Wkecwa英语四级作文范文文档格式.docx

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四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

内容不跑题即可，注意：

1.不要妄图以情动人；

2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。

结构上牢记总分总：

先写主题句（TopicSentence），再写分论点，最后写总结句（Conclusion）。

语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。

基本表达

人们认为：

itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat

越来越：

beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof

万能理由（Omnipotence）

1.方便：

convenient/convenience

2.效率：

efficient/efficiently/efficiency

3.节省和浪费：

savetime/money/space;

economical,thrift

wastetime/money/space;

costly,lavish

4.人的心理健康：

independent,cooperative,competitive,

considerate,confident,creative,sociable,

perseverance;

selfish,isolated,conserative

5.人的身体健康：

health,disease,strong,strength,energetic

6.娱乐：

colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relax

tired,boring,lonely

7.环境：

environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty

8.安全和危险：

safe,danger,risk

9.经验：

experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety

10.人际：

humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely

写完之后修改注意：

（内容方面尽量不要修改）

1、字母大小写

2、怪符号

3、单词拼写

4、主谓一致

5、动词时态

6、名词单复数

实例一

题目：

Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲：

（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途

Score:

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BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport. 

Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn’ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoil,anditcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.

Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.

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BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.

注：

1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。

2.Duringtherushhour分词结构开头。

3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.

1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。

2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于

3.thirst,second,third英语语言有层次感，信号词

4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive

5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处（万能理由）

6.Moreover表示递进

Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.

promising有前途的apromisingyoungman

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Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday’sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople’sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider’sstrength,bicyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.

第一句应该用therebe结构

Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecontrary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.

IthinkthepopulationofChina’sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becauseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit’squalitywillbeimproved.

I、对比观点选择题：

1.有人认为……；

2.另外一些人认为……；

3.谈谈你的观点和看法。

（最好写成4段）

实例二99年6月真题

ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?

Outline:

1.有人认为读书要有