9个月7分雅思资料.docx

9个月7分雅思资料.docx

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9个月7分雅思资料

9个月7分雅思资料

先是外教给我写的作文

1因为害怕crime不敢出门那篇，我觉得写得超强！

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Crimeiswithoutdoubtahugeproblemineverycountryintheworld.Therearecertaincountries,cities,townsanddistrictswherethecrimerateisextremelyhighandsuchplacesareverydangerousplacestobe.Withoutdoubttheseareasdesperatelyneednewgovernmentpoliciesandashiftinactionsbythepolicetoremedyadesperatesituation.Theseplacestendtobeareasofhighunemploymentandpoverty.Ifthefocuswereplacedonfindingandcreatingjobsintheseplacesthecrimeproblemwouldimprove.Insteadgovernmentsgoforeasyoptionssuchasincreasingthelengthsofprisonsentences.Thistreatstheresultsofcrime,notit’scauses.

Nevertheless,suchplacesarefewandfarbetween.Thevastmajorityofplacesintheworldareperfectlysafeplacestolive.Peoplewhoareafraidtoleavetheirhomesdosolargelyfortworeasons.Firstly,theywereunfortunateenoughtobevictimofacrime.Secondly,andmostimportantly,theyhearaboutcrimeeverywhere:

TV,radio,papers.Insomeareascrimestoriestakeupahugepercentageofnews.Ifyouhearaboutcrimeallthetime,youbegintobelieveitseverywhere.Thisissimplynotthecase.

Crimehasbeenaroundsincemanfirstappearedonearthandwillcontinuetobeheretillweleave.Ofcoursetherearemeasuresgovernmentscouldtaketoimprovethesituationbuttheycan’teradicatecrime.Whatmeasuresshouldbetakendependononespoliticalopinions.

2科学研究是公司好还是政府投资好。

Societiessearchforscientificknowledgeandanswerstoquestionsaboutoutworldiscarriedoutthroughscientificresearch.Thisresearchshouldbeconductedinanobjectiveandunbiasedway,byqualifiedprofessionalswhoseaimistodiscoverthetruthandfurthertheprogressofoutcountry.

Somemayarguethatprivatefirmsofindustriesarebettersuitedtothistask,astheyhaveaccesstogreaterfunding,moreadvancedtechnologiesandcanperhapscarryouttheresearchwithgreaterefficiency.However,questionisoftenaskedaswhetherthemotivesofsuchcompaniesarefuelledbythedesiretodevelopsociety,orbyprofit.Forexample,scientistswhoworkforlargetobaccoorpharmaceuticalcompaniesareoftenunderpressuretomakediscoveries,whichcasttheproductstheyareresearchinginafavorablelight.

Researchcarriedoutbyscientistswhoareworkingforthegovernment,ontheotherhand,maybelesslikelytobesubjective,ofevendoctortheirresultsforthegoalofprofit.Itmightbeassertedthatthesepeople’squestforscientificknowledgeismoregenuineandwithanobjectivedesiretocapturesolidfact.Evenso,whocansayforsurewhichagendaisbeingfollowedintheprocessofresearch?

Evengovernmentshavesomethingtoprovetosomebody.

Whoshouldcarryoutscientificresearchshouldalwaysbedecidedonacasebycasebasis.

3体育和娱乐人士是否应该behighlyvalued.跟第一篇是一个人写的

Sportandentertainmentpersonalitieshaveamuchhigherprofilethanprofessionalworkersthankstothemassmedia.Especiallyinthetabloidpressmoststoriesatefocusedaroundtheworldofsportsandentertainment.Thisenablessportspersonsandentertainerstobewellknown,respectedandvalued.

Rarelycanstoresbefoundaboutdedicatedprofessionalworkers.Adoctorsavingalifeorthelatestteachingmethodologyisn’tfountpagenews.

Mostchildrenwanttobesportspersonsorentertainersastheseareglamorous.Nevertheless,professionalworkers,especiallyinthecaringsectorarehighlyvaluedbythemajorityofsociety.Thepublicrealizesthatwithoutsuchpeoplesocietywouldfallapart.Whereaswithoutsportsandentertainmentlifewouldbeduller,butsocietywouldcontinuevirtuallyunaffected.Sportstarsandentertainersmakenewsbecausetheirjobsandlivesareinteresting.fewpeoplewanttoreadaboutthelivesofeverydaypeople,nomatterhowmuchtheirworkmaybenefitsociety.Butprofessionalworkersarevalued.

Aslongaspeoplerealizetheimportanceofprofessionalworksthereisnothingwrongwiththeidolizationheapeduponentertainers.AslongaswebuynewspapersandcableTVthistrendwillcontinue.Thisisunlikelytodecreasetherespectgiventodoctors,teachers,etc.bythemajorityofpeople.

口语卡片，自己写的，外教每篇都给改过。

Advertisingplaysaimportantpartinoutrecentlife.It’sjusteverywhereinthestreetsinthepaperonTVandradio.AssoonasweturnontheTVs,wecanfacethecommercialsprettyoften.

TherewasaninterestingadvertisementforMacDonald’swhichwasshownonTVabout2yearsago.Atthebeginningoftheadvertisement,therewereseveralchildrensittinginaclassroom.Aprettygirlwhowastheirteacherwroteanumber3ontheblackboard.Shelookedatitforawhile,andthensheturnedherheadandlookedatthenumberfromanotherdirectionandsmiled.ThenumberlookslikeabigMandthenallthechildrenturnedtheirheadsandlookedatthebigM.JustthenalltheMacDonald’sfoodcameoutandthechildrenenjoyedthefood,cheeredandlaughed.Thesoundoflaughingsoonspreadthroughthewholeofthevillagewheretheschoollocated.AllthepeopleinthevillagelaughedandenjoyedthebigMacs.

ThisadvertisementwassolovelythatIcan’tforgetsofar.IlikeMacdonald’stooandIthinkitmaybeanotherreasonwhyIcan’tforgetthisadvertisement.Actually,IlikemanyMacDonald’sadvertisements;theyareallveryinterestingandcanmakemeveryhappy.EverytimewhenIeatordrinksomethinginMacDonald’s,IliketowatchtheTVsthere.EveryadvertisementontheTVmakesmelaughandrelaxedandfeelcomfortable.Ithinkthat’swhyalotofpeoplelikeit.

Ilikeallkindsofanimals.Ihavetwolittledogsathome.Theyarereallyverycuteandsmart,andtheyalwaysmakemeveryhappy.Althoughtheycan’ttalk,Ibelievethattheycanunderstandhumanbeings.Now,I’dliketointroducemyfavouriteanimalzebra.

ZebraisanextraordinaryanimalwhichlivesontheplainsofAfricansavanna.It’smainfoodisgrass.It’sinterestingthatthestripesonazebraarejustlikethefingerprintonahuman,eachzebrahasit’sownuniquestripepattern.

Whenazebraisborn,it’sprettycomplicatedbecauseafterthebirthandwhenthebabyzebra’seyesopen,theireyescantakeineverythingitsees.

Themother’sjobistoshieldthebabyfromseeinganythingbutherself.Ifthebabyseesanotherzebra,itwouldseetheotherzebra’sstripepattern,anditwouldthinkthattheotherzebrawasit’smother.

Thefather’sjobistowardoffotherzebrasandanyotheranimalsthatmightharmthebaby.

Ithinkweshouldprotectthewildanimals,becausetheyarefriendsofhumanbeings.

BUILDINGS

InBeijingwehavenorthernstyleofarchitecture.Thehousesheresuchascourtyardsmostlookthesame.Lastyear,whenIwenttoshanghai,Iwasgreatlyimpressedbyoneofthehousescalledyuyuangardenoverthere,withahistoryofmorethan400years.Nowitisapark,butitwasafamilyhouseofarichofficialinmingdynasty.ThishousegavemeaverygreatimpressionbecauseitisdifferentfromBeijing.Northernandsouthernarchitecturesarequitedifferent.Inthehouse,thewallsarewhiteandtheroofsareblack.Theroofsarelikethis,andtherearesomedecorationsontheroofs.Ithasdragon-linedwallsandwoodcarvingsonthewindows.Theatmosphereofpeace,relaxationandcomfortgavemeaverynicefeeling.Icanguessinthepastthepeoplewholivedthere

Reallyenjoyedthemselveswithallthesebeautifulthingsaroundthem,likepoolswithgoldenfish,verymagnificenttrees,whichareoverahundredyearsold,andthefurniturewasmadeoftreeroots,whichisreallyexpensive.Ihaveneverseenthesekindofthingsinmylifebefore.WhenIwassittingandrelaxinginthehouse,Ireallyhaveverybrightfeelings.IwishifIhadalotofmoney,Iwouldliketoliveinahouselikethat,butprobablyIwon’thavesomuchmoney.Butatleasteveryoneshouldmakesomethingdifferentinhishouse.Becauseeverypersonhashisownpersonality.Ifyouliveinaverysimpleandcheaphouse,youcanalsomakeitcomfortableandrelaxyourselfthere,thateverytimeyoucomefromwork,youcantakeagoodrest,andthenextday,startworkagain.

Digitalcamera

Therearemanyelectricalmachinesformetouseinmylife,suchasMP3,TV,computer,microwaveovenandelectricaldictionary.Amongthemmydigitalcameraisveryimportantforme.Ilikephotographyandmydigitalcameraisveryexciting.Ifindittobemoreconvenientthananormalmanualcamera.AllIneedtodoisbesuremybatteriesarerechargedandIcantakeasmanyas400pictures.IfIamunhappywithaphoto,Icandeleteitimmediately.ThebestthingisthatwhenIgethome,Icanhavealookatallmyphotosanddecidewhicharethebest.IcancropthemtocutoutsomepartsofthepicturethatIdon’treallylike.Therearemanymorebenefitstoo.Icanaddspecialeffectstothepictureslikechangethecontrastormakeitablackandwhitephoto.AnothergreatthingisthatIdon’tevenneedtoscanthephototosendtomyfriends.Icanaddpicturestomyemaildirectly.

famousperson/oldperson

IwouldliketosayaboutoneofthemostfamoussingersinChina.HisnameisYangHongji.Duringthelast30yearsofhismusicalcareer,hehasperformedlotsofbeautifulsongsandplayedinmanyoperaswithhisstunningvoice.Ofcourseallmyfamilieslikehimverymuch.Infact,inhisearlyyearstherewasnoonewhoknewhimandnoonewantedtonoticehim.Hehadbeenignoredformanyyears.Butfortunatelyeverythingchangedfrom1995.Thatyear,hesangthethemesongtoTVseries:

Thestoriesofthreekingdoms.Hehasputlotsofhisfeelingsintothesongandofcoursethissongmade