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结尾句5.对段落进行归纳总结,与主题句相辅相
成;
Forexample:
Englishisfavoredonthefollowinggrounds.Itistheofficiallanguageofanumberofcountries.Ofothercountries,itistheirsecondlanguage.Instillothers,Englishisspokenastheirmajorforeignlanguage.That’swhyEnglishissopopularinourpresentworld.
二、发展段落常用的方法
六级统考中,作文的题材大多为论说文,适合于这中题材的段落发展方法主要有:
列举或举例法;
比较对比法;
因果法等.
1.列举或举例法
列举或举例法是段落发展的基本方法,用这种方法发展段落,首先要摆出论点(thetopicsentence),然后列举一系列的论据对其进行陈述和解释,或用具体事例对其进行说明.如:
Televisionpresentsusavividworldinfrontofus.Forexample,TVcankeepusinformedofwhatishappeningthroughouttheworld.Foranotherexample,withaTVsetathome,wecanvisitagreatmanytouristattractionindifferentcountries.Besides,TVbringsvariousformsofentertainmentstoourhomessuchassportscompetitions,concerts.ThepicturesonTVlooksorealthatwefeelasiftheeventsweretakingplacerightbeforeoureyes.
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常用于列举或举例法的过渡连接语有:
foronething,foranother,forexample,foranotherexample;
tobeginwith,first,second,besides,inaddition,also,still,moreover,stillanother,finally,atlast,lastly;
试找出下列各主题句中的支配思想,然后按上述方法发展成一段约见50——80词的段落.
1.Increasingyourvocabularycanhelpyouinanumberofways.
2.Astohowtoreducecitypopulation,peoplehavedifferentopinions.
3.OfallthesubjectsthatIstudyinschool,IthinkthatEnglishisthemostimportantone.
4.Riversplayaveryimportantpartinourlife.
5.Smokingisabadhabit.
6.Travellingisakindofeducation.
7.Agooddictionarycaninsomesenseserveusasateacher.
8.Auniversitystudentcangetintouchwiththesocietyinseveralways.
2.比较——对比法Comparisonandcontrast
在有的作文测试中,要求考生对两者或三者同类的东西的优缺点进行阐述,并发表个人看法,这种作文要求考生在写作时用比较——对比法.比较对比法一般有两种模式:
(1)先叙述甲,再叙述乙,即:
A1,A2,A3;
B1,B2,B3…;
如:
Boththecityandthecountryhavetheirdisadvantages.Airpollutionisveryseriousinthecity.Moreover,itissocrowdedthatmanypeopledon’twanttogoout.Inthecountry,itisinconvenienttobuythings.Besides,peoplecanfindnowaytokillthelongandtediousnights.
(2)双方同时描述,逐点对比,即:
A1,B1;
A2,B2;
A3,B3;
如:
WaysofexpressinggoodmannersaredifferentbetweenAmericaandJapan.Forexample,Americanseatwithknivesandforks;
Japaneseeatwithchopsticks.Foranotherexample,Americanssay“Hi”whentheymeet;
Japanesebow.Besides,manyAmericansopendoorsforwomen;
Japanesemendonot.Onthesurface(superficially),itappearsthatgoodmannersinAmericaarenotgoodmannersinJapan,infactthat’sjustthedifferentwaysofexpressinggoodmanners.
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常用于比较对比法的过渡连接词语有:
like,unlike,similarly,inthesameway,ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,comparedwith/to,incontrastto,onthecontrary,but,although,whereas,however,while;
ExerciseTwo(Usingcomparisonandcontrastmethod)
1.Comparedwithcars,bicycleshavemanyadvantages;
2.Menandwomenareequalathomenow;
(3)CauseandEffect因果的方法扩展段落
主题句是所产生的影响或结果,然后提供产生的原因.
Therearethreereasonswhysolarenergyhasnotbeenmadeuseofverywidely.First,thecostforbuildingasolarpowerplantisveryhigh.Asaresult,theproductionofonewattofsolarenergyismoreexpensivethanthatofsteampowerornuclearpower.Second,natureplaysalargepartinthegenerationofsolarenergy.Whenitiscloudyorrainy,solarpowerplantcannotwork.Also,nosolarenergyisgeneratedatnight.Finally,therearenotenoughqualifiedtechnicalpersonneltorunsolarpowerplants.Forallthesereasons,solarenergyhasnotdevelopedonalargescaleinourcountry.
Exercise:
SeveralfactorshavecontributedtothedifficultyintravelinginChina
三、段落的写作步骤
段落写作之前
(1)首先要弄清主题句的支配思想;
(2)然后列出能直接说明主题思想的3——4个提纲点;
(3)最后将提纲点扩展成句;
(4)然后依照一定的段落发展方法,采用恰当的关联词组成段落.段落提纲写作的框架如下:
A扩展句
B扩展句
主题句C扩展句
D结尾句
例如:
Peopletakepartinsportsforvariousreasons.在这个主题句中,forvariousreasons是支配思想,是文章论述的焦点.列提纲如下:
Forvariousreasons:
A.tobegoodtohealth
B.makefriends
C.toenrichlife
过渡连接词可用:
Firstly,Secondly,Besides…
组成段落如下:
Peopletakepartinsportsforvariousreasons.Firstly,takingpartinsportsisgoodtoourhealth,whichcanmakeusveryhealthyandenergetic.Secondly,ifwealwaystakepartinsports,wewillfindourlifefullofcolorandnotsodull.Besides,sportsalsoservesanopportunityforustomakefriends,forexample,ifyoulikepingpang,youwillplaywiththosewhoalsolikeiteventhoughyoudon’tknoweachotheratfirst,byandbyyoucanmakegoodfriends.
Anotherexample:
主题句:
Inrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinChina.
在这个主题句中,greatchanges是主题,说明它的要点如下:
Greatchanges:
A.livingstandard
B.culturalandeducationalundertakings
C.environment
D.birthrate
选用合适的过渡连接词:
First,second,inaddition,finally…
选用合适的段落发展方法:
列举法
扩展成段落如下:
Inrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinChina.Thepeople’slivingstandardbothinthecityandinthecountryhasbeenraisedremarkably.Second,therehavebeenrapiddevelopmentsinculturalandeducationalundertakings.Inaddition,thegovernmenthasbeenpayingmuchattentiontotheenvironmentalandecologicalproblems.Finally,thebirthratealloverthecountryhasbeenputundercontrol.
小结:
段落写作的步骤可以概括如下:
分析主题句——找出支配思想——列出能直接说明支配思想的要点——将要点扩展成句——选用合适的过渡连接词——成段.
Exerciseswithsuggestedwordsandphrases:
1.InChina,bicycleisverypopularandiswelcomedbyalmosteveryone.Thereasonsareasfollows.
提示词:
cheap,goodexercise,keepfit,nopollution,noparkingspace;
2.Manypeoplenowprefertoliveinthecountryside.Themainreasonsare:
提示词:
freshair,unpollutednature,environment,quiet,peaceful;
3.WatchingTVathomeisbetterthangoingouttoamovie.
comfortable,convenient,savemoney,choiceofprograms,enjoy;
ExerciseOne:
列举、举例法练习答案:
1.Increasingyourvocabularycanhelpyouinanumberofways.Knowingsynonyms(同义词),forexample,willenableyoutoavoidunnecessaryrepetitionsinyourcompositionsandthusmaketheminterestingtoread.Also,anincreasedvocabularywillmakeyourownreadingmoreenjoyable.Youwillfinditmucheasiertofollowtheideasinyourstorytextbookorthenewspaper.Furthermore,withalargevocabulary,youcantalkmorefreely.Whatevercompanyyouarein,youwillfindthatyouareabletoholdtheinterestofyourlisteners.Therefore,youmustenlargeyourvocabularyifyouwanttocommunicatewithothersmoreeffectively.
2.Astohowtoreducecitypopulation,peoplehavedifferentopinions.Somebelievethatweshouldpracticethepolicyoflatemarriageand“onecouple,onechild”.Whileothersthinkweshoulddevelopalawtoprohibitcountrypeoplefromflowingintothecity.Andstillothersproposethatatleasthalfofthecitypopulationshouldmovetosuburbsandsatellitetownsbebuiltthere.Thenthecitypopulationwillbegreatlyreducedandwillremainstableintheyearstocome..
3.Ofallthesubjectswestudyatschool,IthinkEnglishisthemostimportantone.First,mostofthebooksofscienceandtechnologypublishedtodayareinEnglish.Ifwewanttoreadthem,wemustknowEnglish.Secondly,Englishisspokenverywidely.Beingabletospeakitcanhelpustolearnmoreaboutforeignculturesandunderstandpeoplefromothercountriesbetter.Finally,withagoodknowledgeofEnglish,wecangetsgoodjobwhenwehavegraduatedfromtheuniversitybecauseEnglish,asaninternationallanguage,hasbeenusedasastandardlanguageinmanyfields.WemustpaymoreattentiontothestudyofEnglishandlearnitwell.
4.Riversplayaveryimportantpartinourlife.Tobeginwith,insummer,wecanswiminriversand,inwinter,wecanskateonthem.Secondly,theyaddbeautyandcoolnesstotheenvironment.Besides,riverwaterprovidepowerformakingelectricity.Furthermore,weirrigatecropswithriverwater.Finally,riversgiveusfishtoeatandwatertodrink.Clearly,riversareveryimportantinourearth’secology.
5.Smokingisabadhabit.Firstly,doctorsandscientistshavefoundthatitisharmfultothesmoker’shealth.Itmaycausediseasessuchashearttroubleorlungcancer.Cigarettesmokewillpollutetheairandaffectother’shealthtoo.Secondly,manybigfireshavebeencausedbycarelesssmokers.Thesehaveresultedingreatlossesoflivesandproperties.Besides,cigarettesareusuallyveryexpressiveandsmokershavetospendalotofmoneyonthemeveryyear.Sopeoplemustgiveupsmoking.
6.Travelingisakindofeducation.Forexample,visitingplacesofhistoricinterestcanenrichyourknowledgeofhistory.Inaddition,whiletraveling,youcanlearnaboutmanyformsandarchitecturesdifferentformyourown.Inthisway,youcanbroadenyourhorizon.Finally,travelingmayofferyouanopportunitytogettoknowpeopleofdifferentcultures__theirlives,customs,beliefs,etc.sothatwemayunderstandthembetter.Nowonder,travelinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularallovertheworld.
7.Agooddictionarycaninsomesenseservesusasateacher.Itcantellyouthewayawordispronounced.Itcanalsotellyouthemeaningormeaningsoftheword.Agooddictionaryoftenprovidesthecontextinwhichthewordistested.Inaddition,thereisreferenceorcross-referencebywhichonewordisreferredtoanother.Andtherephrasesofwhichthewordformsapart.
8.Today’suniversitystudentscanmakecontactwiththesocietyinvariousways.Onthecampus,socialknowledgeisavailableintextbookandthecontractwithfollowstudents,teachersandfriends,forauniversityisamini-natureofthesociety.Ifstudentswalkoutofcampus,theycangetd