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比如分成两类,那么素材就比原来增加了一倍,一分为二,从不同角度看待一个事物也是雅思写作的一个特点,具体说明:
Sample:
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Sendingcriminalstotheprisonisnotthebestmethodofdealingwiththem.Educationandjobtrainingarebetterwaystohelpthem.Doyouagreeordisagree?
直接从犯罪分子入手写作,范围较为广,不易展开,实际写作中易于突然中断,不妨将CRIMINALS这个庞大的人群一分为二,分为重刑犯与轻型罪犯,这样各自归档,恶性犯罪的蹲监入狱,轻型罪犯接受教育,全文分为四段来写一目了然。
第一段:
引入背景,社会犯罪率在升高,对待犯罪的惩处有不同的看法Sincethecrimerateisrisingnow,howtodealwithcriminalshasbecomearelativelynewissueinnewspapersandontelevisioninrecentyears.Opinionstothisaredeeplydivided.
第二段:
将犯罪分子一分为二,恶性犯罪犯本应送进监狱,甚至枪毙也不为过Fortheextremelyviolentcriminals,suchasmurderers,robberswhokilltheirvictims,theyshouldbesentencedtolongeryearsinprison,andsomecanevenbesentencedtodeathifthatwilldojustice.
第三段:
对于罪孽不深重的犯罪分子要让他们接受教育Ontheotherhand,someminorcriminalswhodowrongtoothersonimpulsebutarereadytoreformshouldbegrantedanotherchance.这样更有利于他们改造ifthesemisfitscouldbegivensomeeducationandjobtraining,theywouldnotonlylearnsomepracticalskills,butalsohavethecouragetostartabrandnewlife.
第四段:
总结,惩罚的目的不是惩罚本身Toconclude,Ifirmlybelievethepurposeofanypunishmentinnotpunishmentitself,buttopreventpotentialcrimesandteachthecriminalsalessononthevalueofanormallifeandfreedom.从善意出发,同意用教育的方式改造犯人更为合理,Educationandtrainingwouldworkmoreeffectivelyinachievingthisendthanprison,atleastformostminorcriminals.
链接犯罪类常用词汇扩展:
违反法律:
violatethelaw不良行为,非法行为:
misdeed:
(formal)awrongorillegalaction.e.g.henowrepentsofhispastmisdeeds.
贩毒犯:
trafficker走私贩:
smuggler故意破坏公物者:
vandal死刑犯:
prisonerssentencedtodeath,capitalprisoners团伙成员:
gangster:
anumberofaviolentgroupofcriminals嫌疑犯:
suspect:
(someonewhoisthoughttobeguiltyofacrime)
少年犯:
youngoffender\juvenileoffender\juveniledelinquent惯犯:
habitualcriminalse.g.Thenewlawwillensurethathabitualcriminalsreceivetougherpunishmentsthanfirst-timeoffenders.不知悔改的罪犯:
hardenedcriminalse.g.Teenagersshouldnotbesenttoprisontomixwithhardenedcriminals.罪犯:
lawbreakere.g.Thepenaltiesmustbesevereenoughtodeterlawbreakers.
司法系统:
thejudicialsystem.
Sample:
2
Somepeoplethinkoldbuildingsshouldbedestroyedandreplacedwithmodernbuildings.Doyouagreeordisagree?
老房子包含的范围非常广,直接入手有困难,那么从拆或者不拆的角度看,老房子可以分成几个类?
当然了,两大类:
应该拆的和不应该拆的。
所以全文最好分成四段。
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Introduction背景介绍,现在城市里很多老房子,拆与不拆人们有争议。
Thereareagreatnumberofoldbuildingsincitiestoday.Thequestionofwhethertheyshouldbedestroyedornotisincreasinglybecomingacontroversialone.
提出一些老房子应该拆,分两点,老房子不安全(unsafe)或影响市容(spoilthecityscape).
另外一些老房子不能拆,包括:
有特殊意义的老建筑(buildingsofhistoricvalue)非常漂亮的老房子(gorgeoushistoricbuildings)和特殊民居(specialethnicarchitecture)
Conclusion结论,有些老房子由于城市的发展必须拆掉becauseoftherapidprogressofurbanization,someoldbuildingsoughttobetorndown.但有历史价值的要保护起来Whiletheoldbuildingswhichhavehistoricvalueshouldbeeffectivelypreserved.
Sample3
Asreadingisimportantforagoodeducation,weshouldencourageourchildrentoreadwhateverappealstothem.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
题解:
toreadwhateverappealstothem此言太过笼统,我们不妨将书分为好书或不好的书,好书能在积极的方面影响孩子,还不好的书则会在消极的方面影响孩子,有一点变两点。
不仅素材增加一倍,而且也可使自己的论述拒绝片面性。
(其后附一篇精彩的范文,希望同学们能取其精华,晓其精妙。
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替代法:
当我们发现题目中出现est(形容词最高级),only(唯一)或者ban\stop(禁止)这类词汇的时候,就可以使用替代法。
这三类词汇的共同点是它们的语气都很绝对,听起来较骇人,因此逻辑上多半站不住脚,欲想证明它们对并不太容易,要证明它们不对却不难。
Somepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthe20thcenturyandithasthebiggestimpactonourlives.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
机械化的飞行器确实是二十世纪伟大的发明,它使我们的出行变得迅捷,使地球变得越来越小。
使国家间变得互通有无。
但在二十世纪尚有其他的发明或许会更伟大。
如computer,internet,cloning,mobilephone.
背景介绍,飞机被广泛应用airplanesareextensivelyused.是否是最伟大的发明尚有争议,controversialissue,或thereisaheateddebateovertheissuewhetherthemotorizedflightisthegreatestinventioninthe20thcentury.
让步段,Admittedly,motorizedflightwasagroundbreakinginventioninthetwentiethcentury,用两个分论点以来支持promoteinternationalbusiness,internationalculturalcommunication.
举反例However,therewereinventionsmoreinfluentialthanmotorizedflight.如computer,internet,cloning,mobilephone.
结尾段motorizedflightisoneofthegreatestinventionsinthelastcentury但还有比它对人类影响更大的发明。
Somepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroads.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
交通违法者诚然可恨,理应受到法律的惩处,但加大惩处力度并非唯一提升道路安全的方法,我们可以做的有很多,如,加强对行人的管理,提升交警的工作效率,改善道路设备。
所以只管司机是不够的,需要整个社会的努力。
此篇文章可可以分成四段,如下:
Introduction.Nowadaysweoftenhearpeopletalkingaboutthetrafficproblem,roadaccidentsareresponsibleforthedeathsofanever-increasingnumberofpeople.Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatdrivingoffendershouldbepunishedwithheavierpenalty.
让步段Admittedly,givingdrivingoffendersstricterpunishmentcontributestotheimprovementofroadsafety.
举反例Ontheotherhand,thereareplentyofotherchoicesthatcanimprovesafetyontheroadssuchas行人(pedestrians)的管理,车辆的维修(vehiclemaintenance)交警工作效率,改善道路设备.
conclusion,Itisapartialsolutiontogivethetrafficoffendersstrictpunishment,onlybythewholesociety’sendeavor,shouldweimprovesafetyofroads.
裸奔法
听起来很骇人的名字吧,其实就是几个英文词的罗列。
TMSTREEC$
这是啥子意思塞!
TechnologyEfficiency
MindSoul
SocietyCrime
TimeSpace
RightResponsibility
EnvironmentHealth
EmploymentCompetition
CulturePopulation
MoneyFun
科技提高效率头脑对应精神社会犯罪严重时间对应空间权利对应义务
环境影响健康就业竞争激烈文化人口创造金钱买到乐趣
Manypeopleareoptimisticaboutthe21stcenturyandseeitasanopportunitytomakepositivechangestotheworld.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththeiroptimism?
二十一世纪的憧憬
利:
technology,efficiency,rights,money,fun.
弊:
crime,environment,employment,competition,population.
剑七P54
Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendecidingonthepunishment.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
一些人认为对于每种罪行都应该有固定的惩罚,另一些人则认为罪犯的处境及犯罪的动机在量刑时也应该被考虑。
讨论这两种观点并给出你自己的观点。
本文的素材可以通过裸奔法快速搞定。
固定量刑的好处:
Efficiency(提高判案效率)crime(控制犯罪率)money(减少司法费用)
灵活量刑的好处:
Soul(更人道)society(有利于社会和谐)rights(尊重犯人的公民权)
利弊判定:
这样想出来的素材也许算不上很深刻,但一是雅思写作本来就不需要你的思想有多么深刻,它更关键的任务是考察你用英文表达思想的能力。
思想太深刻反而会导致考生用英文表达不出来;
二是裸奔法用熟了之后确实速度很快,更符合实战的要求。
一篇范文:
Writingtask2:
ThefamousEnglishphilosopherFrancisBaconsaid,”Readingmakesafullman”.Readingbookscanstronglyshapeyourinclinations,matureyourthoughts,widenyourhorizonandenrichyourpersonality.Lifeislimited,butknowledgeisboundless.Themorebooksweread,themoreknowledgeweget.Hence,weshouldencourageourchildrentoreadmorebooks.
However,booksmayalsobeharmful,particularlythepornographicbooks.Badbookscontainevilthoughts.Inthem,theremightbemuchdescriptionaboutviolence,superstition,andsex.Let’ssupposethatyouareinthepositionofaparent.Wouldyouallowyourchildrentoreadwhateverappealstothem?
Ifyouranswertothequestionisyes,youareeitherextremelypermissiveorjustplainlyirresponsible.Ifchildrenreadbadbooks,theevilthoughtswouldpoisontheirmindgradually.Theywillbedispiritedandperhapscommitacrime.
Goodbooks,ontheotherhand,teachandhelpchildrentodogoodthings.Goodbooksarechildren’srealcompanions,andtheyarebothinstructiveandinspiring.Childrenknowpasteventsfromhistorybooks,studycommunicationbylanguagebooks;
learnspaceandnumbersthroughmathematicsbooks.Inaword,differentkindsofgoodbookscangivethemalargeamountofideasandknowledge.
Consequently,thosewhoreadgoodbookscanbeinspiredtogrowhealthily,whilethosewhoreadbadoneswillleadawickedlifeandmeetwithmiserablefailure.Sobeforeweencourageourchildrentoreadbooks,wemightaswellteachandhelpthemtoidentifygoodandbadbooks.
相关链接:
FrancisBacon
OfStudies
Studiesservefordelight,forornament,andforability.Theirchiefusefordelight,isinprivatenessandretiring;
forornament,isindiscourse;
andforability,isinjudgmentanddispositionofbusiness.
读书足以怡情,足以博采,足以长才,在怡情的上读书的主要用处是幽居养静,在博采上读书的用处是辞令;
在长才上读书的用处是对于事物的判断和处理
翻译练习:
我经常告诫我的员工,人才市场的竞争是非常激烈地,是永不休止的。
科技在迅速发展,你要是不继续学习,你掌握的知识就要过时。
不树立终身教育理念的人,总有一天会贬值的。
如果你要想使自己保值,甚至不断增值,就必须不断充电。
俗语说,艺多不压身。
一个人只有不断更新知识,尽力掌握多种技能,才能在无情的竞争中占有优势。
人人,尤其是年轻人,要把就业过程看作是不断学习的过程。
Ioftenadmonishmystaffthatthecompetitioninthepersonnelmarketisextremelyfierceandneverending.Asscienceandtechnologyaredevelopingatagreatspeed,theknowledgeyouhavegainedwillbecomeoutdatedifyoustopyourcontinuousstudy.Thosewhofailtoformtheconceptoflifelongeducationwillbedepreciatedsomeday.Ifyouwanttomaintain,andevenconstantlyincreaseyourownvalues,youmustconstantlychargeyourselfwithnewknowledge.
Asacommonsayinggoes,moreskillswillnotformaburdenoveraperson.Onlyifheconstantlyrenewshisknowledgeandtriestomastermoreskills,canhegettheupperhandinthemercilesscompetition.Allthepeople,especiallytheyoungpeople,musttaketheprocessofemploymentasaprocessofcontinuo