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先划档次：
A档18~15分B档14.5~12分C档11.5~8分D档3.5~0分
然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。
三.学生常出现的问题：
1.内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。
2.议论过多，描写不足。
大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。
应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。
3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。
尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：
ImustlearnEnglishwell.就可以换成：
ItisimportantformetolearnEnglishwell.
4.结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。
应该使用总分或总分总的结构。
5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。
多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导
（一）初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。
6.连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。
可以加入一些：
比如:
tomysurprise（让我惊讶的是）,what’smore（而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。
意思也能更流畅地表达。
四．中考写作高频使用词组、句法
1.作文开头的有用句
Asweallknow,Asitisknowntoall,It’sknowntoallthat…It’scommonknowledgethat…It’scommonlyacceptedthat…Thereisnodenyingthat…Howtimeflies!
Inablinkofaneye,Timeflieslikeaspeedingarrow,Timegoesliketheflowingwater.
2、中间分层部分的有用结构:
分正反两面论述:
Ononehand,Ontheotherhand分两点：
Foronething,Foranother,分三点：
Firstly,Secondly,Lastbutnotleast
3、结尾部分
Allinall,Inaword,Inconclusion,Inbrief,Inshort,Toputeverythinginashell,概括的说，简单的说Lastbutnotleast
组织语言发表观点的Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,Inmyeyes,AsfarasIamconcerned,Believeitornot,
表示递进的InadditionFurthermoreMoreimportantlyWhat’smoreMoreover其他与“我”有关的写作材料1、重点句型It`s+a.forsb.todosth.So+a./ad.Thatsucha+a.+n.thattoo…todoNot….untilThat’swhy+句子那是。
。
的原因It’ssaidthat+句子There’snodoubtthat+句子毫无疑问·
·
Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子毫无疑问·
There’snoneedtodo没必要做·
There’snopointindoing做某事毫无意义2、提建议Hadbetterdo/notdoHow/whataboutdoingWhynotdo/whydon`t+句子IthinkyoushoulddoIsuggestthatyoushoulddoIfIwereyou,Iwoulddo我要是你的话，我会做```It’sbesttodo3、表示喜欢，感兴趣Like/love/enjoydoingBefondof/bekeenonsth.PrefertodoAratherthandoBBeinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestin4、努力做```Trytodo/strivetodoMakeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodoTryone’sbest/doone’sbesttodoDowhat/everythingsbcantodo5、打算做·
/计划做·
Intendtodo/plantodoBegoingtodoDecidetodoDeterminetodo=bedeterminetodoMakeupone’smindtodo6、表示想/希望Wanttodo=wouldliketodoHopetodoExpecttodoWishtodoConsiderdoing7、其他有用的短语Fromnowon/soonerorlater/inthenearfutureHavepositiveattitudetowards/enrichmyknowledge/learn…byheart/Meetwithvariouskindsofdifficulties/facedifficultiesbravely/overcomethedifficultiesPlayanimportantrole/partin….8、其他有用的句式Forthereasonabove,/Afterall/Asforme,/Franklyspeaking/Generallyspeaking/Believeitornot,/AsaGradeNinestudent,/Thereasonsareasfollows,People’sviewon…varyfrompersontoperson
4、增添亮点使用复合句和谚语谚语举例Ifirmlybelievethat“Aforeignlanguageisaweaponinthestruggleoflife”.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Amanbecomeslearnedbyaskingquestions.”It’scommonknowledgethattheroadtosuccessisnotalwaysfullofroses.Anoldsayinggoes,“Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.”
五．2002-2013上海中考英语作文题目集锦
2002Myfavoritething（s）我的心爱之物
2003TobealovelyShanghainese做一个可爱的上海人
2004LeaveSchool毕业时分
2005Growingpainsandgains成长的烦恼
2006Ihaveadream我有一个梦
2007AStoryaboutMyParent（s）一个关于我父/母的故事
2008LoveAroundMe爱在我身边
2009Iwanttodosomethingformyschool我想为我的学校做点什么
2010I'
mproudofmyself我为我自己感到自豪
2011MyFavouriteThing（s）我的心爱之物
2012IfyouareJoe.yourfriendBettyisupsetbecauseshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议。
2013Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself”．（以“如何保护自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文）
六．近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享
2009命题作文
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”.（以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）
（注意：
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下内容仅供参考）
l
Whatdoyouwanttodoforyourschool?
2
Whydoyouwanttodoit?
3Howareyougoingtodoit?
例文1：
Iwanttomakeschoolclean.Youmaythinkitisverysimple.ButIdon'
tthinkso.Ourteachersaid,"
Schoolisyourhome,youshouldkeepitclean."
ButIhaveneverdoneanythingtomakeschoolclean.Forexample,Ihavenevertoldmyclassmatetopickuprubbishafterhethrewitontheground.Ialsothrewtherubbishontheground.SoIwanttomakeschoolcleansothateveryonecanforgiveme.Duringthissummerholiday,Iwillgotoschooltomakeschoolclean.Ofcourse,Iwilldoitwithmyclassmates.Wewillmakeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnexttermaswell.Now,doyouthinkitissimple?
2Onepossibleversion
IwanttodosomethingformyschoolI'
mleavingmyschool.Iwanttoplantatreeinmyschoolgarden.Ihavefoundtherearetoomanybuildingsandfewtreesinourschoolyard,soIwanttomakemyschoolmuchgreenerandmorebeautiful.IfIplantatreethere,maybemoreandmorestudentswilldoasme.Intheirsparetime,thestudentscanreadunderthetrees.
2010命题作文
上海中考英语作文题:
I'
mproudofmyself
1、Whatkindofpersonareyou?
2、Whatmakesyouproudofyourself（Giveanexample/examples）
3、Whyareyouproudofyourself?
要求：
至少60字
范文：
1
Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.Butasweallknow,thestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup.Butmyparentsencouragedme:
"
impossibleisnothing,"
youcouldchallengeyourself!
"
sowiththeencouragementofthem,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn'
tgetthegoodmark,Iknew,Iwon.IcreatedamiracleformyselfandIwassoproudofmyself!
2.Iamproudofmyself
Thewheeloflifehasrolledfastthroughthepastfifteenyears.Bylookingbackwards,I’msoproudofmyselfbecauseI’vegrownintoastrong-mindedperson.Itwasthefirsttimeformetoclimbahighmountainalone.Atfirst,Ifeltmybodywasfilledwithenergy.Astimewentby,tirednessmademystepslowdown.Formanytimes,theideaofgivingupthejourneyappearedinmymind.Butthesaying“Accumulatedwaterbecomesariver.”enabledmetomoveon.Thoughthepowerofonestepseemedsoweak,Iinsistedonclimbingtothetop.WhenIsucceeded,IfeltIhadreachedanewheightinmylife.HowproudI’mofbeingastrong-mindedperson.
3.Iamproudofmyself
Iusedtobeagirlwithfewwords.LastmonthIfailedintheexam.IfeltsodepressedthatIcouldn’thelpcrying.However,mymothertoldme,“Thelifeisatoughroadfullofupsanddowns.Everyonehastoexperiencethelowtimes.”Herencouragingwordsliftedmeup.Imadeupmymindtoprepareforthenextexam.Ialwayslistenedtotheteachercarefullyanddidmyhomeworkattentively.Tomysurprise,Iachievedthebestgradeintheexam.Atthattime,Iactuallyfeltproudofmyself.I’mproudbecauseIachievedsuccessaswellascourage.NowI’mmoreactivethanbefore,andIalwaysbelieveaslongasyoukeepyourheartfacingthesun,theworldwillalwaysbringyounewhopes.
2011话题补全式作文
Writing（作文）共18分
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“I’mamemberof“
（以“我是……的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子”
提示：
你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作为家庭，班级，社区额的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。
Usethefollowingpointsasareference
Areyougladtobeamemberof……？
Whatdoyoudoinit?
Howdoyoufeelassuchamember?
例文：
I’maMemberoftheSingingandDancingClubHello,everyone!
I’mverygladtobeamemberoftheSingingandDancingClub.Ihavebeeninthisclubfor2years.I’manactorintheclub.Ilikesinginganddancingverymuch.Isinganddancewithmyclassmatesonweekends.ThoughIamverytired,Iliketosinganddanceeveryday.Itmakesmefeelveryhappy.
2
Inthisworld,everyfamilyhasamother,afather,adaughterorason.Forplentyofpeople,familiesareveryimportant.whenyouareverysaid,youcanfoundoneortwopersonstomakeyoufeelhappiness,thisisyoufamily.
Iamverygoldtobecomemyfamilymember,becauseIhaveaprettygoodparentandafairlyyoungerbrother.WhenIcomeback,Ialwaysfeelfreedomandrelaxed.Mymotherisakindcook;
shehaslotsofexperienceincooking,somybrotherandIarehealthy.
Asadaughter，Ishouldn'
tmakemyparentsworry.Asasister,lshouldlookaftermybrother.lwanttobeagreatmemberofmyfamily,lwouldtrymybesttodowhatlshoulddointhefamily
2012书信类作文
Writing（作文）:
（共20分）
Writealetterinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信）
SupposeyouareJoe.YourfriendBettyisupsetaboutacomingexamforshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.Whatdoyouthink?
Trytoofferhersomeadvice.（假设你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。
请给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。
Knowingthatyoucaretoomuchabouttheresult,Iamquiteworried.Actually,itisnousebeingupsetdespitetheimportanceoftheresult.Therearesomeeffectivewaystocalmdown.Aboveall,keepingremindingyourselftostayinpeaceisthemosthelpful.Besides,itwillhelpyoutorelaxifyousparesometimeforrecreationalactivitieslikesports.Finally,talktoyourparentsandfriends,whoarealwaysreadytocomfortyou.AsissaidbySteveJobs,“thejourneyisthereward.”Iamsureyouwillgetthroughthissituation.
2.
DearBetty,Howtimeflies!
Theexamisfinallynearathand.Importantasitistoyou,youreallyshouldn'
tcaretoomuchabouttheresultandgetyourselfoverlyupset.Remember
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