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2017.12大学英语四六级考试写作部分Mymotherhaspassedalongtomecertainrulesforgettingalongwithothers.Dontarguewithparents;theywillthinkyoudontlovethem.Dontarguewithchildren;theywillthinkthemselvesvictimized.Dontarguewithspouses;theywillthinkyouareatiresomemate.Dontarguewithstrangers;theywillthinkyouarenotfriendly.Mymothersrules,infact,canbesummedupintwowords:
Dontargue.Ourlifetodaydependsverymuchonenergy.Intownsandinvillages,onfarmsandinfactories,machineshavemadelifeeasierthanitusedtobe.Themachinesuseenergy,andenergyisneededforheating,lighting,communications,carryinggoods-everything.Factoriesandindustrialplantsuseagreatdealofenergytomakethethingsthatweuseandbuyandsell.(主题句)Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.(推展句1)Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.(推展句2)Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.v原句1:
Hecanfixabicyclehimself.v斜体部分应为主题句中的关键词。
但它只是限制了段落发展的部分内容,并没有告诉读者该用哪种方法展开,是用因果关系法还是用分类法?
v修正:
Hecanfixabicyclehimselfinseveralsimplesteps.v修正:
Thereareseveralreasonswhyhecanfixabicyclehimself.v原句2:
Shetriestoimproveherlooks.v斜体部分应为主题句中的关键词。
她试着改变她面容的理由是什么?
或者她采取什么方法来改善呢?
我们无法从关键词中清楚得知。
v修正:
Shetriesmanywaystoimproveherlooks.v修正:
Therearesomereasonswhyshetriestoimproveherlooks。
vTherearetwowaysinwhichonecanownabook.Thefirstisthepropertyrightyouestablishbypayingforit,justasyouhavemadeitapartofyourselfandthebestwaytomakeyourselfapartofitisbywritinginit.vExerciseisbeneficialtoyourheart.A22-yearstudywasconductedbydoctorsinCalifornia.Theyfoundthatpeoplewhoworkatphysicaljobsexperiencefewerheartattacksthanotherpeople.Theseactivepeopleworkallthetimeatmoderatespeeds,theirdailyroutinegivesthemanadequateamountofexerciseandhelpsthemstayinshape.2017年年12月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法v比较法v通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较,引出文章要讨论的观点。
v1Foryears,.hadbeenviewedas.Butpeoplearetakingafreshlooknow.Withthegrowing.,people.v2Peopleusedtothinkthat.(Inthepast,.)Butpeoplenowsharethisnewidea.2017年年12月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法v故事法v先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣,引出文章的主题。
(建议少用)v1Oncein(anewspaper),Ireadof/learnt.Thephenomenonof.hasarousedpublicconcern.v2Ihaveafriendwho.Shouldhe.?
Suchadilemmaweareoftenconfrontedwithinourdailylife.v3Onceuponatime,therelivedamanwho.Thisstorymaybe(unbelievable),butitstillhasarealisticsignificancenow.2017年年12月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法v引用法v先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法,来引出文章要展开论述的观点。
v1Knowledgeispower.ThisistheremarkmadebyBacon.Thisremarkhasbeensharedbymoreandmorepeople.v2Educationisnotcompletewithgraduation.ThisistheopinionofagreatAmericanphilosopher.Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopinion.v3.Weoftenhearstatements/wordslikethose/this.v4Weoftenhearsuchtraditionalcomplainsasthis.2017年年12月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法v观点法v开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法。
v1Nowpeopleingrowing/significantnumbersarebeginning/comingtorealize/accept/(beaware)that.v2Nowthereisa(n)growingawareness/recognitionofthenecessityto.v3Nowpeoplebecomeincreasinglyaware/consciousoftheimportanceof.v4Perhapsitistimetohaveafreshlookattheattitude/ideathat.2017年年12月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法v引出要剖析的现象或者问题,然后评论。
v1Recentlytheriseintheproblem/phenomenonof.hascause/arousedpublic/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.v2Recentlytheissueoftheproblem/phenomenonof.hasbeenbroughtintofocus/intopublicattention.v3Inflation/Corruption/Socialinequality.isyetanotherofthenewandbittertruthwehavetolearntofacenow/constantly.2017年年12月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法v对立法v先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题。
v1Whenaskedabout.,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat.ButIthink/viewabitdifferently.v2Whenitcomesto.,somepeoplebelievethat.Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments/statements,butItendtotheformer/latter.v3Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat.Theyclaim/believe/arguethat.ButIwonder/doubtwhether.2017年年12月英语六级作文技巧:
如何强调月英语六级作文技巧:
如何强调v一、用“.andthat”,“.andthose”,“not.toomuch”,“否定加否定”等结构表示强调vTheyfulfilledthetask,andthatinafewdays.vIgavehersomepresents,andthosethedaybeforeyesterday.vIcantthankyoutoomuch.vIamnotunfaithfultoyou.2017年年12月英语六级作文技巧:
如何强调月英语六级作文技巧:
如何强调v二、用短语“ineveryway”,“innoway”,“byallmeans”,“bynomeans”,“onlytoo”,“alltoo”,“buttoo”,“inheaven”,“intheworld”,“inhell”,“onearth”,“underthesun”等表示强调vHisbehaviourwasineverywayperfect.vByallmeanstakeyoursonwithyou.vThenewswasonlytootrue.vItwasoveralltoosoon!
vWhereinheavenwereyouthen?
vNobodyunderthesunwouldbuythatcar.2017年年12月英语六级作文技巧:
如何强调月英语六级作文技巧:
如何强调v三、用倒装句表示强调vDishonestheis!
他的确不诚实!
vInwineisthetruth.酒后吐真言