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专四写作讲座之作文闪光点
BySimmy
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very
thrilling替换exciting
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
google替换search
anarmyof替换alotof
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingnumbersofindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular
Coincidentwith…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pourinto（floodinto/swarminto）替换enterinto
Current（currently）替换now
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
Growingnumbersofindividuals替换moreandmorepeople
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides Deliver替换send
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,obscene,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有however作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto
Emerging替换appearing（fading替换disappearing）
Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides
Computersdoplay，do强调
Positive替换important/good等
Asliceof替换apartof
Unfavorable替换bad
Impacts替换effects/influences
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语
Fruits（而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues）替换advantage（defects替换disadvantage）
Facet替换aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。
,characters,folks替换（people,persons）
2:
positive,favorable,rosy（美好的），promising（有希望的），perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good
3:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill（有害的）替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive替换
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.（anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many。
。
。
ifnotmost）替换many.
注：
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
5:
asliceof,quietafew,several替换some
6:
harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat）替think
（因为是书面语，所以要加that）
7，affair,business,matter替换thing
8:
shared代common
hugefruits替换getmanybenefits
10formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion
11:
Increasing（ly）,growing替换moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
hasgainedgrowingpopularity.
Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
ifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly
13..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,
client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer
,extremely,intensely替换very
necessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable
appealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin
one'sattention替换attractone'sattention.
,demension,sphere代aspect
indicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
riseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth
替换want.
attentioninto替换payattentionto
inmindthat替换remember
26.enjoy,possess替换have（注意process是过程的意思）
27.interaction替换communication
onsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth
nameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible
希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点！
常用连接词
ToAdd:
and,again,andthen,besides,equallyimportant,finally,further,furthermore,nor,too,next,lastly,what'smore,moreover,inaddition,first（second,etc.）,
ToCompare:
whereas,but,yet,ontheotherhand,however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,bycomparison,where,comparedto,upagainst,balancedagainst,but,although,
conversely,meanwhile,afterall,incontrast,althoughthismaybetrue
ToProve:
because,for,since,forthesamereason,obviously,evidently,furthermore,moreover,besides,indeed,infact,inaddition,inanycase,thatis
ToShowException:
yet,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,ofcourse,onceinawhile,sometimes
ToShowTime:
immediately,thereafter,soon,afterafewhours,finally,then,later,previously,formerly,first（second,etc.）,next,andthen
ToRepeat inbrief,asIhavesaid,asIhavenoted,ashasbeennoted,
ToEmphasize:
definitely,extremely,obviously,infact,indeed,inanycase,absolutely,positively,naturally,surprisingly,always,forever,perennially,eternally,never,emphatically,unquestionably,withoutadoubt,certainly,undeniably,withoutreservation
ToShowSequence:
first,second,third,andsoforth.A,B,C,andsoforth.next,then,followingthis,atthistime,now,atthispoint,after,afterward,subsequently,finally,consequently,previously,beforethis,simultaneously,concurrently,thus,therefore,hence,next,andthen,soon
ToGiveanExample:
forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,inanothercase,onthisoccasion,inthissituation,takethecaseof,todemonstrate,toillustrate,asanillustration,
ToSummarizeorConclude：
inbrief,onthewhole,summingup,toconclude,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,asIhavesaid,hence,therefore,accordingly,thus,asaresult,consequently,onthewhole
一、常用句型及单词
A.开头
1、Thereisaninterestingandinstructivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:
______________.
2、______________hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoung,andheateddebatesarerightontheirway.
3、Recently,_________hasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthat_________
.Recently,theproblemofglobalwarminghasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsatalllevelsplaceitonthetopoftheagenda.）.
4、Oneofourancientphilosopherssaid,______________.Chinesepeoplehavealwaysbeenholdingthisideatobeoneoftheirstandardsofmorality.
5.Noone，regardlessofrace,religionornationality,woulddenythat...或：
Everyonewouldagreethat...
B结尾
1）Onlyinthisway/Onlywhen……/Onlythrough……,will/canwe……或：
Itisonlyif/when……thatwewill……
Itisonlyifallsidesofsocietytaketheirrolesfullythatwewillachievethesocietywewant.
2）Aslongas……wewillbeableto……/theproblemisboundto……
Aslongaswepersistinspreadingscientificknowledgeamongthemasses,allthesuperstitionsareboundtogooutofourlife.
3）Withaconstant/steadyimprovementin……（或Withthegradualworseningof……）sth.will……
Withasteadyimprovementinourlegalsystem,thisproblemwillsurebesolvedearlierorlater.
4）Inawordthereisevery/littlechance/probability/possibilitythat.……intimeto
Inoneword,thereiseverychancethatthisChinesetraditonwillcontinuetoentertainmillionsofChinesecitizens.
C.中间
1．建议和解决方法
1）.Agreatnumberofsolutionsarebeingoffered.Somepeoplesuggestthat______________.Othersarguethat______________.
2）.ButIdon’tthinkitisaverygoodwaytosolve______________.Forinstance,______________.Worstofall,______________.
3）.Mysuggestiontodealwith/solve/relievetheproblemareasfollows.Inthefirstplace,….Secondly,….Finally
4）.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,….Bythattime,….如果让这种情况继续发展下去，那么到那个时候，……。
5）If……,willtherebeanythingthatcanmakemeevenhappier?
如果（我们怎么怎么做），那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。
结构
1）Itisadvisabletoexercise（拥有）patienceindealingwithsuchcomplicatedsituations.
2）Itisnecessarythatyoungandoldpeopleshouldcommunicatemorewitheachother.
3）Itiscertainthatfreshairandexercisesaremoreenjoyableandbeneficialthanmedicine.
4）Itiswellknownthatmanyofourproblemsarecausedatleastinpartbyfailuretocommunicate.
5）Itseemedtomethattheonlythingthatmattersistolearnthroughfailure.
6）Itpaysinthelongrun（从长远的角度看……）tointroducenewtechnique.
3.动名词或分词结构
1）Drinking，eating，andsmokingexcessivelycandosevere
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