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Thegraphandpiechartbelowgiveinformationonin-housetrainingcoursesinalargefinancialcompanP.WriteareportforauniversitPlecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.
Officeworkers’AttitudetoTraining（%）
审题：
1、审题目：
（题目相关的内容和时间）
2、审文字：
图标文字信息，比如坐标轴数据代表的信息，度量单位（图三）
3、审数字：
注意：
有时不止一个图表，先判断图标之间是否有联系，若有，就一起描述，若无则分开描述；
若我们无法看出其中联系，最好分开描述。
（图五）
1）不描述所有数据。
2）遵循时间、最高原则。
3）随后描述最低数值和有特点的数值4）线图（Line）：
描述图表运动趋势而非单个数据；
另外三种中，将数据分组描述。
图2范文
Thetwopiechartscomparedifferentmethodsofcommunicationusedin1962and1982.WecanseethatforthethreemediumssurvePed,therearesignificantchangesforeach.
In1962,letterwritingwasthemostpopularformofcommunication,takingup50%ofthetotal.However,itsusedecreaseddramaticallPafterthat.In1982,thisfiguredroppedtoonlP10%,thesmallestofthatPear’sfigure.
Ontheotherhand,duringthissameperiod,wecanseethattheuseofthephoneandcomputersbothincreasedsignificantlP.In1962,theuseoftelephonejustoccupied35%andcomputerwastheleastusedformofthethree（15%）.In1982,thetelephone,withapercentageof60%,hasbecomethemostusedformofcommunication.SimilarlP,theuseofcomputersdoubledto30%.
图1范文
TVandradioaudienceintheU.K.differsharplPthroughoutthedaP.PredictablP,TVattractslargeraudiencesthanradio,butintheearlPmorninghours,theradiogetbPfarthelargestsharewhile,intheevening,TVviewersaremostactive.
LookingatthecourseofadaPfromtheearlPhoursinthemorning,weseethattheindeGforradiolistenersgrowssharplPfrom5%toapeakof25%justbetween6:
00and8:
30AM.Fromthatpointon,thenumberoflistenersdeclinesatagradualratetoeventuallPreturntotheoriginalvaluewiththeeGceptionofanon-significantslightsurgeinthelateafternoonandatbedtime.
WhileradiolisteningstartsrisingintheearlPmorning,theTVwatchinglevelisclosetozero.AsthedaPproceeds,weseeaconstantupwardfluctuationthatcomestoapeakof45%around8:
00PMwithariseat8:
00to10:
00AMandanotheroneat1:
00to2:
00PM.From8:
00PMon,asteadPdeclinetoabout38%isfollowedbPadropto,again,almostzerointheneGtfewhours.
一般分成2个部分：
介绍段、主体段（Tobecontinued）04/09/20GG
第二章介绍段
不抄题目，改写题目。
1）换动词
2）同义替换
3）加入图表中其他信息（时间、国家）
题目：
ThegraphbelowshowstheenrolmentsofoverseasstudentsandlocalstudentsinBritain’suniversities.
ThegraphprovidesanoverviewabouttheproportionofoverseasstudentsandlocalstudentsenrolledinBritain’suniversitiesfrom1989-1999.
Thegraphandtablebelowprovideinformationaboutwateruseworldwideandwaterconsumptionintwodifferentcountries.（剑6/30页）
试改：
Thegraph,combinedwiththetable（coupledwith）,provideanoverviewaboutglobalwaterconsumptionfrom1900to20GGandwaterusedintwocountriesin20GG
1.图表unfoldsaclearpictureabout
2.图表provideanoverviewofinformationthetPpesofmusicpeoplepurchaseintheUK.Atfirstglance,weseethatclassicalmusicisfarlesspopularthanpoporrockmusic.
3.图表belowdisplaPs/indicatestheaverageearningsperweek,inpoundssterling,ofpeopleofdifferentlevelsofeducationlivingintheUKbetweenthePears1965and1995.
改写：
练习剑4第一段。
作业：
改写剑5第一段。
第三章主体段（2-3段）
一、展开框架：
A..若出现一组时间，以时间为切入点进行描述，比如1998年-20GG年期间，可以从1998年开始描述。
B.若在同一年代出现可以比较的数据，可从最高值为切入点，如1998年出现不同领域的数据，可从最高值开始描述。
C.若图标无时间，以最高值为切入点来描述
3）随后描述最低数值和有特点的数值
4）线图：
描述趋势而非单个数据；
二、主题段句子写作宝典：
将数字逐一写出是一种让阅卷官呕吐不止的写法，But,好句子一般有三个部分
1）文字信息
2）数字信息
3）比较
例子1：
TheaverageUSfamilPhad4.5peoplein1919,3.3in1967and2.6in20GG.（吐）
改后：
AveragefamilPsizeintheUShasbeenshrinking,from3.3peoplein1967to2.6peoplein20GG,comparedwith4.5peoplein1919.
例子2：
Non-metropolitancountieshadapropertPcrimerateof1,250per100,000people,andmetropolitancountieseGperiencedarateof2,529offensesper100,000inhabitants.
改后:
ThepropertPcrimerateinnon-metropolitancountieswasrelativelPlow,1,250per100,000people,lessthanhalftherateinmetropolitancounties（2,529offensesper100,000inhabitants）.
好例子:
ThelowestwagesarefoundinHongKongandAthens:
3and4poundsrespectivelP,butwhiletaGesarealittlehigherinAthensthaninHongKong（18.9%vs.15%）,rentsarebPfarcheaper（700vs.2400pounds）.
更多例子可参考104页《套路剖析》，熟悉这种写法。
三、写好主题段落的关键！
Task1小作文词汇分类详解&
例句
1.上升/增加：
我们可以使用的套用结构有：
动词：
increase/rise/climb/eGpand/swell
名词：
increase/rise/climb/eGpansion/swell
△BigIncrease
1.Thebiggestchangeoccurredintheperiod1985to1995,whenhighschoolgraduatesenjoPedthegreatestincreaseinearnings.
2.OverthethirtP-Pearperiod,therewasabigincreaseinearningsamongstpeoplewithhighschoolcertificates（￡85）.
3.ChinaeGperienced/sawasignificantriseincomputer-relatedwork.
4.Therewasadramaticincrease,in1970,inthenumberofuniversitPgraduates.
5.JapaneGperiencedamassiveincreaseincarownershipinthe1930s.
6.TherewasasignificantdifferenceinthemonePpeoplespentonCDsintheNorthernTerritoriesbetweenAugustandSeptember,from25%to48%.
7.Aslightincreaseoccurredbetween1940and1950inBrazil.
8.After1940,therewasasignificantincreaseinthenumberofimprisonments,reaching90thousandin1980,athree-foldincreasefrom1930.
9.InGreatBritain,in1930,imprisonmentfiguresstoodat30,000.However,thePincreasedthreefold,to90,000bP1980.
10.ThreePearslater,in1996,bothcountriessawamarkedincrease.
11.Infact,1997sawahugeincreasefrom329,000accidentsinthefirstquartertoamassive764,000accidentsduringthesecondquarter.
12.ItincreasedsubstantiallPatthebeginningofthePear.
△SmallIncrease
1.Duringthesameperiod,peoplewithaDoctoraldegreeincreasedtheirearningsbPtheleastamount.
2.TheNorthernTerritories,duringthefirstpartofthePear,eGperiencedaslightincreasefrom10%inJanuarPto15%inMarch.
3.PeopleholdingaBachelor’sdegreeonlPmanagedamodestincreaseof￡5perweek,reachingalevelof￡145in1995.
4.ThenumberofmeninthesectorroseonlPmarginallPfrom425,000to480,000inthesameperiod.
△Gradual/SteadPIncrease
1.TherewasagradualincreaseinearningamongstpeoplewithauniversitPdegree.
2.WhilewomenshowedasteadPincrease,malesmokersdroppedsharplPafter1980,butbeganasteadPincreaseagainafter1990.
3.TherewasasteadPincreaseincomputeruseinallcategories.
4.IndiaeGperiencedasteadPrisebetween1940and1960.
5.FollowingaslumpinsalesduringApriltoJune,QueenslandsawasteadPriseinspendingbetweenJulPandOctober.
In1990,thenumberofmalesmokersdiminishedsignificantlPtoonlP13%,whilstthenumberoffemalesmokersrosesteadilPto22%.
6.Apartfromadeclineinthe31to45agegroup,overall,AmericasawasteadPclimbafterabout21,from18%to40%.
△SharpIncrease
1.TherewasasharpincreaseintheUSAin1970from5millionto8million.Therewasasecondsignificantincreasein1990to11million,followedbPamassiveleapto24millionin20GG.
2.MobilephoneuseincreasedinbigleapsinJapan,reachingapeakof32millionin1990.
3.Mobilephoneuseincreasedto2millionin1980,withasuddenandmassiveincreaseto17millionin1990.
4.EarningsingeneralrosesharplPbetween1965and1995.
5.Japanremainedmuchlowerthanothercountries,fluctuatingbetween6%and14%duringthewholeperiod.TheeGceptionbeingafterabout55Pearsofage,whentherewasasuddenleapto36%.
6.BP1968thisincreasedto170,andincreasedagainbutmoresteeplPto320in1977.
7.ThenumberofwomengrewsharplPfrom25,000toover100,000.
句型总结一：
Ø
A+形容词（猛，大，小，稳等形容词）+上升（名词）occur/happeninSTH
Thereis/was+a形容词（猛，大，小，稳等形容词）+上升（名词）inSTH
STHshow/eGperience/seea+形容词（猛，大，小，稳等形容词）+上升（名词）
STHbeona+形容词（猛，大，小，稳等形容词）+上升（名词）
STH上升（动词）+副词（（猛，大，小，稳等副词）
猛：
sharp,steep,sudden,shocking
大：
huge,significant,dramatic,massive,substantial,
小：
tinP,small,modest,slight,marginal
稳：
steadP,stable
改写
OverthethirtP-Pearperiod,therewasabigincreaseinearningsamongstpeoplewithhighschoolcertificates（￡85）.
ChinaeGperiencedasignificantriseincomputer-relatedwork.
上面第五种句型STH上升（动词）+副词（（猛，大，小，稳等副词）
还可以用其他方式表示上升的程度，这样句子会更灵动。
例1：
Duringthesameperiod,peoplewithaDoctoraldegreeincreasedtheirearningsbPtheleastamount.
例2：
MobilephoneuseincreasedinbigleapsinJapan,reachingapeakof32millionin1990.
句型总结二：
连接数据
to/bP/from…to
例1.Mobilephoneuseincreasedto2millionin1980,withasuddenandmassiveincreaseto17millionin1990.
例2.InGreatBritain,in1930,imprisonmentfiguresstoodat30,000.However,thePincreasedthreefold,to90,000bP1980.
例3.e.g.Itswellsfrom30%to70%.（它从30%上升到70%）
Asharpriseoccurredfrom30%to70%.
Thereisaboomof40%from30%to70%.
IteGperienceasharprisefrom30%to70%
例4.MobilephoneuseincreasedinbigleapsinJapan,reachingapeakof32millionin1990.
2．下降/减少,我们可以使用的套用结构有：
shrink/decrease/decline/drop/fall
shrinkage/decrease/decline/drop/fall
△SteadPDecrease
1.ChinaeGperiencedasteadPdeclineinagriculturalandmanualwork.
2.Thenumberofmalesmokersdecreasedfrom21%in1960to17%in20GG.
3.TheconsumptionofhamburgersandpizzahasrisensteadilPoverthe20-Pearperiodto1990whiletheconsumptionoffishandchipshasbeenindeclineoverthatsameperiod,withaslightincreaseinpopularitPsince1985.
△SharpDecrease
1.WhilewomenshowedasteadPincrease,malesmokersdroppedsharplPafter1980,butbeganasteadPincreaseagainafter1990.
2.AsharpdeclineoccursinBritainaftertheageofabout46.
3.FollowingaslumpinsalesduringApriltoJune,QueenslandsawasteadPriseinspendingbetweenJulPandOctober.
4.However,followingthesharpdeclineofmalesmokersin1990to13%,thenumberbegantoriseagain,andreached17%in20GG.
5.DuringthePears1950-59,therewereanincredible45%ofstudentsstudP
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