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研究生科技英语大作业

作业2P11

Unit2Findamajorjournalinyourfieldandanalyzeitsrequirementsspecificationslaiddownbytheeditorialofthejournalorperiodicalforsubmission.

MajorArmamentLaunchTheoryandTechnology,

TheJOURNALOFCHINAORDNANCE.（兵工学报）

Requirements：

JournalofChinaOrdnance:

acomprehensiveacademicjournalsponsoredbyChinaOrdnanceSociety,ispublishedhalf-yearly.Thisjournalisarepresentativeofpublicationsoftheacademiccirclesspecializingchieflyinthefieldofordnancescienceandtechnology.Contributionswithintheabovescopeallovertheworldarewelcome.Itisaconditionofpublicationthatmanuscriptssubmittedtothisjournalhavenotbeenpublishedandwillnotbesimultaneouslysubmittedorpublishedelsewhere.

Manuscriptpreparation:

ManuscriptshouldbeinEnglishandtypedononlyonesideofA4paperwithdoublespace.Inaddition,threecopiesofthefull-lengthbothEnglishandChinesepapersaretobesentto：

EditorialBoardofJournalofChinaOrdnanceP.O.Box2431,Beijing,China.

TitleandBy-line:

Thetitleshouldbedescriptive,notfullsentences.Name,affiliation（institution）oftheauthors,city,zipcode,country,E-mailaddressandtelephonenumberoftheauthor（s）shouldbelisted.

AbstractandKeywords:

Theabstractofabout100~150wordsmustaccompanyeacharticleonpageone.Itshouldbeaconcisesummaryoftheaims,methodsresultsandconclusionsand/orothersignificantitemsinthepaper.Thekeywordsshouldinclude3~8piecesofwordsorphrasestoserveasguidelinesforindexing.

Text:

ThetextshouldcontainanIntroductionthatputsthepaperintoperspectiveforreaders,andshouldalsocontainMethods,Results,DiscussionandConclusions.TheSIsystemshouldbeusedforunitsofmeasurethroughoutthetext.EachEquationorFormulainthearticleshouldbenumberedintheorderwithArabicnumeralsplacedontheright-handmargin.

Eachcaptionshouldbewrittenasasinglebriefparagraphwithoutindentation.FiguresandtablesshouldbeconsecutivelynumberedwithArabicnumerals.Tablesshouldbedrawnwiththreehorizontallines,atthetopandbottomofthetableandbetweenthecolumnheadingsandthetablebody.

Goodqualityfigureshavethefollowingcharacteristics.Theyshouldbeproducedwithagoodqualitylaserprinterandhavelines,letters,numbersandsymbolsofuniformstrengthandcontrast.Figures（exceptphotographs）areoftenreducedto6cmx6cm.Thefinalthicknessofalineinafigureusuallylieswithintherange0.15~0.20mm.Whenpreparingthefigures,authorsshouldpayattentiontothewidthsoflinesandsimilardetails,assome（e.g.dottedorthinlines）maydisappearafterreduction.Particularattentionshouldbepaidtolinestrengthsingraphicspreparedinvectorformats.

MathematicalMaterial:

Thetextshouldmadecleardistinctionsbetweenphysicalvariables,mathematicalsymbols,unitsofmeasurement,abbreviations,chemicalformulas,etc.Authorsshoulduseitalicandboldfacetoidentifyphysicalormathematicalvariables.Variablesaretobesetinnormalitalic,andvectors,tensors,andmatrixesinboldface.

Acknowledgements:

Individuals,affiliation,orother;tobeconcernedwhowereofdirecthelpintheworkshouldbeacknowledgedbyabriefstatement.

References:

Onlyessentialreferences（formallypublishedjournals,articles,monographs,dissertations,reports,standards,patents,and/orelectronicpublications）citedinthetextcanbelistedandmustbenumberedconsecutivelybyArabicnumerals,whichshouldbelistedinthesameorderascitedinthetext.Periodicalsshouldbereferredtointhefollowingorder:

nameofauthor（s）.Titleofpaper.nameofperiodical,year,Vol.（No.）:

pagenumber.Booksshouldbereferredtointhefollowingorder:

nameofauthor（s）.titleofbook.City:

publishinghouse,yearofpublication:

pagenumber.

Copyrightprotect:

ThearticlepublishedinJournalofChinaOrdnancecannotbepublishedanywhereinanyformwithoutthewrittenpermissionfromJournalofChinaOrdnance,ChinaOrdnanceSociety.

作业3P21

Unit2GiveyourcommentsonthefollowingtitlesandkeywordsorrevisethemIfnecessary

1.Title

1）OnLearningForeignLanguagesandCulturalBackgroundTeaching.

Comment：

Thisseemstobeagoodtitle.Itconciseandreflectthemajoraboutwhatyouwanttoexpress.Butinsomecase,neglectthewordonseemstobemorebeautiful.

2）AResearchontheArtificialNeuralNetwork（ANN）AppliedintheAnalysisofStructuralMechanics.

Comment：

Thistitleseemspoor.Itisnotconcise,foritcontainsasubordinateclause,whichisusuallynotencouraged.Maybecanrevisedthis:

AResearchonApplyingoftheArtificialNeuralNetwork（ANN）intheAnalysisofStructuralMechanics.

3）DevelopingComputerInternetandtheSpreadofCultureandInformation.

Comment：

Thisisaconcisetitlemaybetheversioncouldbe:

TheDevelopmentofComputerInternetandtheSpreadofCultureandInformation.

4）Comment：

Titleistoolong，notsuitablefortitle.

5）IsLiteratureUselessinTOEFL?

Comment：

Thetitleispoor,statementseemstoberequiredservedastitle.

6）InnovationandtheMaterialsRevolution

Comment：

Titleisgood.

7）Comment：

Thisisaperfecttitle,besidesitcanattributereaders.

8）CantheRateofWashLoadBePredictedfromtheBedLoadFunction.

Comment：

Titleisnotgoodenough,Itcontainsaquestion.

9）Comment：

Goodtitle

10）BridgebetweenTwoWorlds.

Comment：

Titleistoosimple,moreexactwordseemsdemandinhere.

2.Keywords

1）English,vocabulary,tendency.

Comment:

Thelastpunctuationshouldbeavoided.（最后结尾的标点符号应该省去）

2）CollocationContextConnotation

Comment:

Betweenwordsseparatedbycommasortoseparate,latershouldbelowercase（词与词之间要用逗号或分开隔开，后面的应小写）

3）Five-yearplans;economicconditions;industrystatisticaldata;foreigninvestment;chemicalindustry

Comment:

Appropriatekeywords（关键词合适）

4）Watertransfer,systemanalysis,DSS

Comment:

FinallytheDSSkeywordisnotreasonable（最后的DSS关键词不合理）

5）Massmedia

Comment:

keywordistoolittle,Thelittlestwordisthree.（关键词太少应大于3）

6）Nuclearwaste,nuclearfuelcycle,remediation,bioremediation,citrobacter,heavymetalaccumulation,uranium,transuranicelements,tecnetium,tributylphosphate,ethylenediaminetetraaceticacid（EDTA）

Comment:

Thekeywordisnumerous.（关键词太多）

作业3P40

Unit3Analyzetheabstractsbelow,followingthedirectionsstatedbelow,Ifpossible.

Abstract1

ThispapercomparesEastandWest（AmericanandChinese）campaignpracticesandrevealstheprominenceofcultureanditsimpactsupontheoperationofpubliccommunicationcampaigns.Specifically,thiscomparativestudyshowsthat,ChineseandAmericancampaignpracticesdifferin

（1）ideologiesandperceptions;

（2）approachesandstrategies;and（3）implementationsandevaluations.Inrunningthecampaigns,Americansrelyheavilyonmassmediaandconcentrateonshort-termgoals,whereasChinesedependsmoreoninterpersonalinfluencesandprimarilyonlongtermsocialeffects.Thesedifferencesincampaignpracticesarehoweverattributabletotheirrespectiveculturalorientations.

Comment:

（1）CategoriesofAbstracts：

ThisisaDescriptive（Indicative）Abstracts

（2）TopicSentence：

Thetopsentenceinthispaperisthateastandwestcampaignpracticesandrevelstheprominenceofcultureanditsimpactupontheoperationofpubliccommunicationcampaigns.

（3）SupportingSentences：

Supportingsentenceiscomparativestudyindifferideologiesandperceptions.Americansrelyheavilyonmassmediaandconcentrateonshort-termgoals,whereasChinesedependsmoreoninterpersonalinfluencesandprimarilyonlongtermsocialeffects.

（4）ConcludingSentence:

Thesedifferencesincampaignpracticesarehoweverattributabletotheirrespectiveculturalorientations.

Abstract2

Thispaperpresentsinasystematicwaygrammaticalanalysisandpresentationofgrammaticalinformationinbilingualdictionariesonfivelevels,i.e.,wordclass,subclass,grammaticalforms,syntacticfeaturesandusage,followedbyanexplanationofhowtodisplaysyntacticpropertiesandfunctionsofwordsthroughcarefullychosenexamples.Ittreatsgrammaticalanalysisasanessentialprocessincorpusconstructionandexploresthepossibilityofpresentingmoregrammaticalinformationinelectronicbilingualdictionariesforthebenefitofforeignlanguageteachingandlearning.

Comment:

（1）CategoriesofAbstracts：

ThisisaInformational（Informative）Abstract

（2）TopicSentence：

Thetopsentenceinthispaperisthatthispaperpresentsinasystematicwaygrammaticalanalysisandpresentationofgrammaticalinformationinbilingualdictionariesonfivelevels

（3）SupportingSentences：

Supportingsentenceiswordclass,subclass,grammaticalforms,syntacticfeaturesandusage,followedbyanexplanationofhowtodisplaysyntacticpropertiesandfunctionsofwordsthroughcarefullychosenexamples.

（4）ConcludingSentence:

Ittreatsgrammaticalanalysisasanessentialprocessincorpusconstructionandexploresthepossibilityofpresentingmoregrammaticalinformationinelectronicbilingualdictionariesforthebenefitofforeignlanguageteachingandlearning.

Abstract3

Owingtotheeconomicgrowthinthepacificresion,especiallyintheMainlandChina,manymultinationalpharmaceuticalcompanieshavebeenexpandingtheirbusinessintothesecountries.ForthepastdecadeduringtheopeningoftheChinamarket,HongKonghasbeenregardedasthebaseforexploringthismarket.Aquestionnairewasdesignedtoinvestigatethebuyingbehaviorofthemedicalpractitioners.ForalltherespondentsfrombothHongKongandtheMainlandChina,themostdominantinfluenceswerequalityoftheproductandth