[实用参考]雅思大作文写作.ppt.ppt

[实用参考]雅思大作文写作.ppt.ppt

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IELTSWriting,SunnyGao,Chapter1预备知识,WorkinpairstodecidewhetherthesestatementsaboutIELTSaretrueorfalse.1.Grammaristhemostimportantassessmentcriteriainwriting.2.IELTSExaminerscantellwhensomeoneisgivingamemorizedanswer.3.IELTSandTOEFLbothuseexaminerstoassesswritingandspeaking.4.YourIELTSscoreinChinawillvarydependingonwhichcityyoutakethetest.5.IELTSscoresarecarefullymonitoredandmanyaredoublechecked.,F,T,T,F,T,Chapter1预备知识,学术类雅思写作考试内容,Task2议论文两种形式Argumentation80%1.题目给出一方观点（反方观点隐含），问Doyouagreeordisagree?

Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

例：

Inordertolearnalanguagewell,weshouldlearnaboutthecountryaswellastheculturesandlifestylesofthepeoplewhospeakit.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

2.题目中给出双方观点，要求分析正反方观点后做出结论SomesayOthersarguethatWhatisyouropinion?

Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Expresssomereasonsforbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Doyouthinkitsadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?

Task2中报告Report，出现概率为20%题目中没有观点，只给出一种现象，让考生分析该现象的causes,solutions,effects.通常题目的标志词为Whatare？

例子：

Today,therearemoreimagesofdisastersandviolenceinthemedia.Whatarethecausesandwhatareyoursolutions?

雅思写作评分标准,TRTaskresponseTA-TaskachievementCCCoherenceandCohesionLRLexicalresourceGRGrammaticalrangeandaccuracy,雅思写作评分标准,IELTSTASK2Writingbanddescriptors,TaskAchievement,CoherenceandCohesion,LexicalResource,GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy,CommentsonSampleScript2（InternationalTourism）,Band7TA:

Thecandidateaddressesbothaspectsofthetaskandpresentsaclearpositionthroughouttheresponse.Mainideasaregenerallyclearandrelevant,althoughsomesupportingideaslackfocus（asintheopeningofparagraph2）.CC:

Ideasaregenerallywell-organised,andthereisaclearoverallprogressionwithonlyminorlapseswherepointsarenotwell-integratedintotheargument.Arangeofcohesivedevicesisusedeffectively,althoughthereissomeunder-useofconnectivesandsubstitution,andsomelapsesintheuseofreferencing.LR:

Agoodrangeofvocabularyisusedwithsomeflexibilityandprecision.Thecandidatehasagoodawarenessofstyleandcollocation,althoughoccasionalawkwardexpressionsorinappropriaciesinwordchoiceandwordformlimittherating.GRA:

Likewise,agoodrangeofsentencestructuresisusedwithahighlevelofaccuracyresultinginfrequenterror-freesentences.Minorsystematicerrorspersist,however,andpunctuationisunhelpfulattimes,CommentsonSampleScript3（InternationalTourism）,Band5TA:

Theinputmaterialisdirectlycopiedasanintroductiontothisresponse,andoncethisisdeductedfromthewordcount,theresponseisunder-lengthat194wordsandsolosesmarks.Nevertheless,thetopicisaddressedandarelevantpositionisexpressed,althoughtherearepatches（asinthirdparagraph）wherethedevelopmentisunclear.Otherideasaremoreevidentlyrelevant,butaresometimesinsufficientlydeveloped.Theseideasareclearlyorganisedandthereisanoverallprogressionwithintheresponse.CC:

Thereissomeeffectiveuseofarangeofcohesivedevices,includingreferencing,butthereisalsosomemechanicalover-useoflinkersinplaces.Paragraphsaresometimesrathertooshortandinappropriate.LR:

Arangeofvocabularyisattemptedandthisisadequateforagoodresponsetothetask.However,controlisweak,andtherearefrequentspellingerrorswhichcancausesomedifficultiesforthereader,thuskeepingtheratingdownforthelexicalcriterion.GRA:

Thecandidateusesamixofsimpleandcomplexstructureswithfrequentsubordinateclauses.Controlofcomplexstructuresisvariable,andalthougherrorsarenoticeable,theyonlyrarelyimpedeunderstandingofthemessage,Practice,剑桥雅思7P169请判断考官是怎样给这份试卷打出5分的？

其他预备知识,1.格式：

不用抄题目，齐头格式2.缩写：

不要使用were,cant,dont等缩写，应使用正式文体，可以使用全球通用首字母缩写，如NBA,KFC,WTO等，国内通用的不可以写，如CET-43.数字：

十以下数字用英语单词表示4.标点符号：

、“Avatar”,，andsoon5.I,My,We,You的使用,6.美式和英式拼写-re与ercentercentretheater-theatre-our与orcolorfulcolourfullaborlabour-ise,-isation与ize,-izationrealizerealiseorganizationorganisation-ce与-selicenselicencedefensedefence英式在美式拼写中被简化programme-programtraveller-traveler,其他预备知识,雅思写作流程,5+33+25分钟构思，写提纲（写作观点，2个主要论据，1个例子）33分钟写作2分钟检查语法：

主谓一致，标点词汇：

用同义词和代词（it,them）替换重复过多的单词逻辑：

是否需要在句子中添加therefore,moreover,incontrast等linkingwords,练习：

请利用在本节课学到的内容找出下面句子的错误。

1.下面的句子从写作风格看存在什么问题？

Mobilephonesaresoimportanttoourlives.Everyoneshouldusemobilephones!

2.请在下面的两个句子中间加上一个恰当的连接词将其改写为复杂句：

Airpollutionisincreasinglyserious.Measuresshouldbetakentotacklethisproblem.3.请迅速找出下面句子里的拼写错误：

Thecolorschemeofthisdesignisnotveryorganised.4.请找出下面句子的非正式词汇并替换：

Lotsofriversandlakeshavebeenseverelypolluted.5.请改写下面句子中的词汇使其用词更正式：

Thecrimerateincitiesishigherandhigher,sotheadvantagesofthesesecuritymeasuresaremorethandisadvantages.,Chapter2语法与从句,考官最敏感的三大语法错误可数名词单数孤立出现。

请判断下列翻译是否正确：

“狗是朋友。

”Dogisfriend.Dogsarefriends