一些英文审稿意见及回复的模板Word文件下载.docx

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2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。

Ingeneral,thereisalackofexplanationofreplicatesandstatisticalmethodsusedinthestudy.

Furthermore,anexplanationofwhytheauthorsdidthesevariousexperimentsshouldbeprovided.

3、对于研究设计的rationale:

Also,therearefewexplanationsoftherationaleforthestudydesign.

4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨：

Theconclusionsareoverstated.Forexample,thestudydidnotshow

ifthesideeffectsfrominitialcopperburstcanbeavoidwiththepolymerformulation.

5、对hypothesis的清晰界定：

Ahypothesisneedstobepresented。

6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念：

Whatwastherationaleforthefilm/SBFvolumeratio?

7、对研究问题的定义：

Trytosettheproblemdiscussedinthispaperinmoreclear,

writeonesectiontodefinetheproblem

8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literaturereview:

Thetopicisnovelbuttheapplicationproposedisnotsonovel.

9、对claim,如A＞B的证明，verification:

Thereisnoexperimentalcomparisonofthealgorithmwithpreviouslyknownwork,soitisimpossibletojudgewhetherthealgorithmisanimprovementonpreviouswork.

10、严谨度问题：

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11、格式（重视程度）：

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12、语言问题（出现最多的问题）：

有关语言的审稿人意见：

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onlythencanaproperreviewbeperformed.Mostsentencescontaingrammaticaland/orspellingmistakesorarenotcompletesentences.

Aspresented,thewritingisnotacceptableforthejournal.Thereareproblemswithsentencestructure,verbtense,andclauseconstruction.

TheEnglishofyourmanuscriptmustbeimprovedbeforeresubmission.Westronglysuggestthatyouobtainassistancefromacolleaguewhoiswell-versedinEnglishorwhosenativelanguageisEnglish.

PleasehavesomeonecompetentintheEnglishlanguageandthesubjectmatterofyourpapergooverthepaperandcorrectit?

thequalityofEnglishneedsimproving.

作为审稿人，本不应该把编辑部的这些信息公开（冒风险啊），

但我觉得有些意见值得广大投稿人注意，

就贴出来吧，当然，有关审稿人的名字，Email，文章题名信息等就都删除了，

以免造成不必要的麻烦！

希望朋友们多评价，其他有经验的审稿人能常来指点大家！

国人一篇文章投Mater.类知名国际杂志，

被塞尔维亚一审稿人打25分！

个人认为文章还是有一些创新的，

所以作为审稿人我就给了66分，（这个分正常应该足以发表），提了一些修改意见，望作者修改后发表！

登录到编辑部网页一看，一个文章竟然有六个审稿人，

详细看了下打的分数，60分大修，60分小修，66分（我），25分拒，（好家伙，竟然打25分，有魄力），拒但没有打分（另一国人审），最后一个没有回来！

两个拒的是需要我们反思和学习的！

（括号斜体内容为我注解）

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OverallReviewerManuscriptRating:

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thereareseveralstatementsnotsupportedwithdata（forsomeseeRemarks2）andevensomeflaws（seeRemark3）.ForthesereasonsIsuggesttorejectpaperinthepresentform.

1.ThepaperdescribesanewmethodforpreparationofXXXX,but:

-thenewmethodhastobecomparedwithothermethodsforpreparationofXXXXpowders（INTRODUCTION-literaturedata,RESULTSANDDISCUSSION-discussion）,（通常的写作格式，审稿人实际上很在意的）

-ithastobedescribedwhythismethodisbetterordifferentfromothermethods,（INTRODUCTION-literaturedata,RESULTSANDDISCUSSION-discussion）,

-ithastobeaddedinthemanuscriptwhatkindofXXXXXXbyothermethodscomparedtothisnovelone（INTRODUCTION-literaturedata,RESULTSANDDISCUSSION-discussion）,

-ithastobeoutlinedwhatis