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Advertisingcan___youalotaboutacountry.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
写作思路展开结构分析
同意这个观点更容易写一些。
陈述立场后,说明广告是怎样反映一个国家的历史、文化、以及其他情况的。
通过比较来说明更容易写一些,比如:
中国,与10年前相比,广告中的女性数量变多了,暴露的程度也提高了。
说明人们的观念,以及社会的观念发生了变化。
中国与欧美国家相比,中国广告中药物广告数量特别多。
说明这方面的法制还有待改善。
本话题高分范文赏析
Advertisingdoesnotmeantoeducateorillustrate.Primarilyitisavehicleforbusinessanditaimstosellproducts.Asaresult,theinformationwecangatherfromlookingatadvertisingsisquitelimited.However,theculturalideasusedtosellmoditiesrevealasociety'
svaluesystem,andfromthenatureoftheadvertisingandtheproductitaimstosellwecandrawconclusionsastowhichsocialdemographymightbethemostaffluent.
Inordertobemosteffectiveanadvertisingcampaignwillmakeuseoftheculturalvaluesofacountry.Obviously,panieswillbeabletosellmoreproductsifagreatmanypeoplerelatetothegoodsandtheimagesusedtosellthem.Forexample,inacountryliketheUnitedStateswhereagreatpercentageofthepopulationisreligious,advertisersuseexpressionssuchasheavenly,divine,orrevelation,becausethesehaveconnotationsthatprospectivecustomerswilllikelyidentifywith.Similarly,advertiserswilltrytoemployfashionmodelswhoembodyaculture'
sidealsofpersonalbeauty,becauseattractivemenandwomenwillsellmoreproductsthanunattractiveones.
Companiesidentifysocialdemographicsorpartsofsocietythataremostlikelytobuytheirproductsanddesigntheiradvertisingsaordingly.Forexample,teenagegirlsaremorelikelytobuymobilephonesthanretiredfactoryworkers.Thuspanieswillmakeuseoffashiontrendsintheiradsandprobablypayafamouspopsingerabigchunkofmoneytoendorsetheirproduct.Ifthemajorityofalladvertisingsinacountryaregearedtowardsaspecifictargetmarketoraudience,thenthispartofthepopulationprobablyhasthemostfinancialresourcesattheirdisposal.
Althoughwecanlearnsomethingsaboutacountrybylookingatitsadvertisingwehavetorememberthatthisknowledgeislimited.Afterall,advertisingisonlydirectedatpeoplewhohavethemeanstobuyconsumergoods.Thusadvertisingdoesnot___usanythingabouttheoverallprosperityorlikesanddislikesofacountry.Also,advertisingnotonlyreflectsbutalsotriestoshapeandchangeculturalvalues.Therefore,itdoesnotauratelyreflecttheexactstateofacountry'
sculture.
Beself-employed,workforsomeoneelse,orownabusiness?
Somepeopleprefertoworkforthemselvesorownabusiness.Othersprefertoworkforanemployer.Wouldyouratherbeself-employed,workforsomeoneelse,orownabusiness?
Usespecificreasonstoexplainyourchoice.
不要急于选择。
先讨论两种情况各自的优缺点做老板,赚钱的,可是风险也大给别人打工,是稳定,但是工资少。
选择哪一种要看各人情况。
Thereareadvantagestoallthreekindsofemployment.Owningone'
sownbusinessmightverywellbethefastestwaytofortune.Workingforanemployer,ontheotherhand,isoftenlessriskyandusuallytherearefewerresponsibilities.However,Iwouldliketobeself-employed.Beingself-employedwouldcatertomystrengthofworkingindependently,itwouldgivemeamaximumofprofessionalandpersonalfreedom,andIwouldnothavetotakeresponsibilityforthecontinuedfinancialsecurityofanyemployeesandtheirfamilies.Iamaperfectionistandenjoyworkingbymyself.WhenIworkinateamortogetherwithagroupofpeople,usuallytheothers'
qualitystandardsaremuchlowerthanmyown.Furthermore,Iliketobeinvolvedineverystepofthedevelopmentprocess.Forexample,ifIcouldbeeajournalistIwouldliketobeself-employedbecauseIwouldberesponsibleforresearching,writing,andediting.Atmostmajornewspapersandmagazinesthesearethreedifferentareas.
Anothergreatbenefitofbeingself-employedistheabilitytobalancepersonallifeandcareer.WhenworkingforamajorpanyIwouldhavetoworkonassignmentsthatdon'
tinterestmeverymuch.Also,itwouldbedifficultformetotakevacationtimewheneverIneeded.However,asaself-employedpersonIcandecidewhichjobsIwanttotakeandwhichjobstoreject.Nobodywouldordermearound.Also,Icoulddesignmyownworkscheduleandadjustorchangeitifitinterferedwithmypersonallife.
Lastly,asaself-employedprofessionalIwouldneitherhavetogiveordersnortakeorders.Afterall,Idon'
tworkforanybodyandnobodyworksforme.AsIamnotveryfondofmanagingpeopleandevenlessinterestedinbeingbossedaround,theindependentorself-employedworkwouldsuitmejustfine.
Shouldpeoplesometimesdothingsthattheydonotenjoydoing?
Peopleshouldsometimesdothingsthattheydonotenjoydoing.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
这道题目审题时要注意一个关键词sometimes,这个词本身比较委婉,放在句子里面就让这个观点没有那么极端。
因此支持同意会比较好写。
偶尔做一些自己不想做不喜欢做的事情其实是比较正常也容易理解的事情。
大家可以结合自身的生活经验来给出一些例子,比如为了健康去吃自己比喜欢吃的食物,或是为了未来发展学习一些自己不感兴趣的课程专业等等。
Weliveinaworldinwhicheveryonewantstobesuessful.NothingiswrongaboutthedesiretobeNo.1,andthereisnodoubtthatbeingsuessfulisenjoyable.Nevertheless,itissomewhatchildishtothinkwecanbefinallysuessfulbyonlydoingwhatweenjoydoing.Peopleoftenareamazedbythegloriousappearanceofaskyscraper,howevertheyatthesametimeforgetthefactthattheskyscraperhadtakenalongtimetoconstruct,maybemuchlongertimetodesign,andpossiblyevencostpeople'
slivesduringtheconstructingprocess!
Wemaycategorizethingsintotwogroups,theenjoyableandtheunenjoyable;
atthesametime,anothercategorycanbemade:
thenecessaryandtheunnecessary.Thepointis,thingsthatarenecessaryarenotalwaysenjoyableandthingsthatareenjoyablesometimesmaybeunnecessary.Doingthingsthatarenecessaryratherthanthosethataremerelyenjoyableisnotonlyhelpful,butmightalsobeindispensableforindividualsuess.Wealladmireevenenvythosewhonowhaveattainedgreatachievements,suchthosefamousstarsasJackyChen,JetLi.Weshould,however,beawareoftheexorbitantpricestheyhavepaidfortheirpresentglories.JackyChenoncetoldthatwhenhewasstillateenager,heandhispartnerswererequiredtopracticemorethan12hoursaday;
anditwassaidthatJetLiwassenttobeanapprenticewhenhewashardlyfouryearsold!
Apparently,thoseseeminglycruelhardshipshaveturnedouttobethebestgiftsyearslater.Butforyesterday'
sstruggle,today'
sgloriescouldnotexist.Thingsthatarebothenjoyableandnecessaryorbothunenjoyableandunnecessaryvirtuallyseldomexist.Wemaydislikesomecurriculumsinuniversity,suchasmathematicsorhistory,buttheyarenecessary;
wemaypreferleisuretimestoworkdays,butthelatterareindispensable.Pursuingasuessfullifeisnothingmorethanmakingwisedecisions,andby"
wise"
wemeanthechoiceofdoingthenecessaryfirst.
Shouldteachersbepaidaordingtohowmuchtheirstudentslearn?
Teachersshouldbepaidaordingtohowmuchtheirstudentslearn.Givespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.
不能同意。
乍看起来(atthefirstglance)很有道理。
问题在于:
教育不是商品。
如何保证能够确切地衡量学生究竟学到了多少?
学生学到多少,并不是老师一个人的事情,还要看学生自身的素质(quality);
能力(capacity)等等。
如果采取了这样的方式,就会出现老师迎合(caterto/panderto/playuptostudents'
taste)学生而不是引导(guide;
lead)学生,违背了教育的原则。
Peopleusuallybelievethatteachershavethemostimportantjobinallofsociety.Theyraiseourchildrentobeforward-thinking,brightindividuals.Theyensurethatchildrengetalongwitheachother,andlearntoworktogetherasateam.Assuch,beingateachertypicallymeansastablepaycheck.However,whensomepeopleproposethatteachersshouldbepaidaordingtohowmuchtheirstudentslearn,Icanhardlyagree.Firstofall,studentsmaynotbeinterestedinlearning.Whenstudentsarenotinterestedinlearning,theteachercanhardlybeheldresponsible.Theteachercangradethemharshly,keeptheminafterclass,anddisciplinethemseverely,butthestudentswillstillnotlearniftheydonotwantto.Iftheteacheristryinghis/herbesttoteachthestudents,andtheinformationispresentedclearlyandsuinctly,he/shecandonobetterjob.Moreover,thereisalimitonhowmuchachildcanlearn.Ifateacherwastobepaidaordingtohowmuchhis/herstudentslearned,therewouldbeacertainpointwherehe/shecouldteachthemnomore.IrememberwhenIwasinhighschool,therewouldbemomentsintheyearwhenIdidn'
tthinkIcouldfitanymoreinformationintomyhead.Thiswasnotmyteacher'
sfault,andthepointisthatIjustwasnotabsorbingthematerial.Ithinkmanyteacherswouldfindthisproblemiftheywerepaidbyhowmuchtheirstudentslearnt.Mostimportantly,teachersshouldnotbepaidaordingtohowmuchtheirstudentslearnbecausesomeofthelessonsthatastudentlearnscannotbemeasuredbyatest.Wecannotsimplygivechildrenatesttodiscoverhowmuchtheyhavelearntinaclass.Testsrarelymeasureone'
ssocialskills,one'
sabilitytomunicate,orone'
sabilitytointegratesuessfullyintotheworld.However,itistheteacherswhohelpstudentstomanifestthesequalities.
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