北京中考英语作文范文分类精华篇Word文档格式.docx

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4.写作注意以下几点：

避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。

注意长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板长短句交错使用（注意：

应突出主题句；

长句子并非越长越好）。

【阅卷关注】

阅卷关注哪几点——

一、要点：

全部图片或问题（要点决定分/语言准确）；

二、单词：

提示词语全用上+单词拼写（字数达标/标点符号和大小写/fourteen等数字）；

三、语法：

高级（多用句型/适当加点谚语）+语法出错（三单、时态、避免Chinglish）；

四、卷面：

书写规（过渡词可使上下文连贯）+不要求漂亮但要求工整。

作文分类击破

【一、写人记事类】

（感恩/感朋友老师父母、难忘经历、微笑、鼓励、毕业感想、暑期计划等）

【01参考文----适用于感恩/感、难忘经历、最喜欢的老师/朋友等：

】

Mylifeinmiddleschoolwillcometotheendsoon.Duringthepastthreeyears,myEnglishteachergavemesomuchhelpthatIwillneverforgether.

　　IwasnotgoodatEnglish,ItriedmybesttolearnitbutIcouldn’tgetgoodgrades,soIdecidedtogiveitup.MyEnglishteacherknewthat,shenotonlyencouragedmetogoonlearningbutalsohelpedmewithmyEnglishafterclass.Withherhelp,Imadegreatprogress.

　IwasmovedbyherandIwasreallythankfultoher.NowIfeelmoreconfidentthanbefore.I’msureIcanlearnEnglishverywellinthefuture.

【02参考文----适用于难忘的学校活动,、鼓励、合作、坚持不懈的精神等：

Duringthethreeyears,ourschoolhasheldvariousactivities,amongwhichtheactivityofclimbingXiangshanleavesmethedeepestmemory.

Lastterm,myclassmatesandIhadaschooltriptoXiangshanPark.There,weweredividedintogroupsandthefirstgroupthattoppedthemountainwouldwinabigprize.Ourgrouptriedourbesttoclimbasquicklyaspossible.ButsoonIfeltdizzyandwasoutofbreath.Noticingthis,myteammatescametomeimmediately.SomeofthemgavemecandiessothatIcouldgetmoreenergy.OtherscarriedthebagformesothatIcouldclimbthemountaineasily…“Youcandoit!

”everyoneencouragedme.Atthatmoment,Ifeltdeeplymovedandreallypowerful.Atlast,wewerethefirsttotopthemountain.

Thisactivitynotonlygaveusachancetokeepourbodyfitandenjoythebeautifulscenery,butalsoletmefeelthepowerofteamwork.Aunitedgroupcanbringuswarmthandstrengthandcanleadustosuccess.

【03参考文----感恩父母：

There’snodoubtthatparentshavegivenmealotsinceIwasborn.Withtheircare,Igrowuphappily.SoIthinkitisnecessarytodosomethingspecialforthemtoshowmygratitude.

　　　Bothofmyparentslovemusic.SoitwouldbeagreatideatobuyawonderfulCDforthem.LastSunday,Iwenttoabookstoreandchoseoneamongthetop10.Whilewewerehavingdinnertogether,IplayedtheCD.Itwasbeautiful.Withgreatjoy,theygavemeawarmhugandabigsmile.Ifeltverysweet.

　　　IwasreallyproudthatIdidsomethingformyparents.Theirsmileswerethebestencouragementforme.Imadeupmymindtodothingslikethismoreoften.

【04参考文----帮助他人、志愿活动：

Ithinkhelpingothersisimportantandnecessary.Takingpartinvolunteerworkisoneofthegreatestwaystogiveahandtothosewhoneedhelp.AndIlikeitverymuch.

IrememberIhelpedtheoldpeopleintheoldpeople’shomelastSaturday.First,Icleanedtheroomandthewindowsforthembecauseitwasnotconvienientforthemtodosuchthins.What’smore,Itoldthemsomeinterestingstories,sangsomeEnglishsongsforthemandtheymovedtotears.Whenitwastimetosaygoodbye,Ihuggedthemandpromisedtoseethemagain.

Everyonemayhavetroubleinlifeandourlittlekindactcanmakeabigdifference

intheirlife.Infact,helpingothersishelpingourselves.Iwilldothesameinthefuturebecauseitcanbringmeandotherpeoplehappiness.

【05参考文----喜欢的hobby、活动：

Itisgoodtolearnaboutyourschoolactivities.NowI’lltellyouaboutmine.

Atmyschoolwehavemanyfunactivitiestotakepartin.Wehaveswimming,basketball,badminton,andpingpong.Myfavoriteactivityisbasketball.Iplaywithmyfriendseverydayafterschool.Basketballisateamsportwhereteam-matespasstheballtoeachothertothrowitintoahoopforpoints.Theteamwiththemostpointsattheendofthegamewins.Inbasketballitisgoodtobetallbecauseitiseasiertoscorepoints.

Iliketoplaybasketballbecauseitisateamsportanditisalsoagoodwaytogetexercise.Basketballisalsoagoodgametolearnhowtoworkwellwithothers.

【06参考文----Hobby、读书类：

IhavegreatinterestinreadingmagazinesbecauseIlikereadingmanykindsofarticlesinthem,suchstories,news,science,jokesandsoon.Thestoriesgivemelifelessons,thejokesmakemelaughandthenewskeepmeknowingwhathapensaroundme.Icangetlotsofinformationaswellasenjoyalotofbeautifulpicturesinthemagazines.

Ienjoyreadingmagazinesbecausetheycannotonlyhelpmestudybetterandbutalsomakemerelaxedandhappyeveryday.

【二、给予建议类】

（一句问候、两句问题）

第一段：

很高兴收到来信

针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受

主动提出给别人建议

第二段：

3条具体建议及原因

第三段：

提出希望和祝愿

开头句：

表达同情理解+主动提建议

IunderstandyourfeelingsbecauseIoncehadthesimilarproblemasyoudonow.

It’sverycommonforstudentstodosth.andmanystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.

Letme 

offer 

you 

some 

useful 

advice.

Here’smyadvice.

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

建议类句型：

•Youaresupposedtodo....

•You'

dbetterdo....

•Whynot/don'

tyoudo....

•It'

sagoodideatodo....

•IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...

结尾句：

•IhopewhatIsaidcanbeofsomehelptoyou.

•Justhaveatry.I’mlookingforwardtohearinggoodnewsfromyou!

•Tryyourbest,andyou'

llmakegreatprogress!

【07学习类----参考文：

DearLucy,

　　I’mveryhappytohearfromyou.Don’tworrytoomuch.It’sverycommonforstudentstodislikememorizingandmanystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.Here’smyadvice.

　　Firstofall,youhadbetterpreviewthenewlessonsandwritedownthedifficultpointsbeforelessons,whichcanmakeyoubecomeinterestedinwhattheteacherssayinclass.What’smore（Besides）,youshouldlistencarefullyandtrytotakepartintheclassactivities.You’llfindthatEnglishandhistoryarenotasboringasyouthink.Lastbutnotleast,youalsoneedtoreviewthelessonsregularlyafterclass.Inthisway,youcanunderstandbetterandmemorizemorequickly.Ifyoustillfeelunhappy,whynothaveatalkwithyourteacherandaskforhelp?

　　Ireallyhopemyadvicecanhelpyoumakegreatprogresswithyourstudy.

　　Yours,

　　ZhangFang

【08解决与父母矛盾----参考文：

DearAlice,

Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangeton/alongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.

Firstofall,whenfacingthiskindofsituation,it'

sveryimportantforyoutokeepcalminsteadofarguingwithyourparents,whichcanonlymakethingsworse.What'

smore,tosolvetheproblems,you'

dbettermakeaschedule,setupagoalforeachdayandshowthemtoyourparents.Besides,wearesupposedtotrytohaveaheart-to-heartcommunicationwithourparentsinordertogettheirunderstandingandsupport.Lastbutnotleast,whynotaskyourteacherforhelpinsteadofarguingwithyourparents?

Yourteachermayhavesomegoodideas.

IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.

【09运动/健康类----参考文：

Allofuswanttobehealthy.Butsomeofthestudents/peopleoftenhaveacold.Wesometimeshaveafeverandfeeltired.Inordertohaveahealthybody,wecandomanythings.

Firstofall,weshouldpayattentiontoourdietormeals.Weshouldeatmorefruitandvegetabletokeepourselveshealthyandstrong.What’smore,weshouldoftenwashourhandsandopenthewindowstokeeptheairintheroomfresh.Then,weneedenoughsleeporrest.Stayinguptoolateisbadforourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,it'

salsoagoodhabitforustodomoresports,suchasplayingballgames,running,swimmingandsoon.Becauseitcannotonlyhelpuskeepfitbutalsoimproveourhealthagainstillness.

Inaword,ifwealldothesethings,Ibelievewewillhaveastrongbody.Sowhynotfindsomefriendstodoexerciseandhavefuntogether?

Ihopeyouarehealthyandenjoyyourlife.

【三、环保类】

【10治理空气污染----参考文：

Theairpollutionisworseandworsetoday.Notonlydoesitaffecttheplacewelive,italsohasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.Therefore,it’stimeforustopaymoreattentiontoit.

Thefirstthingwecandoistotakebusesorridebikesinsteadofdrivingprivatecars.Ithelpstoreducethedirtygasproducedbythecars.What’smore,wecanplantmoretreesandflowersbecausetheycanprovideuswithmorefreshair.Lastbutnotleast,ourgovernmentcanalsotakeactionstopreventfactoriesfromproducingtoomuchsmoke.

Infact,eventhesimplesteverydayactivitiescanmakearealdifferencetotheenvironment.Ibelieveaslongaswetryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment,wecanmaketheworldabetterplacetolivein.

【11低碳生活----参考文：

Nowadays,anewlifestylecalledlowcarbonlifeisspreadingeverycornerofourcountrywhichmeansthereislowenergyandnowaste.

Low-carbonlifeisgoodforeveryone.Tohelpwiththeenvironment,Ihavesomeideas.First,wehadbetterwalkorrideabiketoschoolinsteadoftakingacar.Second,wehadbetternotuseplasticbagsanymore.Noonecanstandthe"

whitepollution"

.So,itiswisetousebagswhichcanbereusedagainandagain.Third,weshouldtrytousethingsthatcanberecycledandweshouldreusebooksaslongaspossible.What'

smore,weshouldneverforgettoturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroomandturnoffthetapintime.

Ithinkit’sourdutytolivealow-carbonlife.Andeventhesimplestactivitiescanmakearealdifferencetotheenvironment.Allinall,ifeveryonedoessomethingfortheenvironment,Ibelievetheearthwillbeabetterplace.Let‘sdoitnow.

【四、介绍类】

【12介绍旅游----参考文：

I’mgladtohearfromyou.ThebesttimetocometoBeijingisduringthespring.Theweatherisnottoohotortoocold,soi