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届高三江苏新高考英语分项汇编1书面表达读后续写解析word版
2021届高三江苏好题速递分项汇编
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书面表达--读后续写
【2021届江苏省南京市高三学情调研】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Albertwasmadaboutcomputergames.Hecouldspendhoursandhoursinfrontofthescreen,andeventhoughhisparentsfoundithardtobelieve,hereallyenjoyedeveryminuteofit.Hehardlylefthisseat.Whenpeopleencouragedhimtogetinvolvedwithnormallife,hewouldrespond:
"Thisismydoorwaytotheworld,thereismuchmoreherethanyourealize."
Amongallhisgamestherewasoneheespeciallyliked.Inithewouldmoveacharacteraround,collectingturtles(乌龟)onaninfinity(无限)oflevelsandscreens.Hewasarealexpertatit.Maybetherewasnooneelseintheworldwhohadcollectedasmanyturtlesashehad,but,nevertheless,Albertstillwantedmoreandmoreandmore...
Oneday,whenhegothomefromschool,everythinghadchanged.Asusual,assoonashearrived,herantohisroomtoswitchthecomputeron.Butthistimeheheardsomestrangenoises,likebreakingglass.Suddenlythescreenbroke,andfrominsidecamedozens,thenhundreds,thenthousandsoflittleturtles.Andtheyfilledeverysquareinchofhisbedroom.Albertwasastonished.Hecouldn'tbelievewhatwashappening.Butafterpinching(掐)himself,heshutdownandstartedthecomputerupmanytimes,andcalledtohisparentstoseeifhewasdreamingaboutthis.Asithappens,hehadtoacceptthatonthatdaysomethingverystrangewashappening.
Onentering,hisparentsputtheirheadsintheirhands.SeeingthattheturtleswerestayinginAlbert'sroom,theydecidedtomakethemhisresponsibility.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Lookingafterthousandsofturtles,dayafterday,wasnoeasytask.
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WhenAlbertforgotabouthisbelovedcomputergames,theturtlesdisappeared.
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【答案】
Lookingafterthousandsofturtles,dayafterday,wasnoeasytask.Everydayafterschool,Albertwouldrushtotheturtletankandmadesureeveryoneofthemwasproperlyfedandcarefullyattended.Sometimes,afewnaughtylittleoneswouldcreepoutandleavetheirdroppingshitherandthither,whichmeantextracleaningandtamingfromAlbert'sside.Hewas,tosomeextent,afeeder,tamer,guardianandmentorforthebigturtlefamily.WhenalltheseresponsibilitiesweigheddownheavilyonAlbert’sfeebleshoulder,hecouldnolongersqueezetimeongames,whichhehadhelddearforlife.
WhenAlbertforgotabouthisbelovedcomputergames,theturtlesdisappeared.Almostovernight,Albertregainedhisliberty,whichmeanthecouldimmediatelyre-plungeintothecolorfulvirtualworld.However,thistime,theinternetlostallitscharmandAlbertjustwouldn'topenthemonitor.Instead,hekeptreminiscingaboutthegoodolddayswiththeturtletribeandclaimedtakingcareofrealturtleswasthebestdayseverinhislife.Obviously,thisunforgettableexperiencetaughtAlbertaninvaluablelesson:
reallifeexistsinreality,notonline.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
通过阅读所给文章可知,这篇读后续写讲了一个网瘾少年喜爱收集乌龟,当活的乌龟真正来到他的生活时,又会发生什么呢?
从给出来的2句话,我们可以推断出少年应该每天都在花大量的时间照顾这么多的乌龟,以致于没有时间再去玩游戏,当他忘记游戏时,乌龟们便消失了,同时少年也领悟到了真正生活的美好并不是在网络,而是在实际生活中,于是少年开始戒除网瘾,开始回归正常生活。
文章的主题应该是远离网络,回归正常生活。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:
日复一日地照顾成千上万只海龟并非易事。
所以后文应该是讲述Albert是如何照顾这些海龟的。
Albert每天都需要花很多时间和精力去喂养,清理乌龟的便便,给乌龟换水,打扫和整理房间等等琐碎的活儿。
Albert如此之忙碌以致于他完全没有时间上网,有时候网瘾又上来了,可是听到实体乌龟在召唤Albert要吃的,他又投身到喂养乌龟的任务中去了;第二段开头是:
当Albert忘记了他心爱的电脑游戏时,海龟们就消失了。
本段应该写Albert开始体会到真实生活也有很多美好,开始戒掉网瘾,回归正常生活。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。
如:
rushto,makesure,takecareof等高级词汇;Sometimes,afewnaughtylittleoneswouldcreepoutandleavetheirdroppingshitherandthither,whichmeantextracleaningandtamingfromAlbert'sside.非限制性定语从句等高级句式。
【2021届江苏省徐州市第一中学新高考全国卷第一次适应性考试】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
IhadbeenswimmingcompetitivelyforfiveyearsandwasreadytoquitbecauseIfeltIwashorribleatit.IwasoftentheonlyAfricanAmericanataswimmingcompetition.Ikeptreceiving“HonourableMentions”.Anyathleteknowsthatyoudon’twanttohaveabookshelffullof“HonourableMentions”,whichyougetjustbecauseyoushowedup.
Onesummerday,thedaybeforeabigswimmeet,IdecidedtobreakthenewstomygrandmathatIwasquittingtheswimteam.WhenItoldherofmydesiretoquitswimming,shelookedmeintomyface,sayingfirmlybutwarmly,“Baby,rememberthesewords‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.’Yourgrandmotherdidn’traiselosersorquitters.Yougotothatmeettomorrow,andyouswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine,youhear?
”Iwastooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma’am.”
Thenextdaywearrivedattheswimmeetlate,missingmygroupofswimmersinthe15/16agegroup.MycoachinsistedIbeallowedtoswimwiththeoldergroup.Iknewshewasincludingmeintheracesoourlongdrivewouldnotbewasted,andshehadnoexpectationswhatsoeverthatIwouldcomeinanythingbuteighthplaceandonlythatbecausetherewerenotninelanes.
AsIwasmountingtheboard,alltheothergirlslookedatme.Iquicklynoticedthatthesegirlswereheretodoonething—beatme!
Allofasuddenmygrandma’swordsranginmyhead:
“Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.Youswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine.Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit...”“Yes,grandma,IwillswimlikeIamagrandchildofyours,”Isaidtomyself.
Paragraph1:
SPLASH!
IwasswimmingharderthanI’deverswumbefore.
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Paragraph2:
Justthen,cheersandclapsoverwhelmedme.
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【答案】OnePossibleVersion:
SPLASH(扑通一声)!
IwasswimmingharderthanI’deverswumbefore.AsIdrewmyrightarmback,InoticedIwastiedwithoneperson.IassumedwewerebattlingforeighthplaceandIrefusedtofinishdeadlast,soIaddedmorekickonthelast200yards.Ihitthewallandlookedtotheleftandtotherightfortheswimmerswhohadbeatme,butnoonewasthere.Theymusthavegottenoutofthewateralready.
Justthen,cheersandclapsoverwhelmedme.Iraisedmyheadtoseemycoachscreaminghysterically.MyeyesfollowedherpointingfingerandIcouldn’tbelievewhatIsaw.Theotherswimmershadjustreachedthehalfwaypointofthepool!
Thatday,atage15,Ibrokethenational17/18yearold400freestylerecord.Ihungupmyhonourablementionsandreplacedthemwithahugetrophy.“Yes,grandma,you’reright.Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.”
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
通过阅读所给文章可知,上文讲述了作者已经参加了五年的游泳比赛,准备退出,因为觉得自己很糟糕。
一个夏天的一天,在一个大型游泳比赛的前一天,作者把决定退出游泳队的消息告诉了奶奶,结果奶奶让作者坚持下去。
第二天作者和奶奶来到比赛地点,没有赶上作者15/16岁年龄组的游泳选手。
教练坚持允许作者和年龄大一些的人一起游泳。
当作者登上跳板时,其他所有的女孩都看着自己。
作者很快注意到这些女孩是来做一件事的——打败自己!
突然,奶奶的话在作者的脑海里回响:
“放弃者永不成功,胜利者永不放弃。
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续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:
扑通一声!
我游得比以前任何时候都努力。
所以后文应该是讲述作者比赛的经过和心理活动;第二段开头是:
就在那时,欢呼声和掌声淹没了我。
本段应该写作者打破了17/18400自由泳的全国纪录,以及作者获胜后的感想。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。
如:
addon,hysterically,honourable等高级词汇;AsIdrewmyrightarmback,InoticedIwastiedwithoneperson.运用时间状语从句;MyeyesfollowedherpointingfingerandIcouldn’tbelievewhatIsaw.运用宾语从句等高级句式。
【2021届江苏省苏州四市五区高三上学期期初调研英语】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
JustafterNewYear's,beforeschoolvacationended.Iwentoutforawalk.ItwasawalkI’dbeenmeaningtotakeeversincewemovedtothehouse.
Itookmycamera-thefirsttimeI'dtakenmycameraoutsincewecametothecountry-andwent,dressedinmydownjacketandwearingheavyboots.IwalkedtowardtheseeminglyabandonedhousethatIcouldseeacrossthefieldsfromtheupstairswindow.
Atruckwasparkedattheendoftheroad,besideatiny.weather-beatenhouse.Therewassmokecomingoutofthechimney,andcurtainsinthetwolittlewindowsoneithersideofthedoor.Adogwasintheyard,whobarkedwhenhesawmecoming.Andbesidethetruck-no,actuallyinthetruck,oratleastwithhisheadinsideit,wasaman.
“Hi,"Icalled.Itwouldhavebeensillytoturnaroundandstartwalkinghomewithoutsayinganything,eventhoughI'vepromisedmyparentsallmylifethatIwouldnevertalktostrangemen.
Heliftedouthishead,agrayhead,smiled-anicesmile-andsaid,"MissChalmers.I'mgladyou'vecometovisit."
“Meg,"Isaid.Iwaspuzzled.HowdidheknowwhoIwas?
"ForMargaret?
"heasked,comingoverandshakingmyhand."Forgiveme.Myhandsareverydirty.Mybatterydiesinthiscoldweather."
"HowdidyouknowmynamewasChalmers?
"
Hewipedhishandsonatowelthatwashangingfromthedoorhandleofthetruck."Mydear,Iapologize.Ihavenotevenintroducedmyself.MynameisWillBanks.Andit'smuchtoocoldtostandouthere.Yourfeetmustbefrozen,eveninthoseboots.Comeinside,andI'llmakeuseachacupoftea.AndI'lltellyouhowIknowyourname.”
Istoodunmoved.Hesawmehesitate,andsmiled."Meg,"hesaid,“I'mseventyyearsold.Completelyharmless,eventoabeautifulyounggirllikeyou.Comeoninandkeepmecompanyforabit,andgetwarm."
Ilaughed,becauseheknewwhatIwasthinking,andveryfewpeopleeverkno