最新高三英语二模作文范文汇编.docx

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最新高三英语二模作文范文汇编

2014—2015学年高三英语二模汇编——写作

浦东新区

II.GuidedWriting

Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

父母的言传身教在孩子的成长过程中往往起到重要的作用。

请结合自身的经历，描述一件印象深刻的事例，并谈谈感受

Itisoftensaidthatafamilyislikeaharbour,①inwhichparentswillgivetheirchildrenlove,supportandcomfortafterupsanddowns;andmyparentsareoneofthem,whosegoodwordsandbehavioursare②morethanIcandescribe.TodayIwanttoshareonething③impressingmesodeeplythatitseemsithadhappendedyesterday.英语培训_昂立教师BLOGAL4bK@o1^_x001D_E5t

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Thatwasseveralyearsago.Mymum’sbossputanendtotheircompany.Shebecamealaid-offworker,④whichmeantmyfatherwouldbetheonlybread-ownerofourfamily.MysisterandIbothfeltsomewhatworried,andMyparentssensedouranxietyimmediately.⑤Ononehand,mymumwasapplyingforotherpositionsactively,⑥whichleftnotraceofdismayatall,encouragingandmovingusgreatly;ontheotherhandmyparentshadatalkwithus,inwhichtheyexpressedgentlyandconfidentlythatfeedingourfamilyistheirresponsibility;theyhopedthatwetwocouldfocusonourstudyasbefore.⑦Seeingourmum’spersistence,takingtheiradvice,wetworeturnedtoschoollifequickly.andfortunatelymymumfoundanotherjobafterawhile.wetogetherexperiencedthosedays,whichhelpedusgrowmore.英语培训_昂立教师BLOG&S*d&c.dV$J;{（q{6j

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Fromit,⑧wekonwthatmembersofafamilyshouldsupportandloveeachotherwithoptimisticattitudenomatterwhatconditonswearein;Weunderstandthatparentsarelovingussomuchthatthey’rewillingtoshoulderallofthehardshipstohelpuswalkasmoothyway;andwebearinmindthatwemuststudyhardtorewardthemandusourselveswhotheylovemost.Atthismoment,Iamwritingdownthisarticle,fullofgratitudeandloveoncemore.

范文1：

It’swidelysharedthatthewordsandbehaviorsofparentsexertanoverwhelminglydispensableinfluenceonchildren’sdeveloment,Ican’tagreemore,formymum’swordshaveleftadeepimpressiononme.Inmychildhood,Iwasaddictedtothechinesechess.Mygrandpa’schessingskillwasveryoutstandingbutheneverhelpedmewin.Sowhenevermy“general”wasinadilemma,Ialwaysburstintotears.However,mymumnotonlydidn’trelieveme,buttoldmepatientlythatsuccesswaswasalwaysleftforthosewhowerewillingtotakepains.ThewordsaresopowerfulthatitconstantlyremindsmeofperseverancewheneverandwhereverIam.Asasayinggoes,”failureisthemotherofsuccess.”Iexceedlyrealizethesignificantimpactmyparents’wordshaveonme.

范文2：

It’swidelyacknowledgedthatchildrennaturallyimitatewhattheirparentsdoduringtheprocessofgrowth.Thankstomymom’skindness,I’velearnedtotreattheworldfriendly.Inthedeepwinter,mymomandIwentouttobuythings.Atthecornerofthestreet,wediscoveredanoldbeggar.Lyingonthecoldcementground,helookedsohelpless.Everypeoplepassingweresoindifferentthattheyallturnedblindeyestohim.Mymomremovedherwarmglovesandsearchedforaminutes.Findingseveralcoins,shebendedandcarefullyputthemintothebowlinfrontofhim.“Onnoaccountdoesanyonewanttobeg,throwingawayhisdignity,unlessthosewhotrulyhavenowaytogo”,Sheworehergolvesagainandsaid.Beingkindtoall,especiallythosetrappedinmiserablesituationsiswhatmymomtaughtme.Everyonemaycatchtroublesandeveryoneneedsinspirationandencouragement.

范文3：

Theparents’actionsandwordscanhavegreateffectsontheirchild.Accordingtomyexperience,thatisreallytrue.WhenIwasa5-year-oldchild,oneday,myfatherdrovemetoaparktoseethebeautifulscenery.Whenwearrivedtheparkingzone,wefoundthatitwasfullofdifferentcars.Wecouldhardlyfindaplacetoparkourcar.ThenIfoundthesidewalkoutsidetheparkingzonewasnearlyemptyandtherewasaSantanacarwithoutpassengersinitonthesidewalk.SoIaskedmyfathertoparkthecaronthesidewalkliketheSantanacar.Myfatherrefusedtodoso.Heexplained,”ifweparkthecaronthesidewalk,Iwillthelikelytopayforatrafficfine.Besides,parkingthecaronthesidewalkmaybringconveniencetous.Butitmakesthewalkersunconvenienttowalk.Wemustconsidertheeffecttotheotherpeople,notonlythinkforourselves.”ThenIknowwhatwaswrongwithme.Fromthismatter,Ilearnttobeconsiderateandknowtheimportanceofobeytrafficlaws.Asyoucansee,theparents’actionandwordsmayimpactontheirchildrenalot.

奉贤区

Ⅱ.Guidedwriting（25分）

教室是我们学生学习活动的最主要场所，简单描述你现在的教室，并发挥想象力，描述你理想中的教室。

Myclassroom,with33desksandchairsandtwoblackboards,isonthefifthfloor.Althoughthenoiseorthebadsmellcanbedisturbing,it’sstillagoodplacetostudyin.

However,thepresentclassroomisfarfrommyidealhome.Firstofall,myidealoneshouldbelargetoholdmoredesksorshelves,wherebooksandpaperscanbestored.AndIwantittoholdanentertainmentcornerinwhichtohavearestforacupofteaorcoffee.Second,therearejustthreeoldfansandIfeelveryhotinsummer,soIwantittobeequippedwithanairconditioner.FinallyIwishIhopeitcanbeahome,wherejoysandsorrowscanbeshared.

Thisismyidealclassroom,aseeminglyunrealisticbutextraordinarilybeautifulplace.

MyIdealClassroom

I’mnowstudyinginabrightclassroomonthefifthfloor,whereIcanhaveabird’seyeviewoftheschool.Althoughtheloudnoiseafterclassorthebadsmellinhotweathercansometimesbedisturbing,it’sstillaharmoniousplacetostudyin.

However,thepresentclassroomisfarfrommyidealhome.Firstofall,myidealoneshouldbelargeenoughtoholdmoredesksorshelves,wherepilesofbooksandpaperscanbestored.AndIwanttheretobeanentertainmentcornerinwhichtohaveagoodrestforacupofteaorcoffeeafterclass.Second,Iwantittobeequippedwithanenvironmentfriendlyairconditionerinsteadofthreeoldfansmakingmuchnoisewhileworking.Andwiththeapproachofhotsummerweather,Icannothelpsweating,whichmakesmefeelembarrassedandanxious,causingmydistractionfromwhattheteachersaresaying.Soanenergy-savingairconditionerisamustinmyidealclassroom.FinallyIwishIcanfeelathomeandfeelclosetonatureinit,surroundedbyplantsandflowersbreathingouttheirsweetperfume.

Thisismyidealclassroom,aseeminglyunrealisticbutextraordinarilybeautifulwonderland.

黄浦区

II.GuidedWriting

Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

近期，你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研，结果如图所示，请结合图表信息写一份调研报告，须包括以下内容：

1．图表产生的背景和基本内容；

2．就你个人而言，你会考虑哪些因素？

请列出其中你认为相对重要的两项因素，并说明原因。

下面图表是对我省某校高三学生选择高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。

请根据图表，用英语写一篇简要的报告，并说说你自己的观点。

注意：

（1）文章的开头已经写好。

（2）词数120左右。

（3）可以适当发挥  Someseniormiddleschoolgraduateshavedifferentopinionsonhowtochoosetheirmajorsanduniversities.

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答案

Onepossibleversion:

Someseniormiddleschoolgraduateshavedifferentopinionsonhowtochoosetheirmajorsanduniversities.

About35%ofthestudentsinsistthatthechoiceshouldbebasedontheirowninterest.Theysayinterestisthewayleadingtosuccess.Theythinkitamiserablethingtobeobligedtostudywhattheyhavenointerestin.

About45%ofthestudents,however,consideritistheneedofthesocietythatmattersalot,for,theysay,itwillhelpthemfindthejobtheylikebest.Inaddition,interestcanbedevelopedandchanged.

Interestingly,thereareabout20%ofthestudentswhofinditsodifficulttomakeachoicethattheyprefertofollowtheadviceofferedbytheirparentsorteachers.

Inmyopinion,interestisthemostimportantofall.Withoutinterestyoucan’tstudythesubjectverywellandmayhavemoredifficultwithyourcareer.

虹口区

II.GuidedWriting 

Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．

学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞选。

写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：

1、简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）。

2、如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？

注意：

自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字。

DearSir/Madam,

IamastudentnamedLiQingfromGrade3Class1,①writingthislettertocampaignforthepresidentoftheStudentUnion.

②Frommypointofview,Iamtherightone③youwant.I’vebeenintheStudentUnionfortwoyears,④servingasakeymemberinthePublicityDepartment.Moreover,Iamoutgoingandcapableofhavingeffectivetalkswithothers.WheninchargeofthePublicityDepartment,Ialwayshelpedtheformerpresidenttoorganizelarge-scaleactivities.Inaddition,Iamfondofmakingfriendsandtakingnewchallenges,⑤whichwillfacilitatemyfutureroleasapresident.

⑥Ifgiventhisposition,Iwilldomyutmost.⑦Ononehand,Iwillholdmoreinterestingandmeaningfulactivities,suchasculturefestivals,singingcompetitions,debatesandsoforth,soastoenrichcampuslife.⑦Ontheotherhand,⑧whatIwilldoistocallforstudentstoprotectourcampusenvironment,⑨forIfirmlybelievethatapleasantenvironmentisofvitalimportancetoeverystudentandteacher.

Iwillappreciateyourkindness⑩ifyouchoosemeasthenewpresident.Andyourpromptreplyiswarmlywelcomed.

Bestregards

LiQing

字数：

202

内容分析：

此作文题对考生来说并不陌生，因为2014年虹口区的二模作文“图书馆招聘一名图书管理员助理（theAssistantLibrarian），请以SimonJohnson为名写一封求职信”。

也采用了该形式。

除此之外，该作文与2014年普陀区二模作文“竞选学校的好班长称号（Mr./Mrs.Monitor）”与2015年静安区一模作文“写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，自荐做课余学生图书馆员”也类似。

在审题中需思考以下问题：

作为学生会主席候选人需要具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）；以及如果当选，如何为本校学生做贡献。

尤其是如何为本校学生做贡献是需要考生好好考虑的问题。

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：

首句使