托福写作模板Word格式.docx

托福写作模板Word格式.docx

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（如果sampleone的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisuretime，就用下面的）

Oncontemporarysociety（一般的背景）/Withtheadventofthetechnologicallyadvancedsociety（theinformationexplosiveera（与科技有关的背景））/Onaccountof…，XX（中心词）servesasacatalystforourfuturesuccess/XXissynonymouswithknowledgeandtheroadtosuccess/XXplaysanessential/increasinglyimportantrolein…/XXisenjoyinganincreasinglyhighpopularityamongpeople./很简单的一句背景（如so…that…/notonly…butalso）.However，whenitcomestothechoicebetweenAAandBB/Whenaskedaboutwhether改写题目1,peoplegetintoadilemma.Accordingtomypersonalityandexperiences/AsfarasIamconcerned/Frommyperspective,Iclingtoanunshakeablebeliefthat改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写：

Amongcountlessfactorswhichcontributetomypositionarefollowingconspicuousones（最后一定排比结尾）/AAnotonly…butalso

（2）/TherearevariousmeritsAAbringsabout,firstofall,to…;

secondly,to…;

andlastly…（3）.

要做的：

想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起（最后写）

2、分点一：

分层论证

Basictoanyunderstandingofthebenefitswecangetfrom

_______isthat__________/Firstandforemost,

Ononehand_________,Ontheotherhand_________

Besides/What’smore/Inaddition.

这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子！

3、分点二：

举例论证

Furtherlendingcredencetomypositionisthat____________

（简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话）Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthantheexampleof（典型例子）/Acaseinpointisthat（不是很典型）________,…..（例子见后面）

一句话总结例子：

Asaresult,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样

4、让步段：

Agreeordisagree:

Admittedly,_____,tosomeextent,maydirectlyorindirectly____/hasitsundeniabledetriments.Forinstance,_______

However,thevaluablemeritsof_______considerablyovershadowthedrawbacks/onnoaccount________./

二选一：

Admittedly,BBalsohascertainmeritswhichdeservesomewordshere.Forexample,____（字数不够就多讲点）However，BB的缺点或AA也可以做到.ComparedwithAA,（which可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面,）itpales.

5、结尾段：

Therefore,duetotheabovementionedreasons,whichsometimescorrelatewitheachothertoformanorganicwholeandthusbecomemorepersuasivethananysingleoneofthem（字不够了用）,Ireinforcemystandpointthat改写题目3

Onlyvia（by/through/with/when/after）___canwe__________;

onlyvia（by/through/with/when/after）___canwe________;

andonlyvia（by/through/with/when/after）___canwe_______

OrItisAthat...;

itisAthat...;

anditisAthat...（不好写或显得累赘就不要了）

二、语言篇

1、基本句型

●因果

Onaccountof/owingto/dueto+N

Forthereasonthat/as/since+句子

Itisdueto____that

eg:

Itisduetohispersistenceandperseverancethatheeventuallyreachedhisacme.（强调句）

derive/arise/stemfrom来源于

Hissuccessderivesfromhispersistenceandperseverance.

ascribeAtoB归结于

Hissuccesscanbeascribed/attributedtohispersistenceandperseverance

●条件

AservesasacatalystforB（ourfurthersuccess）

If/onconditionthat/providedthat/aslongas________

●让步

Despitethefactthat/regardlessof

2、经典句型

●倒装

1）Onlyvia（by/through/with/when/after）__do/did/canwe__

ef:

OnlyaftergoingtothebeachofHawaiiwillIknowaboutAmericantypicaltypeofspendingleisuretime.

2）Hardly/Seldom/Scarcelycan__

ef:

Hardlycanweimagineaworld/ourlifewithout/devoidof

3）So+adj+主谓倒装+that__

4）Notonly主谓倒装butalso...

eg:

Notonlyshouldeducationpreparechildrentocompete

Notonlydopeoplecaretheireconomicneeds,theybutalsowanttomeettheirspiritualneeds.

5）Onnoaccount主谓倒装（决不....）

●强调

Itis/was....that/who（m）....

●插入语

1）限定性副词probably/directlyorindirectly/tosome（alarge）extent

2）N+,ving,+v

3）同位语

3、经典中的经典

●排比

1）Itistourismthatgivesmetheopportunitytoknowthecultureofthisdynamic,robustandalivecountry.

2）Itiscomputersthatmakeourlifediverse,convenient,dynamic/vibrant,withoutwhichourlifewouldprobablypale.

3）A/whichneedstobe/Inthisway,Acanbereadilyaccepted,respected,appreciatedandadvocated.

4）Onlyviauniversityeducationcanwehavesystematicknowledgeconcerningartsandscience.Onlyviauniversityeducationcanweknowtheessenceofsymbiosisandcollaboration.AndOnlyviauniversityeducationcanwemeetthedemandsofsocietyandmakeourfuturesuccessinevitable.

●十大副词

1）Considerably

2）Invariably

3）Undoubtedly/indisputably/incontrovertibly

4）Increasingly

5）Most/exceedingly/exceptionally格外地

6）Insightfully富有见底地

7）Regrettably

8）Effectivelyandefficiently

9）Graduallyandeventually

10）Readily

●其他

1）Itisnotdifficultforustoimaginethat不难想象

2）BmakesitpossibleforustohaveanuniversalaccesstoA/Aisreadilyavailable.A容易得到

3）Inordertosurviveandthriveinthisfiercelycompetitivesociety,peoplehavenochoicebuttoworkandstudyhard.

4）Ruthlessandrelentless无形/fierceandintensecompetition

Theruthlessandrelentlesscompetitionimposesanunprecedentedpressureoneachandeveryindividual,andtherefore,thereisnoexaggerationtosaythatourinnovativeandinventiveabilitycanlayasolidfoundationforourfuture,enablingustosurviveandthriveinthemodernworld.

5）Inspiration,aspirationandperspiration

6）Vision,passionandmission

7）其他词语见最后清单p120

3、论证篇（详见讲义）

1、模糊论证

Rangefrom...（其他见讲义）

2、举例论证

●自己的例子

IcanthinkofnobetterillustrationthantheexampleofmyownvisittoSingapore.OnlyaftergoingshoppingonOrchardroad,themainshoppingdistrictinSingapore,didIrealizewhat"

aparadiseforshopping"

reallywas.OnlyafterroamingintheCityHall,thefinancialcenterofSingapore,didIexperiencethequickpaceofmodernlife.OnlyafterlyingonthebeachofSentosadidIknowabouttheSingaporeantypicalwayofspendingleisuretime.

●名人的例子（YuMinghong，。

。

）

●社会的例子

Forexample,onaccountoftheadventofthetechnologicallyadvancedsociety,employerstendtohirepeopleequippedwithawiderangeofknowledgeratherthantheoneswithlimitedknowledge.

●瞎编的例子

3、数据论证

Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthestatistic.ExpertsfromtheDepartmentofSociologyinPekingUniversitypointedoutthattheaveragesleepingtimeanadulthaseveryday,comparedwith8hoursinthe1970s,hasdecreasedto6.8hoursduetothebusyworkandstudy.

4、引用论证（开头）

5、假想论证

Imagine/visualize/picture/suppose....

4、思路篇

怎么好写怎么来~

详见讲义

11.7

Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,everyonewanttobesuccessintheircareer.Butmostofthemarestillverycommonpeopleintheworld.Ibelievethatactinglikeothersisfundamentallyimportantoftheoverallachievementofallindividuals,butwhetherdifferentoptionismoreimportantforthesuccess.Recently,thereisagrowingawarenessthat,inordertosucceed,whatyoushouldrememberisthatbeingdifferentfromeveryoneelse.AsfarasIconcerned,thisideamakesitpossibleforustohaveanrightaccesstoachievedestinationisreadilyavailable.

ThefirstreasonthatIwouldliketoelaborateuponisthatdifferentopiniongivesusmoreopportunitytosucceedinourcareer.TakeBillGatesforinstance,whenhewasafreshmanintheHarvarduniversity,hehadagreatinterestingincomputerprogramming.Inordertomakeasuitablesoftware

forthePC,helefthisuniversitytosetuphisowncompanycalledMicrosoftwhichisoneofthebiggestenterpriseintheworldnowadays.Obviously,withouthisuniqueoption,considerablenumerousthoughtheknowledgeandskillsthathecanobtainintheHarvarduniversity,theycannotcompetewiththebenefitsthatcreatehiscompanybringsabout.

Successis,withoutdoubt,thetargetallthehumanbeingswanttobe.However,havingaspecialoptionormakingaunusualchoiceisonlyoneofthevariouspatternforustoachievesuccess.ThusIbelievethatitiscrucialforeveryonetomaintainthatnomatterimitatingothersorhavingownoptiondifferentfromothers,weshouldbearinmindthatwhatisthemostimportantisthatwemustknowwhatisthethingwewantto.Onlyinthiswaycanwepursueouraspirationinarightwayandrealizethemintheend.Ontheotherhand,wehadbettertoneglectthebehaviorthatblindlypursuethedifferentpatternfromcommon.

Toconclude,Ibelievethatthepersonwhoreallyunderstandwhathisdreamisexactlycannaturallychoosetheirpatternstoachievetheirsuccess.Inaddition,itiscrucialforeveryonetofindhisappropriatewaystobesuccess.Admittedly,noonehavetheabsolutelysamepatternstorealizeourdream.Thus,Ihavetoagreewiththestatementwrittenabove,thattodistinguishtheimportanceofimitatingotherorkeepingdifferentideaisinsignificant.