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短文改错训练
短文改错训练
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MostfamiliesinChinahopedtheirsinglechildrenwillhaveahappyfuture,sotheyareverystrictintheirchildren.Sodoteachersinschools!
Manychildrenaregivensomuchhomeworkthattheyhavehardlyanysparetimehavesports.Thechildrenareforbiddentodoanythingbuttostudy.Nowondersomanychildrenaretiredoflessons.Someevenattackorkillhisparentsandteachers!
Ibelievemanypeoplealreadyreadthiskindofnewsinnewspapersormagazines.Shouldn’twedrawlessonfromtheaccidents?
Nowourgovernmentiscarryingoutaplantosolvetheeducationquestions.
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Nowadays,almosteveryfamilyhasTVset,andalmosteveryonelikeswatchingTV.TVhasbecomepartofourlives.TVhasmanyadvantages,forexample,itinformsusthelatestnewswhichishappeningintheworld;itcanopenoureyes,enlargeourknowledgeandalsohelpustoseemoreabouttheworld.But,italsohassomedisadvantages.PeoplewastetoomuchtimeinwatchingTVandhisnormallifeandworkareaffected.TothechildrenwhotheyspendtoomuchtimeinwatchingTV,itcandoharmfultotheirsightandhealthy.SoweshouldcontrolthetimeofwatchingTV.
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AfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,ItookpartinacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIhavelearnedtosayGermanwellinGermany,Ithoughtitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Atthefirstclass,theteacheraskedustodoapronunciationexerciseinithewouldsayawordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhy.“Ifinditgreatfun,”sheexplainedit.“In25yearsofteachingatschool,it’sthefirsttime
I’veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent.”
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DearXiaohua,
ItisfourdayssinceMotheracceptedtheoperation.Sheisfeelingmuchmorebetter.Thedoctorstoldmetheoperationwassuccessful,butbecauseheroldageshehadtostayinhospitalforothertwoweeks.Thedoctorsalsosayitwasquitenecessaryforhertodoso.Weexpecttogetafullreportintwoandthreedays.Pleasetellthegoodnewstotherestoffamilyassoonaspossible.Youneedn’ttocomehere.I’mabletolookafterMotherbymyself.You’dbettersendflowerstoMother.Shewillfeelhappily.
Yours,
Xiaohui
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DearAbby,
Howareyou?
TodayI’vegotawonderfulnewstotellyou.
IhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversityinAustraliaformyfurthereducation.Onehundredandtwentystudentstakeexamsforit,butonlyafewwaschosenandIwasoneofthem.However,myparentsarenothappyaboutit.Theyarestrongagainstmegoingthere.TheysayitistoofarawaythattheywillnotseemeforawholeyearandtheyareafraidofIwillfeellonely.Theycan’timagineagirlsoyounglivealone.Theyadvisemetostudyinthecapitalinstead.ThenI’llbeabletocontinuelivingwiththem.HowcanIpersuadethemtoacceptthefactIhavegrownup?
Bestwishes,
Jane
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BeforeIwenttoseniormiddleschool,somepeoplestoldme.“Alifeofseniormiddleschoolisunforgettable.”WhileIfirstenteredmyseniormiddleschool,everythingseemedunpleasant.Faceallthestrangethingsaroundme,Ioftenmissmyoldfriendsandclassmates.Ididn’twanttotalkothersormakefriendswithothers.Littlebylittle,myschoolrecordwentfrombadtoworse,especiallymymaths.Icouldn’tevenpasstheexam.Ilosttheheartandmissedthehappytimesalldaylong.Itoldme,“Idon’tbelongtoit.Idon’tlikethelifehere.”
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TomandDickarenextdoorneighbourwhoworkinthesameofficesotheywalkedtogethertoandfromoffice.Somedayastheywerewalkinghometogetheritsuddenstartedtorain.Tomquicklyopenedhisumbrellaandsaid,“Mywifesurelyhasforesight(预见).Shesaidonthismorningitwouldrainandtoldmetocarrymyumbrellawithme.”Dicksmiledandwalkedtohim,said,“Mywifehasevengreatforesight.Shetoldmenottocarryanumbrellaandassheknewyouwouldcertainlyhavewithyou.”
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WhilevisitingFrance,wedecidetodosomeshopping.Notfarthehoteltherewasashopwithallkindsofclothinghangup.Whenwewentintotheshop,awomancameupandaskedthatshecouldhelpus,sowesaidthatwewouldliketolookaroundonourown.Shelookedatusratherstrange.Nothavingfoundanythingweneeded,wethankedthewomanandwasleft.SuddenlymyhusbandstartedtolaughpointingtothesmallsigninEnglish,whichread:
"DRY-CLEANINGSHOP.Asyouareasmoker,pleasedon'tsmokehere.
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Aretheyearsyouspentatschoolbestyearsofyourlife?
Personally,Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.Wehadtositatourdesksinsilenceandpaidattentiontowhattheteachersweresaying.Theywereusedtowriteontheblackboardandaskusdifficultquestions.Wealsohadtodoplentyofhomework,andhanditontime.Wehadtowearschooluniformsandobeylotsofrules.IleftschoolassoonasIcanandstartedwork.Ireadbooks
atthepubliclibrary,andlateIdecidedtoattendcollege.NowIreallyenjoystudybecauseI’mgrowingoldandknowwhatIwantit.WhenIwasatschool.Iwasjustthewrongage!
students’eyes.
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May10,2007Fine
TodayIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldownandhurtmyfoot.Iwasingreatlypainatthatmoment,butItriedtoactasifnothinghashappeneduntiltheclasswasover.ThoughIhaddifficultywalkbacktomyclassroom,Istilldidn’ttellanyonebutevenrefusedtheofferofhelpofmyclassmates.Asresult,thehurtinmyfootbecameworse.NowIknowI’mwrong.Wecantellothersourneedforhelpandaccepthishelp.Somedaywecannothelpothersinreturn.Inthisway,wecangetalongtoeachotherhappilyandpeacefully.
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Twofriendsweretravelingacrosstheforest whiletheymetwithabear.Theonewhowasingreat fearclimbedupintoatreeandhidehimself, withoutthinkingofhisfriend.Theanotherone foundthathehadnochancerunaway,so hethrewhimselfonthegroundandpretend todead,forhehadheardthatabear couldnevertouchadeadbody. Asifhethuslay,thebearcameupto hishead,andsmeltathisnoseandears.butthemanheldhisbreathe,andthebeast supposinghimtobedead,walkedaway.
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Myparentsarebothinterestedinreadingandmusic,and myfatherpreferstohistorybookswhilemymotherlikes toreadnovelsandwoman'smagazines.Inmusic,their tastesaresimilar,andtheyhadnevertiredoffolkmusic. Mostofthetime,theyareinagreementonbringingup children.Theybothbelieveingivingtheirchildrenloves,andnonebelievesinpunishingachildphysically. Attimes,theyagreeeachother,butsometimes theyseemdifferently.Perhapsthatiswhynoneof theirchildrenknowsforsurewhichparentsheshouldfollow.
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Thisafternoon,Ihadsuchinterestingexperience.Onmywaytothecinema,Isawacasetofalloffaman’sbike.SoIshoutedoutathimtostop.Unluckilyhedidn’thearmeandrideaway.Iwaswonderingwhat
todowhileanideaoccurredtome.Istoppedataxiandquicklygotintoitwiththecase.Soonwecaughtupwiththeman.Getthecaseback,hewassothankfulthatheofferedmesomemoney,andIrefuseditpolitely.
Thenthedriverdrovemetothecinema.WhenIpaidforhim,thedriverpushedmyhandaway,sayingwithasmile,“NeitherwillIreceiveyourmoney.”
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Hownicetohearyouagain.YouwanttoknowhowisgoingoninschoolsinChina.Infact,thingshaveimprovedsinceschoolsbegintoreducethelearningload.Iusedtohavetoworkatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworks.NowIhavemorefreetime,soImustfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadbooks,visitingmuseumsandtakingcomputerlessons.Besides,Icangotobedearlythanbefore.
Anyoneishappyaboutthesechanges.However,
Iwonderhowlongtimesuchsituationcanlast.
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DearTracy,
AlthoughI'm16yearsold,butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexampletometofollow.Butheoftensays:
“DoingasIsay,notasIdo.”Evenworse,hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests,makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.
Puzzled
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EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewanted
toseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotoffatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!
”heshouted.
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Itwasraining.InhiswayfromschoolPetersawanoldmanwalkingwithdifficultintherainwithoutaumbrella.Peterwentuptohimandofferedsharetheumbrellawithhim.Theoldmaninpoorhealth,soPetertriedtoholdtheumbrella.Buthewastooshorttoholdithighenough.Whilewonderedwhattodo,hesawtheoldman’sstickandhadanidea.Hehadtiedthesticktothehandleoftheumbrellaandmadethemlonger.Nowwesharedtheumbrella.Peterwashappy.
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Mysisterfoundabirdontheroadside.WenamedhimJackandkeephimforaboutthreeyears.Hewouldgreetusinatreeoutsi