雅思英语作文 父亲在养育孩子的过程中也应受到重视 Fatherhoodmotherhood文档格式.docx

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（NeutralNotion）

Forninetotenmonths,awomanenduresthedrasticphysiologicalandemotionalchangesthatpregnancybringsabout.Becauseofthis,awomanhasthegreatestrighttodecideonwhethershewillhaveachildornot.Anideologyexiststhatbecausewomentakefullresponsibilityfordecisionsaboutchildbearing,shealsoisresponsibleforrearingthechild.Ibelievethatthisideaisabsolutelyfaulty.Firstly,decisionsonchildbearingmaybegreatlyaffectedbythewoman'

schoice.However,otherfactorsarealsoconsideredsuchasacouple'

sfinancialabilitytosupportachild'

sgrowth.Asidefromthat,parenthoodisasharedresponsibility.Afather'

sroleisnotlimitedtospermdonationbutalsoincludeschangingdiapersinthemiddleofthenight.Also,afathershouldalwaysbeinvolvedinchildrearingbecausethereareactivitiesthatarebestsuitedtobedonebyafatherfigure,suchasbringingthechildtoasportsevent.Consequently,achildwhorarelyseesone'

sfathercreatesanegativeperceptionofhimandmaypossiblycreateastrongerrelationshipwiththemotheralone.Inaddition,womenaredifferentinthemodernera.Morewomenarebreakingthetraditionalviewthattheyareconfinedtothefourwallofthehomeasahousewife.Therefore,thereshouldbeajointagreementbetweenbothparentstodividethetasks.Tociteanexample,amotherwouldsendthechildtoschoolwhileafatherwillbeinchargeofpickingupthechildafterclass.Inconclusion,Ifirmlybelievethatitistimetoabolishtheideaofputtingtheentirechildrearingworkonwomen.Theideaofsharedparenthoodmustbeimplementedtokeepupwiththechangeinfamilydynamicsthatoccurredovertheyears.WordCount298

ModelAnswer2:

Ibelievethatchild-rearingshouldbetheresponsibilityofbothparentsandthat,whilsttheroleswithinthatpartnershipmaybedifferent,theyareneverthelessequalinimportance.Insomesocieties,ithasbeenmadeeasierovertheyearsforsingleparentstoraisechildrenontheirown.However,thisdoesnotmeanthatthetraditionalfamily,withbothparentsprovidingemotionalsupportandrole-modelsfortheirchildren,isnotthemostsatisfactorywayofbringingupchildren.Ofcrucialimportance,inmyopinion,ishowwedefine'

responsibleforbringingthechildrenup'

.Atitssimplest,itcouldmeangivingthefinancialsupportnecessarytoprovideahome,foodandclothesandmakingsurethechildissafeandreceivesanadequateeducation.Thiswouldbethebasicdefinition.Thereis,however,anotherpossiblewayofdefiningthatpartofthequotation.Thatwouldsayitisnotjustafather'

sresponsibilitytoprovidethebasicsforhischildren,whilehiswifeinvolvesherselfintheeverydayactivityofbringingthemup.Rather,heshouldsharethosedailyduties,spendasmuchtimeashisjoballowswithhischildren,playwiththem,readtothem,helpdirectlywiththeireducation,participateveryfullyintheirlivesandencouragethemtosharehis.Itisthissecond,fuller,conceptof'

fatherhood'

thatIaminfavourof,althoughIalsorealisehowdifficultitistoachievesometimes.Theeconomicandemploymentsituationinmanycountriesmeansthatjobsaregettingmore,notless,stressful,requiringlonghoursandperhapslongjourneystoworkaswell.Thereforeitmayremainformanyadesirableidealratherthananachievablereality.

Answer3:

Traditionally,genderroleissuehasalwaysdiscriminatedwomenanditisconsideredawomantoberesponsiblefortheupbringingofchildren.Nowadays,thesetraditionsarechanginggradually.Itisagreedthatbothparentsshouldsharetheseresponsibilitiesandatthesametimeshouldsupporteachother.Thiscanbeprovedbylookingathowfatherswhospendthewholedaywiththeirchildrencanbeagoodmotivatorforthemandmothersarebecomingthebread-earnersforthefamily.Also,itisagreedthatfathersmotivatetheirchildrenmorethanmothersdo.Forexample,malesaremoreinterestedtowardssportsactivities.Firstly,somepeoplearguethatmothershouldtakecareoftheFamily,especiallythekids;

howeverthesethoughtshavechangedoverthetimeandnowadaysfathershavestartedsharingparentalanddomesticresponsibilities.So,bytakingtheirchildrentosportseventssuchasfootballmatches,swimming,etc.willdevelopaninterestforsportsinthem.Thisshowsthatfatherscanmotivateachildtobecomeasportsperson.Secondly,thetraditionofwomenistostayathomeandbringingupchildrenhavechangedandwomenhavestartedtakingworkfromallfields,alongwiththistheyalsotakecareoftheirchildren.Forinstance,ithasbeenseenthatmanyworkingwomentakematernityleaveduringandaftertheirpregnancyperiodandcontinuetoworkaftertheseleaves.Somewomenprefertodoworkfromhomeifprovidedbytheiremployer.Insomecases,womenmayhavebettercareerprospectsthantheirhusbands.So,thefatherhadtotakepaternityleaveandbecomeahousehusband,whichisbecomingmorecommonnowadays.Thus,itisclearfromtheabovediscussionwomencanbeabread-earningpersonforafamily.Followingthislookathowbothparentsshareresponsibilityforcaringtheirchildren.Thus,ithasbeenproventhatfathersareequallyresponsiblefortheupbringingoftheirchildren.

Answer4:

Inthepast,itwasacommoncustomthattheonewhowasresponsiblefortheupbringingofchildren-wasthemotheronly;

thefathers'

responsibilitywastoearnthelivingsandprovideagoodlife.However,achangeinthebelieftookplaceinthepreviousfewyears;

nowadays,somepeopleclaimthatfatherhoodshouldbeemphasisedmuchmore.Althoughsomepeopleseethatfathersmustcontributeinthebringingupofchildrenandit'

snotonlymother'

sresponsibility,otherpeoplestillseethatit'

sonlymother'

sresponsibility."

Ofcoursemeandmyhusband,George!

"

saidMissKarmenwhenshewasaskedwhowasinchargeofbringingupherchild,sheadded,"

Oh,Ireallycannotdothisalone;

mychildneedsbothofus"

.Ifachildinteractsandplayswithhismotheronly,thatwillleadtoimproperdealingwithotherpeopleincludinghisdad.Thefactthatfatherformoneyandmotherforupbringingisabsolutelyoutdated.Akidneedsboththefatherandmother'

scarebutfatherwouldbemostlybusyatworkssoultimatelythemotherwouldhavetospendmoretimewiththekind.Butthefathershouldspendasmuchtimeaspossiblewithhiskidsaftergettingbackfromthework.Actually,somepeoplestilladheretotheirpointofviewregardlessthepriorinformationclaimingthatparentsmustcontribute,yetintheirway;

eachoneisresponsibleforonlyonething.Wehaveanexample,RobertFrans,ateacherinahighschoolinAustralia;

hesaid:

"

WhyIhavetotiremyselfmore,it'

smywife'

sownbusiness"

.FormeIactuallythinkthatfatherhoodoughttobeemphasised,butnotasmuchasmotherhood.Ithinkmothers'

shareinupbringingshouldbemorethanthatoffathers.

Answer5:

Intoday'

ssociety,bothparentsplay'

sanequalroleinthefamilylifetobringupthechildren.Itisimportanttosharetheirresponsibilitiesequallytomaketheirchildasagoodcitizenoftomorrow.Hence,Istronglyagreewiththestatementthatlookingafterthechildrenisthesharedresponsibilityofthepartners.Firstly,inthisadvancedworld,womenarealsoeducatedasmenareandinsomecases,womenarerathermoretalentedthanthemen.Itpavesthewayforthemtoworkaswellandbethebreadwinnersofthefamily.Moreover,nowadays,becauseofthehighlivingexpenseandalsoinordertomeetthebasicneedsofthechildrensuchasfood,clothes,housing,adequateeducationandsoin,itbecamemandatoryforbothmembersofthefamilytowork.Secondly,itisessentialforachildtoexperienceloveandcarefrombothfatherandmothertoattainagoodcharacter.Theideaisthatthefatherneedstofindleisuretimetospendwiththechildandmakehim/herenergeticbyteachingoutsidesportsinsteadofcomputergames.Likewise,themotherneedstotakecareofthebehaviourandshouldteachgoodmoralsoflife.Asaresult,thechildwillbecomehealthyphysicallyandemotionally.Ontheotherhand,therearemanychildreninthisworldlivingwithasingleparent.Althoughtheyseemtobehappierinfrontofthesociety,therewouldbesomethingtheylackintheirpersonallife.Iftheyweregivenanopportunitytosharetheirfeelings,definitelytheywillpointoutthevaluesoffamilyrelationships.Forinstance,theymustbesurethattheywouldhavedonebetterintheirlifeiftheywerebroughtupinalovingfamilywithbothmotherandfather.Toconclude,thereisasayingthat"

Parentsarethebestrolemodelsfortheirchildren"

.Therefore,itisworthsharingtheirresponsibilitiesamongthemtoprovidebrighterfuturefortheirchildren.

ModelAnswer6:

EssayTopic:

Fatherhoodoughttobeemphasizedasmuchasmotherhood.Theideathatwomenaresolelyresponsiblefordecidingwhetherornottohavebabiesleadsontotheideathattheyarealsoresponsibleforbringingthechildrenup.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?

SampleAnswer:

Inmodernsocieties,womenhaveactivelyenteredintothelabourm