BEC中级写作评分标准Word文档格式.docx
《BEC中级写作评分标准Word文档格式.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《BEC中级写作评分标准Word文档格式.docx（17页珍藏版）》请在冰豆网上搜索。
●结构和词汇掌握范围适度。
●组织和安排总的来说令人满意。
●语域和格式尚可，虽然并不完全成功。
给读者的印象较好。
5或6分
10或12分
2
不能完全达到答题要求
●遗漏了一些主要的内容点或者处理得不充分，可能有些不切题。
●有时错误影响清楚交流，错误较多，使读者感到迷惑。
●结构、词汇掌握范围有限。
●内容条理不清、不连贯，造成理解困难。
●语域和格式不适当。
给读者的印象不佳。
3或4分
6或8分
1
未能达到答题要求
●显著的内容遗漏/或大量内容不相关，可能由于对题目要求的误解。
1或2分
2或4分
●严重不规范，经常出现基本错误。
●题目要求的结构和词汇几乎没有提到。
●缺乏组织，造成交流失败。
●几乎没有使用适当的语域和格式。
给读者的印象极差。
什么要求也没达到。
字数少于所需字数的25%，或是完全不能辨认或是完全不切题。
0分
评分五个方面：
1content
2language
3structure&
vocabulary
4organisation
展开论述上面的5个方面
1内容的完整性
2语言
6C原则
1．准确（correctness）
包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；
使用精确措词，传达准确信息；
正确地使用语法和标点符号；
拼写正确。
（1）恰当的语言风格
请比较下面两组例词：
Formal
Informal
approximately
inquire
ascertain
obtain
assist
participate
construct
purchase
contribute
sufficient
difficult
utilize
About
Ask
findout
receive
help
share
build
buy
give
enough
hard
use
（2）准确的措词和信息
下面列出的是一系列极易混淆的单词及词组，请注意区分：
alot/allot
allright/alright
cannot/cannot
differentfrom/differentthan
.dueto/becauseof
effect/affect
fewer/less
lie/lay
principal/principle
that/which
their/them/they'
re
waitfor/waiton
who/whom
（3）正确的语法和标点符号
（4）正确的拼写
2．清楚（Clarity）
（1）逻辑布局（LogicalOrganization）
常用的逻辑布局方法包括：
①因果关系（Cause&
Effect）
②时间顺序（ChronologicalDevelopment）
③序列顺序（SequentialDevelopment）
④比较（Comparison）
⑤一般到特殊（FromGeneraltoSpecific）
⑥特殊到一般（FromSpecifictoGeneral）
（2）合理构架句群与段落（Well-WrittenSentences&
Paragraphs）
例句：
修改前:
MarshallCorporationwasfoundedfortyyearsago,anditnowhasbranchofficesinfourstates,anditemploysnearly400individuals.
修改后:
MarshallCorporationwasfoundedfortyyearsago.Withbranchofficesinfourstates,itnowemploysnearly400individuals.
（3）统一性与一致性（UnityandCoherence）
（4）强调（Emphasis）
①位置
②重复
③数量
④技巧
（5）将句中关系紧密的词尽量靠近。
比较下面三对句子：
A.TheyboughtabicycleinBeijinginasmallshopwhichcosts$25.00.
Theyboughtabicyclefor$25.00inasmallshopinBeijing.
B.Hewaswarnednottodrinkwatereveninarestaurantwhichhadnotbeenboiled.
Hewaswarnednottodrinkwaterwhichhadnotbeenboiled.
C.Thosewhoworkrapidlygetillintheseconditions.
Thosewhoworkintheseconditionsrapidlygetill.
（6）避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个字。
Weshalltakeafirmlinewiththefirm．
Weshalltakeastronglinewiththefilm．
3．简洁（Conciseness）
A.Wehavebeguntoexportourmachinetocountriesabroad.
Wehavebeguntoexportourmachines.
B.IntheeventthatyouspeaktoMr.Woodinregardtoproduction,askhimtogiveconsiderationtothedeliveryschedule.
IfyouspeaktoMr.Woodaboutproduction,askhimtoconsiderthedeliveryschedule.
C.Werequirefurniturewhichisofthenewtype.
Werequirenew-typefurniture.
（1）使用简洁的语言（Usesimplelanguage）
尽量使用避免使用
pleasewillyoubegoodenoughto
preferexpressapreferencefor
becauseforthereasonthat
（2）少用陈词滥调（Omittriteexpressions）
asthecasemaybe
ithascometomyattention
atanearlyage
availyourselfofthisopportunity
previousto
crackofdawn
pursuanttoyourrequest
takethelibertyto
duetothefactthat
thankingyouinadvance
enclosedherein
thisistoinformyou
underseparatecover
withkindestregards
Iwishtostate
（3）避免冗长的表达方式和不必要的重复（avoidwordyexpressions&
unnecessaryrepetition）。
Wordy
Concise
1.Wewouldliketoplease
2.ForthemonthofAugustforAugust
3.Pursuanttotheendofthisweeknow
4.Alongperiodoftimealongtime
5.Atthistimenow
6.Isatthistimeis
7.Theweightwashigherthantheweightwasgreaterthan
8.Iexpectedittobeexpected
9.Duringtheyearof1995during1995
10.Forthedevelopmentoffordeveloping
11.InthecityofDallasinDallas
12.Theproblemwasthatthecarwouldnotthecarwouldnotstart
start
13.Squareinshapesquare
14.inaccordancewithyourrequestyourequested
15.Signonthefrontofthisformsignthisform
16.Duringthetimethatwhile
17.Consensusofopinionweagree
18.Rememberthefactthatremember
19,Heldameetingmet
20.thisisthesituationatthistimenow
（4）删改无关紧要的成份（Removeunneededfacts）
A.Itshouldbenotedthatthisisthebestwecando,
B.Foryourinformationweencloseacatalogue.
C.Pleasebeadvisedthatwehavereceivedyourinvoice.
1.assoonaspossiblebyJuly10
2.asyouindicatedinyourletterasyouindicated
3.atalltimesalways
4.atthistimenow
5.continuetoutilizetheoldformuntilstartusingthenewformonFebruary
suchtimeasthenewformisavailable
6.despitethefactthatdespite
7.forthemonthofAprilforApril
8.forobviousreasonthatbecause
9.Iwouldaskthatyouplease
I0.inconjunctionwithwith
11.inthemererecentpastrecently
12.intheunlikelyeventthatif
13.intheunlikelyeventthatIamunabletoifIamlate,pleasedelaythemeeting
beontime,pleasedelaythemeeting
14.inviewofthefactthatbecause
15.itwillbegreatlyappreciatedifyouplease
16.ourproductionofthenewproductwillproductionwillbeginonJuly1
commenceonJuly1
17.pleasebeadvisedthatweexpectyoutopleasereviewthecontract
reviewtheenclosedcontract
（5）多使用主动语态的句子结构以明确表达意思。
PaymentoftheiraccountswillbemadebyJohnsonsnextweek．
Johnsonswillpaytheiraccountsnextweek．
4．具体（Concreteness）
（1）尽可能地提供明确、具体的信息。
A.Thesebrakescanstopacarwithinashortdistance.
TheseGoodsonpowerbrakescanstopa2-toncarwithin24feet.
B.Wehopetheequipmentwillbedeliveredtoourcompanyassoonaspossible.
PleasedelivertheequipmenttoourcompanybeforenextFriday.
C.Sheisafasttypist.
Shetypesatthefastrateof85wordsperminute.
（2）使用具体词汇
A.Wehavenohesitationinadvisingyou…
Weadviseyou…
B.Thepreparationofnewpricescaleisinhand.
Newpricescalesarebeingpreparedthisweek.
C.Duetotheunusualnatureoftherequest,…
Astherequestisunusual,…
agreatdealoftime,bad,large,good,small,around,old,convenient,young,little,majority,minority,most,less
5．完整（Completeness）
自查：
谁（Who）?
什么（What）?
什么时候（When）?
在哪里（Where）?
为什么（Why）?
怎么样（How）?
6．礼貌（Courtesy）
例如：
DearMrs.Walters,
Becauseyoudelayedsolonginyourresponse,ModelGSFisoffstock.Ifyouareinterested,wehavesomesimilarmodelsonhand
Yourstruly,
修改：
DearMrs.Walters
IfIhadknownyourneedsbeforeMay20,IcouldhaveshippedModelGSPimmediately.However,thespringsaledrainedourstock.
TheModelGSK,asimilarinstrument,isinstock,andyoucouldhaveitatthesamepriceastheGSF.Itnormallysellsfor$10,000more.wewillshipitassoonasyougiveustheword.
Yourssincerely
（1）使用礼貌友好的词汇
A.说“Thankyou"
例如:
Thankyouforyourletterofyesterday.
Thankyouforyourpromptreply.
Thankyouforhelpingusinthisrespect.
Thankyouforyourinformation.
（2）体谅对方的写作态度（You-Attitude）
Writeremphasis:
WeareshippingyourorderonFriday.
Readeremphasis:
YouwillreceiveyourorderbyMonday,October10.
Toreduceourcosts,wearechangingthebillingsystem.
Toprovideyouwithclearrecords,wearechangingourbillingsystem.
Iwaspleasedtohearthattheprojectwascompleted.
Congratulationsonsuccessfullycompletingtheproject
Weregretthatyouclosedyouraccountwithusaweekago.Webelievethatpeoplemaycomebacktoourbankagainsoonerorlatersincewehaveagoodcreditamongourcustomers.
Aweekagoyouclosedyouraccountwithus.Whateverthereason,wearepleasedtohaveplayedsomesmallpartinyourprogram.Youarecordiallyinvitedtouseour'
otherservicesasoccasionmayrequire.
（3）措辞得体（AppropriateWording）
a．避免采用消极性的词汇或句式
NegativeWording:
TheofficeisclosedafterfourO'
clock,
PositiveWording:
TheofficeisopenuntilfourO'
clock.
WhenIreceivedyourcomplaint,Icheckedourrecords.
WhenIreceivedyourletter,Icheckedourrecords.
Becauseyoufailedtoconnectthecable,thepicturewasblurred.
ThepicturewasblurredbecausetheV-2cablewasnotconnectedtotheterminal.
Youdidnotreadmyrecentletter.
PleaserefertomyJune10thletter.
TheExecutiveBoarddidnotreceivenotification.
SeveralmembersoftheExecutiveBoardinquiredaboutthetimeofourDecembermeeting.Willyoupleasesendthemafollow-up?
Yourletterwasnotclear.
IwouldappreciateanoutlineofourmarketingdifferencesthatyoumentionedinyourOctober14thletter.
b.有失礼貌的言词
Wedenyyourclaimcomplaint
Wedonotbelieveconfusion
Wearenotsurecontrary
Wefinditdifficulttounderstandcontrivance
Weexpectdelinquent
Weinsistdeny
Weareforceddisagreeable
Wetakeissueexasperate
Youforgotfailure
Youneglectedignorance
Youfailedtoimpatience
Youmisunderstoodincompetent
Youmustincredible
Youshouldknowinexcusab
升级会员 