3Thereasonfor…isthat….(我迟到的原因是我错过了公共汽车)
4Tworeasonsaccountfor……(大学生做兼职工作有两个原因)
5Tworeasonscontributeto(促成、有助于)…..
6人们居住条件变化isattributedto…..(改革开放政策和社会经济的发展)
7Severalfactorsareresponsiblefor….
1,2,3为一般句型4,5,6,7为最佳句型
Key:
thechangesinpeople'slivingconditions.Oneisresultedfromtheopeningandreformpolicyandtheotherisattributedtosocialeconomydevelopment.
Wehavemanygoodreasonsforobjectingtosmokinginpublicplaces.
ThereasonformybeinglatewasthatImissedthebus
Tworeasonsaccountforcollegestudents’takingparttimejobs
Step4Practice根据模版套写作文
Forthispart,youareallowedto30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCertificatecrazeoncampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheinformationgiveninthefollowing:
1.近几年大学校园里出现“考证热”
2.产生这一现象的原因3.你的看法
Inrecentyears,certificatescrazehasappearedoncampus.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,85%ofcollegestudentsareengagedingettingvariouscertificatestocaterfortherequirementofthesociety,suchascertificatesofCET4/6,BEC,mandarin,merchandiser,customsdeclarer报关员,touristandteachersetc
Whyaresomanystudentscrazyaboutgettingcertificates?
Threereasonscanaccountforit.Theprimaryreason,Ithink,isthefiercecompetitioninmodernsociety.Aftergraduating,thecertificatesarethesteppingstone/dooropenertobeemployedbythecompany.Onlyinthiswaycanthecompanylearnaboutyourspecialty.Inaddition,thisphenomenonisalsoattributedtothepressurethecollegegivesthem.Atlast,somestudentsjustwanttoprovetheirabilityandgetmoreknowledgethroughthisway.Asaresult,moreandmorestudentsarebusypreparingfortheircertificateseveryday.
Astome,weshouldgetsomerelativecertificates,especiallythosewhichsuityouanddogoodtoyourfuturejobs.Butweneedtoholdarationalattitudeoncertificates.Pursuingcertificatesblindlyjustmeanswastingtimeandmoney.Inaword,weshouldfocusonimprovingourabilitybutnotgettingacertificatewithoutpracticalvalue.
二社会问题解决型
Step1SampleStudy
It’sTimetoStopSoftwarePiracy
1.盗版软件比比皆是
2.盗版软件猖獗的原因
3.如何打击盗版软件
审题概述
这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。
第一段,概述中国盗版软件泛滥的情况,并举例说明。
第二段,分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因(正文段为该文的重点)。
第三段,侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。
【范文】
●It’sTimetoStopSoftwarePiracy
Chinahasoftenbeencriticizedfortherampantpracticeofsoftwarepiracy.(主题句)Takealookaround.WeoperateonpiratedWindowssystems,defendPCsecuritywithpiratedKasperskyanti-virusprograms,processfileswithpiratedMicrosoftOffice,draft3DdesignswithpiratedAutoCAD,refinepictureswithpiratedAdobePhotoshop,andstudyEnglishwithpiratedKingsoft’selectronicdictionariesandtranslators.(支撑句---用精彩的语言将这个盗版软件场景栩栩如生地描绘出来,让读者如临其境。
也可说是举例说明)It’snoexaggerationthatpiratedsoftwareiseverywhere.(结论句)
(齐读----找出主题句,支撑句,结论句和精彩句型:
排比结构,It’snoexaggerationthat…论证方法:
举例法、或者说场景描写法)
Whatcausedthissituation?
(过渡句承上启下)Tworeasonscontributetoit.Theprimaryfactoristhecheaperpriceofthesoftwarepiracy.Ifapiratedcopyisavailableforjustatinyfractionofthenormalprice,nottospeakofmanyofthefreedownloadsonline,whowouldpayforanauthenticcopy?
(反问句加强语气)Besides,itisattributedtoeasyaccesstothesesoftwarepiracyontheinternet.Withsuchalargegatheringofpiratedupgrades升级around,whowouldbothertospendtimeandmoneysearchingthestoresforanauthorizedyetoutdatedversion?
(反问句加强语气)
(齐读----找出过渡句,主题句,支撑句和句型是怎样富于变化:
Tworeasonscontributetoit,itisattributedtoeasyaccess,长短句结合,简单句和复合句结合,句子开头也富于变化。
找出使段落连贯的过渡词---tworeasons,theprimaryfactor,besides,)
Despitetheseapparentbenefits,thepracticeofsoftwarepiracyshouldbebanned,becauseitrepresentsunfaircompetitionandbynatureit’sano-winsituation必输的局势.Buthow?
Twoapproachesaretobetakenatthesametime:
Technically,softwaredevelopersshouldenhancetheirantipiracyengineering,sothatcrackingthesoftware破解软件shouldbeimpossible.Andlegally,thegovernmentshouldalsotightenitsantipiracylawsandtoughenupthepenalties,sothatviolationsshouldbecostly.Toconclude,withtheeffortofthetwosides,therampantsituationofsoftwarepiracywillberemitted减轻immensely.
(齐读----找出闪光词汇和精彩句型:
被动句,句子开头用副词,介词短语,不定式。
该段落结构完整体现在:
主题句,支撑句,结论句)
Step2总结模版---社会问题解决型
Model-----模板
Withthedevelopmentofthesociety/technology/economy,wehavetofaceaproblemthat______________________(主题问题),whichhasarousedsocialcloseconcern.举例说明该问题的存在。
Whatarethereasonsforit?
/Whatcausedthissituation?
Tostartwith,_____________________(阐述原因1).Moreover,________________________(阐述原因2).Inaddition,____________________________________(阐述原因3).
Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.
Foronething,itishightimethatpeoplealloverChinarealizedtheimportanceof
__________________(解决主题问题).Foranother,thegovernmentshouldissuestrictlawsandregulationsinordertoputthesituationundercontrol.Toconclude,用一句话总结,也就是换种方式重复主题思想(withtheeffortsoftwosides,----shouldberemitted/relieved/decreasedimmensely
开篇段展开方法:
背景介绍法:
背景介绍法就是从谈论话题的相关背景开始,从而给读者一种心理准备,很自然的导入对话题的讨论。
Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsociety,sthhasbecomeincreasinglyserious等开头,常见用词还有:
common,popular,prevalent,rampant等。
或者是:
Withthedevelopmentofthesociety/technology/economy,wehavetofaceaproblemthat______________________(主题问题),whichhasarousedsocialcloseconcern.
数据法:
即用具体的数据来引出要谈论的话题。
这样的数据会让读者觉得很有说服力。
02.6月“大学生使用电脑”之类的文章就是让我们通过对图表中具体数据的描述来展开文章。
模式:
Ascanberevealedfromthetable.或者:
accordingtoarecentsurvey,用一个具体的数据说明主题问题(80%ofthestudentsareengagedinpursuingvariouskindsofcertificates.It’snoexaggerationthattheftscaseshappenedineveryschoolandineveryweek.
场景描写法(即通过场景描写来举例法):
用精彩的语言将这个场景栩栩如生地描绘出来,让读者如临其境。
“诚信危机”的开头
Customersfallingvictimsoffalsecommercials;patientslosinglivesfortheeffectofshoddy(劣质的)medicines;studentscaughtcheatinginexams;scholarsfoundplagiarizing(剽窃)intheirwritingspublished.Allthesearenothingnew.What’salarmingisthatthesephenomenaareontheriseth