看图作文文档格式.docx

看图作文文档格式.docx

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●PartII---

●PartIII---

图画描写（4-5句）

（过渡句）反映现象（1句）--原因或后果（4-5句）

个人看法（解决方法）（2-3点）

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漫画作文谋篇——三步走

●拿到漫画类作文，首先精读文字部分，确定写作主题，其次根据中文提示，按照“描述图片”“联系生活”“个人见解”三步走战略来谋篇。

●1.紧扣漫画主题，描述图片

●（.抓住画面有效信息，合理发挥想象

●尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构

●确立人称、时态）

●2、由图画到生活

●（特点：

把握漫画的寓意，揭示事件的本质或分析问题产生的原因）

●3.个人见解提出对策

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Part1Describethepicture

●Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,…

●Asisvividlybetrayedinthedrawingabove,..

●Aswecanseeinthepicture…

●Thepictureistryingtotellusthat…

●Inthepicture,thereare…/…is（are）doing…

●Thepictureaboveisabout…

●…Let’slookatthepictureabove/first.

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Fromthepicturewecanseeacatstandingbyawaterpipethatispouringwastewaterintotheriver.Obviouslythecatrepresentsthegovernmentofficialwhomonitorstheenvironmentalprotection.Whenheisaskedwhythewaterissodirty,herepliesthatthemoredevelopedtheeconomy,thedirtierthewater.

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Practise!

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Practise

●　　Asisvividlybetrayedinthedrawingabove,astudentistryinghisbesttoreachthefullscoreofimportantsubjectsincludingEnglish,maths,physics,andChinesewhileneglectingthemoreimportantaspectssuchaspsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.Thisdrawingmirrorsacommonsocialphenomenon,whichhasarousedoursocialconcernandisinfactthought-provoking. 

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Asisshowninthepicture,awomancarryingachildisstandingonthebus,strugglingtokeepabalance.Thepeoplesittingontheseatspretendtolookoutofthewindows,wearinganindifferentexpressionontheface,whichleavesthewomanhelpless.

Asisbetrayedinthedrawingabove,standinginthemiddleofthebusisamothercarryingachild,whoisignoredbytheotherpassengersseatedontheirownseats.

Thereisapicturewhichshowsusatruesceneonabus.Whatwecanseefromthepictureisthatamotherwithababyinherarmsisstandingdangerouslywhileallthepeopleonthebusignoreherasifnothingisassociatedwiththemselves.

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Inthepicture,alltheseatsare________.Amothercarryingherlitterbaby___________unsteadily,_______tokeepherbalance._____________,ayounggirlissittingandlookingoutofthewindow,__________nottoseethem.________________,alltheotherpassengersalikeare__________________tosuchascene.

occupied

isstanding

trying

Besideher

pretending

Atthesametime

turningablindeye

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Part2Interpretthepicture

必背常用过渡句

●Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.

●Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…

●Thepictureindicatesthatwe…Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…

●Thisisasatirical（讽刺的）cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong…

●Thispicturereflectsacommonphenomenonthat…

●Thisphenomenonisespeciallycommonin…

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Thepicturemirrorsacommonphenomenon,whichhasarousedoursocialconcernandisinfactthought-provoking.

Whatthepicturewantstostressisthatsomepeopleinsocietyare-----.

There’snodenyingthatthepictureshowsarealphenomenoninsociety.

Thispictureisthought-provokingandwhatitreflectsisanincreasingphenomenoninoursociety,onethatshouldbegivenseriousthoughtto.

Thishasbecomeacommonphenomenoninourcountry,whichweshouldgiveseriousthoughtsto.

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PartII:

反应现象，原因

●Howpoorthechildis!

Hislifeissupposedtobecolourfulandmeaningful.Studyingshouldbeonlypartofhislife.Heneedn’tworkroundtheclock,whichisnotgoodforhisgrowthanddevelopment.Justastheoldsayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Hedeservesahappychildhoodasotherkids.

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●Whatisreallyshowninthepictureisthefactthatchildrenarefacedwithmoreandmorehomeworkandhigherlevelofstressofstudy,andaretiredbothphysicallyandmentally.

●Theyaretooyoungtoputupwiththis.

●Parentsandteacherspushthechildrentomemorizepiecesofinformationaimlessly,whichdoesgreatharmtothembothphysicallyandmentally.

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Part3Giveyouropinions

●Ithink/believethat

●AsfarasI’mconcerned,

●Inmyopinion,

●Frommypointofview,

besupposedto…

Itisbetter/advisableto…

Iconsideritnecessary…

must

haveto

Do/Don’t…

Onlyinthiswaycanwe….

Onlywithcombinedeffortscanwe…

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PartIII个人观点（做法）

●Nowadays,inChinathisisacommonphenomenon,whichisdeeplyrootedintheeducationsystem.Whatweneedtodoismakesomeimmediatechanges.Thesociety,schoolsandfamiliesshouldn’tputtoomuchpressureonchildrenandshouldgivethemenoughtimetotakepartinsocialactivities.Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenbesetfreeandl