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OnAmbition.

Inthefirstpartofyourwritingyoushouldstateyourmainargument,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyourargumentwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionormakeasummary.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

HowtoWrite

I.Understandingtheinstructionoftheassignment

ReadthepassagequotedintheinstructionandboildownitsMAINPROPORSITION（andMINORPROPORSITIONSifpossible）.

II.Organizingtheideas

A.TheMAINPROPORSITIONinthethesisstatement

TheMAINPROPORSITIONoftheargumentativeessaytobewrittenistheresponsetotheMAINPROPORSITIONofthequotedpassage,e.g.:

Iagree（disagree）withJosephEpsteinandbelievethat....

B.TwoorthreeMINORPROPORSITIONSinthetopicsentences

TheMINORPROPORSITIONSshouldbebuiltonthebasisoftheMAINPROPORSITION.SometimestheyaretheresponsetotheMINORPROPORSITIONSofthequotedpassage.

C.Refertothefollowingpattern:

I.Introduction

Hereyougive:

a）thetitleofthequotedpassage,

b）thenameoftheauthorand/orthesourceofthequotedpassage,（ifthereare,）

c）themainideaofthequotedpassage（averybriefsummary）and

d）YOURmainproposition（thethesisstatement）

II.Body

Ineachparagraph,yougive:

a）Thepointyouaretoanalyze,

b）NESSARYdetailsordirectquotesdemonstratingthatthepointismadeintheoriginal（optional）,

c）Yourresponsetothispoint（i.e.theTOPICSENTENCE）,whichstatesyouragreementordisagreementwithit,and

d）ThesupportforYOURresponsefromdetailsorexamples.

III.Conclusion:

Yourefertothequotedpassageandpointouttheessenceoftheoriginalmainargumentforemphasis.Youbringupanideayouhaveprovedinyouressay,onethatyouressayleadsto,ortheonethatdeepensyourmainidea.

TestSample

Agreement

OnAmbition

NowhereisthewordambitionsovividlyandaccuratelydefinedthaninJosephEpstein'

scommentthat"

Intheend,formingourowndestinyiswhatambitionisabout."

Acosmeticdefinitionasitseems,however,Epstein'

swordscan,onthewhole,beinterpretedandsummarizedintoonesentence:

tobeambitiousistostriveforourownpersonalgoalssetuponourownvaluesregardlessofthepossibleoutcomeandcontroversy.Inotherwords,thetwoindispensablepartsofambitioninclude;

firstly,makingyourownuniquetargets;

secondly,persistinginachievingtheseaimswithoutbeingdistractedbyothers'

ridiculeandscorn.

Tobeginwith,visualizingyourpersonalgoalsinsteadofdriftingamongthemassis,undoubtedly,theveryprerequisiteofthefulfillmentofyouraims.Thereasonforthisissimple.Weourselvesarethebestjudgesofourcapabilitiesandpotentials.AndthesamevoiceisechoedinEpsteinswordsthat"

wedecide,whatisimportantandwhatistrivialinlife."

MadamCurriecouldneverhaveachievedsomanyhonorsandbreakthroughsinscienceandthediscoveryofRadiumifshetookthesamepathasmajorityofthewomeninhertime.Itwasherdecisiontodevotehertimeandenergytosciencenothouseholdchoresthatmadeherstandoutsoprominently.Ontheotherhand,shemighthavebeenjustasplainandmundaneasotherwomenifshedidnotmatchherselfwithherpersonalaspirationsandgoals.Therefore,havingyourowngoalsisessentialtotherealizationofambition.

Thenthereistheissueofhowoneshouldpursuethesegoals.AgainEpsteingaveaperfectexplanationthat"

Butnomatterhowindifferenttheuniversemaybetoourchoicesanddecisions,thesedecisionsandchoicesareourstomake."

Anexcellentstatement.Therearetimeswhenwegiveupourbeliefsandaimssimplybecauseofadifferentperspectiveofsomeoneelse,andtherearedefinitelydayswhenwefeelfrustratedandbeateninfaceofscathingscornfromtheworld.YetEpsteinshowsusahigherpathonwhichweareencouragedtosticktoourwaysandendureinspiteofallpossiblecriticismandindifference.Andhistoryhasprovedsomanytimesthatpersistenceregardlessofhardshipandridiculewinsusvictory.Thusitissafetosaythatpersistenceandafirmbeliefofselfisanintegralpartofambition.

Ofcourse,JosephEpstein'

squotationisdefinitelyricherincontentandintendedmessagesthanwhatIhaveillustratedanddevelopedabove,however,theessenceofhissaying,thatambitionisofourownchoosingandthatweoughttoholdfasttoitwillmakeitswaythroughclosescrutinyandprevail.

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Score20

此文被八级阅卷组评为满分，并有如下评语:

遣词造句准确，词汇句式丰富，结构合理。

文章的开头开门见山，起首第一句就表明了作者的观点，并从分析JosephEpstein的原话人手，导出下文论述的内容，显得非常自然。

第二、三段的正文论述中，作者在恰当的地方顺势插入JosephEpstein的原话，文章的结尾再次归结到JosephEpstein，以此来点题，从而使得文章紧紧围绕着题解的内容展开。

文章的逻辑结构非常清晰，这表明作者充分理解了题解中说的JosephEpstein那段话的含义。

本文的语言运用尤其值得称道，不仅词汇句式丰富，而且行文流畅自然，显示出作者有着深厚的语言功底。

这篇作文实属少见的优秀作文，值得大家学习和借鉴。

AStudent’sSample

Disagreement

Onsayingthatourambitiondecidesourdestiny,JosephEpsteinisjusttryingtoestablishanotherdefinitionofAmericanDreamthatthosewillingenoughtochoosetheirdestinywillaccomplishit.Maybepeopleasambitiousandinnocentas“greatGatsby”willbelievethis,butonexaminingthisbeliefcarefullyandcheckingthefatefinallyfellonthosepeople,weareprompttosaythatitisnottrue,simplyforthefactthatlifedoesnotnaturallyfollowone’swillandthereisanothermightyhandformingourdestiny:

theenvironment.

Firstly,therealityoflifeandhistorytellusthathowoftenourdestinyhasrepelledagainstourambitionandhowitdespisesourambition.Inhistory,itisreasonabletoassumethatmorethanhundredsofkingsorconquerors,orotherdistinguishedmembersofhumanbeingshavetheambitiontoconquerthewholeworldandletthatconquestlastforever,butinreality,onlyCaesar,AlexanderandNapoleonhavepartlyaccomplishedthefirstpartofthisambitionandastothesecondpart,ithasyetbeen,untilnow,a“missionimpossible”.Noonewilldenythisambitionisstrong,greatandinspiringenough,butstillmanyamongthosewhopossessthisambitionhasendedupaslosers,tyrantsortheworst,beggars.IwonderhowqueerwouldJosephEpsteinfound,thatthesamewonderfulambitioncouldhaveproducedsoamazinglydifferentdestinies.

Ontheotherhand,noonewillbeasdaringasMr.JosephSteintoignoreanotherdecisivefactorformingourdestiny,ourenvironment.Ifourambitionisthebeacon,thenourenvironmentistheoceanwesailon.Onlybystaringatthebeaconbutignoringandtheroofsaroundourboat,wecanhardlyreachourdestination,wherethebeaconstands.AmbitiousNapoleoncouldconquertheEuropeofhistime,butifplacedinthesameenvironmentoftoday,hecouldhardlyforcethepeopletheretoacceptsimplyanEldconstitution.SohereMr.JosephSteinhastobe,again,disappointed.

FeelingdeeplyinsultedmaybeSirJosephSteinwillgiveouthislastpresumptivelyfatalstrike:

wherethereisanambition,thereisaway;

withoutambition,onecanhardlyfindhisway.Undersuchcircumstances,Ihavetogivemyown“anti-presumptively-fatal-strike”Thereisalwaysaway,butwhetheritleadstolifeordeath,nononeknows;

“Theway”doesnotusuallymeanthestraightlinecollectingyourambitionandyourpresentlocation,andyourambitionisnotachievedbystaringatitanddecidingtoreachit,norisyourdestiny.

Soherecomesourconclusionthatourdestinydoesnotcomebeforeusaswehaveplannedittobe,forthereisanotherunignorableelementirresistiblyformingourlife,whichistheenvironmentwelivein.Tobe,ortobewhat,thatisaquestion;

yethowtobe,orwhatitis,thatisanotherquestion,whichisnotonlydecidedbyourselves,butalsobyenvironment.

After-ClassAssignments（45Mins）

I.Inhisfamous“Autobiography,”BenjaminFranklinprescribed“industry”as“losenotime;

bealwaysemployedinsomethinguseful;

cutoffallunnecessaryactions.”Hewentontosaythatindustry“freeingmefrommyremainingdebt,andproducingaffluenceandindependence,wouldmakemoreeasythepracticeof”othervirtues.

WouldFranklin’spreceptofindustrystillworktoday?

Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewithhim?

Writeanessayofabout400wordsandelaborateyourpointbyusingyourownorother’sexperiencesasevidence.

Youshouldsupplyatitletoyouressay.

II.Inhisessay“Nature”,RalphW.Emersonclaimedhisage“retrospective”andsaid:

“TheforegoinggenerationsbeheldGodandnaturefacetoface;

we,throughtheireyes.Whyshouldnotwealsoenjoyanoriginalrelationtotheuniverse?

Whyshouldnotwehaveapoetryandphilosophyofinsightandnotoftradi