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(一)区分主要信息(generalideas)和细节信息(supportingdetails),成功抓到要点,筛掉细节信息;
步骤:
分析体裁——确定文体——新闻报道——确定关键信息(文章要点)
新闻:
focusonthefirstparagraphandthefirstsentenceandlastsentenceofotherparagraphs
记叙文:
5W+1H(what/who/when/where/why/how)
议论文:
opinion/idea+argument(supporting
idea/reasons)
说明文:
phenomenon/problem+reason+solution
(cause+effect)
(二)不要照搬原文句子,提高对原词进行同义词、近义词及词性的转换能力。
如:
1.(L1)…wasstarted转换成waslaunched/held/supported等等);
2.(L2)urgepeopletosavefood转换成encourage/ask/…sbtodosth等
3.Join可以转换成participatein/takepartin等
4.fightagainst转换成stop/refuse等
(三)为了避免出错,建议不要试图用一句话来进行概括,注意限制字数(约30-40words)。
Whensomepeoplestartedthe“CleanYourPlate”campaigninanefforttoreducefoodwaste,millionsofnetizensjoinedinitandmoreandmorepeoplearetakingrealactiontostopfoodwaste.(原文第一段改写35words)
Asmanypeoplearestilllivinginpoverty(贫苦)aroundus,I’mquitedelightedby(为……感到高兴)thiscampaign.AsfarasIknow,whilepeopleinadvancedcountriesdon’thavetoworryabouttheirmeals,millionsofpeopleinsomepoorareasaresufferingfrom(遭受)hungereveryday.ThoughmostChinesehaveenoughfoodtoeat,therearestillsomeotherswhoarestrugglinghardforalittlefoodtofilltheirstomach.Unfortunately,Icanalwaysseepeopleleavealargepartoftheirfoodontheirplateandthrowitaswaste.ItisreportedthateveryyeartheChinesealtogetherwaste50milliontonsoffood,whichisenoughtofeed200millionpeopleforawholeyear.Whatanalarmingwasteitis!
Weshouldfeelguiltytowastesomuchfood.
Itishightimethat(是时候……)wetookactiontostopsuchwastewithoutdelay.Thereiseveryreasonforustocleanourplatesatourmeals.Ifallpeoplecutdown(减少)foodwaste,alargequantityof(大量)foodcanbesavedandmorepeoplewillbefed.
The“CleanYourPlate”campaignisreallygoodanduseful.Let’sjoininandeatupourmealsinsteadofwastinganyfood.(读写任务四段论:
必须有结尾总结段落)