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首段直接点题,说明现象;
第二段分述三个优点,其中首句为让步状语从句,意思是“虽然可能带来负面的后果,但总体上是有益的”;
第三段呼应第二段,得出结论。
范文首段提出大学生读双学位这一普遍现象;
第二段分三点进行论述,其中前两点是优点,即学生会更加勤奋,并且有利于他们在激烈的求职市场中找到工作,最后一点是解释可能带来的学费问题并不严重;
第三段下结论,呼应第二段。
第二段第三句中的standabetterchance(of)表示“大有希望”;
第三段末句中的compelsb.todosth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。
(二)EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts
1.校园盗窃案件时有发生
2.物品被盗的原因
3.学生如何加强防盗意识
●审题概述●
这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。
第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。
第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。
第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。
EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts
“Ifyoudon’twanttowakeupandfindyouhavenopantstowear,you’dbetterputthemoninsleep,”goesapopularjokeamongstudents.Obviously,campustheftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoyingastheyoccurfarmoreoftenthanbefore.Anditseemsthatthethievesarelesschoosythesedays,withtheirtargetsrangingwidelyfrombikes,cellphones,purses,pre-paidICcardstosunglasses,bags,andevenunderwear.Inshort,anythingthatworthadimeislikelytobestolen.
Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets?
Thereasonsarenothardtofind.ButIbelieveofallthesereasons,thelackofanti-theftalertnessisthemostimportant.Forlackofalertness,thestudentstendtoleavethedoorsandwindowswideopenduringsleepatnoonoratnightinsummer.Forthesamereason,they’llalsoleavetheirbikesunlockedbeforeastoreorbyaroad,orforgettotakeawaytheirpersonalstuffbeforetheygooutoftheclassroomtomakeaphonecall.Theseactsundoubtedlyhaveincreasedtheirexposuretothelight-fingeredmonsters.
Inordertominimizepossiblelosses,thestudentsmuststayonguardinthefirstplace,asawarenessofthetheftsaroundoftenmakesabigdifference.Tobemorespecific,thestudentsshouldnothideanytemptingamountofcashinthedorm.Putitinthebankinstead.Besides,donotleaveanyvaluableitemsunattended.Takethemwhereveryougo.Inaddition,it’sadvisabletodevelopaneighborhoodwatchprogramwithotherstudentsinthedormandneighboringdorms.
◇第一段思路点评:
陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况
◇语言点提示:
itseemsthat此句型表示一种可能性
◇第二段思路点评:
说明被盗原因
(1)Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets?
此句引出下文
(2)anti-theftalertness防盗意识
(3)lackofalertness缺乏警惕
(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的
◇第三段思路点评:
阐述如何加强防盗意识
注意关联词语inthefirstplace,Besides,Inaddition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。
(三)HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?
1.网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
2.很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行
3.你对网络依赖症的看法
●审题概述●
本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。
第一段,侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。
第二段,详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。
第三段,论述对网络依赖的观点。
【范文一】
HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?
IfaskedwhethertheInternetisthegreatestdiscoveryofthe20thcentury,myanswerwouldbeyes.TheInternethasdrawntheworldclosertogether,realizedcountlessincredibledreams,andprovidedmodernpeoplewithagreatmanyconveniencesandabrilliantlife.
Today,manypeoplesimplyfeeltheycannotlivewithouttheInternet.Governmentspublishtheirlatestpoliciesanddecisionsonlineforworldwiderecognition.Politicalcampaignsareoftendoneonlinetogainwiderpublicsupport.CompaniesandenterprisesresorttotheInternetformorebusinessopportunitiesandpotentialcustomershomeandabroad.UniversitiesandresearchersturntotheInternetifthey’dseekinternationalcooperationorfunding.Commonfolkslikeusalsorelyonthecyberworldinvariousways,forcommunication,entertainment,bankingandshopping.
True,thepoweroftheInternetisallpervasiveanditsmanynegativeeffectsarealreadyvisible.Forexample,Internetaddictstendtowithdrawtotheirownfantasyworldratherthancommunicatewitharealperson.Childrenareexposedtoonlinepornographyandviolence.Internetfraudsareaneverydayoccurrence.Inviewofallthis,youareadvisedtousetheInternetwithwisdom.Keepitatasafedistanceandneverloseyourself.
综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。
两个长句足矣。
第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题,第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。
hasdrawn…,realized,andprovided此为谓语连动式的运用。
详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系,先总述,后分述。
resortto借助、诉诸、求助于
先陈述人们对网络的依赖,再谈对此的看法。
(1)negativeeffects副作用、反面作用
(2)addicts成瘾者、依恋者
(3)fantasyworld虚拟世界、虚幻世界
(4)pornography色情表演、色情作品
(5)fraud欺骗、诈骗
【范文二】
Asaprimarysourceofinformationaswellasanefficientmeansofcommunication,theInternetofferspeopleacolorfulandconvenientlife.Justbyclickingthemouse,wecanenjoyabrilliantandeasylifethatcouldnotbeachievedeverbefore:
shopping,makingfriends,contactingrelatives,lookingforjobs,downloadingmusicandmovies,conductingbusinessdeals,andfreelyairingouropinions.
Foritsconvenience,theInternethasattractedpeoplelikemagnetsandsomepeopleevenclaimthatitisindispensable.Tothem,lifecan’tgoonwithoutit.EverydaymillionsofpeoplespendhoursonendsurfingtheInternet.Theyareobsessedwithitsomuchsothattheyforgetmanyotherimportantmatters.
Asforme,Idon’tapproveofunrestrainedInternetreliance.AlthoughtheInternetisagiftofthetechnologicalrevolutionandablessingofthisinformationage,weshouldneverletitcontrolourlife.TheInternetabsolutelydoesn’tmeanthewholeworldtous.Instead,weshouldguardagainstitsnegativeeffects.TothoseInternetaddicts,Iwouldadd:
“Self-controlcanmakeorbreakyourlife.Withproperuse,theInternetservesyou;
otherwise,itkillsyou.”
(四)CrazeforCivilServiceExaminations
1.现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员
2.引起此现象的原因
3.你的看法
本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。
第一段,主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。
第二段,侧重分析引起此现象的原因。
第三段,重点谈你对此的观点。
CrazeforCivilServiceExaminations
EveryyearhundredsofthousandsofpeopleinChinatakecivilserviceexamsconductedatvariouslevelsinthehopeofbecominggovernmentemployees.Amongthem,collegegraduatesareafast-growingforcethatcan’tbeignored.Thecrazeforbeingacivilservantisnotlimitedtoliberalartsmajors,asit’salsogainingpopularityamongscienceandengineeringstudents.
Inthefinalanalysis,thisgrowingtrendamongtheyoungstersismainlyattributabletotwofactors–ambitionsandcomforts.Ontheonehand,manyambitiouscollegegraduatesviewtheseexamsasaspringboardtoahighersocialstatus,greaterpowerandprestige,onwhichmanyoftheirotherwishesrest.Ontheother,asbeingacivilservantgenerallymeansastableincome,enviablehealthcareandpensionprograms,aswellasothercomfortsoflife,it’squiteanappealingcareeroptiontomanypeople,especiallyinthisageofsluggishworldeconomy.
Personally,thedesiretobeagovernmentofficialisbeyondreproach,asthenationandthepeopledoneedaninjectionofnewbloodintothecivilservicesectors.Thefresh-facedcollegegraduates,armedwithloftyideals,newvision,andstrongdrive,areundoubtedlyamongthebestcandidates.
第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考,第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军,第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的,还有理工科的。
liberalartsmajors文科专业学生
先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素,再详细分述。
(1)Ontheonehand…Ontheotherhand起到衔接上文作用
(2)isattributableto归因于
(3)sluggishworldeconomy衰退的世界经济
重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。
beyondreproach无可厚非
(五)IsitNecessarytoAttendTrainingClasses?
1.现在社会上有各种各样的培训班
2.有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班,有些人则认为没有必要
3.你的观点
这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。
第一段,概述各种各样培训班的状况。
第二段,论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。
第三段,重点阐述你对此的看法。
IsitNecessarytoAttendTrainingClasses?
Allacrossthecountryagreatdiversityofcustom-madeclassesaremushrooming,inwhichspecialtrainingisprovidedconcerningcomputerskills,arts,sports,andotherextracurricularspecialtieslikemathematicsandwriting.Amongthemlanguagecrashcoursesforvarioustests,suchasCET,BEC,TOFEL,IELTS,GREandsoforth,areespeciallynoticeableforitswiderangeandhighattendancerate.
Someconsideritadvisabletoattendsuchclasseswhileothersbelieveitunnecessary.Theformerarguesthatit’sfarmoreeffectivetocommandthesespecialskillswiththehelpofanexperiencedtrainerthantoworkatthemontheirown.Theyareconvincedthatthesetrainingclassescanmakeupforwhatisnottaughtinschool,hence,morecompetitiveedgeovertheirpeers.Thelattergroupofpeople,nonetheless,criticizeitasasheerwasteofresources.Theywarnthatthequalityofmosttrainingcoursesisquestionable,astheyaremarketedtogetmoneyoutofourpocketratherthangetknowledgeintoourhead.
AsfarasIamconcerned,alittlebitofsuchspecialtrainingdoesusnoharm,buttoomuchofitcanonlyprovetobecounter-productive.Anyhow,thedeprivedfreetimecanbebetterinvestedinrecreationatweekends,talkingtoanoldfriend,orsimplyenjoyingalong-overduevacation.
第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般