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Yet,thesituationcanbealleviatedbyincreasingnationalsubsidiesortheloweringtheexpectationofconstructingafancystudio.

第三段给出支持艺术教育的第一个原因，强调可以拓宽学生知识面

Meanwhile,themeritsofaestheticeducationoutweighitsdrawbacksincestudentscanhaveaccesstoawiderangeofknowledgethroughappreciatingtheseartworksinclass.

然后可以采用举例论证（exemplification）进一步论证艺术教育的生动性和深刻性

Forexample,comparedwiththelimitednarrationinhistorybook,oneofthemasterpiecesofLeonardodiserPierodaVinci,TheLastSupper,displaysasceneofreligioninamorevividandprofoundway.

还可以增加个小点，阐述艺术教育对理科学习的互补作用

Artclassesprovidestudentswithanotheropportunitytothinkandtheseclassesaresignificantlycomplementarytosomecoreclassessuchasmathandscience.

第四段进一步给出支持的第二个原因，即艺术教育有助提高学生综合素质，促进学生长远发展

Additionally,theunderlyingmeritsofattendingartclasseswillbenefitthestudentsinthelongrun,whicharenolessthanthoseofstudyingsomecoresubjects.

可以进一步说理论证，指出艺术教育中习得的各项能力对学生的学业进步和工作发展有利

Theabilitiesliketobefocused,tobedetail-orientedandtobepersistentwillbeconducivetostudents'

comprehensiveabilityandcareerdevelopmentaswell.

尾段对主体段的主要观点（艺术教育有助深化知识，学科互补，提高综合能力）进行总结~

Inconclusion,aestheticeducationshouldbemadecompulsory,forithelpsdeepenstudents'

acquisition,complementothersubjectsandcontributestotheiroverallcompetenceandcareerprogressaswell.

词汇积累

1.contemplatev.深思熟虑2.compulsoryadj.必修的

3.appreciatev.欣赏；

鉴别4.complementaryadj.补充的

5.comprehensiveadj.综合的6.cultivatev.陶冶

7.persistentadj.坚持的8.conduciveadj.有益的

9.outweighv.比。

。

重要10aestheticadj.美学的

◎1月14日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Somepeoplesayjobsatisfactionismoreimportantthanjobsecurity,othersthinkpeoplecannotalwaysenjoytheirjobs.Sohavingapermanentjobismoreimportant.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

本题属于雅思大作文中的双方讨论题型，社会类话题—工作选择

首段对比立场不同双方的观点

Whenitcomestotheissueaboutjobhunting,somepeoplearguethatself-achievementbroughtbyajobismorecrucialthanitsstability,butotherscontendthathavingastablejobmaybeofmoreimportancethanacquiringjoyfromit.

第二段可以论证工作满意度不可或缺

Ononehand,satisfactionfromworkcannotbeneglected.

段落中可以强调工作满意段给人们带来成功动力

Forpeoplewhohavebeenworkingfordecades,salarymaybenotsosignificantbecausetheyusuallyhavehadsomewealth;

comparatively,mentalincentivemaybeabettermotivationforthem.

第三段强调工作稳定性的重要性

Ontheotherhand,stabilityisalsoacrucialfactorformanyemployees.

本段中可以突出工作稳定有效预防失业等突然变故

Inthecurrentera,itiscommonthatsomecompaniesgobankruptsuddenlyandtheiremployeesbecomeunemployed,duetowhichthoseunemployedworkersmaynotaffordtheexpenseoftheirlives.

尾段总结一下，表达每个人可以依不同的个性选择合适自己工作的观点（两边平衡）

Frommyownperspective,whetherpeoplechooseajobwithstabilityorajobwithsatisfactionmostlydependsonthepersonalitytheyhave.Ifpeoplewereambitious,ajobwithuncertaintiesandchallengeswouldbeapreferenceforthembecausetheycouldgetjoyfromwhattheyfightforandfulfillthemselves.However,forpeoplewhowanttoliveaquietlife,astablejobmaysuitthembetter.

1.contendv.主张2.incentiven.激励

3.motivationn.动机4.breakthroughn.突破性进展

5.unemployedadj.失业的6.affordv.买得起

7.expensen.开支8.fulfillv.实现

◎1月21日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Thebestwayforthegovernmenttosolvetrafficcongestionistoprovidefreepublictransport24hoursadayand7daysaweek.Doyouagreeordisagree?

本题属于雅思大作文中的同意与否题型，讨论的是政府类话题—交通拥挤

首段进行简单的同义改写，然后明确表达自己不支持免费交通解决交通拥挤问题的观点~

Whenitcomestotheissueabouthowtotackletrafficcongestions,somepeoplemayarguethatthebestsolutionistoprovidecitizenswithfreepublictransportallthetime.However,asfarasIamconcerned,suchsolutioncanhardlywork.

第二段可以让步一下，指出这样做的好处–减缓交通拥堵

Admittedly,freetransportationcouldfunctiontoreducetrafficcongestionsbecausepeoplewoulddecreasetheuseofprivatecars.

段末不忘话锋一转，强调弊大于利

Nevertheless,thereexistmoredrawbacksthanbenefitsacquiredfromfreetransportation.

第三段来讲第一个弊端：

财政压力

Tobeginwith,thegovernmentmayfacemoreeconomicburdensifpublictransportationisfree.

段落中可以论证拨款不均影响其它重要民生领域的发展

Providingthatthegovernmentallocatestoomuchmoneytopublictraffic,otherpartsofservices,suchaspensionfortheelderlyandthedisabled,maynotbewellsupported.

第四段是第二个弊端：

没必要全天候免费

Furthermore,providingfreepublictransportallthetimecouldleadtoawasteofresources.

本段论证可以突出非交通拥挤时段没必要实施免费政策

Apartfromthecommutingtime,freepublictransportdoesnotmakesensebecausethereisnocongestionatall.

尾段小小总结，概括一下没有拥堵就没有必要提供免费交通，财政可能赤字的观点就好啦~

Insum,providingfreepublictransportallthetimemaynotbethebestmethodtotackletrafficcongestions,consideringthatthereisnoneedtoprovidefreetransportwhenthereisnocongestionandthegovernmentmayfacefinancialdeficitaswell.

1.tacklev.解决2.congestionn.拥挤

3.commutev.通勤4.optimizev.使完善

5.allocatev.分配6.deficitn.赤字

hi,各位雅思小伙伴们，经过2月的考试洗礼，是不是迫不及待想要掀开本月写作试题的庐山真面目呀~~~ 

教研君在此为各位烤鸭们揭开“迷之答案”哟

首先呢，让我们来看下2月四场考试的总体情况吧~

小作文除了2.18的流程图，其它几场均是图表题，2.11为柱状图，2.16表格题，而2.25也考了柱状图，其中包含动态图。

大作文除了2.18场考了科技类话题，其余3场都探讨了社会类的话题。

话不多说，上题目！

◎2月11日雅思写作真题与范文解析

Task1:

ThechartbelowshowsthepercentageofadultsnotdoingphysicalexerciseinAustraliain2005.（图表暂缺）

Task1作文范文与解析

本题比较了澳大利亚不同年龄段的人们对运动的不同参与程度。

虽然数据看着有些多，文字有些拗口，但只要图表题“套路”（总体趋势，极值等）在胸中，就比较容易迎刃而解啦~~

第一段可以改写下题目：

ThebarchartdemonstratesthedataforfemalesandmaleswhodidnottakephysicalexerciseinAustraliaintheyearof2005.

第二段分别概括下male和female·

在体育锻炼参与度方面总体的变化趋势

常用句型或句式：

Fromthechart,wecanseethat…

withthefigureincreasing/dippingfromxx%toxx%（具体数据）…

Atthesametime/Bycontrast…

asimilarproportionofxx（另一方）（xx%）didnottakeexercise.

接下来一段就要微观分析同一年龄段，male和female哪一方的体育锻炼参与度，即喜好度更高

Intermsof…

Itisobviousthat…while…

ThesamenumberofAandBdislikephysicalexercise

尾段可以总结一下这张柱状图传达的总体信息，即人越年轻，越爱锻炼，反之越老锻炼越少

Overall,itcanbeseenthatyoungpeopleagedfromxxtoxxtookmorephysicalexercise.Onthecontrary,theleastofoldpeople（xx）didsports.

Task2:

Inmodernsociety,ambitionismoreandmoreimportant.Howimportantisambitionforbeingsuccessfulinlife?

Isambitionapositiveornegativecharacteristic?

Task2作文范文与解析

本题是春节过后的第一道雅思写作题目，比较爆冷，这道题目是2012年4月份的原题，但是，这道题目所代表的问法已经有将近五年没有出现过了。

这边总共有2个问题，那么对这两个问题都要回应到。

前一个问题是论述类，后一个问题是观点类的，建议在论述完雄心对成功的作用后，选择一边倒的立场（时间紧，任务多~~）

首段简单介绍背景后，切入主题

Inthiscontemporaryerawhichfeatureshighpressureandfiercecompetitions,ambitionisapowerfuldrivingforceonmodernpeople'

swaytosuccess.Astheproverbgoesthatmostpeoplewouldsucceedinsmallthingsiftheywerenottroubledwithgreatambitions. 

主体段1回应Howimportantisambitionforbeingsuccessfulinlife?

这个问题。

此次明显正面论证ambition对成功的重要性更好下手，vividexamples可以使起来，牛顿等科学艺术政坛赫赫人物都可以作为有力佐证~

Itisbelievedthatambitionisputtingaladderagainstsky.IfNewtonhadnoambitiontofigureoutwhyapplesfalldownontheearthratherthanflyingtothesky,gravitycanneverbediscovered;

ifthealliednationsinWorldWarTwohadnoambitiontodefeattheNazismledbyHitler,massiveslaughterwouldberecordedinhumanhistory.Itisambitionthatenablesindividualstobeequippedwithself-motivationandself-disciplinethatareregardedasindispensablefactorsforovercomingbarriersaswellasresistingtemptationwhendevotedtoworkorstudies.Unfortunately,itisdifficultforpeoplewholoseambitionstopursuetheirgoalsormakethemselvescomeoutonthetopeveniftheirinspirationspringupeverysecond.

主体段2在Isambitionapositiveornegativecharacteristic?

选择立场，这里注意和上一段有个对应，如果上一段论述过程倾向positive,本段选择negative的立场不是很合适哟~论证过程同样可以用explanation或example等方法~

Althoughaheavyambitionisoftenthoughttobeconnectedwiththegreedoranaddictiontopower,itisnotthecase.Ambitiouspeoplehavecourageandpersistencetochallengetaskswhichcannotbecompletedbyordinarypeople;

haveaspirationtobreakdowntheroutineaswellastofightforwhattheybelievein.Inalargescale,thecivilizationofmankindwouldnotthrivesupposingthathumansrefusetoadmitorachievetheirambitions.

尾段对全文的主要观点简要概括下~

Inaword,ambitionisoneofthemostcrucialcharacteristicsforhumanbeings.Itgivesusgoalsandpushesustoleadalifefilledwithsatisfactionandglory.However,therealizationofpersonalambitioncanneverbeattheexpenseofviolatingothers'

interest.

看完2月第一场的范文启迪思路还不过瘾？

回复可见其余场次写作真题范文哦

◎2月16日雅思写作真题与范文解析

ThechartbelowshowsthepercentageofinternationalstudentsinCanadaandUSA,alsocomparethethreetopsourceo