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新东方雅思写作讲义

Lastrevisionon21December2020

新东方雅思写作讲义

雅思写作完全攻略

TotalSolutionofIELTSWriting

俞伟国

－2009－

雅思考试作文部分题型

题型

分值

字数要求

建议时间

小作文

图表作文（Report）

1/3

>150words

20mins

大作文

议论文（Essay）

2/3

>250words

40mins

课时安排：

MarkingSystem

EssayWriting

Introduction

Body

Conclusion

Structure

ReportWriting

近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况（FromMatClark）

Band4orbelow:

15%-20%Band5:

60%Band6:

15%-20%Band7:

<5%Band8orabove:

Rare

KeyLanguageFeaturesinMarkingSystem

TaskResponse:

1.Noevidenceofdigression/irrelevantcontent

2.AdequateWords

3.Position+SupportingIdeas+Development

CoherenceandCohesion

1.Logicaloverallstructure

2.TopicSentence

3.Cohesivedevices

LexicalResource

1.Accurateness

2.AuthenticVocabulary（Less-commonVocabulary）

3.Variety

GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy

1.Accurateness

2.ComplexSentence

3.Variety

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ChapterOne－EssayWriting

第一章.议论文完全攻略

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

PartOne－Introduction

－闪亮开篇－

－Version－

StructureofIntroduction

1.BackgroundInformation

（1）.Lead-inSentence（Introducethesubjectofthetopic）

（2）.PublicOpinion

2.Statement（Stateyourposition）

1．主体背景（BackgroundInformation）

（1）Inthelastcentury,thefirstmanwalkingonthemoonsaid:

“Itisabigstepformankind”.However,somepeoplethinkitmade

______________________________,when________________________________________________________________

forthefirsttime,he_____________________________________________________thatitwasagreatstepformankind.Nowadays,however,somepeoplebelievethatitactually_____________________________________________________

LanguageSkill:

Paraphrase方法之一－具体化（笼统概念－缩小范围）

（2）Foodcanbeproducedmuchmorecheaplytodaybecauseofimprovedfertilizersandbettermachinery.However,somepeoplethinkthemethodsusedtodothismayhavenegativeeffectsonlocalcommunitiesandbedangeroustohumanhealth.

Nowadayspeoplecan_______________foodfarmore________________________________________more_______________fertilizersandmachinery.Nevertheless,somepeopleholdthemethodsusedmay____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill:

Paraphrase方法之二－单词转换（优先考虑三大词类：

）

Paraphrase方法之三－句型转换（方法1）

（方法2）

（3）Manypeoplesayteachersshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicsubjects；Otherssayteachersshouldalsotaketheresponsibilityofteachingstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong.

Somepeopleholdtheopinionthat_______________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

Whilesomearguethat_________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill:

句型转换（方法3）

（4）Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldbeprohibitedasitusesupfuelresourcesandcausespollution.DoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatementYoushoulduseyourownexperiencetosupportyourargument.

Accordingtosome__________,airtravelshouldbe_________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill:

Paraphrase思路顺序：

单词转换>句型转换>具体化

（5

Somepeopleproposethat______________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill:

句型转换（方法4）

（6）.Inmodernsociety,therearemoreandmoreoldpeople,doyouthinkitsbenefitsoutweighitsdisadvantages

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill:

信息量偏少的TopicIntroduction写作对策

追根溯源法－Factor（s）[因]－Phenomenon（Subject）[果]

2.总论点（Statement）

Topic－Ifchildrenbehavebadly,shouldtheirparentsacceptresponsibilityandalsobepunished

AverageExample：

Inmyopinion,theparentsshouldnotbepunished.

DecentExample：

Inmyopinion,theparentsshouldnotbepunishedexceptthat（unless）theyarethosewhopurposefullyteachthechildtobehavebadly.

Topic－Somepeoplethinkthatitisbeneficialforstudentstogotoprivatesecondaryschools.Butothersfeelthatithasnegativeeffectsonthem.Discussthebothviewpoints

Frommypointofview,itisanidealchoicetosendchildrentoprivatemiddleschools______________________________

Exercise1:

Topic－Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtog