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考察次重点专项:
☉1.艺术价值
☉2.媒体作用
☉3.广告影响
☉4.动物保护和动物实验
☉5.城乡差距和都市化
☉6.犯罪
☉7.弱势群体:
妇女权利,妇女参军
☉8.体育
雅思写作错误检查表(10条)
1.使用了对的语法构造:
时态语态,主谓一致,从句,用词精确(名词,动词,形容词形式),介词,冠词
2.句式有变化
3.使用了一定量词汇
4.拼写没有错误
5.观点明确,语意精准不模糊
6.每段主题句都表白了该段中心思想,所有拓展句支持句都紧扣主题
7.大量过渡性词语(逻辑连接词),使句子间和段落间都具备逻辑性和条理性
8.提供了足够细节,例子或论据
9.每一段话都得到充分展开
10.每一段话都紧扣文章主题
如何应用:
a.1347当做检查项目,其她当做考前提示
b.时间紧,就改第一段和每段前两句话
三.大作文首段基本写作方略---三步走
1.转述背景,扩展题目(setting/backgroundinformation):
把题目所提供背景再用自己话拓展转述同义替代一下
题目:
Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportsormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobeagoodsportspersonormusician.
Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
考官写开头段:
Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sports,artormusic.
2.阐明意图(statementofpurposes):
写作意图=你立场或者观点,争取用一句话阐明你观点,位置可以是在首段最后一句
3.提及下文,分支观点罗列和总结(summaryofmainpoints):
对重要观点用短语或者短句形式进行总结概括
注意:
普通状况下涉及前两步就可以了,第三步视状况而定.句子个数不是绝对
开头段写作套路赏析
Itisinevitablethatastechnologydevelops,sotraditionalculturemustbelost.Technologyandtraditionareincompatible,youcannothavebothtogether.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?
开头段1:
Itisafactoflifethattheadvanceofscienceandtechnologyhasbeenaccompaniedbyadeclineintraditionalculture.(背景转述)Inmyopinion,thisisnotnecessarilyabadthing,becausesomeaspectsoftraditionalculturehamperprogressandshouldbeabandoned.Moreover,itisnaturalthatpeopleshouldwanttofindnewwaysofdoingthings.(写作意图)
Itisafactoflifethat…
这是现实中事实….
Itisnaturalthat…
很自然….
Itisquitecommonthesedaysthat…
当前很普遍是….
开头段2:
Itisanundeniablefactthatscientificandtechnologicaldevelopmentshavebroughtconsiderablebenefitstoeverywalkoflife.EspeciallysincetheIndustrialRevolutiontookplace,ourliveshavebeenmademuchmoreconvenientbyinventionssuchastrains,airplanesandcomputers.(背景转述)ButIthinkthatthelossofourtraditionalcultureistoohighapricetopayforit.(写作意图)
1.Itisanundeniablefactthat…
不可否认是…
2.AistoohighapricetopayforB
A对于B来说是一种巨大代价
Theenvironmentaldeteriorationanddestructionaretoohighapriceforoureconomicgrowth.
四.议论文五大题型分类和写作套路
(一)讨论型discuss
题目表述:
Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
讨论正反两方面观点并给出你观点
例如:
题目1
Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendecidingonthepunishment.
Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
题目2:
Somepeoplebelievethatculturewillberuinedifitisusedtoearntourismrevenue,butothersconsiderthattourismistheonlywayofprotectingaculture.
讨论型discuss写作套路
套路1.两方平衡式---两个观点公平讨论
开头段:
不表达个人观点立场
主体段1:
反方观点(你不倾向观点)--2点理由
主体段2:
正方观点(你相对倾向观点)--2点理由
结尾段:
办法1---你批准其中一种观点
办法2---都批准
套路2.一方倾向式---两个观点不公平讨论
表达个人观点或立场
详谈正方观点(你相对倾向观点)----2-3点理由
简谈反方观点(你不倾向观点)----1-2点理由
重申你观点或立场
文章布局及思路练习题目1---犯罪类
正方观点—惩罚固定
1.Fixedpunishmentwillhaveadeterringeffectonsociety.(对…有威慑作用),accomplishthepurposeofdeterrence
2.Guarantee/ensuresocialstabilityandsecuritytoalargeextent
3.Asignofthetriumphofgoodoverevil
4.fixedpunishmenttoeachtypeofcrimecouldraiseindividuals’awarenessofobeyingthelaw.
反方观点—惩罚不固定
1.Takingthecircumstancesandmotivationofacrimeintoaccountisaprerequisiteforestablishingandensuringjusticeandequity.
绿色某些:
同类信息大量携带(并列)
前提,先决条件:
precondition,premise,prerequisite
在….前提下:
underthepremiseprecondition/prerequisiteof
2.Somekindsofcrimesshouldbetakendifferently,suchasself-defenseandmanslaughter.自我防卫和过错杀人
3.Criminallawshavetoprovideminimumandmaximumpenalties惩罚forthepunishmentandthelawalsohavetoforeseecertaincasesofexemptions.免除,豁免
文章布局及思路练习题目2---旅游类
正方观点---旅游业有益于文化保护
1.Intergratingtourismandculturalheritagecouldprovideeconomicincentivesfor