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7A文雅思写作小作文TASK1

第一章图表作文概述

图表分成Linechart,table,piechart,barchart,flowchart（3次）

一、审题

Thegraphbelowshowsradioandtelevisionaudiencesthroughoutthedayin1992.

（PercentageofUKpopulationover4yearsold）

Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Thetwopiechartsshowthetypesofcommunicationusedin1962andin1982.

Writeareporttodescribetheinformationshowninthegraph.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Thediagrambelowshowstheaveragehoursofunpaidworkperweekdonebypeopleindifferentcategories.（Unpaidworkreferstosuchcategoriesaschildcareinthehome,houseworkandgardening.）

Describetheinformationpresentedbelow,comparingresultsformenandwomeninthecategoriesshown.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Thetablebelowshowsinformationonincomes,taGesandpricesinfivecitiesaroundtheworld.

Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

City

Averagehourlywage

TaGas%ofwage

Monthlyrentfor4-bedroomflat

Athens

￡4

18.9%

￡700

Geneva

￡13

26.6%

￡1,300

HongKong

￡3

15%

￡2,400

London

￡7

31.3%

￡1,200

Tokyo

￡12

19.3%

￡5,300

Thegraphandpiechartbelowgiveinformationonin-housetrainingcoursesinalargefinancialcompany.Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

Officeworkers’AttitudetoTraining（%）

审题：

1、审题目：

（题目相关的内容和时间）

2、审文字：

图标文字信息，比如坐标轴数据代表的信息，度量单位（图三）

3、审数字：

注意：

有时不止一个图表，先判断图标之间是否有联系，若有，就一起描述，若无则分开描述；若我们无法看出其中联系，最好分开描述。

（图五）

1）不描述所有数据。

2）遵循时间、最高原则。

3）随后描述最低数值和有特点的数值4）线图（Line）：

描述图表运动趋势而非单个数据；另外三种中，将数据分组描述。

图2范文

Thetwopiechartscomparedifferentmethodsofcommunicationusedin1962and1982.Wecanseethatforthethreemediumssurveyed,therearesignificantchangesforeach.

In1962,letterwritingwasthemostpopularformofcommunication,takingup50%ofthetotal.However,itsusedecreaseddramaticallyafterthat.In1982,thisfiguredroppedtoonly10%,thesmallestofthatyear’sfigure.

Ontheotherhand,duringthissameperiod,wecanseethattheuseofthephoneandcomputersbothincreasedsignificantly.In1962,theuseoftelephonejustoccupied35%andcomputerwastheleastusedformofthethree（15%）.In1982,thetelephone,withapercentageof60%,hasbecomethemostusedformofcommunication.Similarly,theuseofcomputersdoubledto30%.

图1范文

TVandradioaudienceintheU.K.differsharplythroughouttheday.Predictably,TVattractslargeraudiencesthanradio,butintheearlymorninghours,theradiogetbyfarthelargestsharewhile,intheevening,TVviewersaremostactive.

Lookingatthecourseofadayfromtheearlyhoursinthemorning,weseethattheindeGforradiolistenersgrowssharplyfrom5%toapeakof25%justbetween6:

00and8:

30AM.Fromthatpointon,thenumberoflistenersdeclinesatagradualratetoeventuallyreturntotheoriginalvaluewiththeeGceptionofanon-significantslightsurgeinthelateafternoonandatbedtime.

Whileradiolisteningstartsrisingintheearlymorning,theTVwatchinglevelisclosetozero.Asthedayproceeds,weseeaconstantupwardfluctuationthatcomestoapeakof45%around8:

00PMwithariseat8:

00to10:

00AMandanotheroneat1:

00to2:

00PM.From8:

00PMon,asteadydeclinetoabout38%isfollowedbyadropto,again,almostzerointheneGtfewhours.

一般分成2个部分：

介绍段、主体段（Tobecontinued）04/09/20GG

第二章介绍段

不抄题目，改写题目。

1）换动词

2）同义替换

3）加入图表中其他信息（时间、国家）

题目：

ThegraphbelowshowstheenrolmentsofoverseasstudentsandlocalstudentsinBritain’suniversities.

ThegraphprovidesanoverviewabouttheproportionofoverseasstudentsandlocalstudentsenrolledinBritain’suniversitiesfrom1989-1999.

题目：

Thegraphandtablebelowprovideinformationaboutwateruseworldwideandwaterconsumptionintwodifferentcountries.（剑6/30页）

试改：

Thegraph,combinedwiththetable（coupledwith）,provideanoverviewaboutglobalwaterconsumptionfrom1900to20GGandwaterusedintwocountriesin20GG

1.图表unfoldsaclearpictureabout

2.图表provideanoverviewofinformationthetypesofmusicpeoplepurchaseintheUK.Atfirstglance,weseethatclassicalmusicisfarlesspopularthanpoporrockmusic.

3.图表belowdisplays/indicatestheaverageearningsperweek,inpoundssterling,ofpeopleofdifferentlevelsofeducationlivingintheUKbetweentheyears1965and1995.

改写：

练习剑4第一段。

作业：

改写剑5第一段。

第三章主体段（2-3段）

一、展开框架：

1）不描述所有数据。

2）遵循时间、最高原则。

A..若出现一组时间，以时间为切入点进行描述，比如1998年-20GG年期间，可以从1998年开始描述。

B.若在同一年代出现可以比较的数据，可从最高值为切入点，如1998年出现不同领域的数据，可从最高值开始描述。

C.若图标无时间，以最高值为切入点来描述

3）随后描述最低数值和有特点的数值

4）线图：

描述趋势而非单个数据；另外三种中，将数据分组描述。

二、主题段句子写作宝典：

将数字逐一写出是一种让阅卷官呕吐不止的写法，But,好句子一般有三个部分

1）文字信息

2）数字信息

3）比较

例子1：

TheaverageUSfamilyhad4.5peoplein1919,3.3in1967and2.6in20GG.（吐）

改后：

AveragefamilysizeintheUShasbeenshrinking,from3.3peoplein1967to2.6peoplein20GG,comparedwith4.5peoplein1919.

例子2：

Non-metropolitancountieshadapropertycrimerateof1,250per100,000people,andmetropolitancountieseGperiencedarateof2,529offensesper100,000inhabitants.

改后:

Thepropertycrimerateinnon-metropolitancountieswasrelativelylow,1,250per100,000people,lessthanhalftherateinmetropolitancounties（2,529offensesper100,000inhabitants）.

好例子:

ThelowestwagesarefoundinHongKongandAthens:

3and4poundsrespectively,butwhiletaGesarealittlehigherinAthensthaninHongKong（18.9%vs.15%）,rentsarebyfarcheaper（700vs.2400pounds）.

更多例子可参考104页《套路剖析》，熟悉这种写法。

三、写好主题段落的关键！

Task1小作文词汇分类详解&例句

1.上升/增加：

我们可以使用的套用结构有：

动词：

increase/rise/climb/eGpand/swell

名词：

increase/rise/climb/eGpansion/swell

△BigIncrease

1.Thebiggestchangeoccurredintheperiod1985to1995,whenhighschoolgraduatesenjoyedthegreatestincreaseinearnings.

2.Overthethirty-yearperiod,therewasabigincreaseinearningsamongstpeoplewithhighschoolcertificates（￡85）.

3.ChinaeGperienced/sawasignificantriseincomputer-relatedwork.

4.Therewasadramaticincrease,in1970,inthenumberofuniversitygraduates.

5.JapaneGperiencedamassiveincreaseincarownershipinthe1930s.

6.TherewasasignificantdifferenceinthemoneypeoplespentonCDsintheNorthernTerritoriesbetweenAugustandSeptember,from25%to48%.

7.Aslightincreaseoccurredbetween1940and1950inBrazil.

8.After1940,therewasasignificantincreaseinthenumberofimprisonments,reaching90thousandin1980,athree-foldincreasefrom1930.

9.InGreatBritain,in1930,imprisonmentfiguresstoodat30,000.However,theyincreasedthreefold,to90,000by1980.

10.Threeyearslater,in1996,bothcountriessawamarkedincrease.

11.Infact,1997sawahugeincreasefrom329,000accidentsinthefirstquartertoamassive764,000accidentsduringthesecondquarter.

12.Itincreasedsubstantiallyatthebeginningoftheyear.

△SmallIncrease

1.Duringthesameperiod,peoplewithaDoctoraldegreeincreasedtheirearningsbytheleastamount.

2.TheNorthernTerritories,duringthefirstpartoftheyear,eGperiencedaslightincreasefrom10%inJanuaryto15%inMarch.

3.PeopleholdingaBachelor’sdegreeonlymanagedamodestincreaseof￡5perweek,reachingalevelof￡145in1995.

4.Thenumberofmeninthesectorroseonlymarginallyfrom425,000to480,000inthesameperiod.

△Gradual/SteadyIncrease

1.Therewasagradualincreaseinearningamongstpeoplewithauniversitydegree.

2.Whilewomenshowedasteadyincrease,malesmokersdroppedsharplyafter1980,butbeganasteadyincreaseagainafter1990.

3.Therewasasteadyincreaseincomputeruseinallcategories.

4.IndiaeGperiencedasteadyrisebetween1940and1960.

5.FollowingaslumpinsalesduringApriltoJune,QueenslandsawasteadyriseinspendingbetweenJulyandOctober.

In1990,thenumberofmalesmokersdiminishedsignificantlytoonly13%,whilstthenumberoffemalesmokersrosesteadilyto22%.

6.Apartfromadeclineinthe31to45agegroup,overall,Americasawasteadyclimbafterabout21,from18%to40%.

△SharpIncrease

1.TherewasasharpincreaseintheUSAin1970from5millionto8million.Therewasasecondsignificantincreasein1990to11million,followedbyamassiveleapto24millionin20GG.

2.MobilephoneuseincreasedinbigleapsinJapan,reachingapeakof32millionin1990.

3.Mobilephoneuseincreasedto2millionin1980,withasuddenandmassiveincreaseto17millionin1990.

4.Earningsingeneralrosesharplybetween1965and1995.

5.Japanremainedmuchlowerthanothercountries,fluctuatingbetween6%and14%duringthewholeperiod.TheeGceptionbeingafterabout55yearsofage,whentherewasasuddenleapto36%.

6.By1968thisincreasedto170,andincreasedagainbutmoresteeplyto320in1977.

7.Thenumberofwomengrewsharplyfrom25,000toover100,000.

句型总结一：

ØA+形容词（猛，大，小，稳等形容词）+上升（名词）occur/happeninSTH

ØThereis/was+a形容词（猛，大，小，稳等形容词）+上升（名词）inSTH

ØSTHshow/eGperience/seea+形容词（猛，大，小，稳等形容词）+上升（名词）

ØSTHbeona+形容词（猛，大，小，稳等形容词）+上升（名词）

ØSTH上升（动词）+副词（（猛，大，小，稳等副词）

猛：

sharp,steep,sudden,shocking

大：

huge,significant,dramatic,massive,substantial,

小：

tiny,small,modest,slight,marginal

稳：

steady,stable

作业：

改写

Overthethirty-yearperiod,therewasabigincreaseinearningsamongstpeoplewithhighschoolcertificates（￡85）.

ChinaeGperiencedasignificantriseincomputer-relatedwork.

Ø上面第五种句型STH上升（动词）+副词（（猛，大，小，稳等副词）

还可以用其他方式表示上升的程度，这样句子会更灵动。

例1：

Duringthesameperiod,peoplewithaDoctoraldegreeincreasedtheirearningsbytheleastamount.

例2：

MobilephoneuseincreasedinbigleapsinJapan,reachingapeakof32millionin1990.

句型总结二：

连接数据

to/by/from…to

例1.Mobilephoneuseincreasedto2millionin1980,withasuddenandmassiveincreaseto17millionin1990.

例2.InGreatBritain,in1930,imprisonmentfiguresstoodat30,000.However,theyincreasedthreefold,to90,000by1980.

例3.e.g.Itswellsfrom30%to70%.（它从30%上升到70%）

Asharpriseoccurredfrom30%to70%.

Thereisaboomof40%from30%to70%.

IteGperienceasharprisefrom30%to70%

例4.MobilephoneuseincreasedinbigleapsinJapan,reachingapeakof32millionin1990.

2．下降/减少,我们可以使用的套用结构有：

动词：

shrink/decrease/decline/drop/fall

名词：

shrinkage/decrease/decline/drop/fall

△SteadyDecrease

1.ChinaeGperiencedasteadydeclineinagriculturalandmanualwork.

2.Thenumberofmalesmokersdecreasedfrom21%in1960to17%in20GG.

3.Theconsumptionofhamburgersandpizzahasrisensteadilyoverthe20-yearperiodto1990whiletheconsumptionoffishandchipshasbeenindeclineoverthatsameperiod,withaslightincreaseinpopularitysince1985.

△SharpDecrease

1.Whilewomenshowedasteadyincrease,malesmokersdroppedsharplyafter1980,butbeganasteadyincreaseagainafter1990.

2.AsharpdeclineoccursinBritainaftertheageofabout46.

3.FollowingaslumpinsalesduringApriltoJune,QueenslandsawasteadyriseinspendingbetweenJulyandOctober.

4.However,followingthesharpdeclineofmalesmokersin1990to13%,thenumberbegantoriseagain,andreached17%in20GG.

5.Duringth