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第六部分写作
专题一 短文改错
Correction1[2017甲卷（全国Ⅱ）]
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日常生活
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Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!
Correction2[2016丙卷（全国Ⅲ）]
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Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.
Correction3[2016四川]
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母亲节
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ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.
Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,"HappyMother’sDay!
"Momwasgratefulandmoving.
Correction4[2015新课标全国Ⅱ]
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小男孩和父母走散
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Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.
Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,"Hownicetoseeyouagain!
DadandIwereterribleworried."Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.
Correction5[2015陕西]
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为教练做饼干
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Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.
Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,"Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits."
Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!
Correction6[2015浙江]
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我的老教室
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Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.
Correction7[2014新课标全国Ⅰ]
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种植圣女果
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Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!
Correction8[2018湖北部分重点中学高三考试]
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孔子学院
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Nowadays,moreandmoreConfuciusInstitutesarebeingbuildingallovertheworld,thatshowsourChineseculturehasbecomemorepopularthanever.Ontheonehand,theancientChinesecultureoncehadagreatinfluenceinothercultures,especiallythoseofAsiancountry.Onotherhand,ourChinesecultureconstantlydevelopedthroughoutthelonghistory,thusmadeitmorecolorfulandmorebrilliant.ConfuciusInstitutesaregoodplaceswheretolearnabouttheChineseculture.Whoeverwanttoknowmoreaboutitmustspendmoretime.Therefore,heorshecannothaveawellknowledgeoftheChineseculture.
Correction9[2018郑州一中高三入学测试]
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救助车祸受伤的女孩
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TheincidenthadhappenedonmywaytoabookstoreontherainySundayafternoon.Iwaswaitingforthegreenlightwhenagirlabouttenwasknockeddownbyapassingcar,thatdroveoffquickly.Amanimmediatelyrushedtothegirltogivehimfirstaid.Ijoinedinwithoutanyhesitate.Ayoungwomancalled110andthepolicessoonarrivedatthescene.Fortunateshewasnotbadlyinjuredandwesenthertothenearesthospital.Comparingwiththeescapeddriver,IamproudofthatIdid.
Correction10[2018辽宁五校协作体联合模拟]
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Challengesoflifeareofgreatimportanceinourgrow.TheyremindmemydaysinseniorhighschoolwhichIjoinedinthemilitarytraining.ItwasthefirsttimeIhavelivedawayfrommyhome,soIfounditdifficulttofitin.Andthetrainingofficerwasstrictinme.IoncethoughtIcouldn’tsticktotheend.Butanyway,Iwassucceeded.Thetrialsmadeitmucheasyformetoadapttolife,butthedifficultiesIcameacrosshavenowbecomeapreciousmemoryinmylife.Inshort,learningtoregardthechallengesoflifeasthesteppingstonetofuturesuccessandmakethebestofthem.
Correction11[2018四川成都一诊]
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美国人在伦敦
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OneofthebiggestculturaldifferenceInoticedwhileIwasinLondonwaswhythepeopleofLondonconductedthemselves.Itseemedthattheytookmanyprideintheircountry.Ialsonoticethattheyalwaysseemedtodresswell,andalwayshadtheirhairandmakeupdo.Idon’tthinkIsawonepersoninsweatpantsduringtheirwholetrip!
AttimesIfoundithardertomakethechangebeingintheUStobeinginLondon.I’vefoundoutthatAmericansareloud!
EvenatthepubsandclubsinLondon,Ifeltlikethatwewerealoudestones!
Correction12[2017河南中原名校高三质检]
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DearTom,
IamgladtohearthatyouaregoingtoCanadatostudy.SoIwaswritingtotellyouanythingaboutthiscountry.
LocatinginNorthAmerica,Canadaisthesecondlargecountrywiththelargenumberoflakesintheworld.Themajorityofpeoplelivesinthecenterofthecountry.However,Isuggestthatyouchosetostudyintheeast,becausetherearemanyinternationalstudentshereandthetuitionislower.Duringyourstudy,youcantakethepartinmoreactivitiesafterclass,whereyoucanmakemorefriendsfromdifferentcountry.Inthisway,yourlifewillrichandcolourful.
Hopeyouwillhaveawonderfullifethere.
Yours,
LiMing
Correction13[2017河北石家庄高三联考]
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ItisfiveyearsnowsinceIgraduatefromhighschool.LastSaturday,theclassthatIwasonheldaget-together,whichtookusalongtimeprepare.Itwasindeednoteasytogetinthetouchwitheverybodyandsetaproperlytimeforallofus.Weallenjoyedthispreciousdaygreatly,talkaboutthepeopleandthingstheywerefamiliarwith.Itwasapitywhichsomeofuswerenotpresentastheyhadgoneabroadforfurthereducation.Besides,theycalledbackorsentgreetingcardfromdifferentplaces.
Correction14[2016福建第一次四校联考]
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Ladiesandgentlemen,mayIhaveyourattentionsplease?
Welcometoourschool!
Herewasanarrangementforyourvisit.Thismorning,I’mgoingshowyouaroundourschool.Youaresupposingtohavelunchtogetherwithsomestudentsintheschooldininghall,thatyoucanhaveafreelytalkwithstudentsfromdifferentclasses.Intheafternoon,Grade2studentswillhavealessonofBritishgeographybyMr.John,oneofthedelegationmembers.Tomorrowmorning,Mr.Taylor,theheadofthedelegation,willgivealectureontheBritaineducationinthelecturehall.Havehadlunch,wewillvisitalocalmuseumaswellasanoldtemple.That’sall.Thankyou.Somequestions?
Correction15
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Itismyson’sbirthdaytwodaysago.AsIdidn’tbuyanygiftforhim,Igavehim$10forabirthdaygift.Lasteveningheusedittakehiscousinoutforicecream.Itwasturnedoutthatthesetwokidswerethelastonetotheshopoftheday.Sotheladyatthecashregisterwhowantedtocashoutquicklytoldthemtheiricecreamwasfreely!
Theywereextremelyexcitingtohearit.ThenIaskedmysonwhyhedidwiththemoney.Tomyjoyful,herepliedthathegaveittothehomelessman.
Correction16
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父母是孩子的第一位老师
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Mostofushaverealizedwhatthatourparentsareourfirstteachers.Aswegrowbothphysicallyormentally,ourparentsteachusmoreaboutsociety.Therehaveatimewhenweyoungpeoplebelievethattheirparen
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