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高中英语高考作文提分20组高分替换词及升级短语一览表
高考作文提分-20组高分替换词及升级短语一览表
1.但是
司空见惯词:
but
高分替换词:
yet,ontheotherhand,butthenagain,however,though
例句:
Youmaytakeagiftwithyou,yetitdoesn’thavetobesomethingofgreatvalue.(18全国书面表达)
2.和,同,又,而
司空见惯词:
and
高分替换词:
moreover,aswellas,inaddition,what’smore,foronething…foranother
例句:
What’smore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisbeneficialtoourhealth.(11江西书面表达)
3.例如
司空见惯词:
forexample
高分替换词:
forinstance,let’ssay,togiveanillustration,takesb/sthforexample
例句:
Doyouknow,forinstance,thatthereare15millioncamerasinourcountry?
(17全国阅读)
4.因此
司空见惯词:
so
高分替换词:
therefore,asaresult,asaconsequence,consequently,thus,accordingly
例句:
Hiscaralarmhadbeengoingofffortwodaysand,asaresult,thebatterywasflat.
5.因为
司空见惯词:
because
高分替换词:
dueto,onaccountof,since,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof
例句:
SinceIamgoingtograduate,thebicyclethatIhaveriddenforthreeyearsisofnouseanymore.(12重庆书面表达)
6.重要的
司空见惯词:
important
高分替换词:
essential,beofimportance,significant,crucial,vital
例句:
Developingagoodhabitisalsoofimportance.(14江西书面表达)
Respectisaveryessentialpartofanyrelationship.
7.生气的
司空见惯词:
angry
高分替换词:
annoyed,mad
例句:
Tobehonest,voterssometimesfeelannoyed,notbecausetheyhatevoting,butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.(16江苏书面表达)
8.各种各样的
司空见惯词:
differentkindsof
高分替换词:
awidevariety/rangeof
例句:
Inadditiontothesetraditionalactivities,wehaveawiderrangeofchoicessuchastravellingandvisitingourrelativesorfriends.(13辽宁书面表达)
9.许多的
司空见惯词:
alot,alotof
高分替换词:
agreatdealof,agreatmany,manya,quiteafew
例句:
IhavelongbeeninterestedinspaceexplorationandIbelieveIcouldlearnagreatdealfromhimaboutit.(15安徽书面表达)
Ibenefitagreatdealfromreading.(12江西书面表达)
10.困难的
司空见惯词:
difficult
高分替换词:
challenging,rough
例句:
Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.(14江西书面表达)
11.越来越
司空见惯词:
moreandmore
高分替换词:
increasingly
例句:
Asweknow,theglobalwatershortageisbecomingincreasinglyseveremainlyduetoglobalwarming,environmentalpollutionandtheever-increasingpopulation.(10福建书面表达)
12.以……自豪
司空见惯词:
beproudof
高分替换词:
takepridein
例句:
Hetookprideinhavingcontributedtotheworld.(14广东阅读)
13.对……感兴趣
司空见惯词:
beinterestedin
高分替换词:
haveaninterestin
例句:
Thegirlhasagreatinterestinsportandhasbeentakingbadmintonclassestwiceaweekoverthelastthreeyears.(13福建单选)
14.认为/相信
司空见惯词:
think,believe
高分替换词:
consider,assumethat,maintain,arguethat
例句:
Weareconfidentthattheenvironmentwillbeimprovedbyourfurthereffortstoreducepollution.(13辽宁单选)
Somearguethathumansandmachinescancoexistaslongastheyworkinteams.(17北京阅读)
15.解决
司空见惯词:
solve
高分替换词:
resolve,dealwith,copewith,settle,workout
例句:
Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.(15浙江书面表达)
16.努力
司空见惯词:
workhard
高分替换词:
sparenoeffort
例句:
Let’sstartfightnowandsparenoefforttodoalittlebiteveryday,everyhour,andeveryminute!
(15江苏书面表达)
17.做
司空见惯词:
do
高分替换词:
conduct,carryout,perform
例句:
Toreturntotheproblemofwaterpollution,I’dlikeyoutolookatastudyconductedinAustraliain2012.(16浙江单选)
18.来临
司空见惯词:
come
高分替换词:
approach
例句:
AsTeachers’Daywasapproaching,ourclassdecidedtoholdapartytocelebratetheimportantday.(12陕西书面表达)
19.获得
司空见惯词:
get
高分替换词:
gain,acquire,obtain,achieve,attain
例句:
Themoralofthestoryis:
sparenoefforttoacquireknowledgeandnevergetdiscouragedeasilynomatterhowdifficultthesituationmaybe.(15福建书面表达)
20.吸引
司空见惯词:
attract
高分替换词:
appealto
例句:
I’msureitwillappealtoyou,foryouhavebeenenthusiasticaboutsports.(17全国书面表达)
高考写作加分词汇分析
一、晚词优先
01
adj.美丽的
索然无味低分词:
beautiful
吸人眼球高分词:
appealing动人的;attractive吸引人的;charming迷人的;fascinating迷人的
高考范文例句:
First,nothingismoreattractivethanaproperandrealisticpicture.(2015上海书面表达)
Inaddition,itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation,inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.(2013山东书面表达)
02
adj.困难的
索然无味低分词:
difficult
吸人眼球高分词:
challenging有挑战性的
高考范文例句:
Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.(2014江西书面表达)
03
adj.重要的
索然无味低分词:
important
吸人眼球高分词:
vital至关重要的;essential必不可少的;significant有重要意义的
高考范文例句:
What’sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(2015江苏书面表达)
Toavoidsuchconflicts,weshouldbekindtooneanother,whichisessentialtoenjoyingaharmoniouslife.(2012江苏书面表达)
二、词块优先
在阅卷老师看来,活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。
因此,我们可以将某些常见单词转化为短语/词块,如:
01
v.参加
索然无味低分词:
join
吸人眼球高分词:
takepartin;participatein
高考范文例句:
Finally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequently.(2014江苏书面表达)
IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandI’dliketotakepartinit.(2012全国卷I书面表达)
ItreturnedtotheGamesin1932,andwomenwerefirstallowedtoparticipateinthecompetitionin1968.(2008广东书面表达)
02
v.使用
索然无味低分词:
use
吸人眼球高分词:
makegooduseof
高考范文例句:
Myexperiencetellsmethatitisnotwhatyouaregivenbuthowyoumakeuseofitthatdetermineswhoyouare.(2012湖北书面表达)
Lastbutnotleast,it’severyone’sresponsibilitytomakegooduseofwater,suchasrecyclingandsavingwaterinourdailylife.(2010福建书面表达)
03
v.拜访
索然无味低分词:
visit
吸人眼球高分词:
payavisitto
高考范文例句:
Yourstudents’visitinggroupcomingfromtheUSwillpayavisittoourschoolonJune26.(2011天津书面表达)
04
某些形容词=of+同根名词
索然无味低分词:
veryimportant重要的;verydifficult困难的;verybeautiful美丽的;veryuseful有用的;veryhelpful有帮助的;veryharmful有害的;veryvaluable有价值的;verysignificant至关重要的;verynecessary必要的
吸人眼球高分词(对应):
ofgreatimportance;ofgreatdifficulty;ofgreatbeauty;ofgreatuse;ofgreathelp;ofgreatharm;ofgreatvalue;ofgreatsignificance;ofgreatnecessity
高考范文例句:
Undoubtedly,itwillbeofgreatvaluetoeverystudentinourclass.(2015广东书面表达)
Firstly,asponsorshipwillbeofgreathelp.2013重庆书面表达
Ithinkthechanceisofgreatimportanceforme.2011山东书面表达
索然无味低分词吸人眼球高分词
badawful;terrible
cheapeconomical;inexpensive
clearobvious;apparent
cleverbrilliant;intelligent
developcultivate;nurture
famous
well-known;outstanding
finishcomplete;fulfill;accomplish;achieve
getacquire;obtain;gain
happydelighted;pleased
helpfulbeneficial;rewarding
improveenhance;promote;strengthen
jobcareer;profession
keeppreserve;maintain;hold
meetingconference
onlymerely;barely
problemissue
serioussevere
showindicate;reveal
thankappreciate
veryextremely;highly
andaswellas;alongwith;inaddition
becausedueto;inthat;forthereasonthat;nowthat
causecontributeto;leadto;resultin
considertakeaccountof
happenoccur;takeplace;comeabout
ignoreneglect;paynoattentionto
infactasamatteroffact
likebefondof;bekeenon;beattachedto
manynumerous;anumberof;quiteafew
rememberbearinmindthat
sotherefore;consequently;asaresult
solveresolve;settle;copewith;dealwith
thinkofsth.sth.occurstosb.
usuallymoreoftenthannot
wantintendto
三、具体词汇优先
改写句子时使句子“具体化”,可以将原本毫无生气的句子变得生动形象。
【例句1】Iwenttotheparkyesterday.
【例句2】Irodetotheparkyesterday.
很多同学都能感觉到【例句2】要比【例句1】好。
原因是【例句2】中的rode比【例句1】中的go更加具体,rode不但表达出“去”的意思,还能表达出具体的交通方式,使句子表达的信息量更加丰富。
当然,我们还可以加上同伴、心情等信息,进一步改写成:
I,togetherwithSamandPenny,rodetotheparkyesterday,feelingratherexcited.此时的信息更丰富。
再如:
【例句3】Iwanttobeagoodteacher.
【例句4】Iwanttobeakind,patientandlearnedteacher.
【例句3】只表达出我想成为一个“好”老师,而到底“好”在哪些方面,却没有具体说清楚;【例句4】则清楚地表达出心目中的好老师,表现在三个方面:
和蔼(kind)、有耐心(patient)、知识渊博(learned)。
当然,我们还可以通过增加细节成分,使表达更为具体,可以加上一个定语从句:
Iwanttobeakind,patientandlearnedteacherwhoknowshowtoenlightenthestudents.
综上所述,想让表达“具体化”,有两种常用方法:
其一,换掉表意不明确的词汇,换上更加明确更加具体的词汇;
其二,在句中适当增加细节成分。
高考写作升级短语一览
1.yieldto对…屈服,投降,让步,顺从
2.beworthyof(=bedeservingof)值得,够得上,配得上
3.absenceofmind(=beingabsent-minded)心不在焉
4.absorb(=takeuptheattentionof)吸引…的注意力(被动语态):
beabsorbedin全神贯注于…
beengrossedin;
belostin;beraptin;
beconcentratedon;
befocusedon;
becenteredon
5.(be)abundantin(berichin;bewellsuppliedwith)富于,富有abound
6.access(to)(不可数名词)能接近,进入,了解
7.byaccident(=bychance,accidentally)偶然地,意外.Withoutaccident(=safely)安全地,
8.ofone’sownaccord(=withoutbeingasked;willingly;freely)自愿地,主动地
9.inaccordwith与…一致.outofone’saccordwith同….不一致
10.withoneaccord(=witheverybodyagreeing)一致地
11.inaccordancewith(=inagreementwith)依照,根据
12.onone’sownaccount
1)为了某人的缘故,为了某人自己的利益
2)(=atone’sownrisk)自行负责
3)(=byoneself)依靠自己
onaccount赊账onaccountof因为onnoaccount不论什么原因也不of…account有…重要性
13.take…intoaccount(=consider)把考虑进去
14.givesb.anaccountof说明,解释(理由)
15.accountfor(=giveanexplanationorreasonfor)解释,说明.
16.onaccountof(=becauseof=inthat)由于,因为.
17.onnoaccount(=innocase,fornoreason)绝不要,无论如何不要(放句首时句子要倒装)
18.accuse…of…
(=charge…with;
blamesb.forsth.
blamesth.onsb.;
complainabout)指控控告
19.beaccustomedtodoing
(=beinthehabitof,beusedto)习惯于.
20.beacquaintedwith(=tohaveknowledgeof)了解;(=tohavemetsocially)熟悉
21.tobeornottobe(彩蛋,看看谁没有认真读完,看到请留言)
22.adaptoneselfto(=adjustoneselfto)使自己适应于accomodate
23.adapt…(for)(=makesth.suitableforanewneed)改编,改写(以适应新的需要)
24.inaddition(=besides)此外,又,加之
25.inadditionto(=aswellas,besides,otherthan)除…外
26.insiston(=conformto,complywith,clingto,insiston,persistin,observe)粘附;坚持,遵循
27.closeto(=nextto)