份上海市英语高考概括写作作文题目及范文Word格式文档下载.doc

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李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。

写一封回信，内容须包括：

1.你对此事的明确的态度；

2.你的理由。

考生原作1

I’mgladtohearthatyouhaveaccesstoparticipatinginanoverseascommunicationactivityinBritainwhichwilllasttwomonths.Isuggestthatyoushouldchooseworkingasavolunteerthirtyhourseverymonthforthelocalcommunityaging,hospitaltogainachancetostayinitforfree.Myreasonsareasfollows.

Notonlycanyouenhanceyoursocialexperiences,butalsoyoucanreduceyourcosts.Contrarytotheaccommodationarrangedbythehost,youcansavealotofmoney.Undoubtedly,thecostmusthavebeenhighifyouchooseit.Stayingintheaginghospital,thecontrastcouldn’tbegreater.Ontheonehand,onlybyworkingasavolunteercanyougainafreestay.Itsoundsgreat!

Yourarrivalwilladdcolorstotheatmospherethere.Ontheotherhand,duringoursparetime,wewillalsospendtimehelpingothersinthatoursocietyteachesustobeawarm-heatedperson.Yourarrivalwillalsoreducetheburdensthere.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Wecangainboththingsatthesametime.”Sowhynotchooseit?

Ihopethatyouwilltakemyadvise.Bestwishesthatyouwillhaveagoodtimethere.Itisagoldenchancethatyouwillgaininsummervocation.Inshort,enjoyyourself.

考生原作2

ItissaidthatyouwillgoabroadtoEnglandforatwo-monthoverseascommunicationactivityinthissummervocation.Ihearthatyouarehesitatingwhethertospendhigherpricechoosingarrangeddormitoryortospend30hourseverymonthservingtheoldtogetafreeliving.

Inmyopinion,Ithinkyoushouldchoosethefirstone.Ifyouchoosethesecondoption,youwillusetoomuchtimetodoserviceinsteadofstudyingthelocalculture.Althoughcommunicationwiththeoldcangetalotoflivelyexperienceandavoidmanymistakesinlife,yourmostimportantresponsibilityistolearnhowoverseasstudentsstudyandwhattheywilllearn.Arrangedroomcansaveyoutimeandhavemorechancestolivewithpeerswhomayhavethesameinterestwithyou.Bythis,youcanmakealotofyoungfriendsandifyouareintroubleinfuture,theymaygiveyousomesuggestionsandahelpinghand.

IwishthatyouwouldtakemyadviceandI’mwaitingtohearfromyou.

6月份高考英语写作题

假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校学生会将组织一次徒步活动，并在校园公布了如下方案，征求师生意见。

写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：

1.你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议；

徒步活动方案

主题：

发现上海

时间：

5月1日（星期日）下午3:

00

路线：

从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，抵达外滩（theBund）后原路返回

I’mastudentnamedLeiWangofourschool.HearingthenewsthatourStudents’UnionwillorganizeawalkingprogramandhasputthedraftedplanontheInternet,I’llventuretoairmythoughtsaboutitasfollows.

Tobeginwith,frommypointofview,thetimeplannedisnotappropriate.Asisknowntoall,thefirstdayofMayisthefirstdayofholidayinChinasothatthecentercityofShanghaiissuretobecrowdedonthatday.ToensurethatwestudentshaveagoodtasteofbeautyofShanghai,thedatehadbetterbeputofftilltheendoftheholiday.Besides,Iholdtheideathattherouteshouldberevised.Personally,afterapproachingattheBund,it’snotagoodchancetogobackaccordingtotheoriginalroute.Instead,westudentscangotootherplacesofinteresttogobacktoschool,whichguaranteesagoldenopportunityofwitnessingthebeautyofShanghai.

Inanutshell,allthethoughtsabovearebasedonmypersonalsuggestions.Iwouldbemuchobligedifmysuggestionsarefullyconsidered.

Wordscomethatawalkingactivitywillbeheldinourschool.Aboutthisactivity,Ihavesomeideas.

Ithinkwecanmakethesubject—findingShanghai.IhaveseenthesubjectonourschoolInternet.Ithinkitisgreatfulandinteresting.Butinmyopinion,weshouldgotomorelocalandhistoricplaceinShanghai,suchasYuGarden.Becausethislocalplaceisrichofmanyhistoricalcultureandmeaningful.

SomyplanisthatwecangotoYuGardenfirstandthenwecanaccepttheplanonschoolInternet---startinPeople’sSquare,NanjingRoad,endintheBund.TheanotheradviceisthatIthinkthetimeisnotfit.BecauseonSundaythesepopularplacewillattractmanytrouists,itisverydangerous.SoIsuggestthatweshouldholdtheseactivityonworkday.

That’sall,Ihopeyoucanacceptmyadvice.Thanks!

考生2（修改版）

Towhomitmayconcern,

Wordhascomethatahikingeventwillbeheldinourschool.Andyouareseekingforopinionsfromteachersandstudents.Ihavesomepersonalopinionsaboutthisevent.

Inthefirstplace,Ithinkweshouldstickcloselytothesubject—FindingShanghai,whichmeanslettinghikersgettoknowmoreaboutShanghai.Weshouldgopastsomeuniqueplaceswhichrepresentthecity’scharacteristics,suchasYuGarden,theOrientalPearlTVTowerandetc.Theseplace