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.常用句型
1.ThisisthefirstreasonIwanttolearnswimming.Thesecondoneis...
2.Iwanttolearnswimmingby...
3....Isanimportantskillinourlife.
4.Aswehavegrownup,weshouldnolongerdependonparents,soweshouldlearn...
5.Althoughtheknowledgeinourbooksisimportant,defferentskillsinourdailylifearealsoimportant.
6.Lifeisfullofchallenge,sowecan’tstopthestepoflearning.
7.I’msureitwillbeoneofthemostdelicioussoupsinthedishes.I’meagertomakeit.
.模拟试题
Howcanwelearnaskill?
A.Whatdoyouwanttolearn?
(swimming,cooking,readingbooks...)
B.Whydoyouwanttolearnit?
(Giveatleasttworeasons.)
C.Howwillyoulearnit?
要点分析:
1.着重写一个你喜欢的技能
2.第三点要展开写
3.最后要从这个技能的学习中得到一个启示
4.写作思路
学习新技能的一些小建议
1.Iwilllearntocookfrommymother.Ithinkthedisheswhichmymothercooksaredelicious.Iwilllearnwashing,cuttingandcookingstepbystep.
2.Iwanttolearnswimming.I’llgototheswimmingpooltolearniteveryweekwhetherit’srainyorwindy.Swimmingisanimportantskillinourlife.
3.I’lllearnitwiththehelpofmymother.IthinkifIputmyheartintoit,Iwill...
4.WhenIgrowup,Iwillgotoadrivingschoolandlearnhowtodrivefromcoaches.Afterhavingadrivinglicense,Iwillpractisedrivingcarefully.
5.范文讲评
Iagirlwhoisinterestedincars.Iwanttolearnhowtodriveassoonaspossible.IthinkdrivingisveryexcitingandbydrivingIcangetcloserwiththecars.
WhenIgrowup,Iwillgotoadrivingschoolandlearnhowtodrivefromcoaches.Afterhavingadrivinglicense,Iwillpractisedrivingcarefully.InChina,peopleunder18arenotallowedtohavedrivinglicenses,sotheonlythingIcandonowistolearnthelawaboutdriving.
IbelieveIwillbeagoodteacher.
点评与评分
整篇文章条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺。
亮点之处是例子新颖,抛开了常见的一些实例。
按中考作文20分计算,属于第二档的文章,可得14-16分。
需改进之处:
1.学习开车的第二个理由不太妥当,可以改为:
学会开车可以给我们的生活带来便捷。
2.学习的过程还需要更详细些。
3.学会开车后还得注意安全驾车。
修改稿
Iamagirlwhoisinterestedincars.Iwanttolearnhowtodriveassoonaspossible.Ithinkdrivingisveryexciting,anditbringmemoreconveniencewhenIgoingsomewhere.
WhenIgrowup,Iwillgotoadrivingschoolandlearnhowtodrivefromcoaches.First,Iwillhaveacertaintimetopractisedriving.Second,Iwillremembersometipsaboutdrivingskills.Third,drivingcarefullyisthemostimportantthing.Afterhavingadrivinglicense,Iwilldrivecarefullyontheroadandpaymoreattentiontosafety.InChina,peopleunder18arenotallowedtohavedrivinglicenses,sotheonlythingIcandonowistolearnthelawaboutdriving.
IbelieveIwillbeagooddriver.
范文选登
1、TheskillIwanttolearnmostiscooking.Iwanttolearntocookbecausemyparentsarealwaysbusy,andIhavetoeatoutalone.IfIcancook,Icancookformyself.Thatwouldbefantastic.Iwilllearntocookfrommymother.Ithinkthedisheswhichmymothercooksaredelicious.Iwilllearnwashing,cuttingandcookingstepbystep.WelcometomyhomeandtastemydishesafterIhavelearnit.
2、Swimmingisakindofskill.Itcanmakeourbodiesstrong.ThisisthefirstreasonIwanttolearnswimming.Thesecondreasonisswimmingcanprotectourselvesandotherpeople.It’sapitythatwhenyouseeachilddrown,youcan’thelphimjustbecauseyoucan’tswim.Forthesereasons,Iwanttolearntoswim.I’llgototheswimmingpooltolearniteveryweekwhetherit’srainyorwindy.Swimmingisanimportantskillinourlife.
3、Aswehavegrownup,weshouldnolongerdependonparents,soweshouldlearnskillstodosomethingbyourselves.Iwanttolearntoridebike.First,it’sconvenientandhelpful.Second,ifIlearnit.Icangoeverywherebymyself.That’sgreat.I’lllearnitwiththehelpofmymother.IthinkifIputmyheartintoit,Iwillbegoodatridingbikes
范文链接
1.Learntocook
AsaGradeNinestudent,IshoulddosomecookingwithmymumbecauseIwanttobeindependent.SoIbegintolearnitfrommymum.Firstly,Ilearntobuyfreshvegetables.ThenIwashthemclean.Afterthat,Icutthemintopieces.Later,Iputsomeoilinthepan,heattheoilandputvegetablesinit.Atlast,Iaddsomesaltinitandservethemintoabowl.Ipractisecookingweekly,andnowIcancookdeliciousfood.
Inmyopinion,whenwelearnanewskill,weshouldoftenpractiseitandnevergiveup.Asthefamoussayinggoes,”Practisemakesperfect.”Theharderyoutry,thebetteryoudo.
2.Iwanttolearntocook
Lifeisfullofchallenges,sowecan’tstopthestepoflearning.Al