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51.Directions:

YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgottoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto

1）makeanapology,and

2）suggestasolution.

Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.Donotwritetheaddress.（10points）

DearBob,

（1）IamLiMing,thestudentfromChinawhohadbeenlivinginyourhomeforthepasttwoweeks.

（2）Now,Iamwritingthislettertomakeanapologytoyouformycarelessness.

（3）DuringmystayinCanada,IborrowedamusicCDfromyousinceIintendedtolearnsomeEnglishsongs.

（4）ButwhenIunpackedmyluggagelastnight,IfoundthatIhadforgottentoreturntheCDtoyou.

（5）Ifeelquitesorryforthis.

（6）InordertomakeupforthemistakeImade,IwillaskTom,oneofmybestfriendsinCanada,tobuyanewoneforyou.

（7）Ifyoudon’tlikethenewone,IwouldtrytosenditbacktoyouassoonaspossiblebyUPS.

（8）Atlast,pleaseforgivemefortheinconveniencecausedagain.

PartB

52.Directions:

Writeanessayof160–200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

你一条腿，我一条腿；

你我一起，走南闯北。

第一段操作方法：

（1）Thepictureabovegivesusavividdescriptionoftwodisabledpeople.

（2）Inthispicture,thetwohandicappedmenaresupportingeachotherandheadingtowardstheirdestinationwithstrides,leavingtheirwalkingsticksfarbehind.

（3）Justasthecaptionbelowgoes,“Cooperationenablesustogowhereverwewant.”

（4）Undoubtedly,thecartoonistaimsatremindingusoftheimportanceofcooperationandmutualhelpinthemodernsociety.

第二段操作一

（1）Theimpliedmeaningofthedrawingcanbeinterpretedintermsofmutualhelpandcooperation.

（2）Tobeginwith,mutualhelpisbadlyneededinoursociallife.Associalbeings,peopledependoneachotherinourlife,workandstudy.

（3）Onlybywayofmutualassistancecanweovercomeourshortcomingsandrealizeourself-valueanddream.

（4）What’smore,cooperationisessentialtooursocialworkandthebuildingoftheharmonioussociety.

（5）Withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandeconomy,peopleareincreasinglyfeelingthepowerofmutualhelpandcooperation.

（6）Forinstance,manygreatachievementsinthehistoryofhumancivilizationcannotbeachievedwithoutthejointeffortsofpeople.

（7）Inshort,weneedtorealizethatneitheroursocietynorourpersonallifecanbeseparatedfromcooperation.

第二段操作二

→

（1）Inthereallife,thereisnoonewhocanachievetheremarkablesuccessinwhateverhedoeswithoutthesupportrenderedbyhiscolleaguesandpartners.→

（2）letusTakethesuperbasketballstarYaoMingasanexample,heoftensayslikethisbeforemedia,“Thecooperationandsupportofmyteammatesisindispensabletomysuccess.（3）Withouttheirunselfishhelp,Iwillnotbesofortunatetohavesuchasuccessfulperformance.”→（4）ApartfromtheexampleofYao,manyothergreatfiguresinthehistoryalsoattributedtheirsuccesstothecooperationandmutualhelp.

→（5）Likewise,thesuccessfullaunchingofChina'

sfirstlunarprobe,Chang'

e-1,alsoresultedfromthejointeffortsofChinesescientistsinsteadoftheindividualaccomplishment.（6）Asaresult,cooperationisessentialtobothsocialdevelopmentandourindividualgrowth.

第三段操作一

→

（1）Inmyview,somenecessarymeasuresmustbetakentomakepeoplerealize“United,westand,divided,wefall.”

（2）Firstofall,aneducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoeducatepeopleontheimportanceofmutualhelpandcooperation.

（3）Inaddition,morerelevantactivitiesshouldbecreatedforyoungpeopletocultivatethesenseofmutualhelpandcooperation.

（4）Onlyinthesewayscanwebuildupasocietyfullofharmony.

第三段操作二

→（13）Fromallmentionedabove,therefore,wecancometoaconclusionthatweshouldputgreatemphasisonthecooperationandmutualhelpinthecompetitiveworld.

→（14）Foronething,weshouldtrytocultivateoursenseofcooperationandmutualhelpthroughparticipatingintherelevantactivities.

（15）Foranother,weshouldbefullyawareofthevalueofcooperationtoourgrowthinthefuture.

（16）Onlyinthiswaycanwebenefitmorefromourmutualhelpandcooperation.

（2）阅读中尝试模仿写作

以考研真题中的英语知识综合运用为例说明阅读和写作的关系，并强调模仿在写作中的重要性。

1）Teachersneedtobeawareoftheemotional,intellectual,andphysicalchangesthatyoungadultsexperience.Andtheyalsoneedtogiveserious1thoughttohowtheycanbest2accommodatesuchchanges.

派生句Recently,theincreasingemphasishasbeenputonthegrowthofteenagers.Inordertoensuretheirhealthygrowth,ontheonehand,bothteachersandparentstrytobeawareofchildren’semotional,intellectualandphysicalchangesthattheyexperienceinthedifferentperiodsoftime,whichmakesitpossiblefortheadultstogivethecorrectguidanceinavarietyofaspects.Ontheotherhand,beingteachersandparents,wealsoneedtogiveaseriousthoughttohowwecanhelpthembestaccommodatesomanydrasticchanges.Allinall,theguidancefromteachersandparentswill,inasense,determinewhetherourchildrenwillgrowinapositivewayornot.

2）Growingbodiesneedmovementand3exercises,butnotjustinwaysthatemphasizecompetition4becausetheyareadjustingtotheirnewbodiesandawholehostofnewintellectualandemotionalchallenges,teenagersareespeciallyself-consciousandneedthe5confidencethatcomesfromachievingsuccessandknowingthattheiraccomplishmentsare6admiredbyothers.

派生句Weshouldencourageourchildrentoparticipateinthesocialactivitieswhicharebeneficialtotheirgrowingbodies.Buttheseactivitiesshouldnotbelimitedtothewaysthatemphasizecompetitionbecausetheyneedtoknowmoreabouttherealworldthroughsomepracticalworksoastoadjustthemselvestoahostofnewchallenges.Besides,theteenagersareespeciallyself-consciousandneedtheconfidencethatcomesfromachievingsuccessandknowingthattheiraccomplishmentsareadmiredbyothers,whichiscriticaltotheirindividualsuccessinthefuture.

3）However,thetypicalteenagelifestyleisalreadyfilledwithsomuchcompetitionthatitwouldbe7wisetoplanactivitiesinwhichtherearemorewinnersthanlosers,8forexample,publishingnewsletterswithmanystudent-writtenbookreviews,9displayingstudentartwork,andsponsoringbookdiscussionclubs.Avarietyofsmallclubscanprovide10multipleopportunitiesforleadership,aswellasforpracticeinsuccessful11groupdynamics.

派生句Thechildren’sacademicburdenshouldbemoderatelyreduced.Now,theirtypicallifestyleisalreadyfilledwithsomuchcompetitionthatitwouldbewisetoplanactivitiesinwhichtheycanhaveagoodrelaxation,forexample,goingcamping,takingpartinthephysicalexerciseorsponsoringvariousbookclubs.Alltheseactivitieswillprovidethemwithmultipleopportunitiesforfosteringtheirindependence,adaptabilityandself-confidence.

4）Makingfriendsisextremelyimportanttoteenagers,andmanyshystudentsneedthe12securityofsomekindoforganizationwithasupportiveadult13barelyvisibleinthebackground.

派生句Makingfriendsisextremelyimportanttous,especiallytotheyoungpeople.Asisknowntousall,apersoncannotdowithoutfriendsinthemodernsocietybecausetherearesomanydifferentkindsoftasksthatrequiremutualcooperationandhelp.Besides,youwillfind（that）friendscannotonlygiveusgoodsuggestionsbutalsomakeyoufeelthepleasureofthelife.Mostimportantly,withfriends,youwillfindliferewardingandworthwhile.

（3）考研英语写作表达集萃

给考生的忠告：

养成良好的语言表达习惯是提高写作的前提!

第一部分：

语言表达和句型拓展

1.Thephotosvividlydepictsomeyoungpeoplewholiketofollowthefashion.Aswecanseefromthepicture,theguyontheleftputsBeckham’snameonhisleftface,whiletheguyontherightasksthehairdressertocopythehair-styleofBeckhamatthecostof300yuan.ObviouslytheybotharecrazyfansofBeckham,awell-knownBritishfootballplayer.

Thepictureabovegivesusavividdescriptionofaninterestingfootballgamebetweentwoplayers.

Thedoorkeeperontheleftconsidershimasapersonweakinstrengthwhiletheplayerontherightlooksonhimas….

Obviously,thepictureaimsatrevealingafactthatmanyyoungpeoplearelackofconfidenceinboth…and….

Asisvividlydepictedinthepictureabove,……………..

Whatanimpressivepicture…………!

Justaswecansee….

2.Nowadays,“nationalcultureorinternationalculture”hasbecomeamatterofgreatconcernforthegeneralpublicinoursociety.Now,let’stakealookattheAmericangirlintraditionalChinesecostume.Shelooksverybeautiful,withanicesmileonherface.ItseemsthatthegirlisveryfondofChinesecostume.

3.Asisshowninthispicture,wecanseeclearlythatacharmingAmericangirlwhoiswearingthetraditionalChinesecostumeissmilingtous.Thepurposeofthispictureisthatwiththedevelopmentofglobalization,greatchangeshavetakenplaceintheworld,andone’snationculturehasbeenacceptedbythepeoplefromanotherculture.

Undoubtedly,thepictureaimsatrevealingafactthatourtraditionalculturehasbeenacceptedbymostofthewesternersalongwiththerapiddevelopmentoftheglobalization.

4.Whatathought-provokingcartoon!

Asisvividlyrevealedinthedrawing,fourgrown-upsareplayingaspecial“football