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trafficincitieshasbecomemoreandmoreseriousthanbefore.（×
moreandmoreserious→heavierandheavier
⏹Theycancleantheair,beautifythecity,developagoodclimateandweakennoise.
⏹Theycancleantheair,beautifythecity,developahealthyclimateandreducenoise.
⏹Inaddition,abicyclewillnevergiveoffpoisonousgasasacaranditneedsonlyalittleplacetopark.
⏹Inaddition,abicycledoesnotgiveoffpoisonousgasasacaranditneedsonlyasmallplacetopark.
⏹注意词义
⏹Withtheindustriousdevelopment,thereisagreatneedfordifferentkindsofenergy.
⏹industrious→industrial
⏹TVcommercialshaveaprofoundinfluenceonoureverydaylife.
⏹everyday→everyday
⏹Firstweshoulduseournaturalresourcesinaneconomicway.
⏹economic→economical
⏹注意词汇的搭配
⏹However,thespeedofacarismuchfasterthanthatofabicycle.
⏹However,thespeedofacarismuchhigherthanthatofabicycle.
⏹Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.
⏹Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.
⏹TheopportunitytobepromotedinajointventurewillbesmallerifonecannotspeakEnglish.
⏹TheopportunitytobepromotedinajointventurewillbepoorerifonecannotspeakEnglish
⏹Inrecentoneandtwoyears,peoplewhotakeTOEFLhavedecreased.
⏹Inrecentoneandtwoyears,thenumberofpeoplewhotakeTOEFLtesthasdecreased.
⏹Inthepastfewyears,grainhasdecreasedbynearly20%.
⏹Inthepastfewyears,theconsumptionofgrainhasdecreasedbynearly20%.
⏹注意修饰语
⏹HeneitherspeaksEnglishnorChinese.
⏹HespeaksneitherEnglishnorChinese.
⏹Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.
⏹WhenIwassixyearsold,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.
⏹Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.
⏹Sinceeconomicreformshavebeencarriedoutinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasgreatlybeenimproved.
⏹Toimproveone’swritingskill,regularpracticeisessential.
⏹Toimproveone’swritingskill,onemustmakearegularpractice.
⏹注意词性
⏹Thistermwe’llverybusy.
⏹Thistermwe’llbeverybusy.
⏹Thecavelikearoomverymuch.
⏹Thecavelookedverymuchlikearoom.
⏹注意连接词
⏹Istartedtoplaytable-tennisinmiddleschool,stillplayitnow.
⏹Istartedtoplaytable-tennisinmiddleschool,andIstillplayitnow.
⏹TVbecomesanimportantpartinourdailylife.Becausewecannotlivewithoutit.
⏹TVbecomesanimportantpartinourdailylife,becausewecannotlivewithoutit.
⏹Thesunhadjustrisen,shiningbrilliantly,everythingseemedtobecoveredwithalayerofgoldensilk.
⏹Thesunhadjustrisen,shiningbrilliantlyandeverythingseemedtobecoveredwithalayerofgoldensilk.
⏹Inspiteofthisobviousadvantage,italsobringsinconveniencetosomepeople,whohavetotakebusesnottheircars,andsoslowdowntheirspeed.
⏹Inspiteofthisobviousadvantage,italsobringsinconveniencetosomepeople,whohavetotakebusesinsteadoftheircars,andsoslowdowntheirspeed.
⏹Theoldonesmaythinktoomuchaboutsafety,theyoungonesacceptitmorequickly.
⏹Oldpeoplemaythinktoomuchaboutsafety,while/but/whereasyoungpeopleacceptthemmorequickly.
⏹Second,whoeverbreakstheregulationshouldbefinedorpunished.Theneveryonewillcomplywiththisregulation.
⏹Second,whoeverbreakstheregulationshouldbefinedorpunishedsothateveryonewillcomplywiththisregulation.
⏹Butinfact,therearealsomanypeoplewhothinknumbershavenothingtodowithluck.
⏹Buttherearealsomanypeoplewhothinkthatnumbers,infact,havenothingtodowithluck.
⏹注意指代关系
⏹PeoplehavebeenfightingagainsttheinfluencesofTVcommercials,butitoftenprovesuseless.
⏹PeoplehavebeenfightingagainsttheinfluencesofTVcommercials,butthiseffortoftenprovesuseless.
⏹
⏹Televisionprovidesuswithavivid,colorfulworld,whichenablesustoenjoylifethoroughly.
⏹Byprovidinguswithavivid,colorfulworld,televisionenablesustoenjoylifethoroughly.
⏹B）句与句、段与段之间的转折和承接
⏹but,and,sothat,aswellas,notonly…butalso…
⏹Firstly…Secondly/Moreover/Inaddition/Furthermore…Finally….Bywayofconclusion…
⏹C）时态和语法
⏹Thisiswhatwecalledtheproblemofpopulationexplosion.（注意时态）
⏹Thisiswhatwecalltheproblemofpopulationexplosion.
⏹Smokingharmsourhealth.（注意习惯）
⏹Itisharmfultosmoke.
⏹Thisyearmylisteningskillshavemademuchprogress.（注意文法）
⏹Ihavemadegreatprogressinmylisteningthisyear.
⏹注意时态
⏹Withtheopeningofourcountrytowardtheworldinrecentyears,Englishbecomesmoreandmoreimportant.
⏹Withtheopeningofourcountrytowardtheworldinrecentyears,Englishhasbecomemoreandmoreimportant.
⏹Doyouhaveafeelingthattheworldisgettingsmallerandsmalleralthoughthesizeoftheearthdoesn’tchange?
⏹Doyouhaveafeelingthattheworldisgettingsmallerandsmalleralthoughtheactualsizeoftheearthhasn’tchanged?
⏹Theneedformorejobsmakesusdevelopourindustries.
⏹Theneedformorejobswillmakeusdevelopourindustries.
⏹注意习惯：
切勿写中国式英语
⏹Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.
⏹Throughreadingonecanacquireknowledge.
⏹Nowpeoplegoabroadisnoteasy.
⏹Itisnoteasyforpeopletogoabroadnow.
⏹Nowadaysyoungpeoplewhoseektogoabroadarebecomingmoreandmore.
⏹Nowadaysmoreandmoreyoungpeopleseektogoabroad.
⏹Thechiefreasonsforthechangehavefivepoints.
⏹Therearefivemainreasonsforthechange.
⏹Hisjokemademelaughtodeath.
⏹Iwasquiteamusedbythejokehejusttold.
⏹Goodnumbersbringgoodluckisafalseconclusion.
⏹Thatcertainnumbersbringgoodluckisacompletelyfalseconclusion.
⏹Whatonearthistherolemoneyplayinginoursociety?
⏹Whatonearthistherolemoneyplaysinoursociety?
⏹Onlyinthisway,youcangetthetruejobofachievingyourgoals.
⏹Onlyinthisway,canyougetthetruejobofachievingyourgoals.
⏹注意一致性
⏹Butnowlargeamountsofwaterandairhasbeenpolluted,whichbringsaboutvariousproblemstroublingman’slife.
⏹Butnowlargeamountsofwaterandairhavebeenpolluted,whichbringsaboutvariousproblemstroublingtheirlife.
⏹Myidealjobisateacher.
⏹Myidealjobistobeanexcellentteacher.
⏹Studyhardnowsothatwecancopewiththechangeandchallengeofthetwenty-firstcentury.
⏹Studyhardnowsothatyoucancopewiththechangeandchallengeofthetwenty-firstcentury.
⏹Oneseriousproblemhumanbeingsarefacedwitharehowtouseournaturalresourceseconomically.
⏹Oneseriousproblemhumanbeingsarefacedwithishowtouseournaturalresourceseconomically.
⏹注意逻辑的严密性
⏹Somestudentswhoareinterestedinsocialworkcanjoinmanyclubs.
⏹Studentswhoareinterestedincampusactivitiescanjoindifferentclubs.
⏹ItakeCET-6notonlyforpassingthetest,butforimprovingmyEnglish.
⏹ItakeCET-4notonlyforpassingthetest,butforfurtherimprovingmyEnglish.
Theyrecitewordsattheverymomentandaftersometime...
⏹Theytrytomemorizewordsattheverymomenttheycomeacrossthemandreviewthemtimeandagain...
⏹Almosteveryoneofushasboughtsomefakecommodities.
⏹Almosteveryoneofushashadtheexperienceofbuyingfakecommodities
⏹D）书写和卷面清洁
复习备考注意事项
1.熟悉常见三种文体（论论、说明、应用文）的写作方法，在总结规律和背诵相关模板的同时，要学会灵活运用模板，切忌生搬硬套，更忌无中生有画蛇添足;
2.熟练掌握各种句式间相互转换的技巧，避免句式单一或句式复杂;
3.尽量能抽取时间来阅读一些与大学或日常生活相关的英语新闻、报纸或杂志;
4.要学好使用关联词，但避免大量使用关联词语，坚持“内容决定形式”的写作原则，切忌为了凑字数而胡乱堆砌关联词语;
5.要吃透重点词汇的用法，切忌生造词汇或囫囵吞枣;
6.无需在应用文上投入太多精力，只要将其基本格式吃透就可以，因为其具体内容的写法或结构基本等同于常见的三种文体
四级作文常见连接词总结：
⏹1.表示空间顺序
near
to
far
from
in
the
front
of
beside
behind
to
right
left
on
other
side
of
⏹2.表示时间顺序
first
after
a
few
days
eventually
at
that
time
meantime
meanwhile
afterward
from
then
on
3.表示举例
for
example
name
few,
say
such
as
⏹4.表示递进（补充说明）关系
addition
furthermore
what’s
more
worse
⏹5.表示对比关系
whereas
while
as
opposed
by
contrast
comparison
四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式
1．表示原因
1）Therearethreereasonsforthis．
2）Thereasonsforthisareasfollows．
3）Thereasonforthisisobvious．
4）Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek．
5）Thereasonforthisisthat．．．
6）Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat．．．
2．表示好处
1）Ithasthefollowingadvantages．
2）Itdoesusalotofgood．
3）Itbenefitsusquitealot．
4）Itisbeneficialtous．
5）Itisofgreatbenefittous．
3．表示坏处
1）Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages．
2）Itdoesusmuchharm．
3）Itisharmfultous．
4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）Itisimportant（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）forsb．todosth．
2）Wethinkitnecessarytodosth．
3）Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife．
5．表示措施
1）Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures．
2）Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome（conquer）thedifficulties
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