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desk/writingdesk书桌;
withdeepsatisfaction心满意足地;
makeafeasibleplan制定一个可行计划
话题关键词
possess/ownbooks;
readbooks;
satisfyone’svanity满足某人的虚荣学;
makeprogress
行文思路
第一段:
描述图片。
第二段:
明确图片所揭示的现象,并联系实际予以分析。
第三段:
提出建议,并表达期许
优秀范文
Intheleftpicture,amanislollingbackinhiscomfortablechair,smugaboutashelffullofbooksinfrontofhim.“WhatagreatnumberofbooksIhave!
”hesaidtohimself,yetobviouslyheshowsnointentionofreadinganyofthem.Themanontheright,bycontrast,issittingatadeskwithonlyafewbooksonit,andhasmadeafeasiblereadingplan:
Finishreading20booksthisyear.
Throughsharpcontrast,thepicturesrevealthedifferencebetween“possessingbooks”and“readingbooks”.Forsomepeople,booksarenothingmorethandecorations.Theirstudiesaregorgeouslydecoratedandshelvesfullofbookswhichareusednottoread,buttoshowoffortosatisfytheirvanity.④Totallydifferently,somepeople,fewerbooksthoughtheyhave,regardbooksasspiritualfoodanddoeverythingpossibletoread.⑤Forexample,LinHaiyin,afamouswriter,haswritteninBookstroeFreeloader’sJournalthatwhenshewasyoung,shealwayswenttoabookstoreandreadthereinasecretivewayforlackofmoney,rainorshine.⑥Itwastheverythirstforknowledgethatmadeherawriterwithgreatachievements.
“Booksareasteppingstonetohumanprogress”,butasbooksarenotequaltoknowledgeandunreadbookswon’thelp,weshouldreadasinglebookcarefullyinsteadofmerelycollectingthousandsofbookstomakeprogress.Furthermore,everythingelseshouldalsobedealtwithinadown-to-earthway.JustasPresidentXionceputit,“Emptytalkwouldleadacountryastray,andhardworkcanrevitalizeanation”,onlythroughcontinuingefforts,canindividualsadvancesteadilyandtheChinesenationachievegreatrejuvenation.
286words
必备表达
lollv.懒洋洋地坐着
smuga.自鸣得意的
shownointentionofdoing
bycontrast相比之下
feasiblea.可行的
revealv.显示,揭露
possessv.拥有
nothingmorethan不过是
decorationn.
gorgeouslyad.华丽地
showoff
vanityn.虚荣
freeloadern.占便宜者
secretivea.遮掩的
rainorshine风雨无阻
thirstfor...渴望......
steppingstone进身之阶
down-to-eartha.脚踏实地的
astrayad.离开正确道路
advancev.取得进展
steadilyad.稳定地
rejuvenationn.振兴
精彩句式
Forexample,(插入语表举例)LinHaiyin,afamouswriter,haswritteninBookstroeFreeloader’sJournalthat(引导词)whenshewasyoung,shealwayswenttoabookstoreandreadthereinasecretivewayforlackofmoney,rainorshine.
句子形成步骤:
1写出简单句
InBookstoreFreeloader’sJournal,LinHaiyinhaswrittenastory.
Whenshewasyoung,shehadnomoneytobuybooks.
Shewenttoabookstoreandreadtheresecretly.
Shewenttherenomatterwhattheweatherwaslike.
2利用连词将简单句整合
LinHaiyinhaswritteninBookstoreFreeloader’sJournalthatwhenshewasyoungandhadnomoneytobuybooks,shewenttoabookstoreandreadtheresecretlynomatterwhattheweatherwaslike.
3通过添加同位语,替换动词、状语等实现逻辑顺畅、使表达更加准确
LinHaiyin,afamouswriter,haswritteninBookstoreFreeloader’sJournalthatwhenshewasyoung,shealwayswenttoabookstoreandreadthereinasecretivewayforlackofmoney,rainorshine.
4增加衔接成分,连贯上下文
Forexample,LinHaiyin...
篇章衔接
第一段(3句):
分别描述左右两幅图中的人物。
第二段(6句):
明确现象,并予以分析。
1st句揭示图片所反映的现象:
“有书”与“读书”间存在差别。
2nd、3rd句分析“有书”却不“读书”的人;
4-6句分析描述可能“没书”但踏实“读书”的人,并举林海音女士的例子予以说明。
第三段(3句):
提出建议。
1句指出不能将“知识”与“书本”、“有书”与“读书”混为一谈,应“读书”而非仅仅“有书”。
2、3句将话题由读书延伸到做其他事情,强调脚踏实地对个人和民族的重要性。
思路拓展
图画为“人生哲理类”话题。
范文中,第二段联系实际,分析现象,第三段提出建议。
另外,也可在第二段将笔墨重点放在分析正确做法的好处,错误做法的弊端上。
应用模板
Intheabovepictureappear(s)(图片中心人物/事物).
Itreflectstwodistinct(图片浅层现象),whicharisefromdifferentcognitionin(或:
attitudestoward)(深层原因).______intheleftpicture(或:
ontheleft)representsthosewhoare______,seeing______.Withthisattitude,______.Incontrast,______intherightpicture(或:
ontheright)______(行为),regarding_____.Suchattitudehasanenergizingeffect,leadingtoenormoussuccessin____.Forexample,_____.
AsSeneca,anancientRomanphilosopher,onceputit,“Almostanysituation---goodorbad---isaffectedbytheattitudewebringto.”Therefore,itisadvisableto____.
正如古罗马哲学家西尼加所说的那样:
“任何一种处境——无论是好是坏——都受到我们面对处境的态度的影响。
”因此,明智的做法是______.