改错题技巧Word格式.docx

改错题技巧Word格式.docx

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3.在分析时，可在浏览的基础上，根据自己的语言知识，灵活地判断有没有意义出错，有没有句型用错，有没有固定搭配、习惯用法以及大的语法错误。

在分析时，可重点注意从句式、以及词类在语法、惯用法、意义上是否出错：

4.特别注意应把握先意义，后语法的原则。

5.改完之后，通读全文，再大致根据自己改过的类别范围订正或找出未改的，订正检查。

具体地说，在浏览完体裁、大意、语法之后，特别注意下列情况手否重点出错，着手改正：

一．句式错误：

句式错误主要是不是符合句子结构，比如在一个句子中同时出现两个或两个以上的主语、谓语而没有任何连接词。

这个错误都是比较典型的错：

比如：

a.Shesatinthelonelycorner,thinkaboutsomethingsilently.句式错误，句中同时出现两个谓语，应该将第二个谓语改为伴随状语thinking

b.Theangelthenturnedtothethirdman,∧threwuphishandsinfear.（NMET2009四川卷）句式错误。

同时出现两个谓语动词。

应该在第二个动词threw前加who,使之成为非限制定语从句。

c.ComradeLeifengdidlotsofgooddeeds,∧setaverygoodexampletousyoungpeoplealloverChina.句式错误，句中同时出现两个谓语动词没有连接词，应该在set前加连词and表示顺承.

二．词法错误：

词法错误主要集中在不同类别的词在习惯用法和意义上出现错误。

一般情况，应注意一下下列各类词是否有误：

（1）、看名词是否有错

名词一般集中于可数名词是否变化出错，不可数名次随意加复述，固定搭配中的名词有错等。

a.I’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.（NMET2001）subjects可数名词无变化

b.IhadnodifficultiesinfindingherhousesasIhadheraddress.difficulty固定搭配中不可数名次无需加s

（2）.代词：

代词的错误主要集中在人称代词是否一致、主宾格错误、物主代词的不一致、指示代词的单复数不一致、反身代词的误用、不定代词的意义理解错误等。

a.Thesmithsdidhisbesttomakemefeelathome（NMET2001）their物主代词错误

b.Nowsomeoneathomereadsinstead.（1999NMET）　everyone/everybody不定代词错误

c.IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.（NMET2003　）　myself反身代词错误

d.Althoughthisfewwordssoundsimpleenough…（2004广东卷）these指示代词错误

（3）动词：

动词的错误主要集中在动词的时态不一致，有的是单三，有的是过去时；

非谓语动词的用法错误;

动词短语的固定搭配、情态动词、系动词、助动词的错误或缺失多余等。

a.wehaveagoodtimetalkingandlaughing.（NMET1996）时态错误had

b.Booksmaybekeepforfourweeks.（NMET1994）语态错误kept

c.watchTVdemandsverylittleeffort.（NMET1999）非谓语动词中的动名词错误watching

d．They∧eagertoknoweverythingaboutChina.（NMET1996）缺系动词were,缺词

e.Well,Ihadbettertostopnow.（NMET2009海南、宁夏）多词不定式符号to去掉to，多余

（4）冠词：

冠词一般出现大多都是不定冠词、定冠词的误用、缺少或多余、

a.---myfirstvisittoaAmericanfamily.冠词错误a改为an

b.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof冠词错误a改为the

c.Thereis∧publiclibraryineverytowninBritain.缺冠词，is后加不定冠词a

d.EveryafewweeksIcometoseemyfriendsandchatwiththem.

冠词多余将a去掉，固定搭配错误

（5）形容词和副词：

形容词和副词的错误主要集中在做表语、定语或状语的功能性错误。

a.Iamsurewe’llhaveawonderfullytimetogether.（NMET1995）做定语错误改为wonderful

b.Unfortunate,Imissedtheearlytrain,soIwaslate.做状语错误改为unfortunately

（6）介词：

介词的错误主要是介词的误用以及介词的多余或缺失

a.Unfortunately,therearetoomanypeopleamongmyfamily.介词错误，误用，改为in

b.Butwedonotseemtogetmuchtimetotalkabouttogether.介词多余

about去掉

c.I’msureyouwillgetrid∧thesorrowandunhappinesscausedbythedisaster.

介词缺失在固定搭配getridof短语中缺介词of

（7）连词：

连词的出错主要集中在句子的结构性错误，句中没有连接词；

或者是连词的意义错误，这主要包括并列连词以及从属连词；

同时其他连词，比如说连接词that,连接代词以及连接副词等。

a.welovepeace,andwedon’tfearwar.意义出错，and应该改为but

b.Hesayshewillcometoseeme,∧thenhegivesmeasmilefriendly.句式错误，缺乏连接词and,在then之前加and

c.Itwasaboutnoon∧wearrivedatthefootofthemountain.（NMET2002）缺连词when

d.Sheneverhasenoughtimeforthatshewantstodo.连词错误，应该将连词that改为连接代词what

e.Butitdidn’tmatterthatIwouldwinornot.（NMET2000）连词错误

连词that应该改为whether

纵观以上7大类别，都是在改错题中比较容易出现、常考察的类型。

所以，一般情况下，在做改错题时，把握上述几点很重要。

总之，只要注意了上述两个大的方面，在改错时，把握全篇全段，重在意义，然后语法、惯用法的原则，攻克新型改错题就不会是盲目被动、无的放矢了。

短文改错专项训练

下面短文中每篇各有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

Passage1

Itwas7:

15inthemorningofFebruary8,2007． 

IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhile 

anoldmancameoutoftheparkontheothersidesofthe 

street．ThenIsawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmade 

arightturnintoParkRoad．Thenextmomentthecarhit 

themanwhileshewascrossingtheroad．Hefellwithacry． 

Thecardidn’tstopanddriveoffatfullspeedheadingwest． 

Inoticedthedriverwasyoungwomanworeapairofglassesandtheplate 

numberwasAC864．Aftertwominuteslater,Istopped 

apassedcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital． 

Passage2

IoftenquarrelaboutmymotheroverwhetherIcanwatchTVafterschool.Sheholdsviewthatseniorthreestudentshavetomakefullyuseofeveryminutetoworkhardattheirlessons.ItseemstomethatonceIamallowedtodothat,I’llunabletocontrolmyselfandforgetallaboutmystudy.Shealsothinksitisbadformyeye.ButIreallycan’tacceptherideas.Inmyopinion,watchTVcansetmymindatrestafteraday’shardworks.Besides,itisimportantforustoknowwhathadhappenedathomeandatabroad.Thus,weshouldn’tbeforbiddentowatchTV.

Passage3

Dearsir,

LastyearIbuyarefrigeratorinyourstoreonChangAnroad.Wealllikeshapeoftherefrigerator.AndrecentlyIfindsomethingiswrongwithit.Itbeginstomakenoisewhenitturnedon.Atfirstitislowbutgraduallyitbecomelouderandlouder.Tomakethematterworse,itevenstopsworkingsometimes.Weallfeeldisappointing.Iamwritingyoutoaskforhelp.Wouldyoupleasesendapeopletorepairit?

Iwillathomethisweekend.Pleasecallmebeforeyoucometohere.Mytelephonenumberis6606.5531.Thanksyouverymuch.

Customer

LiMing

Passage4

IfirstmetLiMingatafriendbirthdaypartyfiveyearsago.ThenIinvitedLiMingoverinmyplace.WelistentomyCDstogetherandsoonbecomebestfriends.Threeyearsago,LiMing’sparentsinvitedItospendtwowonderfulweekinQingdaowiththemduringthesummerholiday.LiMingandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullybeachesthere.LastyearIwasillbuthadtostayinhospitalforaweek.LiMingcameseemeeveryday.Thenhisfatherhaschangedjobsandtheymovedtoanothercity.Sincethenwehaven’tseeeachothermuch.Butwe’vekeptwritingtoeachother.

Passage5

Ifeelquitesurethechemistrytestthatwe’regoingtohavetomorrow.TheteacherhasalreadytoldusexactwhattostudyandIthinkmygradesonhomeworkhasbeengood．Inafact,IthinkchemistryhasalwaysbeenoneofthesubjectsthatIenjoyitmost.SusanandIhadalreadyspenttwohoursreviewpages115-140tonight.Wearegoingtodevoteanotherhourtopractisewithsomeofthesample（实例）problem.ThenIwillreadyforthetest.

Passage6

DearSusan,

I'

mverygladlytohearyouarecomingtovisitmethenextFriday.Unfortunately,Iwon'

tbeabletomeetyouattheairportalthoughIhaveclassesintheafternoon.Youwon'

tfinddifficulttogettothecitycenter.Theairportbusleavesevery30minuteandwilltakeyourightlytotheFriendshipHotel.MyclasseswillbeoverbythenorIwillpickyouupthere.Iwilltakeyoutogethertoahotpotrestaurantfordinnerandwe'

lltalkwithourplanfortheweekendoverdinner.HavingapleasanttripandseeyouFriday.

Yours,

ZhangMing

Passage7

SomedayIhappenedtofindachattingroominmyQQ,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprised,IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme.IaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions.Withtimewentby,IfoundthatIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.

Passage8

IfIhavethehonortobechosetoworkforthe29thOlympicGames,IwillatfirstimprovemyEnglishsothatIcantalkeasilyaboutforeignvisitors.Second,IwilllearnmoreabouthistoryoftheOlympicsasmuchasthe2008OlympicGames.Third,sinceIwasfamiliarwithBeijing,Icanhelpvisitorsfindtheirwaysinthecity.Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryorcultureandshowthemtheirgreatachievements.Inshort,IwilldomybesttohelpmakingtheGamesasuccess.

Passage9

DearMary,

IreceiveyourE-mailjustnow.Don’tworryaboutme.I’mgettingonwellwithmyresearchworkinthelab.ButtomygreatlysurpriseyousayyouwillgiveuplearnEnglish.Thereasonisbecauseyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhavelostinterests.I’mafraidIcouldn’tagreewithyou.IknowitisdifficultytolearnEnglish,andEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtoday.Itwillbeimportanttoolinourfuturework.Beside,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillbesucceed.Dorememberthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.I’mlookingforwardtohearinggoodnewsfromyou.

Yours,

LiHua

Passage10

DearRalph,

Iamanuniversitystudent.Ioncethoughtlifeattheuniversitymustbeexcellent,

butnowIchangedmymind.Ihavethreeroommates,andIwasthelastone

tomoveintothedormitory.Lastterm,Igotalongpeacefullyandhappy.ButIfind

theyarenotwillingtobewithmenow.Theydon’ttalkwithme,andthey’ve

becomecoldtowardme.Manytime,IhavewantedtotalkwiththemabouthowI

feltlike,butIfailedtofindanopening.Whenleavingalone,Ialwaysrecallthis

sadness.ButIamanhoneststudent.Whydon’tIwintruefriendship?

参考答案

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