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描述中心事物,可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。
第三部;
寻找中心事物周围相关的事物,并进行简单的描述。
模式:
在图画中央有------(倒装),它-------(主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句),周围有-----(独立主格作状语)
第二句----总结
1Thepicture,atthefistglimpse,seemstobesimple,butonlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitssuperficialmeaning.这幅画初看好像很简单,但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。
2Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotthefactitself,buttoleadustofindwhathidesbehindtheiceburg.作者的真实目的不是图画本身,而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。
第二段
第一句----观点的提出
(1)Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwiththe重要主题.Innocountry,otherthanchina,ithasbeensaid,isthisphenomenonmoreobvious.
(2)Thepicturedoesrevelcertaindisturbingsocialphenomenon,thatis,peopletendtooverlookthefactthat有害主题.(或Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主题isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.)Thepastdecadehaswitnessedahugedevelopmentineconomyowingtothereformandopening-uppolicycarriedout,bringingsomeproblemsatthesametime,withtheaboveonebeingtheforemost.在过去的十年间,由于改革开放政策的执行,我国的经济有了巨大的发展,但同时带来了一些问题,上面的问题是最严重的。
(或Innocountryotherthanchina,ithasbeensaidmisthisproblemmoreserous.)
万能观点:
1图画主题的重要性
Nothingcanbecomparedwith·
·
isnotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensable·
remainstobeanintegralpartin·
2图画主题的有害性
Nothingismoreharmfulordamaging.
isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.
inlargemeasuredetrimental.
第二句----进一步讲解人们的态度(重视/不重视)
(1)Thepublicfailstoattachdueattentionto有害主题.
(2)Thepublicattachdueattentionto重要主题.
givepriorityto·
优先考虑·
attachattentionto·
对·
注意
emphasizetheimportanceof·
强调·
的重要性
stressthefundamentalroleof·
的根本作用
第三句---对主题进行展开(3-4句)
Bydoingso,十一个角度平行展开·
(也可用科学论据法或举例法)
(一)、十一个万能理由(角度)
物质回报:
1主题canprovide(offer)peoplewithnotonlydeliciousfoodbutfashionableclothesandsuchbenefitsascomfortabledwellingsandhandsomeautomobiles.
2Theindustriousandinsightfulpeoplewillneverfailtoprofitsfrom(benefitfrom)doing主题.
时间角度
节约时间
1Itcanmakethemostofone’stime,chanceandtechnology.
2主题(e.g.Learningmorewesternculture),occupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom/wonderingandhelpsthemachieveamorebroadenhorizon.
浪费时间
Asallknown,thedaysofyouthshouldnotbefriend/idledawayandtimeshouldbecherished,but(主题e.g.starworship)wasteshours,lavishesdaysandevensquandersyears,whichleadsustosaykillsanevenmurdersyoungster’sprimetime.
效率角度
1主题(e.g.Starworship/AddictiontotheInternet)makespeoplewearyofotherimportantthings,discourageshimtolearnmore,andfinallylosetheirinteresttolearn,andleadtolowgrades/lowefficiency/underachievement.
2One’senergygraduallywearsoffandone’sthought,creativethinkingandexplorationhasbeenstifledbydoing主题.
方便和快捷
1主题(e.g.WideWorldWeb)providespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation.
2主题(e.g.MSNandotherinstantmessengers)canshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents;
smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.
安全角度
1主题cansecurehisfoodandshelter.
2主题canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaultstotrafficaccidents.
身心健康
①(主题)canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblems,stress,isolationandsolitude.
②Bydoing(主题)peoplestayhealthy,andthereforepreventheartdiseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.
③(主题)canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingone’sknowledgeandgivingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld.
生活娱乐
1It’samajormeansofentertainmentthatrelievesone’spressure,boredom,stressandburden.
表“受益”的词组:
Broadenone’smind
Enrichone’sexperience
Enhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone’swork
2Itiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofentertainmentthatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,butasourceofimaginationaswell.
3Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyouseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonouslife.
有助成长和成功(自己和他人)
1Peoplecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mentalcomfort,orspiritualbackfromyoursupport.
2Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyourspeeches,instructionsorassistance,theycanbroadentheirminds,increasetheirincome.
3Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritofcompetition,participationandcooperationandfinallyfindtheirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness.
4Thoughyourassistance,notonlycantheyaccumulatewealth,butwillalsoestablishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andevenattainsocialstatus.
5Peoplewhotreatotherswithlove,sincerity,sympathy,enthusiasm,hospitalityorgenerosityalwayswinrespectfromothers.
6Itdose/doesn’tnecessarilycultivatetalent,confidence,self—worth,self—relianceanddignity.
文化价值观
1Itcannothelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolence,confidenceandtolerance.
2Itcansometimesintensifyconflictsandtensionsbetweennations.Itputharmonioushumanrelationshipindanger.Itcannotpromotemutualunderstanding.Itcanbreachthefriendlyties,andwidenthegapbetweenpeople.
环境保护
1Itmeansthatcentralauthoritycansetasidemorefundstoeliminateairpollution,noisepollution,reducesoilerosionordesertification,preventthethinnessofozonelayers,reduceindustrialsewage,andrescuethedwindlingtropicaljungles.
2Itgovernmentshouldraisethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalpreservation,therebypromotingsustainabledevelopmentandcreatingamorelivableenvironment.
社会宏观角度
1Itcanminimizeinflation,economicstagnation,economicrecession,unemploymentrate.Itcanmaintainsocialorderandreducecrimerate.
2Itmeansthatrevolutionizethescientificlevelofacountry,meansofcocommunicationandqualityoflife.
3Itmeansthattheauthoritiescanallocatemorefundstotheconstructionandqualityofinfrastructurerangingfromkindergartens,hospitals,medicalcenter,museums,schoollibraries,trainstohighwaysandexpressways.
4Itmeansthatpeoplecanhaveequalopportunitytocollegeeducation,employments,self—realizationandpursuitofmaterialwealth.
(二)、科学论据法
AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofScience(CAS),·
AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofSocialScience(CASS),·
ChinaDailyinterviewedforpeoplefromfourprofessions–asurgeon,awhilecollarworker,acarpenterandafarmer.Thesurveydiscoversthatallofthemareoftheideathat主题重要或有害.
(三)、举例子
①Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesof·
withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多,下面这个是最有说服力的。
②Amongallthetouchingfactsrelatingto·
thatIhavehoard,noticed,andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis·
在我所听到的、看到的、经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中,最有说服力的是·
第四句(结尾句——虚拟语气和利弊句)
虚拟语气:
(1)积极的主题
如果没有·
,我们可能根本做不了·
Weretherenosth,neverwouldwedosth.
(2)消极的主题
如果情况继续下去,我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。
Werethesituationtocontinueasitis,wewouldpaythehighprice.
e.g.Werethetendencytocontinueasitis,ourfuturegenerationwouldnotbothertothinkofexcuseforus.
利弊句:
(1)弊大于利
Thedisadvantagesovershadowthebenefits.
Thebenefitsareinlargemeasurecanceledoutbytheproblems.
(2)利大于弊
Theproblemsseemtobepalecomparedwiththebenefits.
Thedisadvantagescannotweighedagainstthebenefits.
第三段
好的现象
Itisimperativethattheessencebeabsorbedandthedrawbacksbeneglected,duringthisprocess,especiallyinthetimesofknowledgeexplosion,whenthenews,facts,opinionsevenrumorshavebeenbombardingusfromeverycorneroftheworld.
坏的现象
Withaproperlowandanalertpublicitwillonlybeamatteroftimebeforetheproblembecomesthingsofthepast.伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众,这个问题迟早可以被解决。
Onlyinareasonable,prosperousandhealthatmospherecanwehopetowitnesstheidealsceneinwhichpeoplecanenjoytheirlifetotheuttermost.只有在一个理性,繁荣和健康的环境中,我们才有希望看到这样一个理想的景象,人们能最大可能的去享受他们的生活。