新东方写作补充讲义分享.docx

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课堂范文：

1.DueAttentionShouldbePaidtoSpelling

There’snodenyingthefactthatnowadaysfewerandfewerstudentspayattentiontotheirword-spelling.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,thereisadramaticincreaseinthenumberofstudentswhocanonlyimitatethepronunciationofawordbutbeincapableofspellingit.Hence,studentsshouldattachgreatimportancetotheissue.

Thereasonwhystudentspaylittleattentiontothespellinginmyopinioncanbediscussedinthefollowingthreeaspects.OneofthemajorreasonsisthatfewerandfewerstudentsneedtowriteEnglishessays.Anotherfactorisattributedtostudents’wideuseofelectronicdevicessuchase-dictionariesandcomputers.Inthisway,studentsnolongerneedtocorrectthewordsbythemselves.Moreover,itisalsobecausethepresentexamsdon’tattachmuchimportancetospelling.Itmeansstudentsneedtodonothingbutthemultiplechoicesskillfullytoachievegoodmarks.

Facedwiththesituation,weshouldtakeseveralmeasurestosolvetheproblem.Ononehand,universitieshavetheresponsibilitiestomodifywaysofexamstomorefocusonspelling.Moreover,theyshouldalsoworkouteffectivewaystobringbothteachersandstudentstheawarenessoftheimportance.Ontheotherhand,studentsaresupposedtoenhancetheawarenessofcreatingagreencampussothattheywillinstinctivelyremembertoturnoffthetapwhentheyfinishwashing.Onlyinthiswaycanweexpecttohaveagreencampus.

2.Studyabroad

原文：

Ithinkitisgoodtostudyabroad,wecangetabettereducation.Wecangetsomeknowledge.Wecanalsoknowanewcultureandmakedifferentfriends.Wecanfeelhappytoplaytogether.

修改后：

Ithinkstudyingabroadexertspositiveinfluenceonpeoplebecausewecanreceivebettereducationandacquiredifferentknowledge.It’sobviousthatwewillgetexposedtoanewculture,whichwilllayasolidfoundationforfuturework.Besides,wecanmakedifferentfriendswithwhomwefeelhappy.

3.PiratedProducts

原文：

Theprimaryreasonisattributedtoagreatmanyofpeoplewouldratherbuythepiratedproductsinthattheirpricesaremuchlowerthantheoriginalones.Anotherfactorliesinthelawisstillnotperfect,thegovernmentlacksthecorrespondinglegalfoundation.

修改后：

Theprimaryreasonisattributedtothelowprice.Agreatmanyofpeoplewouldratherbuythepiratedproductsbecausetheyaremuchcheaperthantheauthorizedones.Anothercauseliesinthefactthatthelawisstillnotperfect.Inthisway,thegovernmentlacksthecorrespondinglegalfoundation.

4.Travelabroad

1.近年来X市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游。

2.出现这种现象的原因。

3.这种现象可能产生的影响。

Asrevealedfromthebarchart,greatchangestookplaceinthepastdecadeinthenumberofpeopletravelingabroad.Intheyearof1995,about10,000peoplewentabroadfortravellingwhilethenumberclimbedto40,000intheyearof2000.Intheyearof2005,thenumbersoaredto130,000.

Personally,thesharpincreaseinpeopletravelingabroadcanbediscussedintwoaspects.Foronething,there’snodenyingthefactthatpeoplebecomewell-offwiththerapiddevelopmentofeconomysothattheycanaffordthetravelingcost.Foranother,there’sagrowinghopeamongpeopletoenlargetheirviewbytravelingabroad.

Onthewhole,Iholdthattravelingexertspositiveinfluenceonusbecauseitenablesustohavemoreopportunitiestonotonlyenjoytheattractivescenery,butalsogetexposedtothegreatcultureofanation.Therefore,ourviewandscopeofknowledgewillbebroadenedtoagreatextent.

范文：

1.LowCarbonLife

Presently,anewlifestylecalledlowcarbonlifeisspreadingeverycorneroftheworld.Peoplebelievethatiftheyconsumelessresource,ourlivingconditionwillbebetter.

Theappearanceofthistrendismainlyduetotheworseningenvironmentonearth.Humanbeingsareexhaustingtheenergyresourcesonearth.Atthesametime,weemitthegreenhousegasesinourdailyactions,whichhaschangedtheclimateoftheearthandledtoaseriesofdamagingconsequences.

Therefore,it’severyone’sresponsibilitytostoptheirdestructiveaction.Ononehand,thegovernmentshouldadvocateano-cardayeveryweek,becausecarsnotonlycauseseriousairpollutionbutalsoconsumeenergy.Ontheotherhand,citizensshouldbeencouragedtotakepublictransportation,orjustwalkorrideabike.Besides,wehadbetternotusedisposableplasticbagsanymore.Moreover,weshouldtryeverymeanstosaveinourdailylife.Weoughttoturnoutthelightsthemomentweleavearoom,turnoffthetapintime,andreuseourtextbookandsoon.

2.DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling

Nowadays,studentsattachlessimportancetothespellingofwordsintheprocessofEnglishstudy.Thisphenomenongreatlyinfluencesstudents’writingandbringsonworriesamongteachers.

Therearepossiblythreereasonscontributingtothisphenomenon.First,exam-orientededucationmakesthestudentspaylessattentiontospelling.Second,someteachersshouldalsoberesponsibleforitbecausetheydon’temphasizetheimportanceofspellingduringteaching.Besides,somestudentsaretoolazytorecitewords.

SincespellingisoneofthemostimportantfactorsinEnglishstudy,dueattentionshouldbegiventoit.Asforme,Ithink,first,examsshouldbemodifiedtoaddsomefactorsintoit,whichwouldhelpstudentstopaymoreattentiontospelling.Then,schoolsshouldalsoseteffectivemechanismstohelpteachersaswellasthestudentstorealizetheimportance.Finally,forstudentsthemselves,theycan,throughotherways,makethemselvesbeinterestedinwordspelling.Onlyinthesewayscanwerealizetheimportanceofspellingandmakeimprovement.

3.CreateaGreenCampus

　　“Greencampus”is,tosomeextent,arelativelynewconcepttous.Itnotonlymeanscreatingagreenenvironmentoncampus,butalsoreferstothatthestudentsshouldbeeducatedandhaveanenvironmentalsenseintheirmind.Ofcourse,thisconceptisveryimportantforthestudentsbecauseitsetsgoalstowardthefutureoftheworld.

　　Theyounggenerationisundertheburdenofsevereenvironmentalproblemsandthehopesofenvironmentalimprovementarelyinginthem.Therefore,campusplaysamoreimportantroleineducatingtheyounggeneration.Thecreationof“Greencampus”willgreatlystimulatestudentstotakepartinvariousenvironmentalprotectionactivities;mostimportantly,studentswillbeeducatedtotakeenvironmentalproblemsseriouslyastheirownmissionandresponsibility.Undersuchstimulations,studentsmaygraspthechancetolearneverynecessarycoursefortheharmoniousandsustainabledevelopmentoftheworld.

　　Tobring“greencampus”toitsfullplay,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.First,basedonitseducationfunction,campusshouldbringthetheoryof“sustainabledevelopment”intoclassrooms,setenvironmentalmanagementrulesandconductenvironmentaleducationactivities.Second,campusalsoneedstostrengthenitstieswiththesociety,triestocommunicatewithparentsandexpertssoastoensurethatstudentscouldhaveabetterparticipationinthepracticalactivities.Onlybytheco-effortsofthewholesocietycould“greencampus”worksmoothlyandbringbenefittopeople’swell-beings.

4.Recreationalactivities

Therearemoreandmorekindsofrecreationalactivitieswiththefastdevelopmentofthesociety.Ithinktherecreationalactivitieshavemanygoodways,andIhavemanyreasonstosupportthat.

First,thecollegestudentswouldhavemoreopportunitiestomakefriends.Second,theycanhaverestintherecreationalactivities,whichisbeneficialnotonlyfortheirhealth,butalsofortheirmaking-friends.What’smore,therecreationalactivity,thewaytoofferrelaxationsafteralaboriousday,canhelppeopletorelievestress.Forexample,IoftengowithmyroommatestoplaybasketballwhichIlikemost.Afterthegame,Ialwaysfeelgood.

Justaseverycoinhastwosides,therearealsosomebadsidesofrecreationalactivities.Ifwereduceourselvestothem,theymayaffectourstudies,andthusbringharmtous.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,recreationalactivitiescanexertbothpositiveandnegativeinfluenceonpeople.Onlyifwemakerightwaystoattendcanitdogoodtous.

5.Studyingabroad

Atpresent,manystudentsstudyabroadandmanyothersaremakingpreparationsforthat.Accordingtostatistics,about8,000collegegraduatesgoabroadtopursuefurtherstudyeachyear.

Studyingabroadcanbringuslotsofbenefits.Firstly,itisimportantforustogetanadvancededucationortraininginourmajor.Throughhavingaccesstosomespecialequipment,wecanacquiresomeknowledgewhichisnotavailableathome.Besides,onecanknowanewculture.

However,therearealsosomeproblemswithstudyingabroad.Forexample,somestudentswon’treturnafterfinishingtheirstudy,whichisagreatlosstoourmotherland.

I’manEnglishmajorstudentandIplantostudyinAmericainthefuture.Ononehand,IcandevelopmylanguageproficiencyinEnglishspeakingsurroundings;ontheotherhand,Icanwidenmyhorizonsbyseeingtheworld.

6.FakeDiploma

Recently,theproblemoffakediplomahasbeenbroughtintopublicfocus.Itisoften

reportedthatsomeonewascaughtwithafakediplomainthepersonnelmarket.Theadvertisementsofsellingfakediplomacanoftenbefound.

Thereasonsfortherepeatedoccurrenceoffakediplomaarenotdifficulttoget.Firstly,

theprospectiveemployersputtoomuchemphasisonthejobapplicant’seducationalbackgroundratherthantheirpracticalabilities.Secondly,somepeople’slackofaccesstohighereducationalsocontributestotheproblem.

Theappearanceoffakediplomai