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雅思作文范文及分析多陪家人
雅思作文范文及分析:
多陪家人
雅思A类大作文全球真题:
年轻人应该多陪家人还是在外面娱乐?
Somepeoplethinkthatyoungpeopleshouldspendfreetimewithfamiliesinsteadofoutsideentertainment,othersdisagree.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
Howtomanageleisuretimecomestoanimportantproblemtobesolvednowadayssinceitisadilemmatochoosebetweenspendingtimewithfamilymembersandhavingfunoutsides.Infact,therearevariousreasonsforbothsidesandtheycanholdwater.
Formostpeople,thefamilycomesfirstunderanycircumstances.Whentheyareyoung,theyneedtoshowtheirgratefulnessandappreciationtowardsparentswhoraisethemup,andthen,aftergrowingup,theyshouldertheresponsibilitytosupportandeducatechildreninthefamily.Inthisway,everyoneshouldaccompanyfamilies,whoaremostpreciousintheworld,asmuchtimeaspossible.Ontheotherhand,itwillstresspeopleoutifthereisnotimetoenjoythemselvesoutside.Lifeisfarmorethanfamily,andtheyneedtohangoutwithfriends,workwithcolleaguesordatewithlovers.Also,peoplemustgettiredtofacethesameperson24hoursperdayfor7days.
Frommypointofview,spendingmoretimewithfamilyistrulyneeded.Actually,peopleputthemostoftimeoutsideandlessandlesstimeathomewiththeirbelovedsincetheyshouldwork40hoursperweekandmeetupwithbusinesspartners,andarewillingtokitatshoppingmallsforamoviewithbuddies.Therearetoofewhoursforfamilies.Inaddition,peoplestillcangetentertainmenttoowhentheyspendtimewithfamilymembers.Norulestoregulatewhatafamilygatheringshouldlikeandeveryfamilymembercanhostoneforthethemetheylove.Thus,tremendoushappinesscouldbegeneratedinfamilytime.
雅思写作大作文范文:
父母应该多陪子女
范文:
InChina,bothoftheparentshavetheirjobs.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,peopletendtopursuehighqualitylivingconditions.Mostoftheparentstrytheirbesttooffertheirchildrencomfortablecircumstances,buttheyseldomhavetimetostaywiththeirchildren.Inmypointofview,nomatterhowbusytheyare,theyshouldmakethebestuseoftheirtimetostaywiththeirchildren.)
First,thelovebetweenchildrenandadultswillbeimprovedbyspendingmoretimeontheirchildren.Childrencouldfeelparents'affectionthroughthegenialconversationandsharingtheirpleasurewiththem.Everytimewhenparentstakethemtoamusementpark,helpthemtopreparetheirbirthdayparties,applaudforthemwhentheyarecompetinginthesportsmeeting,thetimetheyspendwithchildrenwillbecometreasureintheirmemories.
Second,childrenneedthedirectionfromtheirparents.Therearesomewrongbehaviorsinoursocietysuchasdishonesty,corruption,violenceanderoticismandsoon.Childrenhaveweakresistanceindefendingthisdetrimentalinfluence.Inthiscase,parents'instructionsseemtobeveryimportanttochildren'sgrowth.Parentsshouldsitdownandtalkwiththemaboutwhattheyshoulddoandshouldnotdo.Inaddition,ifparentsoftenspendtimeinstayingwiththeirchildren,adults'goodbehaviorswillgreatlyinfluencetheirchildren.
HereIdonotdenythattherearesomedisadvantagesinspendingtoomuchtimeonchildren.Someparentsrestricttheirchildren,andgivethemlittlefreedomtodeveloptheirinterests.Therefore,Iemphasizethatparentsshouldeducateandinstructtheirchildrenappropriatelyintheirsparetimeapartfromtheirbusyworks.
雅思大作文范文:
家庭关系不紧密
社会类:
Itisgenerallyacceptedthatfamiliesarenotascloseastheyusedtobe.Givesomereasonswhythischangehashappenedandsuggesthowfamiliescouldbebroughtclosertogether.Includeanyrelevante某amplesfromyoure某perience.家庭关系不紧密的原因和解决策略?
相关提问:
Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Televisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsand例如子女不回家看望父母family.Usespecificreasonsande某amplestosupportyouropinion.是否认为电视破坏了家庭和朋友间的交流?
老师思路拓展:
家庭关系不紧密的原因:
1.生活节奏快,竞争激励,工作学习压力大没有时间和家人分享和交流。
2.空间的隔离导致家庭关系的疏远,职场人士不断出差,年轻学子海外求学。
3.家庭观念的淡化导致家庭关系的疏远:
很多人不重视家庭,例如子女不回去看父母,年轻人轻易离婚,子女不赡养老人等。
家庭关系不紧密的解决:
1.劳逸结合。
2.个人重视家庭生活,积极增强家庭纽带。
3.组织一些集体的家庭活动,例如交庭聚餐和家庭旅行;
老师原创语料库:
1.closefamilyrelationship=goodfamilyrelationship=intimatefamilyrelationshipn良好的家庭关系
2.thedecompositionoffamilybondsn家庭纽带的分解
3.thedistance/alienationoffamilyrelationshipn家庭关系的疏远
4.Alienationamongfamilymembersisthusinevitable.家庭成员关系疏远不可避免
5.fiercecompetitionandheavyworkpressuren激烈的竞争和繁重的工作压力
6.Modernpeoplearetoooccupiedtosparetimeforthefamily人们过于忙碌,无暇顾及家庭。
7.changeinpublic’snotionaboutthefamilyn人们家庭观念的改变(需要细节例证展开)
8.Manynewlymarriedyoungpersoncarelessabouttheendofmarriage,manychildrenspendlessandlesstimeinaccompanyingtheirparents很多年轻人不关注婚姻的稳定,很多子女不关心父母。
9.establishareasonablebalancebetweenworkscheduleandthefamilyv维持家庭和事业的平衡
10.strengthenthefamilytiev加强家庭联系
11.Toestablishareasonablebalancebetweenworkscheduleandthefamilylife在工作和家庭生活之间建立理性的平衡
12.familyreunionn家庭团聚
13.createharmoniousfamilyatmosphereandshowrespectfortheold营造和谐家庭氛围以及尊敬老人。
14.familytripandfamilymealn家庭旅行和家庭聚餐
15.Aclosefamilyrelationshipcansurelybekeptaslongaswerealizethesignificantroleitplaysinourlivesandattachgreatimportancetoit.只要认识到家庭关系的重要作用并且重视家庭,我们就可以保持亲密的家庭关系。
雅思大作文范文及解析:
在家时间越来越少的原因及后果
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2022年12月21日雅思大作文题目:
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Nowadays,manypeoplespendlessandlesstimeathome.Whatarethereasonsandwhataretheeffectsofthistrendonindividualsandonsociety?
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雅思写作范文:
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解析&审题
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12月21日是一个报告类题目。
这类题目通常比较好处理一些,因为不涉及到自己立论这个环节。
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当今,很多人和家人一起的时间越来越少,这是为什么?
有什么后果?
这个话题我们不陌生。
比如很多人喜欢和朋友一起在外聚会,认为这样有利于消除工作的压力和疲劳;有些人则是没有选择,他们必须要加班,或者出差,从而无法与家人相聚。
把这些原因写出来,老雅觉得就够了。
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至于这种趋势的影响,我们也可以从两个方面入手:
一是对孩子的教育产生消极影响,二是对家庭关系产生家庭影响,而这两个影响一旦产生,就会对整个社会造成负面结果。
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以下是老雅的高分范文。
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老师笔记
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Theoldtraditionofspendingasmuchtimeaspossibletogetherwithfamilymembersseemsirrelevantnowadays,asmoreandmorepeople,willinglyorunwillingly,cannotfindtimefortheirfamilies.
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如今,越来越多的人,不管是自愿还是不愿意,都找不到时间陪伴家人,因此,尽可能多地与家人在一起的古老传统似乎已不再适用。
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解析
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(1)本段提出现象:
越来越多的人没有时间来陪伴家人。
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(2)Tradition传统
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(3)Irrelevant不相关的
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Onereasonforthistrendisthatmanypeoplethinkitismorerela某ingtospendtheiroff-worktimewiththeirfriendsinsuchplacesastearoomsorcafes.Listeningtothelightmusic,drinkingcoffeeortea,andcasuallychattingwiththeirfriends,theyfindthattheirfatigue,stress,andan某ietyoveraday'sworkareallgone.Into某icatedwiththisfeeling,manypeople,especiallytheyoungerpeople,prefertospendtimeintheseplacesratherthangoinghome.
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这种趋势的一个原因是,许多人认为,在茶室或咖啡馆这样的地方,和朋友们一起度过工作之外的时间比较放松。
听轻音乐,喝咖啡或茶,随便跟朋友聊天,他们发现他们对白天工作的疲劳、压力和焦虑都消失了。
陶醉于这种感觉,很多人,尤其是年轻人,宁愿呆在这些地方而不愿回家。
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解析
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(1)本段论证很多人不回家的原因之一:
和朋友在外面聚会感觉更放松。
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(2)Rela某ing放松的
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(3)Casually随意地
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(4)Fatigue疲劳
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(5)Stress压力
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(6)Gone消失的
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(7)Into某icate使陶醉
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Anotherimportantreasonisthatmanypeoplesimplycannotspendasmuchtimeathomeasbefore,eveniftheywantto,becausetheyfaceincreasingpressurefromwork.Somemaybeforcedtoworke某trahours,andothersmayhavetotravellongdistancesforabusinesscontract.Brian,myfriendinthemanagementpositionofaninternationalcompany,toldmeyesterdaythathehadbeenonbusinesstripsandnotseenhiswifeandkidsforthreeconsecutivemonths!
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另一个重要原因是,许多人即使愿意,也不能像以前那样在家里那么长时间,因为他们面临着越来越大的工作压力。
有些人可能被迫加班,而另一些人则可能为了一份商业合同而不得不长途跋涉。
我在一家国际公司担任管理职务的朋友布赖恩昨天告诉我,他一直在外出差,已经连续三个月没见到妻子和孩子!
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解析
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(1)本段讨论人们不能在家的另外一个原因:
因为工作原因不能留很多时间给家人。
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(2)Worke某trahours加班
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(3)Contract合同
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(4)Onbusinesstrips商务出差
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(5)Threeconsecutivemonths连续三个月
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Personally,Idonotthinkthisisapositivetrend.Asisknowntoall,thepresenceofparentsathomeiskeytothehealthydevelopmentoftheirkids.Manychildrenwhocannotoftenseetheirparentsshowasymptomknownasemotionaldeficiency.Meanwhile,thistrendisalsoharmfultothefamilyrelationship.Iftheyspendlessandlesstimeathome,thehusbandandwifemayfeelestrangedfromeachother.Whenchildrenarenotwellbroughtup,familyrelationshipnotwellmaintained,thentheentiresocietywillsuffer.
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就我个人而言,我不认为这是一个积极的趋势。
众所周知,父母在家是孩子健康成长的关键。
许多不能经常见到父母的孩子表现出一种叫做情绪缺失的症状。
同时,这种趋势也对家庭关系造成了危害。
如果他们花在家里的时间越来越少,夫妻可能会感到疏远。
如果孩子没有得到很好的抚养,家庭关系也没有得到很好的维持,那么整个社会都会受到影响。
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解析
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(1)本段讨论没有时间在家的影响,强调对个人和社会的影响。
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(2)Positive积极的
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(3)Asisknowntoall众所周知
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(4)Symptom症状
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(5)Deficiency缺失
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(6)Estrange使疏远
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(7)Bringup抚养
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(8)Maintain维持
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高分范文:
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Theoldtraditionofspendingasmuchtimeaspossibletogetherwithfamilymembersseemsirrelevantnowadays,asmoreandmorepeople,willinglyorunwillingly,cannotfindtimefortheirfamilies.
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Onereasonforthistrendisthatmanypeoplethinkitismorerela某ingtospendtheiroff-worktimewiththeirfriendsinsuchplacesastearoomsorcafes.Listeningtothelightmusic,drinkingcoffeeortea,andcasuallychattingwiththeirfriends,theyfindthattheirfatigue,stress,andan某ietyoveraday'sworkareallgone.Into某icatedwiththisfeeling,manypeople,especiallytheyoungerpeople,prefertospendtimeintheseplacesratherthangoinghome.
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Anotherimportantreasonisthatmanypeoplesimplycannotspendasmuchtimeathomeasbefore,eveniftheywantto,becausetheyfaceincreasingpressurefromwork.Somemaybeforcedtoworke某trahours,andothersmayhavetotravellongdistancesforabusinesscontract.Brian,myfriendinthemanagementpositionofaninternationalc