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二、基本写作原则
1.告之对方自己如何熟悉其地址和业务范围,并表示原意与对方建立业务关系;
2.向对方自我介绍(企业性质、业务状况、经营范围及信誉声望等);
3.寄出或索取样品、价格单和其他可供参考的资料;
4.以礼节性的语言结束,表明希望彼此合作,发展互惠贸易关系及期待对方答复。
拟订有关建立业务关系信函时,礼貌、得体、简洁、朴实地将写信人的意图清楚、完整地告之对方是关键的。
其语言风格为开门见山,简明扼要,切忌拖泥带水,避免使用冷僻的词汇或难懂的专门用语。
三、范例
范文1.
DearSirs,
WewritetointroduceourservesasoneoftheleadingexportersofmedicineshereinChina.
Weencloseacopyofourlatestcatalogcoveringthedetailsofalltheitemsavailableatpresent,andhopesomeoftheseitemswillbeofinteresttoyou.
Itwillbeagreatpleasuretoreceiveyourinquiriesforanyoftheitemsmentionedhere,andagainstwhichwewillsendyouourlowestquotations.
Wearelookingforwardtoreceivingyourreply.
Yoursfaithfully
范文2.
WehaveobtainedyournameandaddressfromAristoShoes,Milan,andwearewritingtoenquirewhetheryouwouldbewillingtoestablishbusinessrelationswithus.Wehavebeenimportersofshoesformanyyears.Atpresent,weareinterestedinextendingourrangeandwouldappreciateyourcataloguesandquotations.Ifyourpricesarecompetitivewewouldexpecttotransactasignificantvolumeofbusiness.Welookforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Verytrulyyours
附录:
1.回复对方建立商业关系的请求
Thankyourforyourletterofthe16thofthismonth.Weshallbegladtoenterintobusinessrelationswithyourcompany.Incompliancewithyourrequest,wearesendingyou,underseparatecover,ourlatestcatalogueandpricelistcoveringourexportrange.Paymentshouldbemadebyirrevocableandconfirmedletterofcredit.Shouldyouwishtoplaceanorder,pleasetelexorfaxus.
本月16日收到有关商务关系的来函,不胜欣喜。
谨遵要求另函奉上最新之出口商品目录和报价单。
款项烦请以不可撤销保兑之信用状支付。
如欲订货,请电传或传真为盼。
此致敬礼
2.请求担任独家代理
Wewouldliketoinformyouthatweactonasoleagencybasisforanumberofmanufacturers.WespecializeinfinishedcottongoodsfortheMiddleeasternmarket:
Ouractivitiescoveralltypesofhouseholdlinen.Untilnow,wehavebeenworkingwithyourtextilesdepartmentandourcollaborationhasprovedtobemutuallybeneficial.Pleaserefertothemforanyinformationregardingourcompany.WeareveryinterestedinanexclusivearrangementwithyourfactoryforthepromotionofyourproductsinBahrain.Welookforwardtoyourearlyreply.`本公司担任多家厂家的独家代理,专营精制棉织品,包括各灯家用亚麻制品,行销中东。
与贵公司向有业务联系,互利互作。
贵公司纺织部亦十分了解有关业务合作之情况。
盼望能成为贵公司独家代理,促销在巴林市场的货品。
上述建议,烦请早日赐复,以便进一步联系合作。
3.拒绝对方担任独家代理
Thankyouforyourletterof1Septembersuggestingthatwegrantyouasoleagencyforourhouseholdlinens.Iregrettosaythat,atthisstage,suchanarrangementwouldberatherpremature.Wewould,however,bewillingtoengageinatrialcollaborationwithyoucompanytoseehowthearrangementworks.Itwouldbenecessaryforyoutotestthemarketforourproductsatyouend.Youwouldalsohavetobuildupamuchlargerturnovertojustifyasoleagency.Weenclosepricelistscoveringalltheproductsyouareinterestedinandlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.
9月1日有关建议担任家用亚麻制品独家代理的来信收悉。
谨致衷心谢意。
目前时机尚未成熟,不能应允该安排深感抱歉。
然而,本公司乐意与贵公司先试行合作,为今后合作打下基础。
为证明担任独家代理的能力,贵公司宜上述货品作市场调查,研究是否可扩大现有之营业额。
奉上该货品之报价单,敬希查照。
专此候复。
此致敬礼
4.同意对方担任独家代理
Thankyouforyourletterof12Aprilproposingasoleagencyforourofficemachines.Wehaveexaminedourlongand,Imustsay,mutuallybeneficialcollaboration.WewouldbeverypleasedtoentrustyouwiththesoleagencyforBahrain.Fromourrecords,wearepleasedtonotethatyouhavetwoserviceengineerswhotooktrainingcoursesatourMilanfactory.thesoleagencywillnaturallybecontingentonyoumaintainingqualifiedaftersalesstaff.Wehavedrawnupadraftagreementthatisenclosed.Pleaseexaminethedetailedtermsandconditionsandletusknowwhethertheymeetwithyourapproval.Onapersonalnote,ImustsaythatIamdelightedthatweareprobablygoingtostrengthenourrelationship.IhaveverypleasantmemoriesofmylastvisittoBahrainwhenyouentertainedmesodelightfully.IlookforwardtoreciprocatingonyournextvisittoMilan.Myverybestwishestoyouandyourwife.
4月12日建议担任为公室器具之独家代理来信已经收悉。
过去双方合作皆互利互助,能获您的眷顾作我公司于巴林的独家代理,殊感荣幸。
据知您公司两服务技师曾到我公司米兰工厂受训。
相信您公司在取得代理权后,仍会继续注重合格售后服务人员的训练。
现随信附上协议草稿,请查实各项条款,惠复是盼。
能加强业务,我亦感到欣喜,前次到访巴林,蒙盛情款待,不胜感激。
祈盼您莅临米兰时,容我一尽地主之谊。
5.借引荐建立业务关系
Atthebeginningofthismonth,IattendedtheHarrogatetoyfair.Whilethere,IhadaninterestingconversationwithMr.DouglasGageofEdutoysplcaboutselectinganagencyforourteachingaids.Douglasdescribedyourdynamicsalesforceandinnovativeapproachtomarketing.Heattributedhisowncompany'
ssuccesstoyourexcellentdistributionnetworkwhichhasservedhimforseveralyears.WeneedanorganizationlikeyourstolaunchourproductsintheUK.Ourteachingaidsco