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商志考研英语写作范文版
商志考研英语写作范文(2015版)
大作文
第一段
Howenlighteningandcompellingtheabovedrawingis!
Itissofunnythatwhoeverseesitcannothelpthinking:
_____.(这句自己加完整,从宏观上描述一下图画就可以,笼统的,大体的)______while_______.(这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点,必须找到矛盾点,用到while这个单词)Simpleasitlooks,itsintended(或者用implied)meaninggoesfardeeperwhatonearth(究竟)doesthedrawer(作者)reallyaimtoconvey.
第二段
Whattheimageabovevividlymirrors(名词用做动词)goesfarmorethanasimpleimage,instead,itcarries(有)athoughtprovokingsocialphenomenon:
____.(本文的主旨)Thereareupsetting(如文章不是讽刺性的,就把upsetting删除)parallelstodayinourcontemporarycommunity,andanacquaintanceofminemayserveasagoodexample.______.(用一两句话来举例)Anothertellingexampleismyformercolleague,who___.(另外一个例子,如果字数够就不用再举)
第三段:
Muchcanbedone.Tobeginwiththeschoolsandthemassmediashoulddevelopnobleandworthyvaluesandqualitiesamongpeople,doingtheirutmosttoawakenpeopleofthegrowingthreatofthisworseningsituation.(ofthisworseningsituation自己可以换成主旨的句子,如果不换,这样也可以。
如文章不是讽刺性的,就把worsening删除)Whatismore,theauthorities(当局)shouldplayadominantroleintakingnationwideactionstocurb(如文章不是讽刺性的,就把curb换成promote)suchpractices.Inconclusion,allthesocietyshouldactivelymoresustained(持续)andconcerted(一致)offorts.Althoughwestillhavealongwaytogo,apromisingstarthasbegun,andahappy,healthyandharmonious(和谐)societymaybenotbefarbehind.
注意事项:
1不要写题目
2要看清楚图画是一副还是两副,单数还是复数
3看清楚是卡通还是普通图画
卡通cartoon也可以用以下几个pictureimagedrawingillustration
图画Photo也可以用以下几个pictureimagephotograph
以前学过的,重复下:
Dearsir\madam,
ThankyouinadvanceforyourattentiontothisletterandI'mwritingtopresentmycomplaint\inquiry\apologyconcerningsth.that……
There'sanarrayoffactorscontributingtothis.Foronething,……Foranother,……
ThereareahostofaspectsI'llofferhere……
I'dbemostgratefulifyoucanreplymeatyourearliestconvenienceandany
favorableconsiderationswillbegreatlyappreciated.
Yourssincerely,LiMing
2009商志作文模板
最后一句suchupsetting……全删除,改为wecanmaintainahappy,healthyandharmonious
societyasweallwish.
漫画作文类
第一段:
1、How/whatthought-provokingtheabovecartoon/pictureis!
2、Asisvividlypresentedinthedrawing.。
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Ascanbeseenfromthedrawing,。
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第二段:
1、whatisthesymbolicmeaningofthedrawing?
或者whatonearthcanwelearnfromthedrawing?
2、itisfarbeyondanyreasonableaboutthatwhatthedrawerreallyintendstoconveyisfarreaching/profound.
3、by depictingthisimage,thedrawerattemptstoexpose/convinceus/advocatethat……
4、thepicturerevealsaseriousproblemin…(方面),andmoreandmoresimilareventshappenedandhappeningareheardorreportedinoursocietyaswellaslife.
5、tomakethepointeventclear.let’scometoanexampleconcerning…….
第三段:
1、judgingfromallevidenceofferedabove,wemaycometotheconclusion/concludethatitishightime+虚拟语气的从句(wetookeffectivemeasuresto……/weenhancedtheawarenessofthepeopletotreadthebetter/muchimportancewereattachedtothiskindofphenomenon)
2、whatweshoulddonowisto
3、onlyinthisway,Idobelieve,canwelive-inaharmonioussociety.
4、as/solongas……
5、thereiseveryreasontobelievethat…
高联商志10考研作文班笔记
第一种开头:
Whoeverinfrontofthisimage(s)/cartoon/picturewillbegreatlyshocked/striked.Howamusingandinterestingitis!
Whatisvividlyillustratedinthepaintingaboveisthat_____对漫画笼统地描述___。
______从微观上再描述一下_____Oddandfunnyasitlooks.Suchhappeningsarefarfrombeingrareandwecannotaffordtoignorethem.
Oddandfunnyasitseemstobe,suchstories(story)/event/happening/case/phenomenon/practicearesopervasivethatwecannotaffordtoignorethem.
第二种开头:
Whataninterestinganenlighteningpaintingitis!
Itisindicativeofaseriousyetcommonsocialphenomenon:
_____对漫画笼统地描述___。
______从微观上再描述一下_____.Howeverridiculousandfarfetcheditlooks(seemstobe);thedrawerintendsfardeepermeaningsthanwhatisshownsuperficially.
第三种开头:
Howamusingandenlighteningtheaboveillustrationis!
Itissofunnythatwhoeverseesitcannothelplaughing:
_____对漫画笼统地描述___。
______从微观上再描述一下_____.Simpleasitlooks,itsintended(implied)meaninggoesmuchdeeper.Whatonearthdoesthedrawerreallyaimtoconvey?
__________._____________while(完全相反时用incontrary)______________。
(描述两个方面)
第二段:
Obviouslywecaneasilydefinewhatthepaintersubtlyintendstoreflect(communicate)tous.Thestrongandclearmessagesuggestedisthat____主旨________。
AccordingtorecentsurveyconductedbyCCTV(ChineseAcademyofsocialSciences/XinhuaNews/ChinaDaily/People’sDaily/FudanUniversity/PekingUniversity/TsinghuaUniversity)28.6%(自己随便写)people______主旨__________(或用一种笼统地切题方法如arefollowingthistide)Itisalarmingthatagrowingnumberofsimilareventsareoccurring.
Nowhereinhistoryhastheissueof______主旨_____beenconcertedsomuchasinoursocietytoday(史上任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代这样更加关切这样的事情,此句由历年真题阅读部分改变而来)
“______见下面的例句________”直接引语__职务____,SaysDr.SunDong,
职务有:
(用副职免得阅卷老师认识)
Vice-presentofXiamenUniversity
Vice-directoroftheSociologicalResearchCenterattachedtoChineseAcademyofsocialSciences
Vice-deanofSociologyDepartofFudanUniversity
例句:
NowheresaysDr.SunDong,__职务_,“Itisalarmingsuchstories/upsetting/parallelsareavailableinnearlyallwalksoflifeinourcontemporarycommunity.”Failuretorealizetheseverityofthegrimsituationmanysignificantlydecreaseourchancesofsuccess.
Itishardtoimaginewhatoursocietywouldbelikeyearslaterprovidedsuchpracticesgounchallenged.Indeed,thewholesocietyshouldbemadeawarethatanypromptactionsofgreatbenefittoall
第二段备用:
Whatthedrawingconspicuouslymirrors/illustratesgoesfarbeyond/morethanasimpledrawing,instead,itcarriesthought-provoking/important/strikingimplications.
举例子:
Thecartoonremindsmeofafewinterestingstories.Acaseinpointisanacquaintanceofminewho_______________.Anothertellingexampleisoneofmyformercolleagues,who__________________.Anacquaintanceofminemaywellserveasagoodexample_____________________.
表原因:
Whatbringabout/accountforthisstrangephenomenon?
Iamstronglyconvincedthatthisispartlybecause___________________,andthisispartlybecause___________________.
What____上句话_______?
Somemanyclaimthatthisphenomenonresultsfrom_________________,whileIamstronglyconvincedthattheprimaryreasongoesmuchdeeper:
_________________________.
第三段:
Muchcanbedone.Whattopstheagenda,Ideem,istohelp/encouragepeopletodeveloppositiveandwholesomeoutlookonlifeaswellastheword.Besides/what’smore,nobleandworthyvaluesandqualitiessuchascourage,honesty,diligenceandperseveranceshouldbeencouraged/fosteredandcherished.
Additionally,weshouldappealtothegovernmenttomakesustainedandconcertedeffortstoreverse/curb/promotetheworseningtrend.Onlyinthesewayscanwemaintainahappy,healthyandharmonioussocietyasweallwish.
Althoughitiseasiersaidthandone,therearegodreasonstoexpectthatsuchaphenomenoncanbeterminallyendedoratleastreduced.
第三段备用1:
Tosolvetheproblem,Iamstronglyconvincedthatallofusshouldmakesustainedandconcertefforts.Foronething,schoolandthemassmediashouldserveasacounterbalancetothisgrimtrend,doingtheirutmosttodevelopnobleworthyvaluesandqualitiesamongpeopleandawakeningpeopletothegrowingthreatoftheworseningsituation.Foranother,theadministrationshouldplayadominantroleintakingnationwidepromptactions.
Fortunately,duetoattentionhasbeenpaidandeffectivemeasureshavebeentaken.Althoughwestillhavealongwaytogo,this,Ibelieve,isapromisingstart.Acampaignto_____主旨切题_______hasbegun,ahappy,healthyandharmonioussocietymaynotbefarbehind.(历年真题阅读句子改写)
第三段备用2:
Toparaphrase18th-centurystatesman_____,“Allthatisneededfortheprevalenceofamisdeedisthatgoodpeopledonothing.”
或:
JustasanancientChinesephilosophicalbookconcludes,“Allthatisneededfortheprevalenceofamisdeedisthatgoodpeopledonothing.”
Theauthorities,schoolsandmassmediashouldforcefullyandactivelycommunicatetheirinstructiveandpositivemessagetothepublic,lestsimilarmisdeedsgounchallenged.Ifpositiveandeffectivemeasurescanbewellunderway,itmaynotbelongforustogetaneasybreathandhealthysocietyweallwish.
Ifgoodpeopledonothing,thereisarealpossibilitythatthatsuchmisdeedsturnintoadreadfulhandicap,thusposingathreattotherapidgrowthofoursociety.
商志作文模板
讽刺意义(非积极意义)
Whatathought-provokingandcompellingdrawingitis!
Asisvividlypresentedintheinterestingandinstructivecartoonabove,漫画描述,insharpcontrast,漫画描述.Whatonearthdoesthedrawerreallyattempttoconvey?
(或者Whatonearth thedrawerreallyattemptstoconveyshouldbegivenprofoundconsideration.)
Humorousandridiculousastheimageis,thedrawingdoesmirroracommonphenomenonof主题,andisapparentlyfar-reaching.Initially,suchaphenomenonasrevealedinthepicturehasaroundedwide-spreadsocialconcern.Nowhereinhistoryhastheissue(of漫画主题)beentalkedaboutsomuchasinoursocietytoday.What'smore,主题notonlyresultsdoesharmto....and....,butalsoresultsin不利问题,Additionally,thepainterintendstoconvinceusthatapackageprogramsshouldbeinitiatedtoreversethegrimsituation—措施(launchingnationwideeducationcampaign,settinguprelevantlawsandregulations,andthelistgoeson.)
Takingintoaccountalltheanalysesabove,itishightimethatmuchimportancewereattachedtosuchcases.Itistherefore,Ithink,necessarythatimmediateactionsbetakentocurb